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    Avalon

    Post by Leila Vergious on 3rd December 2017, 12:12 pm


    Name:
    Avalon

    Rank:
    Multi-part weapon

    Type:
    Mechanical Blade

    Used parts & ownership:
    Legendary(+) weapon , Artifact(+) weapon, Artifact(+) item

    Description:
    A special weapon that is linked to the ethernano energy of Void spirits and thus only usable by them. Originally, this weapon started as a simple bow crafted by a special tribe of Joya. While meant for their goddess Noheme, it was eventually abandoned and left forgotten in the world. However, this was not to be forever, as a Miracle Demon named Arith found it and took it into his care. In order to fulfill his own desires, he had approached Leila Vergious and gave her this weapon along with a new goal, but not before upgrading it even further to fit the Eden’s Caretaker. Now the Moonlight’s Grace became Avalon, a victory of light in the form of a mechanical blade that consists of three parts - sheath, a small knife and the katana itself. Each of these parts is essential in workings of this multi-part and just as important as the rest.

    The fighting style of this weapon is very similar to classical swordsmanship, but with added functions. As a mechanical blade, the weapon is always hidden in its sheath until released. This can be done by either opening the sheath completely and taking the entire blade out at once, removing it like a regular sword or even shooting the weapon out like a projectile. Only once each part is separated from the rest to a degree will the special abilities become properly usable.


    Strengths:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be stolen by the enemy
    • Balanced material - Despite looking like a chunk of metal when in sheath, the blade is light, yet powerful
    • Versatility - As a multi-part weapon, the blade can do much more than any regular weapon ever could

    Weaknesses:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be given to an ally
    • Close range - In its default state, the weapon can only be used in close quarters combat
    • Shape - The sword is fairly large and part of its sheath. This can make combat clumsy without proper training
    • Offense oriented - despite having a protective sheath as a part of the weapon, its defensive ability is very limited

    Active abilities:

    Name: Heavy Impact
    Rank: S
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: A special burst-type attack that usually serves as a good combat opener. Activating a special mechanism within the sheath, it can shoot the main blade out like a bullet in order to hit the enemy. While the range of this is only 100 meters with the speed of 75 m/s, the enemy hit with the blade’s hilt will receive 75% of S-ranked damage will and will be stunned for a single post, provided they are not of H-rank. In that case, they will become dazed and their speed will decrease by 50% for a single post.
    Strengths:

    • A powerful opening attack that can give Leila a great advantage in one to one combat
    • A negative attack is applied even to the strongest of allies

    Weaknesses:

    • Despite having qualities of single-target attack, Heavy Impact uses burst range and speed
    • Greatly loses effectiveness after the combat starts, as it relies on a moment of surprise
    • The blow does not deal full damage in order to inflict a negative effect on the enemy


    Name: Celestial Dash
    Rank: S
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the main blade, Leila lets the weapon imbue her with celestial magic. This makes her enter a celestial wraith state in which her body glows bright blue and becomes much faster than it normally is. On top of her regular speed, she will gain a boost of 300 m/s for a single dash of 400 meters. The only downsides of this are that this rush can only be in one direction and once Leila stops, the speed boost will disappear. However, that is not the end of the ability, as she can perform a semi-charged attack at the end of her dash. This attack can hit a single target and will deal 50% of S-ranked damage. It also creates Ethernano poisoning within the attacked enemy which will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage for the next 4 posts.
    Strengths:

    • Gives Leila a considerable speed boost that essentially transforms her own body into the spell itself
    • Provides heavy damage over time that eventually deals 2.5x S-ranked damage

    Weaknesses:

    • The attack dash cannot change direction once it starts, forcing Leila to commit to it
    • The initial attack deals very little damage and most likely won’t finish any real enemies off
    • Due to the celestial wraith mode effect, Leila will become much more visible to all enemies around


    Name: Celestial Rush
    Rank: A
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An ability of the knife, the smallest part of the multi-part. Taking the small blade out, Leila can toss it anywhere at the speed of 225 m/s and let it fly any distance up to 300 meters. If no obstacle is hit, then Leila will simply warp to the knife’s position through celestial magic imbued in it and that will be the end of this spell. However, if something is hit, mainly an enemy, the warp will be also followed by a quick attack by the knife or the main blade, dealing 50% of A-ranked damage to the affected enemy. The warp has to be performed while the knife is in the air, as the magic will cease to function once it hits the ground. This makes the spell instant rather than one with duration.
    Strengths:

    • An ability that can be used to quickly close distance between Leila and any enemy
    • Has utility use as well with the warp function alone

    Weaknesses:

    • When used to attack an enemy, the damage dealt will be highly limited
    • Unlike regular warps, this one can be interrupted by outside force
    • Unlike regular warps, this one is not instant and has a set speed at which the knife is thrown

    Passive abilities:

    Equipment extra effect: +15% MP

    Name: Machine Transformation
    Rank: S
    Description: An exception to separate parts abilities, this passive skill allows the Avalon to be transformed into one of three main modes. This can only be done when both the main blade and knife are locked in the sheath. If this condition is fulfilled, the entire multi-part can transform into either a heavy-looking repeating bow or a mechanical spear. If a bow mode is selected, Ethernano arrows are summoned to be used as ammunition and the range/speed of them is equal to one of S-ranked single target spell. There is also an added bonus to both of these forms, as the first shot in each post when the weapon is transformed will be charged and will cause 50% of S-ranked damage on impact. This makes up for the fact that the rest of the multi-part’s abilities cannot be used while the weapon is transformed, but the impact itself happens only once per thread on each of the two transformations. The third main mode is its standard sword appearance that uses the regular abilities.



    Name: Ignition
    Rank: A
    Description: Surface of the main blade is always coated with a special liquid that does not come off easily and can be ignited. If the weapon is removed from its sheath normally, rather than having the sheath itself open up completely, then one of the mechanisms inside can form a spark that will set this liquid ablaze. The result is a flaming weapon that has a fire element added to all of its attacks and abilities. This boosts all of the damage dealt by the weapon by 50%. This number can either fall to 25% or rise up to 75% depending on if the target is weak or resistant to flames. Logically, this only affects regular attacks with this weapon and its offensive abilities. Magic spells, other equipment and melee attacks with fists are not boosted.




    Change log (5/28/2018):


    • Changed the name to Avalon. (originally Lumen Victoria)
    • Added an additional spear mode to Machine Transformation ability, but otherwise it's nearly identical to how it was before.
    • Removed the Overcharge ability to meet the new multi-part weapon rules.



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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Godlike Frederik on 17th December 2017, 5:04 am

    My apologies for my late reaction, I had to read up on the multi-weapon part rules and life got a bit in the way. Either way, let's get to it.

    Active abilities look good and are nicely balanced already. You could even have the first two Heavy Impact and Overcharge have a shorter cooldown. The duration of those posts are 1 and 2 posts and you have a cooldown that is 8. A tad long for my taste, you can that at least at 6.

    Inner Paradise sounds more like an active than a passive ability tho, even if its duration is infinite. It might be better to list it as an active than a passive. Also if this is an infinite ability it means you do need to have a bigger cooldown than 5 posts, I would at least lean somewhere close to the 8/9 posts. And state that you can't deal more than 1.5 rank damage on a target per post.


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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Leila Vergious on 17th December 2017, 5:32 am

    At some point or another, I was told that equipment has to follow the same rules on min cooldown / max duration as regular spells, hence the 8 posts of cooldown. But if I'm allowed 6, then I'll happily take it.
    Inner Paradise was completely changed since multi-part requires 2 passives. Hopefully, the new one will suit the idea of a passive more.

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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Godlike Frederik on 20th December 2017, 8:54 am

    oh my apologies, if it says so in the rule then it should be 8 posts cooldown, sometimes I am still used to an older way of grading.

    The new passive looks fine, nothing to add there. So if you can change the cooldowns to a minimum of 8, then it is good to go.


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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Leila Vergious on 20th December 2017, 10:45 am

    Bump


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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Godlike Frederik on 25th December 2017, 11:48 am

    approved


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    Re: Avalon

    Post by kittykool75 on 21st May 2018, 12:48 pm

    Spoiler:
    @Leila Vergious wrote:

    Name:
    Lumen Victoria

    Rank:
    Multi-part weapon

    Type:
    Mechanical Blade

    Used parts & ownership:
    Legendary(+) weapon , Artifact(+) weapon, Artifact(+) item

    Description:
    A special weapon that is linked to the ethernano energy of Void spirits and thus only usable by them. Originally, this weapon started as a simple bow crafted by a special tribe of Joya. While meant for their goddess Noheme, it was eventually abandoned and left forgotten in the world. However, this was not to be forever, as a Miracle Demon named Arith found it and took it into his care. In order to fulfill his own desires, he had approached Leila Vergious and gave her this weapon along with a new goal, but not before upgrading it even further to fit the Eden’s Caretaker. Now the Moonlight’s Grace became Lumen Victoria, a victory of light in the form of a mechanical blade that consists of three parts - sheath, a small knife and the katana itself. Each of these parts is essential in working of this multi-part and just as important as the rest.

    The fighting style of this weapon is very similar to classical swordsmanship, but with added functions. As a mechanical blade, the weapon is always hidden in its sheath until released. This can be done by either opening the sheath completely and taking the entire blade out at once, removing it like a regular sword or even shooting the weapon out like a projectile. Only once each part is separated from the rest to a degree will the special abilities become properly usable.


    Strengths:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be stolen by the enemy
    • Balanced material - Despite looking like a chunk of metal when in sheath, the blade is light, yet powerful
    • Versatility - As a multi-part weapon, the blade can do much more than any regular weapon ever could

    Weaknesses:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be given to an ally
    • Close range - In its default state, the weapon can only be used in close quarters combat
    • Shape - The sword is fairly large and part of its sheath. This can make combat clumsy without proper training
    • Offense oriented - despite having a protective sheath as a part of the weapon, its defensive ability is very limited

    Active abilities:

    Name: Heavy Impact
    Rank: S
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: A special burst-type attack that usually serves as a good combat opener. Activating a special mechanism within the sheath, it can shoot the main blade out like a bullet in order to hit the enemy. While the range of this is only 100 meters with the speed of 75 m/s, the enemy hit with the blade’s hilt will receive 75% of S-ranked damage will and will be stunned for a single post, provided they are not of H-rank. In that case, they will become dazed and their speed will decrease by 50% for a single post.
    Strengths:

    • A powerful opening attack that can give Leila a great advantage in one to one combat
    • A negative attack is applied even to the strongest of allies

    Weaknesses:

    • Despite having qualities of single-target attack, Heavy Impact uses burst range and speed
    • Greatly loses effectiveness after the combat starts, as it relies on a moment of surprise
    • The blow does not deal full damage in order to inflict a negative effect on the enemy


    Name: Overcharge
    Rank: S
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: An ability of the swords sheath. It does not exist only to keep the weapon safe, there is also a number of different mechanisms inside. One of which can forcefully pump the main blade full of celestial energy and exponentially increase its power for few seconds. This can be used to charge the blade, unsheathe it and then quickly stab it into the ground, creating a fairly large explosion of celestial energy. This will damage all enemies in the area of 200 meters for 150% of S-ranked damage, as well as caused them Ethernano poisoning that will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage in the next two posts. However, this power comes at a cost. The overcharge heavily damages the multi-part itself, removing 30% of its durability with each use. This limits the use of this ability to only 3 per thread if the weapon is not used for defense at all. The overcharge also makes the weapon enter a complete cooldown of 1 post where no abilities, including passive ones, can be used.
    Strengths:

    • Provides area of effect attack for a weapon that focuses more on single target attacks
    • Deals extremely heavy damage both instantly and over time to all enemy affected

    Weaknesses:

    • Can damage environment around if one is not careful enough with the attack
    • It is extremely difficult to control the range of this attack, making it more of a liability in certain situations
    • Heavily damages the weapon itself, making it easier to break and limiting how many times the ability itself can be used
    • The weapon enters a complete cooldown after use of this ability, disabling all of its abilities for a short while


    Name: Celestial Dash
    Rank: S
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the main blade, Leila lets the weapon imbue her with celestial magic. This makes her enter a celestial wraith state in which her body glows bright blue and becomes much faster than it normally is. On top of her regular speed, she will gain a boost of 300 m/s for a single dash of 400 meters. The only downsides of this are that this rush can only be in one direction and once Leila stops, the speed boost will disappear. However, that is not the end of the ability, as she can perform a semi-charged attack at the end of her dash. This attack can hit a single target and will deal 50% of S-ranked damage. It also creates Ethernano poisoning within the attacked enemy which will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage for the next 4 posts.
    Strengths:

    • Gives Leila a considerable speed boost that essentially transforms her own body into the spell itself
    • Provides heavy damage over time that eventually deals 2.5x S-ranked damage

    Weaknesses:

    • The attack dash cannot change direction once it starts, forcing Leila to commit to it
    • The initial attack deals very little damage and most likely won’t finish any real enemies off
    • Due to the celestial wraith mode effect, Leila will become much more visible to all enemies around


    Name: Celestial Rush
    Rank: A
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An ability of the knife, the smallest part of the multi-part. Taking the small blade out, Leila can toss it anywhere at the speed of 225 m/s and let it fly any distance up to 300 meters. If no obstacle is hit, then Leila will simply warp to the knife’s position through celestial magic imbued in it and that will be the end of this spell. However, if something is hit, mainly an enemy, the warp will be also followed by a quick attack by the knife or the main blade, dealing 50% of A-ranked damage to the affected enemy. The warp has to be performed while the knife is in the air, as the magic will cease to function once it hits the ground. This makes the spell instant rather than one with duration.
    Strengths:

    • An ability that can be used to quickly close distance between Leila and any enemy
    • Has utility use as well with the warp function alone

    Weaknesses:

    • When used to attack an enemy, the damage dealt will be highly limited
    • Unlike regular warps, this one can be interrupted by outside force
    • Unlike regular warps, this one is not instant and has a set speed at which the knife is thrown

    Passive abilities:

    Equipment extra effect: +15% MP

    Name: Machine Transformation
    Rank: S
    Description: An exception to separate parts abilities, this passive skill allows the Lumen Victoria to be transformed from a blade into a bow. This can only be done when both the main blade and knife are locked in the sheath. If this condition is fulfilled, the entire multi-part can transform into a heavy-looking repeating bow. Ethernano arrows are summoned to be used as ammunition and the range/speed of them is equal to one of S-ranked single target spell. There is also an added bonus to this form, as the first shot in each post when the weapon is transformed will be charged and will cause 50% of S-ranked damage on impact. This makes up for the fact that the rest of the multi-part’s abilities cannot be used while the weapon is transformed.


    Name: Ignition
    Rank: S
    Description: Surface of the main blade is always coated with a special liquid that does not come off easily and can be ignited. If the weapon is removed from its sheathe normally, rather than having the sheathe itself open up completely, then one of the mechanisms inside can form a spark that will set this liquid ablaze. The result is a flaming weapon that has a fire element added to all of its attacks and abilities. This boosts all of the damage dealt by the weapon by 50%. This number can either fall to 25% or rise up to 75% depending on if the target is weak or resistant to flames. Logically, this only affects regular attacks with this weapon and its offensive abilities. Magic spells, other equipment and melee attacks with fists are not boosted.

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    Re: Avalon

    Post by kittykool75 on 27th May 2018, 5:21 pm

    Ello Leila, you know me already, I'll be the one grading your multi-par weapon. All edits will be in this color, if you have any questions ask on this thread or pm me onsite. Once you've made the requested edits, bump this thread. With that, let's get started.

    First of all you have a total of six abilities, four active and two passive, and as can be seen in the equipment rules. You are only allowed to have five, so you're going to have to remove one of your abilities.


    Spoiler:

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    Name:
    Avalon

    Rank:
    Multi-part weapon

    Type:
    Mechanical Blade

    Used parts & ownership:
    Legendary(+) weapon , Artifact(+) weapon, Artifact(+) item

    Description:
    A special weapon that is linked to the ethernano energy of Void spirits and thus only usable by them. Originally, this weapon started as a simple bow crafted by a special tribe of Joya. While meant for their goddess Noheme, it was eventually abandoned and left forgotten in the world. However, this was not to be forever, as a Miracle Demon named Arith found it and took it into his care. In order to fulfill his own desires, he had approached Leila Vergious and gave her this weapon along with a new goal, but not before upgrading it even further to fit the Eden’s Caretaker. Now the Moonlight’s Grace became Avalon, a victory of light in the form of a mechanical blade that consists of three parts - sheath, a small knife and the katana itself. Each of these parts is essential in workings of this multi-part and just as important as the rest.

    The fighting style of this weapon is very similar to classical swordsmanship, but with added functions. As a mechanical blade, the weapon is always hidden in its sheath until released. This can be done by either opening the sheath completely and taking the entire blade out at once, removing it like a regular sword or even shooting the weapon out like a projectile. Only once each part is separated from the rest to a degree will the special abilities become properly usable.


    Strengths:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be stolen by the enemy
    • Balanced material - Despite looking like a chunk of metal when in sheath, the blade is light, yet powerful
    • Versatility - As a multi-part weapon, the blade can do much more than any regular weapon ever could

    Weaknesses:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be given to an ally
    • Close range - In its default state, the weapon can only be used in close quarters combat
    • Shape - The sword is fairly large and part of its sheath. This can make combat clumsy without proper training
    • Offense oriented - despite having a protective sheath as a part of the weapon, its defensive ability is very limited

    Active abilities:

    Name: Heavy Impact
    Rank: S
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: A special burst-type attack that usually serves as a good combat opener. Activating a special mechanism within the sheath, it can shoot the main blade out like a bullet in order to hit the enemy. While the range of this is only 100 meters with the speed of 75 m/s, the enemy hit with the blade’s hilt will receive 75% of S-ranked damage will and will be stunned for a single post, provided they are not of H-rank. In that case, they will become dazed and their speed will decrease by 50% for a single post.
    Strengths:

    • A powerful opening attack that can give Leila a great advantage in one to one combat
    • A negative attack is applied even to the strongest of allies

    Weaknesses:

    • Despite having qualities of single-target attack, Heavy Impact uses burst range and speed
    • Greatly loses effectiveness after the combat starts, as it relies on a moment of surprise
    • The blow does not deal full damage in order to inflict a negative effect on the enemy


    Name: Overcharge
    Rank: S
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: An ability of the swords sheath. It does not exist only to keep the weapon safe, there is also a number of different mechanisms inside. One of which can forcefully pump the main blade full of celestial energy and exponentially increase its power for few seconds. This can be used to charge the blade, unsheathe it and then quickly stab it into the ground, creating a fairly large explosion of celestial energy. This will damage all enemies in the area of 200 meters for 150% Change this to 75% of S-ranked damage, as well as caused them Ethernano poisoning that will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage in the next two posts. However, this power comes at a cost. The overcharge heavily damages the multi-part itself, removing 30% of its durability with each use. This limits the use of this ability to only 3 per thread if the weapon is not used for defense at all. The overcharge also makes the weapon enter a complete cooldown of 1 post where no abilities, including passive ones, can be used. Please add a speed to this ability
    Strengths:

    • Provides area of effect attack for a weapon that focuses more on single target attacks
    • Deals extremely heavy damage both instantly and over time to all enemy affected

    Weaknesses:

    • Can damage environment around if one is not careful enough with the attack
    • It is extremely difficult to control the range of this attack, making it more of a liability in certain situations
    • Heavily damages the weapon itself, making it easier to break and limiting how many times the ability itself can be used
    • The weapon enters a complete cooldown after use of this ability, disabling all of its abilities for a short while


    Name: Celestial Dash
    Rank: S
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the main blade, Leila lets the weapon imbue her with celestial magic. This makes her enter a celestial wraith state in which her body glows bright blue and becomes much faster than it normally is. On top of her regular speed, she will gain a boost of 300 m/s for a single dash of 400 meters. The only downsides of this are that this rush can only be in one direction and once Leila stops, the speed boost will disappear. However, that is not the end of the ability, as she can perform a semi-charged attack at the end of her dash. This attack can hit a single target and will deal 50% of S-ranked damage. It also creates Ethernano poisoning within the attacked enemy which will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage for the next 4 posts.
    Strengths:

    • Gives Leila a considerable speed boost that essentially transforms her own body into the spell itself
    • Provides heavy damage over time that eventually deals 2.5x S-ranked damage

    Weaknesses:

    • The attack dash cannot change direction once it starts, forcing Leila to commit to it
    • The initial attack deals very little damage and most likely won’t finish any real enemies off
    • Due to the celestial wraith mode effect, Leila will become much more visible to all enemies around


    Name: Celestial Rush
    Rank: A
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An ability of the knife, the smallest part of the multi-part. Taking the small blade out, Leila can toss it anywhere at the speed of 225 m/s and let it fly any distance up to 300 meters. If no obstacle is hit, then Leila will simply warp to the knife’s position through celestial magic imbued in it and that will be the end of this spell. However, if something is hit, mainly an enemy, the warp will be also followed by a quick attack by the knife or the main blade, dealing 50% of A-ranked damage to the affected enemy. The warp has to be performed while the knife is in the air, as the magic will cease to function once it hits the ground. This makes the spell instant rather than one with duration.
    Strengths:

    • An ability that can be used to quickly close distance between Leila and any enemy
    • Has utility use as well with the warp function alone

    Weaknesses:

    • When used to attack an enemy, the damage dealt will be highly limited
    • Unlike regular warps, this one can be interrupted by outside force
    • Unlike regular warps, this one is not instant and has a set speed at which the knife is thrown

    Passive abilities:

    Equipment extra effect: +15% MP

    Name: Machine Transformation
    Rank: S
    Description: An exception to separate parts abilities, this passive skill allows the Avalon to be transformed into one of three main modes. This can only be done when both the main blade and knife are locked in the sheath. If this condition is fulfilled, the entire multi-part can transform into either a heavy-looking repeating bow or a mechanical spear. If a bow mode is selected, Ethernano arrows are summoned to be used as ammunition and the range/speed of them is equal to one of S-ranked single target spell. There is also an added bonus to both of these forms, as the first shot in each post when the weapon is transformed will be charged and will cause 50% of S-ranked damage on impact. This makes up for the fact that the rest of the multi-part’s abilities cannot be used while the weapon is transformed, but the impact itself happens only once per thread on each of the two transformations. The third main mode is its standard sword appearance that uses the regular abilities.



    Name: Ignition
    Rank: S
    Description: Surface of the main blade is always coated with a special liquid that does not come off easily and can be ignited. If the weapon is removed from its sheath normally, rather than having the sheath itself open up completely, then one of the mechanisms inside can form a spark that will set this liquid ablaze. The result is a flaming weapon that has a fire element added to all of its attacks and abilities. This boosts all of the damage dealt by the weapon by 50%. This number can either fall to 25% or rise up to 75% depending on if the target is weak or resistant to flames. Logically, this only affects regular attacks with this weapon and its offensive abilities. Magic spells, other equipment and melee attacks with fists are not boosted.




    Change log (5/27/2018):


    • Changed the name to Avalon. (originally Lumen Victoria)
    • Added an additional spear mode to Machine Transformation ability, but otherwise it's nearly identical to how it was before.



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    Re: Avalon

    Post by Leila Vergious on 28th May 2018, 12:50 am


    The equipment rules must have changed at some point without me noticing, I apologize. Bump!


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    Re: Avalon

    Post by kittykool75 on 29th May 2018, 4:27 pm

    Spoiler:
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    Name:
    Avalon

    Rank:
    Multi-part weapon

    Type:
    Mechanical Blade

    Used parts & ownership:
    Legendary(+) weapon , Artifact(+) weapon, Artifact(+) item

    Description:
    A special weapon that is linked to the ethernano energy of Void spirits and thus only usable by them. Originally, this weapon started as a simple bow crafted by a special tribe of Joya. While meant for their goddess Noheme, it was eventually abandoned and left forgotten in the world. However, this was not to be forever, as a Miracle Demon named Arith found it and took it into his care. In order to fulfill his own desires, he had approached Leila Vergious and gave her this weapon along with a new goal, but not before upgrading it even further to fit the Eden’s Caretaker. Now the Moonlight’s Grace became Avalon, a victory of light in the form of a mechanical blade that consists of three parts - sheath, a small knife and the katana itself. Each of these parts is essential in workings of this multi-part and just as important as the rest.

    The fighting style of this weapon is very similar to classical swordsmanship, but with added functions. As a mechanical blade, the weapon is always hidden in its sheath until released. This can be done by either opening the sheath completely and taking the entire blade out at once, removing it like a regular sword or even shooting the weapon out like a projectile. Only once each part is separated from the rest to a degree will the special abilities become properly usable.


    Strengths:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be stolen by the enemy
    • Balanced material - Despite looking like a chunk of metal when in sheath, the blade is light, yet powerful
    • Versatility - As a multi-part weapon, the blade can do much more than any regular weapon ever could

    Weaknesses:

    • Ethernano link - the weapon can only be used by its wielder and cannot be given to an ally
    • Close range - In its default state, the weapon can only be used in close quarters combat
    • Shape - The sword is fairly large and part of its sheath. This can make combat clumsy without proper training
    • Offense oriented - despite having a protective sheath as a part of the weapon, its defensive ability is very limited

    Active abilities:

    Name: Heavy Impact
    Rank: S
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: A special burst-type attack that usually serves as a good combat opener. Activating a special mechanism within the sheath, it can shoot the main blade out like a bullet in order to hit the enemy. While the range of this is only 100 meters with the speed of 75 m/s, the enemy hit with the blade’s hilt will receive 75% of S-ranked damage will and will be stunned for a single post, provided they are not of H-rank. In that case, they will become dazed and their speed will decrease by 50% for a single post.
    Strengths:

    • A powerful opening attack that can give Leila a great advantage in one to one combat
    • A negative attack is applied even to the strongest of allies

    Weaknesses:

    • Despite having qualities of single-target attack, Heavy Impact uses burst range and speed
    • Greatly loses effectiveness after the combat starts, as it relies on a moment of surprise
    • The blow does not deal full damage in order to inflict a negative effect on the enemy


    Name: Celestial Dash
    Rank: S
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the main blade, Leila lets the weapon imbue her with celestial magic. This makes her enter a celestial wraith state in which her body glows bright blue and becomes much faster than it normally is. On top of her regular speed, she will gain a boost of 300 m/s for a single dash of 400 meters. The only downsides of this are that this rush can only be in one direction and once Leila stops, the speed boost will disappear. However, that is not the end of the ability, as she can perform a semi-charged attack at the end of her dash. This attack can hit a single target and will deal 50% of S-ranked damage. It also creates Ethernano poisoning within the attacked enemy which will deal additional 50% of S-ranked damage for the next 4 posts.
    Strengths:

    • Gives Leila a considerable speed boost that essentially transforms her own body into the spell itself
    • Provides heavy damage over time that eventually deals 2.5x S-ranked damage

    Weaknesses:

    • The attack dash cannot change direction once it starts, forcing Leila to commit to it
    • The initial attack deals very little damage and most likely won’t finish any real enemies off
    • Due to the celestial wraith mode effect, Leila will become much more visible to all enemies around


    Name: Celestial Rush
    Rank: A
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An ability of the knife, the smallest part of the multi-part. Taking the small blade out, Leila can toss it anywhere at the speed of 225 m/s and let it fly any distance up to 300 meters. If no obstacle is hit, then Leila will simply warp to the knife’s position through celestial magic imbued in it and that will be the end of this spell. However, if something is hit, mainly an enemy, the warp will be also followed by a quick attack by the knife or the main blade, dealing 50% of A-ranked damage to the affected enemy. The warp has to be performed while the knife is in the air, as the magic will cease to function once it hits the ground. This makes the spell instant rather than one with duration.
    Strengths:

    • An ability that can be used to quickly close distance between Leila and any enemy
    • Has utility use as well with the warp function alone

    Weaknesses:

    • When used to attack an enemy, the damage dealt will be highly limited
    • Unlike regular warps, this one can be interrupted by outside force
    • Unlike regular warps, this one is not instant and has a set speed at which the knife is thrown

    Passive abilities:

    Equipment extra effect: +15% MP

    Name: Machine Transformation
    Rank: S
    Description: An exception to separate parts abilities, this passive skill allows the Avalon to be transformed into one of three main modes. This can only be done when both the main blade and knife are locked in the sheath. If this condition is fulfilled, the entire multi-part can transform into either a heavy-looking repeating bow or a mechanical spear. If a bow mode is selected, Ethernano arrows are summoned to be used as ammunition and the range/speed of them is equal to one of S-ranked single target spell. There is also an added bonus to both of these forms, as the first shot in each post when the weapon is transformed will be charged and will cause 50% of S-ranked damage on impact. This makes up for the fact that the rest of the multi-part’s abilities cannot be used while the weapon is transformed, but the impact itself happens only once per thread on each of the two transformations. The third main mode is its standard sword appearance that uses the regular abilities.



    Name: Ignition
    Rank: A
    Description: Surface of the main blade is always coated with a special liquid that does not come off easily and can be ignited. If the weapon is removed from its sheath normally, rather than having the sheath itself open up completely, then one of the mechanisms inside can form a spark that will set this liquid ablaze. The result is a flaming weapon that has a fire element added to all of its attacks and abilities. This boosts all of the damage dealt by the weapon by 50%. This number can either fall to 25% or rise up to 75% depending on if the target is weak or resistant to flames. Logically, this only affects regular attacks with this weapon and its offensive abilities. Magic spells, other equipment and melee attacks with fists are not boosted.




    Change log (5/28/2018):


    • Changed the name to Avalon. (originally Lumen Victoria)
    • Added an additional spear mode to Machine Transformation ability, but otherwise it's nearly identical to how it was before.
    • Removed the Overcharge ability to meet the new multi-part weapon rules.




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