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    Celestial Spirit Magic

    Zachary-Sirius
    Zachary-Sirius

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 11th January 2019, 12:42 pm

    Celestial Spirit Magic
    (AKA: Celestial Wizardry)


    Celestial Spirit Magic XH2qXmu

    Magic Type:
    Summon Primary - Auxiliary Take-Over

    Description:
    A well known and fabled magic that once belonged to legendary sorcerers in the past, including of the "Heartfilia" family. After the events of the Real Nightmare, Celestial Wizards became extremely scarce but a few lines of the craft survived. The magic works by the wizard having the ability to summon "Celestial Spirits"-- beings derived from beyond the stars and within the cosmos. The most well known of these spirits are those from the constellations and Zodiac. The magic is used via the wizard finding a specialized item called "Gate Keys" that allow the user to summon the spirit bound to the key by opening their Gate. The summon can only truly be used after the summoner enters a contract with the spirit in question-- whether a verbal agreement or other conditions, the summon will aid and fight for its master.

    Normally, a Celestial Wizard is restricted by the keys they have collected. However, Zachary has been able to discover new spirits not found among the 'constellations' -- but from those of other faiths and worlds beyond that share the same 'sky'. This same realization had allowed him to find new spirits and the ability to earn them via research, study and seeking them out.

    More so, A Celestial Wizard's power is noted by the number of spirits they can summon. However, Zachary possesses a unique talent. In place of summoning multiple spirits, he learned to channel his own magic power into an existing spirit to undergo what he calls "Stellar Evolution". The renewed state grants his spirits a temporary boost in their abilities and extra magic powers. This method requires less magic power than opening a second gate and gives more strength and magic to his spirits.

    Benefits:
    + Can have up to 3 Summons spells active at once.
    + +15% to HP and MP.

    Celestial Spirit Magic XAnz6iS

    Unique Abilities:

    • Eternal Bonds: The care and love Zachary has for his spirits are as deep as family. Though not all his spirits started out on the best foot, they have grown to respect and care for him. As such, not only do they love his company-- but they are fiercely dedicated to protecting him from any that wish him harm. The love between a Celestial Wizard and their Spirits can transcend the limits of what is possible. The connection between Zachary and his spirits go beyond just mere 'contracts' but the bonds of love he shares with each one. Via his magic, he can create 'miniature' or 'chibi' incarnations of his summons in the form of Non-Combative familiars. These creatures can stay by his side and interact with him without any form of duration and near no magic power to be summoned. Even more powerful Spirits can assume new forms to be within his presence (depending on the power of each spirit in question). The dedication to his spirits are so strong they use their own magic energy to help him out, reducing MP cost for summon's abilities by 50%.  

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    • Stellar Evolution: A Celestial Wizard's strength has always been determined by the number of spirits they could summon at one time. However, Zachary had a unique talent to make his spirits stronger. By drawing the constellation of a spirit to channel his magic, he combines it with the spirit and the gate used to summon it! This allows a spirit to undergo a powerful transformation, which enhances their magic and grants them new abilities. It is said this method allows a silver key-spirit to rise up to the strength of a Zodiac by comparison. The user of this magic may apply partial and full-body Take Over magic to his summons. The same Take Over Rules applies (for both Summon or Summoner. Only one ful-body take-over can be active at a time. Can only be used on summoner or summon at any given time, not both at once).
      Incantation:O Gate of the (blank) , I call upon/beseech you... Open your threshold once more! Fill this champion with your light, shine and transcend the spirit within! Stellar Evolution!!

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    • Gate of the Convergence: A forbidden spell often used as a means for a Celestial Spirit to possess and control a wizard, to control them and drain their magic to increase their strength. The practice broke Celestial Law and was forbidden for millennia. However, the method is possible if the wizard and spirit are in a consent to do it together. The process requires the two spirits to have a strong connection with one another. Lastly, as the first time needs to be done, the summoner must stab himself in the heart with the spirit's key to fuse with them. The process if not done correctly the first time will result in death to the Celestial Wizard. When a summon is active, the summoner of this magic may cast Stellar Evolution on himself and combine with one of his summons, allowing the Summon's abilities to be added on to its magical effects. The summoner and all his abilities also get a passive S-Rank boost to Spell damage. This state lasts as long as summon's remaining duration. No melee or HP boosts and damage is still done to summon in this state.

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    Zachary-Sirius
    Zachary-Sirius

    Alt Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Zodiac Key- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Insight of the Cosmos
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    Posts : 430
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 667,254

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 11th January 2019, 1:03 pm

    Celestial Spirits & Support Spells

    Celestial Spirit Magic I06rIoV

    Spells Earned:

    D Rank:
    C Rank:
    B Rank: 8/12 (2/2 Advance Slots)
    A Rank: 6/9 (2/2 Advance Slots)
    S Rank: 5/6 (2/2 Advance Slots)
    H Rank: 1/1 (2/2 Advance Slots)

    Signatures: 3


    Spells Purchased:

    5/15 (For all magic)
    + 2 B rank Spell Slots bought  1/12/2020
    + 3 Spell slots bought on 10/5/2020


    Plot Summons

    Gate of the Wise Owl - Noctura:

    Gate of the Southern Triangle - Atria:


    Gate of the Crow - Corvus:


    Gate of the Rainbow Dragon, Prismolgia :

    Gate of the Star-Sea-Goat - Capricorn:

    Gate of the Ninth Heaven - Pluto:



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    Zachary-Sirius
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 12th January 2019, 11:09 pm

    Lineage Benefits

    Insight of the Cosmos


    • This magic has 2 extra Grande/Silver Rank summons allowed in addition to its original amount, that can be placed in any rank. See Lineage for details.


    Spell Template
    Template Save:

    Lineage Spells & Signatures

    Gate of the Gemmed Beast - Carbuncle:


    Gate of the Elk - Rangifer:

    Gate of Canis Major - Sirius:

    Gate of the Fortress - Alexander:


    Gate of the Mechanized Balance - Libra:


    Signature located in Signature Post.




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    Zachary-Sirius
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 667,254

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 12th January 2019, 11:09 pm

    B-Rank Spells

    Gate of the Lynx - Amethyst:

    Gate of the Clock - Horologium:

    Gate of the Eagle - Aquila:


    Gate of the Sea Serpent - Cetus:


    Gate of the Fox - Vixen:

    Gate of the Great Bear/Ursa Major - Garnet Grizzly:

    Stellar Evolution - Cosmic Power:


    Gate of the Second Heaven  - Venus:

    B-Rank Advanced Spells

    Gate of the Dark Guardian - Cerberus:

    Gate of the Third Heaven - Gaia/Terra:




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    Zachary-Sirius
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 667,254

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 12th January 2019, 11:11 pm

    A-Rank Spells

    Gate of the Valiant Maiden - Virgo:

    Gate of the Monkey King - Sun Wukong:


    Gate of the Rooster - Kung Pao:

    Gate of the Snake - Wân Shé:


    Stellar Evolution - Transcendent Wings:

    Stellar Evolution - Planetary Empowerment:

    A-Rank Advanced Spells

    Gate of the Fourth Heaven - Mars | Gate of the Ram - Aries:

    Gate of the Rogue Twins - Gemini Spark:



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    Zachary-Sirius
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 12th January 2019, 11:11 pm

    S-Rank Spells




    Gate of the Dragon - Draco (Reborn):

    Gate of the Fifth Heaven - Jupiter:


    Gate of the Eighth Heaven - Neptune:

    Gate of the Tiger - Baihu/Byakko:


    Gate of the Seventh Heaven - Ouranos :


    S-Rank Advanced Spells


    Gate of the Champion - Hercules:

    Stellar Evolution - Stars Allign:


    H-Rank Spells

    Gate of the Night-Mother - Nyx:

    H-Rank Advanced Spells

    Gate of the Lion - Leo:

    Gate of the Starry Throne - Cassiopeia 'Pea' /Saber:




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    Zachary-Sirius
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 12th January 2019, 11:12 pm

    Signature Spells


    Gate of The Winged Horse - Pegasus

    Celestial Spirit Magic YFAADAA

    Sapphire Pegasus:
    Rank: S
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: XXX
    Melee Damage: + 35 HP
    Summon HP: 250 HP
    Range: 100 Meters
    Speed: 100 MPS
    Duration: 10 Posts.
    Downside:
    Description:
    A majestic winged horse from the Constellation of "Pegasus" the winged steed given by the gods to the hero Perseus in the Greek myths. He is a beautiful white horse with shiny fur and golden-colored wings and tuffles along his body. Unique, he has sapphire crystals in parts of his wings-- and a same gemmed horn from his forehead. He is technically an  Alicorn like in the ancient myths. Still, he is a celestial spirit and was dubbed that regardless.

    Pegasus was one of Zachary's first spirits and a beloved friend even as a child. At times, he can be patronizing and firm, but he had grown to care for Zachary and the two became fast friends. He would often carry Zachary on his back when he was younger for flights in the air.


    Pegasus Abilities:


    Stellar Evolution: Zodiac Zenith!

    Celestial Spirit Magic 5LHkE7X

    Stellar Evolution: Zodiac Zenith!
    Rank: S
    Take-Over Type: Full-Body Take-Over
    Grade: Transendant
    Take-Over Buff: 105% to Spell Damage
    Melee Damage: +Rank HP
    Range: Rank Meters
    Speed: Rank MPS
    Duration: 10 Posts
    Downside:
    Description:
    The true might of Stellar Evolution manifested, instead of minor enhancements or which results into a full transformation of the summon the Celestial Wizard conjures. While its full transformation varies on the spirit, even may not be the same effect on the same spirit-- it adapts and empowers the summon with new strength. A silver key spirit can rise to the same height as that of a Zodiac spirit in strength and power. If used on a Zodiac, their power becomes transcendant. 
    Partials Included:

    X  Cosmic Power
    X  Transcendent Wings
    X  Planetary Empowerment
    X  Stars Allign

    Effect: Transform into an avatar of the cosmos, usually with an aura of stars that glow around them or as parts of their body. Will last till end of duration or summon's duration expires.

    Abilities:

    Gate of The Star-Warden - Zodiark

    Celestial Spirit Magic Wt5gQx9

    Zodiark:
    Rank: S
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: XXX
    Melee Damage: + 35 HP
    Summon HP: 250 HP
    Range: 100 Meters
    Speed: 100 MPS
    Duration: 10 Posts.
    Downside:
    Description:
    An ancient being similar in authority and kin to the Celestial Spirit King himself. An alien creature of blue scales, almost dragon-like clad in a golden suit of celestial armor. He is adorned with a cape and garments that gives a cosmic, heroic appearance. He is often stalwart and strict. HE upholds not only the laws of the Celestial World connected to Earthland, but also any threat that upsets the balance between universes. It was said he was the key figure that was responsible for the appearance of Astromancy and the Arc of Cosmos. He is dedicated to fighting against any threat, heroic and selfless.

    Stellar Evolution:

    Zodiark's  Abilities:







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    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
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    Post by ivyleaf33 13th January 2019, 8:42 am

    Spoiler:

    Hey there, it's ya boi Ivy here to grade your magic today! You know how this goes - all edits will be in this color. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask!


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    Celestial Spirit Magic B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Zachary-Sirius
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 13th January 2019, 1:05 pm

    All areas fixed. Sorry about the confusion. I made the duration for Lynx claw 2 cause i was just hoping for 2 damage ticks-- if not allowed ill just make it a straight up one hit.

    All other areas fixed up. Thank you

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    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 14th January 2019, 11:45 am

    Fixed-- again

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    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 16th January 2019, 8:09 am

    Spoiler:

    Celestial Spirit Magic KhyzeRtP_o


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    Celestial Spirit Magic B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 20th February 2019, 4:15 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Third Magic: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 27th February 2019, 8:05 am

    Spoiler:

    Hey Zachary! You know who I am and what I'm here to do, so let's get to it. All edits will be made in this color. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!

    Generally, you have one too many passive spells: 1/4 of 6 normal spell slots is not two, unfortunately, meaning you may only have one of them. Please change or remove whichever one you pick, and let me know~


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    Celestial Spirit Magic B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Zachary-Sirius
    Zachary-Sirius

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    Lineage : Insight of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 430
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 667,254

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Magic: Arc of Cosmos
    Third Magic: Cosmic Dragon Slayer

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 28th February 2019, 6:02 pm

    All suggested changes were made-- but if you have any optional things that could replace the DOT immunity that would be nice?

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 1st March 2019, 9:20 pm

    Spoiler:

    Some changes need to be made to Celestial Faith. In addition, you still have not made edits I mentioned last time - you may only have one passive spell. You currently have 2. Pleas change one of them.

    As for the DOT immunity replacement, there isn't really anything that I'd be likely to approve. The ability is already powerful to the max, and adding anything else would probably have to result in it being nerfed back down.


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    Celestial Spirit Magic B2WXv4aK_o
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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 3rd March 2019, 10:48 pm

    Replaced Nyx/Noctura with Aquila, and other changes made. ty

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    Post by ivyleaf33 4th March 2019, 5:16 am

    Spoiler:

    Edits to Celestial Faith and Aquila~


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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 7th March 2019, 4:35 pm

    I am sorry about Eye of Altair and fixed it. it will be spell speed and range only.

    However, Celestial Faith doesn't make sense. damage max/healing for C rank is 60 HP. Using DOT mechanics it can be as high as 2.5X its original, the total of this is 150 HP via this. 150 /3 posts is 50HP per turn. I was under the impression this was allowed and was told otherwise in the question chat. Please confirm whether or not this is correct ?

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    Post by ivyleaf33 7th March 2019, 7:07 pm

    This is the excerpt from the rules:

    Damage: The blow from a DoT spell can normally do at maximum 50% of its spell categories and ranks maximum damage in the initial post. It can then do up to 50% of this same damage per post for several posts until the damage has reached a maximum of 2.5x the damage.

    A DoT spell can only do up to 50% of the spell's damage per post. 50 HP is way more than 50% of 60 HP, and I will have to ask you to either increase the duration to 5 posts or lower the damage per post to 30HP.


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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 9th March 2019, 3:51 pm

    Okay Ivy. thank you fro explaining it. I cut the effect down for 30 HP over 5 posts. I had just hoped 50 HP was a better round number. EIther way, it all is done and hopefully approval.

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    Post by ivyleaf33 9th March 2019, 8:35 pm

    Spoiler:

    Celestial Spirit Magic KhyzeRtP_o


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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 7th May 2019, 2:58 pm

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    Post by MarkusEldridge 24th June 2019, 12:00 pm

    Hey there, my name is Markus, I am sorry for the delay in grading, things outside of my control have caused things to be a bit chaotic. My grading is in the below spoiler, and all of my comments will be in This lovely color.

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    Post by Zachary-Sirius 27th June 2019, 10:11 pm

    Okay I edited majority and the Stellar Evolution mechanic now works since magic is now auxiliary take over .

    I edited and fixed format but a few things need reconfirmation.

    First off-- the signature is a slot sacrificed. I have a total of 9 slots avalable , and only have 8 , so that 9th is to the signature already.

    Second-- Leo's Solar Roar, i had applied the words clearer but it is what i meant regarding roar for a charge effect.

    Third, Horologium/Showtime's time-stop shield. The general effect is an anti-piercing shield using time magic. Its meant to illustrate how it looks and how it stops time for physical objects. What exactly is the problem with this? I really do not understand the reason its seen as a negation.

    Also added the new take-over spells for Stellar Evolution and the lineage spells. Please see and ty


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    Post by MarkusEldridge 10th July 2019, 10:10 am

    Hey there, time for one more look at your Magic. As a quick heads up, it is currently too long for me to grade all at once, so there will be this post, and a post following splitting the grading into two. Most of my comments are in (This lovely color.)
    As a quick note, and to address what you said in your reply, though it will also be detailed in the individual spells :

    1. (Solar Roar : I understand what you mean, however the fact that it has a charge ability means it MUST start out with 50% damage on the first turn. Such that, if you were to attack without a charge, it is weaker than just a base spell. That is the trade off for a charge spell.)
    2. (Time-Stop Shield : That is fine if it is a fluff explination, but then you have to specify that if the spell is stronger, or does more damage than the effect is broken after that damage is reduced, otherwise it lets you avoid the spell as it is "paused", which is a negation effect.)

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