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    Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Gisen Ceostra
    Gisen Ceostra

    Battle Bunny


    Battle Bunny

    Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Halloween Social - Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Protector of Gaia
    Position : None
    Posts : 852
    Guild : Guildless
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,006,507

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Affinity of the Body
    Second Magic: Sticks & Stones
    Third Magic: Ex-quip: Bunny Brigade

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Gisen Ceostra 19th March 2019, 10:56 pm

    Bumping for completion! Fair warning... I am gonna need a little editing, it's just too late at night to look through with a fine tooth comb.


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

    Administrator- Moderator- Main Account- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Shipped- Sticking Around- Taskmaster- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Player 
    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Magic: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by MarkusEldridge 24th March 2019, 7:04 am

    Hey there, Markus here. I will be grading your magic this time around. My grading will be in this lovely color.

    Just as a quick heads up, and overarching comments

    • ReQuips also need a range and speed, which is generally burst. Please add that to each requip.
    • Most of your abilities are missing ST/MT/AoE/Burst within the type, all active spells and abilities must include this in the type.

    Spoiler:


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    Gisen Ceostra
    Gisen Ceostra

    Battle Bunny


    Battle Bunny

    Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Halloween Social - Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Protector of Gaia
    Position : None
    Posts : 852
    Guild : Guildless
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,006,507

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Affinity of the Body
    Second Magic: Sticks & Stones
    Third Magic: Ex-quip: Bunny Brigade

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Gisen Ceostra 19th April 2019, 9:53 am

    Benefits: I need a little help explaining via dm on discord or via reply on what you mean by this. I honestly only got a little more confused reading over the grading of this x.x

    Gaia's Resolve: Spell notes it can still be destroyed. Will reword if need be.

    Molten Impact Passive: Ability comes in reduced DoT amounts and includes healing to fire slayers an no damage to fire mages. Is there any ideas/suggestions to add? I generally don't think it would, but if you think there is, I won't argue lol

    Holy Chill: Misjudged totals and have fixed accordingly.

    Frozen Heart passive: Changed.

    Active: Adjusted. Completely my bad in having put down the wrong stats. Fixed for AoE though!

    Elendskraft: Fixed up to note it's not a sword and shield, rather the "shield" is simply a detached part of the weapon that becomes part of the weapon when its form shifts. Will adjust if need be, just aiming high~

    Sky Piercer: I believe it's adjusted in the passive as you'd suggested. If not, I'm more than willing to either rework or scrap the passive and create a new one.

    Mi Ru passive: Adjusted and removed additional duration, same with the Glaive passive after rereading it as well. (It added an extra post of slowed regen per hit but not anymore~.)

    Daito Raven passive: Will add later upon relooking. Time restraints are a pain.

    Will D ranks upon other regrading. Again, time constraints.

    Bumping for edits~


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

    Administrator- Moderator- Main Account- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Shipped- Sticking Around- Taskmaster- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Player 
    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Magic: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by MarkusEldridge 26th April 2019, 10:08 am

    Hey, sorry for the delay in grading, I was left without a direct computer for a bit, and needed to wait for Magic Changes to come out for part of this. As always, my grading or comments will be in This lovely Color.


    • Benefits : Feel free to PM me on discord if there is still confusion. Under Solitary Benefit you have "Weapon/Armor/Item" Benefits, however that is the old benefits for Holder Magic. In actually, as a requip solitary magic your Solitary Benefit should be that you can have up to 4 active requips at once.
    • Also, a quick note on your Lineage. It seems that it is a Former Lineage that has not been updated to rulesets, or put into the custom Library. As such, I will have to ask that you send it in for approval, and rework it as per current rules with an Admin. That is handled now by created a new topic under WIP Lineages, and putting the information below in that topic. You can also link it here instead of putting it in your magic directly.

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    Gisen Ceostra
    Gisen Ceostra

    Battle Bunny


    Battle Bunny

    Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Halloween Social - Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Protector of Gaia
    Position : None
    Posts : 852
    Guild : Guildless
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,006,507

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Affinity of the Body
    Second Magic: Sticks & Stones
    Third Magic: Ex-quip: Bunny Brigade

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Gisen Ceostra 23rd May 2019, 7:03 am

    Okies. Edits made~

    Removed lineage while it's under revisions.. mainly cause changing up a couple abilities and blanking on replacements.

    Frozen Heart Passive: Edited damage totals in compliance with DoT rules. I didn't understand what you meant by 83% or anything, so I just went by the rules and the total including base damage would total out to 75; 30 base, and then another 45 from the 150%.



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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have an Admin as a friend!- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 7th June 2019, 1:27 pm

    Heya Gisen, Joh here to grade your magic. As an overarching comment, all of your Requip spells seem to be lacking both ranges and speeds, so these need to be added. Other than that, my comments will be in this color

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    Gisen Ceostra
    Gisen Ceostra

    Battle Bunny


    Battle Bunny

    Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Halloween Social - Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Protector of Gaia
    Position : None
    Posts : 852
    Guild : Guildless
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,006,507

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Affinity of the Body
    Second Magic: Sticks & Stones
    Third Magic: Ex-quip: Bunny Brigade

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Gisen Ceostra 20th June 2019, 11:16 am

    Okies, fixed everything up as requested!

    Only large, notable change was "The Switch" sig spell has been replaced!


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have an Admin as a friend!- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Approved Re: Ex-Quip Bunny Brigade COMPLETE!

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th June 2019, 1:15 am

    More edits, same color

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