Fairy Tail RP

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

• Patch Notes •                 • New User Guide •                • Guild Information •

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd November 2014, 7:03 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial spirit magic is a holder based magic, This type of magic uses special types of keys to open a gate wa between this world and the celestial spirit world. Each spirit is different and completely unique. They hold different abilities and forms of abilities.

    Kocho uses the magic by first taking out her key and doing a full circle around her body and then calls out the name of the spirit she is trying to summon. She fights alongside her spirits with two chains that have iron balls attached to the end of them, she uses them to wrap up enemies, or just attack them. She treats her spirits how she would treat anyone else, with the utmost respect.
    Aura Type: N/A
    Strengths:
    •The user can fight with the spirit
    •The user can become friends with the spirit
    •Spirits have their own separate type of magic that they can use
    Weaknesses:
    •Spirits can't be summoned if the user doesn't have their key
    •Spirits have certain days when they can be summoned
    •The spells the spirits use takes away from the users MP
    •Only one golden key can be summoned at a time
    Lineage: N/A
    Unique Abilities:
    •Because her mother is a celestial spirit, and that makes Kocho half celestial spirit, she is able to turn into one. When turning into a spirit, she simply claps her hands together and states the word transform.

    Kocho's celestial spirit form:
    Gate of the Archer:

    C-Rank Spirits:

    D-Rank Spirits:


    Last edited by Kocho on 8th May 2015, 4:47 pm; edited 39 times in total
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd November 2014, 10:10 pm

    Bump~Revision needed


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 25th November 2014, 10:03 pm

    Bump


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Tōwa Lazmira
    Tōwa Lazmira

    Judge and jury


    Judge and jury

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Weapon of Apocalypse Wielder- Player 
    Lineage : Godchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 782
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cosmic Mind
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 25th November 2014, 10:19 pm

    Kocho wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial spirit magic is a holder based magic, This type of magic uses special types of keys to open a gate way between this world and the celestial spirit world. Each spirit is different and completely unique. They hold different abilities and forms of abilities.

    Kocho uses the magic by first taking out her key and doing a full circle around her body and then calls out the name of the spirit she is trying to summon. She fights alongside her spirits with two chains that have iron balls attached to the end of them, she uses them to wrap up enemies, or just attack them. She treats her spirits how she would treat anyone else, with the utmost respect.
    Innate Abilities:
    •To understand spirits on an emotional level
    •To sense when other spirits have been summoned within a 20 meter radius
    •To summon any type of key as long they have made a contract with the spirit
    Aura Type: N/A
    Strengths:
    •The user can fight with the spirit
    •The user can become friends with the spirit
    •Spirits have their own separate type of magic they use
    Weaknesses:
    •Spirits can't be summoned if the user doesn't have their key
    •Spirits have certain days when they can be summoned
    •The spells the spirits use takes away from the users MP
    •Only one golden key can be summoned at a time
    Lineage: N/A
    Unique Abilities:
    •She has a special connection with Sagittarius, so he can be summoned when he senses that she is in danger and doesn't have his key

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: Gate of the Rainbow Unicorn: Pigxie
    Rank: [D, 1 summoning count]
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Pigxies key is rainbow colored and in a cone shape to resemble a unicorn horn. When Kocho summons Pigxie, she does a full circle around her body and then calls out "Gate of the Rainbow unicorn, Pigxie, I summon thee!". When she does that, a line of rainbow shows, and Pixie comes charging out of it. Pigxie is of a fairly short height. Pigxie is 5"3. Though her key name is rainbow unicorn, she wears a unicorn costume. Pigxie has the appearance of a young woman. She attacks by summoning rainbows that are hot and then either uses them as a whip, or blows them out of her hand toward enemies. The rainbows are as hot as fire. When she uses the whip, it has a handle. The rainbow on the handle of the who is 7(reduce to 3) meters long. She moves at a speed of 15 mph. Each time a rainbow hits an enemy or an enemy is hit by a whip, it deals half of D-Rank damage on D-Rank mages and 25% of D-Rank damage on C rank mages. Any rank higher than C is unaffected. It takes 3 hits of D-Rank damage to send her back the Celestial Spirit world.
    Strengths:
    •Her physical strength is equal to that of a horse
    Her rainbows are as hot as fire(And this means what? and does how much damaage)
    •She can shoot rainbows out of her hands
    Weaknesses:
    •She doesn't have the body of a real unicorn
    •She is fairly short
    Her whip is 7 meters long(Again lower the range)
    •She isn't great at close range combat

    List of Spell Fusions: N/A


    Name: Gate of the Archer: Sagittarius
    Rank: [D 1.5 summoning count]
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sagittarius' key is golden with the Sagittarius symbol on the top of the key. When Kocho summons Sagittarius, she does a full circle around her body and then calls out,"Gate of the Archer: Sagittarius, I open thee!" After that Sagittarius appears before her. Sagittarius, despite how people usually view him, is a tall, black-haired, lanky man wearing a horse costume. He has rustic, almost medieval style clothing. He carries a giant bow and has a giant quiver on his back. Sagittarius is a master archer. He shoots targets with great accuracy. Sagittarius has immense reflexes. Sagittarius can aim his bow down and fire his projectiles at incredible speed(25mph to be exact). Sagittarius can also move at a speed of 25 mph(Cut to 10). The way he shoots his arrows makes them as affective as a rock would be on a glass window. His arrows do D-Ranked damage on D-Rank mages and half of that on C-Rank. Any Rank higher than C is unaffected. It takes 4 hits of D-Rank damage to send him back the Celestial Spirit world.
    Strengths:
    •Sagittarius is a master archer
    •Sagittarius has immense reflexes
    •Sagittarius can move at a speed of 25 mph(Lower to 10)
    Weaknesses:
    •Is only good for mid and long ranged combat
    •Cannot be summoned on Mondays
    •Has bad physical strength
    •4 hits of D-Rank damage send him back to the Celestial spirit world

    Name: Gate of the Wind Maiden: Mikos
    Rank: (D 1 summoning count)
    Type : Offensive
    Description: Mikos' key is yellow and has a regular key shape. Mikos is a beautiful woman on top, and a fish at the bottom. She wear an all white kimono. Her hair is wavy and she has gray eyes. Mikos has incredible wind abilities. She carries a giant fan that allows her to control wind. She can make the wind sharp and forceful. She can even alter the way its flowing. She can make the wind move up to a speed of 25 mph. She is pretty weak physically. It takes 2 hits of D-Rank damage to send her back to the Celestial spirit world. Mikos makes wind scythes that span out to a length of 10 meters in diameter. The wind scythe can travel up to a length of 10 meters. The wind scythe does D-Rank damage. She can push enemies away from her, as long as they are within 12 meters of her. She can push them 10(5) meters back from their current position with her wind abilities. Her abilities are activated when she swings her fan. She can run at a speed of 5 mph
    Strength:
    •Her wind travels at a speed of 25mph
    •Her wind scythe cuts enemies
    •She can push enemies 10(5) meters back from their current position
    Weaknesses:
    •She is physically weak
    •She can only run at a speed of 5mph
    •She can't be summoned on Saturdays
    •The enemy has to be within 12 meters of her in order for her to push them back


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Towa's Theme:

    Ume's Theme:
    The Blade of War - Unmade Primary Magic - Unmade Secondary Magic
    Unmade Armor - Unmade items.
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 25th November 2014, 10:28 pm

    Bump~Made the edits


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Tōwa Lazmira
    Tōwa Lazmira

    Judge and jury


    Judge and jury

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Weapon of Apocalypse Wielder- Player 
    Lineage : Godchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 782
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cosmic Mind
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 28th November 2014, 5:17 pm

    OK as for your unique ability
    to do a Keyless summon you have to be below 25% health and the ken needs to be on your person.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Towa's Theme:

    Ume's Theme:
    The Blade of War - Unmade Primary Magic - Unmade Secondary Magic
    Unmade Armor - Unmade items.
    Tōwa Lazmira
    Tōwa Lazmira

    Judge and jury


    Judge and jury

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Weapon of Apocalypse Wielder- Player 
    Lineage : Godchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 782
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cosmic Mind
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 28th November 2014, 5:21 pm

    APPROVED


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Towa's Theme:

    Ume's Theme:
    The Blade of War - Unmade Primary Magic - Unmade Secondary Magic
    Unmade Armor - Unmade items.
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 29th November 2014, 5:04 pm

    Unlocked for edits to Innate abilities


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 29th November 2014, 5:32 pm

    Bump~Changed innate abilities to unique abilities and deleted one of them


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 7th December 2014, 10:35 am

    Kocho wrote:IMagic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder

    Description: Celestial spirit magic is a holder based magic, This type of magic uses special types of keys to open a gate wa between this world and the celestial spirit world. Each spirit is different and completely unique. They hold different abilities and forms of abilities.

    Kocho uses the magic by first taking out her key and doing a full circle around her body and then calls out the name of the spirit she is trying to summon. She fights alongside her spirits with two chains that have iron balls attached to the end of them, she uses them to wrap up enemies, or just attack them. She treats her spirits how she would treat anyone else, with the utmost respect.
    Aura Type: N/A
    Strengths:
    •The user can fight with the spirit
    •The user can become friends with the spirit
    •Spirits have their own separate type of magic they use
    Weaknesses:
    •Spirits can't be summoned if the user doesn't have their key
    •Spirits have certain days when they can be summoned
    •The spells the spirits use takes away from the users MP
    •Only one golden key can be summoned at a time
    Lineage: N/A
    Unique Abilities:
    •When under 25% HP, she can summon Sagittarius without using his key, however, she would still need to have his key on her
    •She can sense when other Celestial Spirits are within a 20 meter radius
    •She can understand all of her spirits on an emotional level
    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Please delete the stuff in yellow :P

    C-Rank Spirits:
    D-Rank Spirits:

    Just note that none of your magic have a duration/Cooldown. I've added that in blue so please make sure to fill those into your magic application. I understand that you have given them a hit count of how many hits the spirit can take, which is good, however


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 8th December 2014, 8:04 pm

    Bump- made the edits


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 8th December 2014, 11:05 pm

    Kocho wrote:IMagic

    Primary Magic: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Celestial spirit magic is a holder based magic, This type of magic uses special types of keys to open a gate wa between this world and the celestial spirit world. Each spirit is different and completely unique. They hold different abilities and forms of abilities.

    Kocho uses the magic by first taking out her key and doing a full circle around her body and then calls out the name of the spirit she is trying to summon. She fights alongside her spirits with two chains that have iron balls attached to the end of them, she uses them to wrap up enemies, or just attack them. She treats her spirits how she would treat anyone else, with the utmost respect.
    Aura Type: N/A
    Strengths:
    •The user can fight with the spirit
    •The user can become friends with the spirit
    •Spirits have their own separate type of magic they use
    Weaknesses:
    •Spirits can't be summoned if the user doesn't have their key
    •Spirits have certain days when they can be summoned
    •The spells the spirits use takes away from the users MP
    •Only one golden key can be summoned at a time
    Lineage: N/A
    Unique Abilities:
    •When under 25% HP, she can summon Sagittarius without using his key, however, she would still need to have his key on her
    •She can sense when other Celestial Spirits are within a 20 meter radius
    •She can understand all of her spirits on an emotional levelplate

    C-Rank Spirits:
    D-Rank Spirits:

    Okay good you did all of the edits I asked. My only issue is your durations. Yes your spirits go down in a certain number of hits, but they also have a post duration. They cannot just stay summoned until they get defeated. For D rank I would give them a duration of 2-3 posts with a cooldown of 3-4 posts. C rank, I would say duration of 3-4 posts and cooldown of 4-5 posts.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 9th December 2014, 6:24 pm

    Bump- added durations and cool downs to all spirits


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 9th December 2014, 10:31 pm

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Bff3f433-d205-4df1-8d68-33142047356e_zps0b905e71


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Tuna
    Tuna

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hihiirogane (日色金) - Sun-Colored Metal
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Tuna 21st December 2014, 2:59 pm

    Pastry:


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd December 2014, 9:48 am

    Bump- made my edits, need one spirit to be reviewed because I added one.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 23rd December 2014, 12:07 pm

    Okay Kocho I think this one is my fault but, can you please list your active and passive abilities for all your keys in their own little bullet point? for example:

    active:
    passive:

    rules on summoning:




    Kocho wrote:Magic


    [spoiler=Gate of the Moon Maiden]
    Name: Gate of the Moon Maiden: Luna
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Water
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Kocho summons Luna by saying, "Open! Gate of the Moon Maiden! Luna!" when Luna is summoned, a crescent moon appears and a flash of white light goes past Kocho. Luna wears pig tails with golden bands around them, golden moon earrings, a golden crescent moon necklace, and tribal moon clothing that is colored white and gold. she attacks with golden water. She can manipulate water to any extent. She can make golden water clones of herself, block attacks with water, make the water hard, make it sharp, make it hot, and make it cold. She cannot make the water more than one thing at a time. she can make water affect an area of 25 meters in diameter. She does C-Rank damage per hit. she is weak against heat above 15 degreed farenheit. she is also weak against gravity magic, as it can just simply lift her water out of the way because It is light. it weighs a mere 45lbs. she is physically weak and can only run at a speed of 15 miles per hour. Her key is golden with a white handle. She can also lock people in water. She can lock mages below her rank in water for 2 posts, and mages of her rank for 1 post. She cannot lock mages of a higher rank than her in water. She can also turn her body into water, but, she can only do it every other post. (please just sort these abilities into 1 active and 1 passive please)

    Luna:

    Strengths:
    •She can make water hot
    •She can make water cold
    •She can use water (change to " She can manipulate water" This way, its just a tad clearer. Also be sure to state how close water needs to be to be manipulated.)
    Weaknesses:
    •She is physically weak
    •She is bad at close-ranged combat
    •She is weak against fire magic
    •She is weak against gravity magic



    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd December 2014, 12:24 pm

    Bump- made the edits :3


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd December 2014, 12:56 pm

    scratch that, only added it to one spirit


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 23rd December 2014, 1:21 pm

    made the edits this time. BUMP


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 24th December 2014, 10:14 pm

    before I go too much into it Kocho, you're doing a good job but just so you know, active and passive's are abilities and should be listed with just as much description as you are putting into the actual description. Also, you can only have 1 passive and 1 active ability, you have too many listed for most of your summons. I understand you are making things short and sweet and to the point but you need to keep in the detail to let people know exactly what it is that you are doing.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kocho
    Kocho

    Player 
    Lineage : Chimera Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 247
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kocho 25th December 2014, 6:50 pm

    Bump- I detailed them to the best of my ability. ;-;


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Tnlk5ab
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 29th December 2014, 1:52 pm

    Final few minor minor fixes~
    Spoiler:


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Aayla 29th December 2014, 4:47 pm

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic 61a9ff54-0604-423a-aee6-eaeebd697fc6_zpsa4535995


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Kihia
    Kihia

    Pretty as a peach 1


    Pretty as a peach 1

    Administrator- Moderator- Dragon VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Bloodline of the Frozen Armor
    Position : None
    Posts : 1525
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Iarok Kaloka (deceased)
    Experience : 337.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Make Magic
    Second Skill: Crystal Make Magic
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic

    Post by Kihia 29th March 2015, 1:15 pm

    Prechange:


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic Kihisi10
    Kocho's Celestial Spirit Magic 17496c10
    EXP:350/1200



    Themes:

      Current date/time is 27th April 2024, 9:15 pm