Rei Katsuchi Magic [AlreadyDone]

[DONE]check it..thanks

BBC code is still off, turn it on

Also, I can't seem to understand why you copied some of my descriptions from my magic, like lance, I don't think you can create a lot of them at once, also ax copies my sword's weakness and strengths, please re-word it.

All of your spells have one post cooldown, change a few of them to 2 or 3.

DO NOT say you fixed it when you didn't change anything, son't copy other's descriptions or anything like that, it is not good.

Kites don't fly, they glide, edit that up a bit.

"Easily cracked, and easily broken by a higher C spells or spells B and authorities." authorities? and also fix that line, it's copied from my magic as well.

and finally, BBC codes, follow the correct one.

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How to turn on BBC code?

There is no intention for me to imitate your magic. I have changed some of the weaknesses and strengths spells ax.

I also have to change a post to the 2 and 3 post

Also have to edit that kite gliding is not flying

Primary Magic: (What type of magic does you character use. The magic you start off with)
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: (What type of magic is it)
Description: (Describe your magic)
Strengths: (What are the strengths of it)
Weaknesses: (What are the weaknesses of it)
Abilities/Powers: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability!)

Name: ( Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. )
Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info )
Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell )
Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell )


Copy paste that and replace paranthesis with proper input.

what this??i want to register magic not character!!

There is a magic template in the magic creation thread. Try to find it instead of relying on us to give it to you.

I DONT UNDER STAND..WHAT U MEANS?

I mean this; in the magic registration thread, the place you made this topic, there is a template stickied there. You use that for this app and we'll be happy to check it again.

did you means : make one more magics in news topic

I assumed that you don't completely understand what that meant, so I had help from Shinigami to translate it to Malay.
"dalam thread pendaftaran ajaib, tempat anda membuat topik ini, terdapat template stickied sana. Anda menggunakan aplikasi ini dan kami akan senang untuk memeriksa sekali lagi."

Ice-Make Block: What are authorities, and just put that it is broken by C-spells and above.

Battle Ax: You still have "slows down a bit Rei" please change to something original.

Lance: Lances are pretty big, they cannot be created in large quantities.

Add on to every spell description, they are too short.

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First of all, deleting this app would do absolutely nothing for your case, you would most likely have the same problem within your NEW application for magic. Ergo, I am keeping this.

Now, when I read through it, and giving the fact that you ARE trying, I am gonna approve. You have done everyone asked, and I see faults that do not matter, for you balance it out anyway. I hope you enjoy role playing, and never ask ANYONE to delete your thread....it doesn't help you.