Indars Pet

Name: Ilythiran
Rank: Legendary
Species: Mechanical Snake
Type: Combat pet
Description:
Ilythiran is a being made of metal that originates from the same area as the metallic god Ombrias. The being is considered pure evil and only follows orders from a person who is of godly origin. This includes god slayers. Every single god slayer can give commands to this being, but only the one that the being follows, is able to activates it's ability's. Other god slayers can just make it not attack them. Making this creature useless against god slayers. Though, this has a mirror to it. When a dragon slayer is nearby, Ilythiran will try to go after them, as the being considers them unworthy to live.

Ilythiran is a snake like creature, but made completely of metal, originating from the dimension of the metallic god. It is a massive being, maximum length being up to 175 feet. The snake weighs at about 10000 pounds. Being made of pure metal makes him fairly heavy. The snake doesn't actually have a determined sex, but is considered a male, as the only few words that it can say, come with a very deep voice. The snake is made of god metal, making it uneatable by slayers. The snake also has red glowing light on it. The head of the snake has 4 spikes that come out of the bottom of it's head. It doesn't seem to posses any eyes. The mouth is always open and if filled with what seems like hundreds of rotating spikes and saw blades. This kind of mouth gives the snake the possibility to dig through the ground and mostly likes to be under the ground. This can be used as a surprise tactic. The body of the being is very streamlined as well making it able to move at 100 feet per second, if it wants to. Digging through the ground doesn't slow it down. It can also propel itself 30 feet up into the air if needed.

Abilities:

Name: Heavy Beam
Rank: B-rank
Description: Ilythiran stops all it's movement and starts to charge a powerful beam. It's hole body starts to glow in a red light, signaling that the heavy laser is coming. When released a beam with a diameter of 10 feet and a maximum range of 100 feet is fired from the opened mouth of the being.
Strengths:

• Deals more damage, depending how long the target stands in the beam. Maximum damage is 3 b-rank damage, but for that to happen, the target must stand in the beam for the whole duration. A single hit deals one b-rank damage and anything in the middle deals double b-rank damage.
  
• The beam can be moved, while it is being fired.
  
• Can burst through anything weaker than metal and metal as well. Also it can destroy C-rank and lower magical barriers and heavily damage to B-rank barriers.
  

Weaknesses:

• Has a charge time of 1 post.
  
• When charging, Ilythiran is unable to protect himself.
  
• The beam can't pierce through things stronger than metal.
  
• Is easy to dodge at a distance.
  

Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 1 post

Name: Shrapnel Plating
Rank: C-rank
Description: When cast Ilythiran raises small spikes up from everywhere on it's body, effectively giving itself more damage output. But also protecting itself. This spell also has a charge on it. The spikes are located fairly randomly on the body of the snake and are 1 feet in length. They are thin, 3 inches in diameter. The spikes are in a cone shape, but keep the diameter for most of the go, only at the top it slims down to 1 inch.
Strengths:

• When the spikes are up, any contact made with the body of Ilythiran will cause the attacker to receive C-rank damage.
  
• The spikes, if touched by bare hands or other body parts will leave a bleeding effect, that deal D-rank damage over the 2 next posts.
  
• Makes people hesitate to attack the snake with attacks that have to connect the user's body to the being.
  

Weaknesses:

• Has a charge of 1 post.
  
• Gives no real defensive bonuses.
  
• Bleeding effect won't trigger if the attacker is enhanced with magic.
  
• When charging the spikes, Ilythiran is completely open to attacks, not being able to react to them.
  

Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: 3 posts

The poison can be shot fairly far, 60 meters but for every 5 meters traveled the accuracy will drop by 25%, meaning that when at maximum distance the shot will miss by 10 meters or even more.

60 meters is to far, it would be wiser to drop the distance. And also the fact that it's accuracy drops every 10 meter. Because right now if it has traveled 40 meters it's accuracy is 0,00 meaning that you instant miss.
Also try to go a bit deeper into the snake's description. Has it some sort of personality. What does it mean to your character

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