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    Post by Kai Shibetake 8th September 2013, 7:25 am

    Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and there is only some spells which summon snakes to attack.
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells, as it utilize venom in the every attack.
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive magic.
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells more easily.
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    -Slayers magic users can eat or absorb some of the spells.
    -Not good in aerial combat.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.
    -Can poison water source like puddle or a small lake.The degree of poison is the same as my own rank.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feet.
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    -Slayers users can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies and injecting weak paralyzing venom in the enemies blood vein making them paralyzed for 1 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Use a combination of venom and snake binding to paralyze enemies for 1 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic without any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/2

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrode things like wood.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The explosion gives a combination of venom and fire damage to the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and susceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire and venom damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skin is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone venom that takes the form of cyclone which inflicts purely superficial wounds to enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 feet and can be cast 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feet from the user
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can cause shallow wounds to the enemies.
    -Enemies have a minor cuts and wounds all over the bodies and the venom will enter the bodies through the wounds, causing the enemies to be in pain for 1 post if hit because of the venom inflicted on the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic by creating another cyclone to stop the cyclone.
    -Slayer magic users with the appropriate element can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accelerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,and durability by half the rank of my own.
    Weaknesses:
    -Causes side effect such as dizziness for 1 post after 2 posts I started using this spell.
    -The user have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5


    Last edited by Kai Shibetake on 19th September 2013, 11:21 pm; edited 7 times in total


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    Post by King Zenshin 13th September 2013, 7:24 pm

    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Art Magic Serpent Art Magic doesn't really fit the description. This is more like, Serpent control or serpent spirit
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,basilick and even some dragons.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to commmand weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners. *Basilisks, **command. Also, dragons aren't serpents, they're draconian, remove that. This kinda sounds like summoning and takeover put together, elaborate on that
    Strengths:
    -Great offensive tactic Great offensive tactic?
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Good in long and close range combat.
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells are good in scouting activities. Change to "good scouting potential"
    -Has much more advantages against mages who use water and plant like magic.In one of your spells, water is listed as quite the big weakness. Also, why plant magic? Snakes =/= Plants?
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive spell.
    -Venom may be deteoriated by fire spells. *deteriorate. And what does this mean? Be more specific please
    -Some mages are immune to venom. Replace this, there are VERY few mages who are immune to poison
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells. What does this mean and how is it a weakness?
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to comunicate and talk with serpents type creatures. *communicate
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venoms in attacking. *venom

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shot out 3 shot of venom in form purple light laser from the tips of his hand that can even poison the victim for 2 posts. "tips of his hand" "finger" <-- fix the minor grammar errors there. *shoots **shots ***the form of ****lasers remove the "even". What's the range of the spell?
    Strengths:
    -Can poison the enemies for 2 posts. Can or will?
    -Useful in long range combat. Range please
    -Very versatileHow is it versatile? Seems like a pretty particular kind of attack to me
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Some mages are immune the poison effect of the spell. Replace this. Very few mages who are immune to poison
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies if for 2 post if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point. *posts. What's the range in which he can cast this? Change to one post
    Strengths:
    -Use to bind enemies for 2 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages with mind based magic may still use his/her magic.Replace this. There are literally no mages with mind based magic
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any C rank fire spells Change this to D rank fire spells, as any C rank spells will destroy the snakes
    -Some mages may have the ability to avoid the attack beforehand.What does this mean? Everyone has the potential to dodge :/
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/1

    Name: Serpent Art:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster hands are surround by some purple like aura which if touched can be corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.Enemies have 1 post of pain if hit. *caster's. Replace "some" with "a". Comma goes right after "which" and "touched". Replace "can be" to "is". This spell also sounds a lot like a slayer spell... word it a bit differently or replace it altogether. How severe is the pain? Compare it to something like a small cut, scrape, bruise, fractured bone, etc
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can be use for any means possible. Limit the level of corrosive to like, wood or something low like that
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be it greatest foe Why?
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2 Duration cannot be longer than cooldown

    Name: Serpent Art: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat but susceptible to cold *summons. Define "little". Comma after "medium". Immune to heat? Like, immune to fire magic? Re-word that
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with a range of 12 radius 12 what? Bananas?
    -As the snake exploded,it gives a bit of fire damage to enemies. Change "gives" to "inflicts"
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of water.
    -any rank of water spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the datage taken by the users.This magic somehwhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skill is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    -Can be use to intimidate the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    -Some mages are not intimidated at all.
    Duration/Cooldowns 6/2

    Name: Serpent Art:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone of winds and venom which actually cuts enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be used to hit enemies from mid range.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies.
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can actually cuts through enemies.
    -Enemies are in pain for 3 post if hit
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some are immune to the vemon.
    -Some mages can ccounter the spell with wind magic.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/2

    Name: Serpent Art: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accellerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adreanaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,magic power and strength
    -boost the user stamina.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can cause side effect such as dizzyness.
    -If the snake summoned is attack the spell will be cancelled before the snake can perform the bite.
    -The users have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5
    You've got some work to do. Comments are in cyan. I'll get to the C rank spells afterwards. Good luck and please bump when edited.


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    Post by Kai Shibetake 13th September 2013, 8:31 pm

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    Post by King Zenshin 14th September 2013, 11:52 am

    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and their is only some spells which summon snakes to attack. *there
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells  as it utilize venom in the every attack.
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Good in long and close range combat.
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    -Has much more advantages against mages who use water and plant like magic because the use of venom in attacking allow the users to poison the plant and water effectively. Poison plants and water? Water dilutes poison/acid and plants filter it quite well. remove this
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive spell.*Defensive magic
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells. *Destroyed more easily
    -A few mages are immune to venom.Replace this, I already told you why
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feets from the caster.feet
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feets.feet
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies if for 2 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster.Change to 1 post
    Strengths:
    -Use to bind enemies for 2 posts. Change to 1 post
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic wihout any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.*without
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/1

    Name: Serpent Art:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrrode things like wood. *Corrode
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Art: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and suscceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells *susceptible
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.feet
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2Duration must be lower than cd

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skill is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.*skin
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    -Can be use to intimidate the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    -Some mages are not intimidated at all.
    Duration/Cooldowns 6/4Duration must be lower than cd

    Name: Serpent Art:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone of winds and venom which actually cuts enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 radius and can be cast 15 feets from the caster.feet
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feets from the userfeet
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can actually cuts through enemies.Too powerful for a C rank spell
    -Enemies are in pain for 3 post if hit as the spell causes cuts at the enemiesRemove this
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some are immune to the venom.Replace this for reasons listed above
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic.How?
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/2Duration must be lower than cd

    Name: Serpent Art: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accellerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]*accelerate
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,magic power and strength How much?
    -boost the user stamina.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can cause side effect such as dizzyness.List all side effects in the description and be specific
    -If the snake summoned is attack the spell will be cancelled before the snake can perform the bite.*attacked. Also, it won't be, since it's summoned on your post. So replace this
    -The users have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5
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    BUMP


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    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and there is only some spells which summon snakes to attack.
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells  as it utilize venom in the every attack.Comma after 'spells'
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Good in long and close range combat. A lot of magics are. Remove this
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    -His poison ability allows him to poison any water source or some plant around him.Remove this and put the poison water thing in abilities. Also detail how badly it's poisoned. Do not put that he can poison plants
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive magic.
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells more easily.
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    Replace does not mean remove. It means come up with a new weakness
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feet.
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies if for 1 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster. How does this spell utilize venom? If it doesn't, remove the strength
    Strengths:
    -Use to bind enemies for 1 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic without any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/1

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrode things like wood.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and susceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells.How does this spell utilize venom?
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skin is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    -Can be use to intimidate the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    -Some mages are not intimidated at all.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone of winds and venom which actually gives cut damage to enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 radius and can be cast 15 feet from the caster. Reword this a bit. "cut damage" sounds really... badly worded. *inflicts purely superficial wounds to enemies* would be more adequate.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feet from the user
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can cause cut wounds to the enemies.Reword this too
    -Enemies are in pain for 1 post if hit because of the venom inflicted on the enemies.Compare the pain to something, like a large ish bruise, broken bone, melted face, etc
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic by creating another cyclone to stop the cyclone.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accelerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,magic power and strength by partially the rank of my own.Replace this is durability and speed
    -boost the user stamina.Remove this
    Weaknesses:
    -Can cause side effect such as dizzyness for 1 post after 2 posts i started using this spell.Replace *can cause* with *causes*.  *dizziness, **I
    -The users have to stand still to use this spell. *user
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5[/color]

    Please fix everything to their detail, and if if a comment applies to multiple things, fix those the same way. Please, bump when edited~


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    BUMP, i hope it is all fixed .


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    Post by King Zenshin 16th September 2013, 3:19 am

    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and there is only some spells which summon snakes to attack.
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells, as it utilize venom in the every attack.
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive magic.
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells more easily.
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    -Slayers magic users can eat or absorb some of the spells.
    -Not good in aerial combat.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.
    -Can poison water source like puddle or a small lake.The degree of poison is the same as my own rank.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feet.
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    -Slayers users can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/2 Duration can't be longer than cooldown

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies and injecting weak paralyzing venom in the enemies blood vein making them paralyzed for 1 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Use a combination of venom and snake binding to paralyze enemies for 1 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic without any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/1

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrode things like wood.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The explosion gives a combination of venom and fire damage to the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and susceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire and venom damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skin is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    -Can be use to intimidate the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    -Some mages are not intimidated at all. Remove the intimidation strength and weakness
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone of winds and venom which inflicts purely superficial wounds to enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 radius and can be cast 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feet from the user
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can cause shallow wounds to the enemies.
    -Enemies have a minor cuts and wounds all over the bodies and the venom will enter the bodies through the wounds, causing the enemies to be in pain for 1 post if hit because of the venom inflicted on the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic by creating another cyclone to stop the cyclone.
    -Slayer magic users with the appropriate element can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/5
    Can you explain this spell using your magic? Looks like more of a wind spell than anything

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accelerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,and durability by partially the rank of my own. [color=cyan]*by half of my own rank*
    Weaknesses:
    -Causes side effect such as dizziness for 1 post after 2 posts I started using this spell.
    -The user have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5


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    bump


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    Post by Kai Shibetake 19th September 2013, 12:06 am

    BUMP all has been fixed.


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    Post by King Zenshin 19th September 2013, 7:44 pm

    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and there is only some spells which summon snakes to attack.
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells, as it utilize venom in the every attack.
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive magic.
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells more easily.
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    -Slayers magic users can eat or absorb some of the spells.
    -Not good in aerial combat.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.
    -Can poison water source like puddle or a small lake.The degree of poison is the same as my own rank.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feet.
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    -Slayers users can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies and injecting weak paralyzing venom in the enemies blood vein making them paralyzed for 1 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Use a combination of venom and snake binding to paralyze enemies for 1 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic without any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/1 <------

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrode things like wood.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The explosion gives a combination of venom and fire damage to the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and susceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire and venom damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skin is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone venom that takes the form of cyclone which inflicts purely superficial wounds to enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 feet and can be cast 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feet from the user
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can cause shallow wounds to the enemies.
    -Enemies have a minor cuts and wounds all over the bodies and the venom will enter the bodies through the wounds, causing the enemies to be in pain for 1 post if hit because of the venom inflicted on the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic by creating another cyclone to stop the cyclone.
    -Slayer magic users with the appropriate element can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accelerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,and durability by half the rank of my own.
    Weaknesses:
    -Causes side effect such as dizziness for 1 post after 2 posts I started using this spell.
    -The user have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5
    Duration must be lower than cooldown. Aside from that one spell, you're good to go.


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    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
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    Kai Shibetake
    Kai Shibetake

    Jester of Mirror


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    First Skill: Serpent Art
    Second Skill:
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    Kai Shibetake's new magic(Serpent Art Magic)DONE Empty Re: Kai Shibetake's new magic(Serpent Art Magic)DONE

    Post by Kai Shibetake 19th September 2013, 11:22 pm

    Silly me,I dont notice that.but thank you for going easy on me even though I made a lot of mistakes there.BUMP


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    Kai Shibetake's new magic(Serpent Art Magic)DONE Kai210


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    Kai Shibetake's new magic(Serpent Art Magic)DONE Empty Re: Kai Shibetake's new magic(Serpent Art Magic)DONE

    Post by King Zenshin 20th September 2013, 9:42 pm

    Kai Shibetake wrote:Primary Magic: Serpent Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    It is a type of magic that grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpent creatures like snakes,and even some basilisks.This magic also even at some grants the users the ability to command weaker serpents at the user's will.The users fight using serpent magic like conjuring them to fight,using snakes' poison and even transform into one snake itself for disguise.This magic is perfectly suited for the kind of dark mages like Kai himself.Furthermore,the users can use this magic in all around attack tactic but may not be as effective in defensive manners.This magic is not like the kind of Takeover or Summoning magic because the users can only transform into snake with certain spells and there is only some spells which summon snakes to attack.
    Strengths:
    -This magic is good with attacking spells, as it utilize venom in the every attack.
    -Can use snakes' venom to attack enemies
    -Immune to some poison(less than own rank)
    - Some spells have good scouting potential.
    Weaknesses:
    -Less effective as a defensive magic.
    -Venom may be destroyed by fire spells more easily.
    -Some mages may be able to counter attack some spells with another poison type spells.
    -Slayers magic users can eat or absorb some of the spells.
    -Not good in aerial combat.
    Abilities/Powers:
    -Grant the user the ability to communicate and talk with serpents type creatures.
    -Grant the users ability to control weaker snakes.
    -Can conjure snakes to attack enemies.
    -Can transform into a snake himself.
    -May use venom in attacking.
    -Can poison water source like puddle or a small lake.The degree of poison is the same as my own rank.

    Name: Venom Shot
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster point out his finger and shoots out 3 shots of venom in the form of purple light lasers from his fingers that can poison the victim for 2 posts.The spell can be shoots out from about 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Will poison the enemies for 2 posts.
    -Useful in long range combat as it attacking range is about 15 feet.
    -Effective against water spells and can pierce C rank water defensive spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any fire rank spells.
    -Very few mages are immune the poison effect of the spell.
    -Can be blocked with C rank defensive spells except water spells.
    -Slayers users can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Snake Bind
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description:
    Summon 4 snakes from underground which bind the enemies and injecting weak paralyzing venom in the enemies blood vein making them paralyzed for 1 posts if hit.Enemies cant do any physical action during this point.The range of the attack is about 10 feets from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Use a combination of venom and snake binding to paralyze enemies for 1 posts.
    -Point blank hit point from underground
    -Enemies are left susceptible to attack.
    Weaknesses:
    -Some mages who can use magic without any physical requirement may still use his/her magic.
    -The snake can be easily destroy by any D rank fire spells
    Duration/Cooldowns 2/2

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Purple Fangs
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster's hands are surround by a purple like aura which, if touched, is corrosive.The caster use it as means to attack enemies using hand to hand combat.This magic is a bit different than the slayers magic as it is much weaker than the slayers magic.Futhermore,slayers magic can boost its attack by absorbing their particular elements but in this case it can't.Certain slayers are also be able to absorb this attack.Enemies have 1 post of pain because if it hit it will cause a small cut to the enemies inflicted by the corrosive nature of the spell.
    Strengths:
    -Good the be use in close combat.
    -Enemies suffer with pain for 1 post if hit by it.
    -The purple aura is corrosive and can corrode things like wood.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be counter with any C rank defensive spells
    -Fire spells may be use to partially destroyed the venom in the spell and thus receive less damage.
    -Enemies may read the spells by the colour of aura emit at the caster hands and will try to dodge it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/4

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Snake Bomb
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Offensive
    Description:
    The caster summon 12 little snakes that can be use as an scout medium but at the same can be exploded which also can be a deathly move for the enemies.The explosion gives a combination of venom and fire damage to the enemies.The snakes are attracted and immune to heat like fire spells but hate and susceptible to cold like ice spells and water spells
    Strengths:
    -Can be use as a scout medium
    -Can be exploded with the range of explosion of about 12 radius and can be explode about 20 feets from the caster.
    -As the snakes exploded,it inflict a bit of fire and venom damage to enemies.
    -Immune to heat and fire spells.
    Weaknesses:
    -The snakes are afraid of cold like water spells and ice spells
    -any rank of water or ice spells can be use to dispose the snakes.
    -have tendency to go to the are which is hotter and avoid colder area.
    -Although it is immune to fire spells,it can still be use to counter attack it by using it as a distraction as it is attracted to heat.
    Duration/Cooldowns 3/3

    Name: Scale Reimaginate
    Rank: C
    Type: Support/Defensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spell which grant the users a layer of protective,hard and thick scale like snakes which protect and reduce the damage taken by the users.This magic somewhat makes the users has more like snake appearance when cast upon making the caster able to use it to intimidate enemies.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use in a defensive manner
    -Skin is hard to be pierce through by any spells of D rank.
    -Venom that is one rank higher that my own won't work.
    Weaknesses:
    -Spells of B rank and higher can break through the spells.
    -Harder to move around by using this spells.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit:Serpenta Tempest
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description:
    The caster cast a spells which round up a small purple cyclone venom that takes the form of cyclone which inflicts purely superficial wounds to enemies that get caught in it.The spells can be use to hit enemies from mid range.the size of the cyclone is about 10 feet and can be cast 15 feet from the caster.
    Strengths:
    -Can be use to hit mid range enemies as can be cast 15 feet from the user
    -Pierce through any defensive spells of D and can pierce a little through C rank defensive spells.
    -The cyclone can cause shallow wounds to the enemies.
    -Enemies have a minor cuts and wounds all over the bodies and the venom will enter the bodies through the wounds, causing the enemies to be in pain for 1 post if hit because of the venom inflicted on the enemies.
    Weaknesses:
    -Can be block partially by any C rank defensive spells and fully by any defensive spells of B rank.
    -Some mages can counter the spell with wind magic by creating another cyclone to stop the cyclone.
    -Slayer magic users with the appropriate element can absorb or eat it.
    Duration/Cooldowns 5/5

    Name: Serpent Spirit: Calling of Que
    Rank: C
    Type: Support
    Description:
    The caster put his palm on the ground which summon a medium size of winged serpent creature which is named Que.This creature is loyal to the caller and has some healing properties in its own venom.The serpent would bite its fangs deep in the skin which release a venom that has healing properties and accelerate healing and stamina production.it also gives the users adrenaline boost which increase the strength and speed and magic power.[/center]
    Strengths:
    -Has healing properties which heal the users of wound cause by any spells of rank D fully and C partially.
    -Increases the users speed,and durability by half the rank of my own.
    Weaknesses:
    -Causes side effect such as dizziness for 1 post after 2 posts I started using this spell.
    -The user have to stand still to use this spell.
    Duration/Cooldowns 4/5
    Approved~


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
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