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    slaughter fest

    Post by Kaito on 23rd November 2014, 3:23 pm

    b]Name:[/b]slaughter fest
    Rank: weak
    Species: worm
    Type:combat pet
    b]Description:[/b] basically a snake sized worm with a shark shaped mouth
    that has a long row of teeth it is just as old as its owner and is 5 foot long
    3cm wide a light pink color
    Abilities:It is very smart and will climb into the
    opponents clothes and bite anything that seems weak on the opponents body
    the worm is very slow
    Name:
    deadly bite
    Rank: D
    Description:move is in abilities
    Strengths:It inflicts slight wound in the opponents body

    Weaknesses:
    its body does not have much defense and is weak against any spells
    upon killing others if hungry will  bite owner
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    Last edited by Kitteh on 30th November 2014, 12:24 pm; edited 13 times in total


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    Re: slaughter fest

    Post by Kaito on 25th November 2014, 6:48 pm

    bumper


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    Re: slaughter fest

    Post by Aayla on 29th November 2014, 12:34 pm

    first thing is first Kitteh, please resize your avatar, We can't read what you type when it's covering half of what you type.


    Also, please make sure that any lists below (strengths and weaknesses) Have a bullet point to identify the different sentences.

    Kitteh wrote:b]Name:[/b]slaughter fest
    Rank: weak
    Species:snake worm (I'm going to be picky. Is it a snake, or a worm?)
    Type:combat pet
    Description: basically a snake sized worm with a shark shaped mouth
    that has a long row of teeth. (what color is this snake? How long? How big? How old? Is it smart/sentient?)
    Abilities:(What can it do?)It is very smart and will climb into the
    opponents clothes and bite anything that seems weak on the opponents body
    Name:
    snake bite (Please remove any text in parenthesis)
    Rank: D
    Description:move is in abilities. (I need to know how fast your pet moves. This is also a description of the bite so, does he have many pointy teeth? Or two large fangs that bite in. Please provide a more substantial description)
    Strengths:It inflicts slight wound in the opponents body (ON the opponents body as your pet wont make it's way into the body.)
    can kill average person (Sorry but no it can't. This is a bite wound, nothing special.)
    Weaknesses:
    its body does not have much defense and is weak against any moves (any moves? You mean spells?)
    upon killing others if hungry can kill owner (Killing others? Please remember that this is just a bite, not a super magical spell that one hit KO's things.)
    cant kill average wizards in any rank (please rephrase this to something more like :Cannot kill humans with this bite, even though it is painful.)

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    Re: slaughter fest

    Post by Kaito on 30th November 2014, 12:25 pm

    bump


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