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    Prophecy of the Void

    Nuada
    Nuada

    Player 
    Lineage : Kuroryu: The Void Dragon
    Position : None
    Posts : 9
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Prophecy of the Void
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

    Completed Prophecy of the Void

    Post by Nuada 15th August 2019, 3:07 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Prophecy of the Void
    Magic Type: Ancient, Solitary Benefit: +50% to Strength
    Description: It is said that at the beginning of time, before there was any cosmos, there was only light, darkness and emptiness. Originally, only light and darkness existed as opposing forces of an unrestrained, moving ocean of pure energy struggling for space. However, when in some places the power of energies was equally powerful, the presence of both energies subsided and formed pockets of cold nothingness. The absence of light and darkness in these rooms created a new power. This was the void, a dark and vampiric force that wanted to devour all the energy to turn creation inside and feed on it. The emptiness grew rapidly and began to move against the light and darkness, the increasing tension between the three forces ignited a series of explosions that broke the very fabric of creation and spawned the physical universe with the emptiness surrounding it. Everything that gets into it freezes in time until it is finally absorbed by the void. But there are also those who have adapted to the void and successfully exist in this and feed on it. The beings in emptiness are referred to by us as Voidwalkers and are neither good nor bad, as humans have these different intentions and from time to time they enter our world. The oldest of these beings can contact us without leaving the void, it is a kind of entertainment for them. One of these old beings made contact with Rayxar through his visions and played with him in his own wise, this gave Rayxar the feeling that Kuroryu contacted him, of course the game had some consequences for Rayxar. The void deformed his magical organ, from now on Rayxaziel was only able to use Void Magic.

    Rayxar is able to manipulate the void itself, to bend it as if it was a material. The ability to manipulate the void enables him to walk through it, this same ability allows him to use the Void as a shortcut between two points in our world. The void itself is a vampiric force that draws energy of anything then the caster himself.

    Plot:
    "Deformed by Void" Because of the deformed magical organ, Rayxar can not use magic other than void magic.

    "Short cut through the void" Rayxaziel is able to enter the void at one point in our world by tearing a rift and leaving the Void at the desired place of our world. There is no time in the void which makes the travels through the void practically instant to others.


    Unique Abilities:
    [*]Ability: “Void Claws” The user is able to form claws from the empty energy around his fingers and cover his plate boots with a thin layer of the same empty energy. This increases melee damage by 50% and its melee attacks drain 1% of the opponent's mana and restore that amount to you, total amount can never exceed 5% even if someone was hit more than 5 times. Void Claws cannot be activated and deactivated in the same post.
    Downside: The user cannot use weapons, shields, or other items with their hands while the Void Claws are in action.

    [*]Ability:
    [*]Ability:

    Spells:

    Name: Void Infusion
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single Target / Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Infuses him self with void essence, which remains in his body for 3 Posts.The Void essence increases his speed by 50% and recovers each post 5% of his health.


    Name: Void Walk
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: up to 40
    Range: up to 15 Meters
    Speed: 15 Meters Per Second
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Rips two Void Rifts in our world and uses them as a short cut, one next to himself and an one at the desired location. As soon the caster enters a void rift he will be transported to the other rift after what both close. Beings located next to the Rifts when those close take 40 damage.


    Name: Touched by Void
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: N/A
    Range: Melee
    Speed: Instant
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Downside:
    Description: Touches the target with his open hand charged with void energy and forces them into the targets body. The void particles will be dissolved in 3 turns or leave the targets body with its mana. If mana of the target is used in any way the target will take 50% of the used mana as damage. This effect cannot do more than 0.5x rank damage in a single turn.


    Name: Void Hunt
    Rank: D+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 25 Meters
    Speed: 25 Meters per Second
    Duration: 2 Posts
    Downside: Requires 2 posts to pass in order for the negative effect to take place.
    Description: Rayxar rips two Void Rifts in our world and uses them as a short cut, one next to himself and an one next to his target. As soon the caster enters a void rift he will be transported to the other rift after what both close. On reaching the target he touches it target with his open hand charged with void essence. The Essence remains for 2 posts on the target reducing its speed by 75% for that duration, after which it will pull back into the void. When the essence leaves the body, this part of the mana consumes with it into the void. The target loses 5% of its mana after the expiration of this debuf.


    Last edited by Nuada on 20th August 2019, 12:26 pm; edited 7 times in total
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by MarkusEldridge 15th August 2019, 3:39 pm

    Hello there! My name is Markus, and I will be grading your magic this time around. I have quoted your magic below, and specified me comments and changes in This lovely color.
    Please do not hesitate to ask questions within the Discord or Questions thread at any time.

    Nuada wrote:
    Spoiler:


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    Nuada
    Nuada

    Player 
    Lineage : Kuroryu: The Void Dragon
    Position : None
    Posts : 9
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Prophecy of the Void
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by Nuada 16th August 2019, 1:58 am

    Hi,
    Thank you!

    Reworked (replaced) it a bit and corrected the parts that where pointed out. Due reworked spells there might be new mistakes of mine...

    Can the melee damage buff of "Void Claws" be raised?
    Can damage be added to the Void Walk? (Beings located next to the Rifts take 10 damage)

    Please have another look at it.
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by MarkusEldridge 16th August 2019, 10:21 am

    Hey there Markus here once more for round two. As always my comments will be in This Lovely Color!
    Note, your magic is coming along well, and is looking good, I went ahead and added a few suggestions in addition to my requests to help you get a better grasp of what is allowed, as well as answered your questions in the comments themselves.
    Nuada wrote:
    Spoiler:







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    Nuada
    Nuada

    Player 
    Lineage : Kuroryu: The Void Dragon
    Position : None
    Posts : 9
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Prophecy of the Void
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by Nuada 16th August 2019, 12:36 pm

    Thank you very very much:)
    Corrected the parts that were pointed out. Not sure about mana restoration of Void Claws....
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by MarkusEldridge 20th August 2019, 11:30 am

    Hey there, Markus one more time! I suspect this will be the last go, it is shaping up very well!
    As usual, my comments will be inThis lovely color.
    Nuada wrote:
    Spoiler:





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    Nuada
    Nuada

    Player 
    Lineage : Kuroryu: The Void Dragon
    Position : None
    Posts : 9
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Prophecy of the Void
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by Nuada 20th August 2019, 1:07 pm

    Thank you!

    Done

    (sry 4 the passive, 4got 2 delete it after made it in to an active)


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    Rayxaziel

    Prophecy of the Void
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1376
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Completed Re: Prophecy of the Void

    Post by MarkusEldridge 20th August 2019, 1:53 pm

    Prophecy of the Void AiZwA1I
    Spoiler:


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