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    Shadow King

    Aiden Ainsley
    Aiden Ainsley

    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    Bump Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 30th August 2013, 4:54 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Shadow King Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Shadow King magic is a lost magic that lets the user utilize and control shadows. Although this magic lets the user control shadows it has some limits. The user can not control shadows that are over their rank and if they use the shadows of another person they cannot use it to hurt them. Shadow king magic is a form of pure darkness that can be used for good and evil; It really just depends on how the user decides to use it because they can either use it to kill people or they can use it to help people that are in need.  This magic also comes with a evil side of the person that comes out when they almost lose the battle although the person can learn to control it better and only bring them out when they really need them.
    Lance chooses to use this magic for good.

    When he was training his magic in Era a while back Lance discovered a whole new side to his magic. Although the magic can be quite frightening at times when Lance uses it there really is nothing to be afraid of unless you are the one he is going after, if that is so then you should be scared. Lance uses a lot of hand motions when using this new side of his magic making him have more control over the magic and his other side. Seeing as his body is made of shadows it is hard for people to hit him physically
    Strengths:


    • Lance is able to utilize and control shadows of any rank unless the rank is higher than him.

    • Lance's body is made out of shadows making a person his rank or lower unable to hit him physically.
    • Darkness: Lance's magic gets 20% stronger when it is dark in the place he is fighting.

    Weaknesses:

    • Light magic does an extra C-rank damage to him.
    • Shadow Slayers can eat his magic.
    • Lance gets out of breath after each fight.
    • If Lance gets mad enough he can easily attack recklessly which means he could easily get more hurt.  

    Lineage:
    Maelstrom
    Description: One of your many, many ancestors was an experienced and renowned sailor. The reason he was so good with the water was because he was also a master water mage, being able to literally "push" even the biggest of whirlpools aside to another area to make way for his ship, the S.S. Maelstrom. He was respected by every other sailor who knew of such feats and perished along with his sinking ship, as he waited for the rest of his crew to escape the quickly falling boat first, a true captain's death.
    Ability: The user of this lineage is able to move any water spell up to A-Rank aside, effectively making it impossible to hit under normal circumstances. Also, the user of this lineage gains an ten percent weakness to earth magic.
    Usage: User gains a ten percent weakness to earth magic, regardless of their magic.  This ability can only be used once per thread.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Darkness Power: When in the dark, Lance’s Physical and Magical strength is stronger by 10%
    • Shadow Usage: Lance can control any random shadow and the shadows of mages lower than his rank. Does not include Shadows from spells.
    • Health Regen: When Lance touches shadows he can heal himself back up. Every post he touches a Shadow he can heal up to a D-rank Damage which he can do once every 10 posts.
    • Shadow Awakening: When Lance is mad, Releases all the shadows in him, or he has too many feelings built up he will go into “Awakened Mode”. When he enters Awakened Mode he creates a link connecting the darkness in him and himself. The higher the level the stronger he is.

    Levels of the Awakened:


    • Shadow Body: Lances body is made of shadows making it hard for mages lower than his rank to hit him physically. Lance can only turn one part of his body into a shadow at a time so if he gets attacked in two different body parts at once he can only dodge one of those attacks. Lance cannot turn any of his body into a shadow when he is invisible.


      D-ranked Spells:

      C-rank spells:


    B-rank spells:


    Last edited by Lance Knighthunter on 26th May 2015, 12:42 pm; edited 65 times in total
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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by King Zenshin 31st August 2013, 9:26 am

    Please put [WIP] in the description until it is no longer a work in progress


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    Aiden Ainsley
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    The Shadow King


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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 31st August 2013, 12:07 pm

    It isn't working anymore


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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by King Zenshin 31st August 2013, 12:22 pm

    Yes it is, you have NO spells


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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by King Zenshin 2nd September 2013, 2:54 pm

    Lance Knighthunter wrote:Primary Magic: Water Sage Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: The Sage is a master of water magic, able to utilize, wield, form, and change it to his liking. The temperature control of water is as simple as it comes able to make it so cold that on contact can freeze opponents or scalding hot that burns. A mage of the sea can control the full power of water down to particles including the moisture in the air and himself.


    • Strengths:


    1. Water control: Able to control water and make it into forms from bodies to weapons, the person can harden the water to hit with the force of someone jumping from a ten story building. Lance can form water from any type from salt to fresh. The water in the air itself can be gathered and used.

    2. Water durability: The body being 75% water, lance can absorb more impact through his magic from blows to his body allowing him to go longer. The higher in power he gets the more he can endure and utilize in his own body.

    3. Water liquid: Due to the human body being 75% water, Lance can turn parts of his body into liquid states. All states however are based on time limits and takes great power to use and control. At lower ranks he is able to turn one part of his body to a liquid state such as a fist in which he can throw a punch and send his fist towards a enemy further away while keeping it attached by water.


    • Weaknesses:


    1. Earth Weakness: being water Lance is much weaker to earth damage, making it hard to face people who specialize in earth magic or even such things as being smacked with a boulder.

    2. Water Reliance: The further lance is from a water source The weaker his magic is and the slower his magic is in battle. Still able to summon water from pipes, or the air just at a slower pace. He does not get a boost in anything while he is on land but his speed goes down.

    3. Lighting Fault: Due to being water he is highly damaged by water, crippling so a few blasts depending on rank being needing several at his own rank to one lightning bolt from two ranks higher putting him down.


    • Abilities/Powers:


    Water Master: Lance is the master of all water able to wield it to the utmost potential, this has allowed him to utilize it in many ways including being able to breath under water. Anytime he is near or on water his power is greatly increased, he is physical more durable though his physical strength stays the same. In the water or around it meaning major bodies of water not like a water fountain, he is faster and more agile making it hard to be caught.

    Sea King: While in the sea or water he is master of the domain for a full one mile radius full circle. Able to control waves and the beasts that live within them. The touch of water can heal his body from even mortal wounds and so much as a bottle of water can heal minor wounds or broken bones. He can control storms such as Tsunamis if enough body of water is around and can even call water to his side and give them Corporal forms.

    Gather of aqua: Lance can pull water from the ground or the moisture from the air but no where near as much as he could near a body of water. The amount he can pull from the air without tiring can be based on the power he wields. As a starter he can wield as much as a human body would be in height (6 ft. of water) Compared to when he is stronger where he can pull full lakes from the air at a super high power (Rank S or SS in the amount of two full lakes). This lets him pull water from nearby water sources in greater quantity meaning if near an ocean or lake he can pull water through the ground to him though that takes longer.

    D-rank spells:
    You have gotten water make or memory make confused with "water sage" magic, please remove any spells that create weapons or anything really out of water. Bump when edited.


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    100 Year: 1
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    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
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    Event Experience: 57,562.5
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    Total Experience: 263,160

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    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
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    Aiden Ainsley
    Aiden Ainsley

    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    Lineage : Reaper's Touch
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    Posts : 1421
    Guild : Meliora Vitae
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    Age : 23
    Experience : 587

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 2nd September 2013, 3:43 pm

    bump I didn't really do what you say but I made it so that it works a little more


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    Aiden Ainsley
    Aiden Ainsley

    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 23
    Experience : 587

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 2nd September 2013, 4:14 pm

    Please don't post on this magic anymore if you want to please delete this magic I am doing a different style


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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by King Zenshin 2nd September 2013, 4:33 pm

    Dont make another app, just edit this one,


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    A-Ranked: 4
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    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
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    Aiden Ainsley
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    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    Age : 23
    Experience : 587

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 2nd September 2013, 5:32 pm

    Bump


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    Cosmic Soul


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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aria Beleren 3rd September 2013, 7:12 pm

    Here is the first part. We're going to start working on the introductory area then we are going to work on the spells.

    Lance Knighthunter wrote:Primary Magic: Shadow Keeper
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: User has full control of the dark arts it can hurt him or her or make him or her stronger. It works best at night and the evening and the user has to have there shirt off for it to work. When the users shirt comes off, the user has sharp fangs and his or her eyes turn red. Grammatical Errors here.. fixed. Please make sure they are fixed in first post. On top of that. Just how strong can the user get?
    Strengths:
    Has control of the darkness
    Can control shadowsExplain the shadow control
    Weaknesses:
    Can make the user weaker depending on the spell
    Works best at night or in spooky places.Please add more to why it works best at night and why this magic is not working in the day. To be honest... I don't think you're going to have any fun with magic that works best in the night. Just take that out altogether. You never know. Someone is going to read this app and set up a future battle in the day and you're going to get pwned. Work on this more.
    Abilities/Powers:
    Shadow Control: Can turn into a shadow and move places. How far?
    Demon- Can turn into a new part of a demon each rank. This is starting to look like take over. Please determine something else with this magic.

    D-Rank:


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    Aiden Ainsley
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    The Shadow King


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    Age : 23
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 4th September 2013, 7:14 pm

    bump


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    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    Age : 23
    Experience : 587

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 5th September 2013, 1:25 pm

    bump


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    ~ Lady of Midnight ~
    ~ Lady of Midnight ~

    Endless Abyss


    Endless Abyss

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    Age : 26
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cosmic Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by ~ Lady of Midnight ~ 8th September 2013, 4:23 pm

    Lance Knighthunter wrote:Primary Magic: Shadow Keeper
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: User has full control of the dark arts it can hurt them or make them stronger, The amount the user gets stronger or weaker depends on the spells they use. It works best at night and the evening and the user has to have there shirt off for it to work. When the user loses control their eyes turn red and they don't hold back their magic. <--- Your description is not very.... informative. Also, why do they need to have their shirt off and how would they "Lose control"?
    Strengths:

    • Has control of shadows. At D-rank they can control shadows as big as a human body (6 inches) <--- This is more of an ability rather than a strength

    • Can control shadows and use them to their advantage(Flying, Attacking, and defense. (To control the shadows they need a spell.) <--- Also an ability

    • Able to turn into a shadow for 2 posts at D-rank <--- Ability

    Weaknesses:

    • Stronger when it is dark but can still be used in the light. (5% weaker in the light.) <--- You put a strength with a weakness, please separate them.

    • Shadow Slayers can eat almost every spell.

    • When the user is about to die/lose they go out of control. <--- This makes no sense as it is more of a strength than a weakness, but this is really an ability.

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Shadow Control: Allows the user to control and manipulate shadows of their choice. These shadows cannot be bigger than 1 meter, and can only be used to add to his own shadow. Can only be used once per thread. <--- This conflicts with your first "strength". Also these are passive abilities, not spells.

    • Shadow Speed: When Shadow Control is used, the user ads shadows to his or her own shadow. This is an advantage as it allows the user to have a 5% increase in Strength as the Speed. This can only be used once per thread. <--- How would adding a shadow to your own increase your speed? And once again this is a spell not an ability.

    D-Rank:
    Comments are in this color. We'll work on the spells later.


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    The Shadow King


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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 8th September 2013, 5:09 pm

    bump!


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    ~ Lady of Midnight ~
    ~ Lady of Midnight ~

    Endless Abyss


    Endless Abyss

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    Age : 26
    Mentor : The Stars
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cosmic Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by ~ Lady of Midnight ~ 8th September 2013, 5:11 pm

    You haven't touched your description, please add more detail and explain what I said to specify.


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    Aiden Ainsley

    The Shadow King


    The Shadow King

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    First Skill: Sunstorm Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by Aiden Ainsley 8th September 2013, 5:31 pm

    bump, I really cant think of anything else to add to the description but I changed what I could think of.


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    Endless Abyss


    Endless Abyss

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    First Skill: Cosmic Magic
    Second Skill:
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    Bump Re: Shadow King

    Post by ~ Lady of Midnight ~ 8th September 2013, 5:34 pm

    Please explain how you get a speed and strength boost.


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    Post by Aiden Ainsley 8th September 2013, 6:21 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Aria Beleren 12th September 2013, 7:03 pm

    First please bring the spacing down in all spells so that it is easier to read.

    Second... Your first spell.. I do not know where you have the ability to poison your foes in your main description can you please give me something in your description about that.


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    Post by Aiden Ainsley 12th September 2013, 7:11 pm

    bump


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    Post by Aria Beleren 12th September 2013, 7:40 pm

    Name: Shadow mist
    Rank: D
    Type: Shadow
    Description: Lance breathes into the air and a mist comes out and it makes it hard to see and poisons (when inhaled for three posts does a full D rank Damage. ) the opponent. Lance can see through the mist though. This mist can only be blown away by wind magic. Here's a thought is there anything else that can blow this away like if a mage where to make themselves into a fan blowing it away. What is the distance of this AoE?
    Strengths:

    Makes the opponent poisoned and makes it so the user cant see through the mist. Is this just poisoned... or blinded... I don't understand.
    Doesn't effect allies or caster
    Makes it able for the user to throw a bunch of punches and kicks. It also makes it passible for the user to make an escape

    From the description you're talking about being blinded. This is a blinding spell if this was poison a poison dragon slayer could eat this as well. Go with blind.


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    Post by Aiden Ainsley 12th September 2013, 7:47 pm

    bump


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    Post by Aria Beleren 14th September 2013, 11:29 am

    alright first spell is good.

    Name: Shadow ball
    Rank: D
    Type: Shadow
    Description: Lance hold out the palm of his and forms a ball and shoots it at the opponent. Wherever the ball hits will become tied in an unbreakable rope made of shadows making it so the cant move that part of there body until the rope goes away. Each post the rope gets tighter causing damage. when the spell is active shadow ropes come out of the ground and slap the opponent.
    Strengths:

    Can tie the person down.

    Can hurt the opponent when hit.

    If a wizard breaks out of the ropes 40 ropes come out of the ground and hit the opponent doing D-rank damage per 20 ropes (20 ropes= 1 set of D-rank damage. 40 ropes= 2 sets of D-rank damage. 20 ropes to begin with is too much for a D rank spell. Drop this down to 5 ropes. Then it will go to 10 when the mage breaks through.


    Weaknesses:

    A C-rank wizard or above can break through the ropes.

    A person who can fly or has an exceed con dodge the ropes and the other ropes that come out if they dodge it.


    Duration/Cooldowns Lasts 3 posts can be used again in 4

    Name: Darkness
    Rank: D
    Type: Shadow
    Description: The sky turns dark as if it was almost night. This spell raises the strength of his magic for as long as it is dark. The darkness also makes it hard to see.
    Strengths:

    Makes it hard for the opponent to see.

    Raises Strength of magic.


    Weaknesses:

    Can be cast away by fire or lightning users.

    Makes the user a little out of breath after the spell is done.


    Duration/Cooldowns Lasts for 3 posts and can be used again in 4 What is the radius to this AoE?

    Name: Shadow Claws
    Rank: D
    Type: Shadow
    Description: The user grows deadly sharp claws that cause poison and paralyze any part of the body the user hits with them.
    Strengths:

    Scratches cause 1/3 D-rank damage.

    Poisons and paralyses for 1 post each.


    Weaknesses:

    Healing magic can heal the status elements.


    Duration/Cooldowns Lasts for 3 posts can use again in 4

    I want to know what do you mean by poison? Vulnerability? Venom? Keep in mind that all poison attacks can be absorbed by poison slayers.


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    Post by Aiden Ainsley 14th September 2013, 11:36 am

    bump


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    Post by Aria Beleren 14th September 2013, 5:31 pm

    approved.


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