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    Material Advantage

    Believer
    Believer

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 117
    Guild : Less
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 16,460

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yin Yang Lightning
    Second Skill: Material Advantage
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Believer 5th August 2021, 5:08 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: Material Advantage
    Magic Type: Summoning [Solitary Benefit]
    Magic Training: Here
    Description: This magic allows Tad to summon soldiers from two, opposing armies; the Black Army and the White Army. These two armies are from a world where things are created in pairs, mirror versions of everyone: one white and one black. A unique aspect of this summoning magic prohibits any of the soldiers from being summoned to our world unless their King has already been summoned to this world. Simply put, Tad must summon a King before he is able to summon any of troops from that respective army. This also means if the King were vanquished, all of his forces will be desummoned as well.
    Unique Abilities:
    1. Eagle Eye - Tad, like the chess player, can see the board from a bird's eye view. This altered state of vision allows Tad to see the field of battle more clearly which also allows him to move his comrades more effectively.
    2. Telepathic Network - Utilizing Tad's magic which already connects him to all of his summons, this ability allows Tad and all active summons to communicate telepathically with one another.
    3. N/A


    Advanced Summons

    White Knight:

    Black Rook:

    Black Pawn II:

    Normal Summons
    White King:

    White Pawn I:

    White Pawn II:

    White Bishop - 1 normal slot for summon + 1 signature slot for 3rd ability:

    White Rook:

    Black King:

    Black Pawn I:

    Black Knight:

    Black Bishop:


    Last edited by Believer on 22nd June 2023, 2:58 pm; edited 7 times in total


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    Post by Guest 5th October 2022, 4:57 am

    Hey there Believer, Med here to grade this, there's just a couple of things that need to be edited.

    As an overarching comment, you need to give all of your active abilities a numbered duration as instant isn't allowed even in statless magics. The other edits you'll find in blue.

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    Believer
    Believer

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 117
    Guild : Less
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 16,460

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yin Yang Lightning
    Second Skill: Material Advantage
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Believer 5th October 2022, 4:07 pm

    Well, I have made some changes. I wasn't quite sure what you meant regarding the signature slot, but assuming I understood correctly, I think I fixed it.


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    Post by Guest 5th October 2022, 4:12 pm

    Magic:

    Yep, you got it.

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    Post by Guest 1st November 2022, 6:03 am

    Magic:

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    Post by Guest 4th November 2022, 4:57 am

    Magic:

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    Mura Kensho
    Mura Kensho

    The Ghost Slayer


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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Spirit Completion Magic
    Second Skill: Onmyōdō
    Third Skill: Second Origin

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    Post by Mura Kensho 8th June 2023, 12:24 pm

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