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    DH-40 Centaur Prototype

    Victoria Sheridan
    Victoria Sheridan

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    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Empty DH-40 Centaur Prototype

    Post by Victoria Sheridan 18th August 2020, 11:39 am

    Name: DH-40 Centaur Prototype
       Grade: Strong+
       Type: Item
       Proof of Acquisition: I obtained this item by invoking the second Passive of Merces Letifer Magic's Y-Rank Ascendant Ability Gold Rush. Proof is here. Ending A Job: Page 25, Post Number 621
       Description: A prototype hovercycle created by the joint efforts of Dr. Hanlon and Dr. Loretta Reid of Motor City, this vehicle uses anti-gravity propulsion instead of traditional tires to move across the ground. This feature ensures a smooth ride across most types of terrain. It also never requires refueling due to a special generator that powers the vehicle.

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype:
    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Latest?cb=20181210034427

       Abilities:

    I Have The Need... For Speed!:


       Name: I Have The Need... For Speed!
       Rank: B+
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria receives a Passive Speed boost of 80% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.


    Centaur's Kick:


       Name: Centaur's Kick
       Rank: B
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria gets a Passive Spell Range boost of 50% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.



    Plot Abilities:

    Need A Lift?:

    With this Plot Ability, Victoria can carry one or two passengers on the Centaur without sacrificing performance. In the absence of passengers it can carry up to 500 pounds of cargo in saddlebags or other containers without sacrificing performance.

    High Security:

    Victoria's ride is a distinctive one and is sure to attract a lot of attention, including the wrong sort of attention. To make theft more difficult the Centaur is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature and the electronics are made to be highly resistant to hot-wiring or other forms of tampering. It also requires a special nanokey that is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature just to start. While it can still be stolen by a determined individual with the appropriate technical know-how, the security is strong enough to discourage casual attempts.


    Last edited by Victoria Sheridan on 8th October 2020, 10:18 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

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    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Empty Re: DH-40 Centaur Prototype

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 19th August 2020, 7:07 am

    Hey there! You know me and why I'm here so without further ado I shall get to grading for you.

    Now, the thing is according to your job ending you claimed a Strong + Item from the job ending. As per the equipment rules, all item abilities must be passive. I can see that you have not stated that this is an item, armour or weapon, nor are the abilities passive. In the template next to 'Type' you should confirm what type of equipment this is, as in whether it is an item, weapon or armour. Additionally, should you choose to make this an armour or weapon, you will need to change the proof of acquisition as the link you have provided will only validate a Strong + Item. Bump when you have amended this and I'll take a look.

    Spoiler:

    @Victoria Sheridan wrote:Name: DH-40 Centaur Prototype
       Grade: Strong+
       Type: Hovercycle
       Proof of Acquisition: I obtained this item by invoking the second Passive of Merces Letifer Magic's Y-Rank Ascendant Ability Gold Rush. Proof is here. Ending A Job: Page 25, Post Number 621
       Description: A prototype hovercycle created by the joint efforts of Dr. Hanlon and Dr. Loretta Reid of Motor City, this vehicle uses anti-gravity propulsion instead of traditional tires to move across the ground. This feature ensures a smooth ride across most types of terrain. It also never requires refueling due to a special generator that powers the vehicle.

    The prototype entrusted to Victoria boasts two special features that will never be included in the mass-produced model: a Rapid Acceleration Boost and a Mounted Gun. The Rapid Acceleration Boost temporarily increases speed at the cost of reduced control over the vehicle and raising the engine's temperature to a less-than-safe temperature; it is more of an emergency measure than a go-to feature. The gun is useful for clearing away obstacles or engaging enemies; it can be an unpleasant surprise for enemies expecting Victoria's vehicle to be unarmed.

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype:
    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Latest?cb=20181210034427

       Abilities:

    Rapid Acceleration Boost:


       Name: Rapid Acceleration Boost
       Rank: B
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Burst
       Damage: N/A
       Range: 50 Meters
       Speed: 50 Meters per Second
       Duration: 1 Post
       Downside: N/A
       Description: By twisting the throttle control forward as hard as she can, Victoria can engage the Rapid Acceleration Boost for a sudden and dramatic increase in speed. However, this comes at the cost of forcing the vehicle into a wheelie and raising the engine's temperature to a less-than-safe operating temperature, discouraging repeated uses in a short time. Therefore it is reserved for when a quick boost is needed to make good an escape or clear an obstacle.

    The boost propels the Centaur forward 50 meters at a speed of 50 meters per second. It lasts for one post.


    Mounted Gun:


       Name: Mounted Gun
       Rank: B
       Category: Offensive
       Type: Single-Target
       Damage: 80 HP
       Range: 200 Meters
       Speed: 200 Meters per Second
       Duration: 1 Post
       Downside: N/A
       Description: The Mounted Gun is deactivated by default as a safety precaution, but by activating the weapon built into the Centaur with the press of a button, Victoria gains access to a mounted gun that fires a single bolt of white energy at a target. The shot has a range of 200 meters and travels at a speed of 200 meters per second. If the target is hit, it takes 80 HP in damage and is knocked back. OOC permission is required to knock back and move PCs or Event NPCs.

    The mounted gun can only fire forward, but it packs a punch that can clear obstacles or force human opposition out of the way. It is also good for engaging in running battles with other vehicles since its targeting computer compensates for the Centaur's speed when aiming a shot.

    OOC permission is required to engage in battles with vehicles driven by PCs or Event NPCs.


    Plot Abilities:

    Need A Lift?:

    With this Plot Ability, Victoria can carry one or two passengers on the Centaur without sacrificing performance. In the absence of passengers it can carry up to 500 pounds of cargo in saddlebags or other containers without sacrificing performance.

    High Security:

    Victoria's ride is a distinctive one and is sure to attract a lot of attention, including the wrong sort of attention. To make theft more difficult the Centaur is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature and the electronics are made to be highly resistant to hot-wiring or other forms of tampering. While it can still be stolen by a determined individual with the appropriate technical know-how, the security is strong enough to discourage casual attempts.


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    Victoria Sheridan
    Victoria Sheridan

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    Posts : 1298
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Experience : 678,630

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Merces Letifer
    Second Magic: Combat Medic
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Victoria Sheridan 6th October 2020, 12:12 am

    I have made edits to the item. Let me know if anything else needs changing.

    Bump.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________


    Golden Lacrima is valid until 6/14/2021. Proof of purchase is here. Page 26, Post Number 642
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Empty Re: DH-40 Centaur Prototype

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 6th October 2020, 5:28 am

    One small edit, bump when ready to review.

    Spoiler:
    @Victoria Sheridan wrote:Name: DH-40 Centaur Prototype
       Grade: Strong+
       Type: Item
       Proof of Acquisition: I obtained this item by invoking the second Passive of Merces Letifer Magic's Y-Rank Ascendant Ability Gold Rush. Proof is here. Ending A Job: Page 25, Post Number 621
       Description: A prototype hovercycle created by the joint efforts of Dr. Hanlon and Dr. Loretta Reid of Motor City, this vehicle uses anti-gravity propulsion instead of traditional tires to move across the ground. This feature ensures a smooth ride across most types of terrain. It also never requires refueling due to a special generator that powers the vehicle.

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype:
    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Latest?cb=20181210034427

       Abilities:

    I Have The Need... For Speed!:


    Edit:: As this is a Strong + Item, you can make one of these B+. Please note that the B rank ability will need it's buff lowered to 50% according to the -10% rule that is applied to passive buffs.

       Name: I Have The Need... For Speed!
       Rank: B
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria receives a Passive Speed boost of 60% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.


    Centaur's Kick:


       Name: Centaur's Kick
       Rank: B
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria gets a Passive Spell Range boost of 60% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.



    Plot Abilities:

    Need A Lift?:

    With this Plot Ability, Victoria can carry one or two passengers on the Centaur without sacrificing performance. In the absence of passengers it can carry up to 500 pounds of cargo in saddlebags or other containers without sacrificing performance.

    High Security:

    Victoria's ride is a distinctive one and is sure to attract a lot of attention, including the wrong sort of attention. To make theft more difficult the Centaur is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature and the electronics are made to be highly resistant to hot-wiring or other forms of tampering. It also requires a special nanokey that is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature just to start. While it can still be stolen by a determined individual with the appropriate technical know-how, the security is strong enough to discourage casual attempts.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype 60582_s

    Victoria Sheridan
    Victoria Sheridan

    Alt Account- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Legal Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Limited Edition- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Sticking Around- Taskmaster- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Summer Special Participant- Player 
    Lineage : Shadows Of Anarchy
    Position : None
    Posts : 1298
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 678,630

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Merces Letifer
    Second Magic: Combat Medic
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Victoria Sheridan 8th October 2020, 10:20 pm

    Everything should be in order now. Let me know if anything else needs editing.

    Bump.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________


    Golden Lacrima is valid until 6/14/2021. Proof of purchase is here. Page 26, Post Number 642
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6972
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Empty Re: DH-40 Centaur Prototype

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 9th October 2020, 3:19 am

    Spoiler:
    @Victoria Sheridan wrote:Name: DH-40 Centaur Prototype
       Grade: Strong+
       Type: Item
       Proof of Acquisition: I obtained this item by invoking the second Passive of Merces Letifer Magic's Y-Rank Ascendant Ability Gold Rush. Proof is here. Ending A Job: Page 25, Post Number 621
       Description: A prototype hovercycle created by the joint efforts of Dr. Hanlon and Dr. Loretta Reid of Motor City, this vehicle uses anti-gravity propulsion instead of traditional tires to move across the ground. This feature ensures a smooth ride across most types of terrain. It also never requires refueling due to a special generator that powers the vehicle.

    DH-40 Centaur Prototype:
    DH-40 Centaur Prototype Latest?cb=20181210034427

       Abilities:

    I Have The Need... For Speed!:


       Name: I Have The Need... For Speed!
       Rank: B+
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria receives a Passive Speed boost of 80% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.


    Centaur's Kick:


       Name: Centaur's Kick
       Rank: B
       Category: Auxiliary
       Type: Passive
       Duration: Passive
       Description: Victoria gets a Passive Spell Range boost of 50% when standing within 200 meters of the Centaur. Should she travel any further away from the vehicle she loses the benefit of this ability.



    Plot Abilities:

    Need A Lift?:

    With this Plot Ability, Victoria can carry one or two passengers on the Centaur without sacrificing performance. In the absence of passengers it can carry up to 500 pounds of cargo in saddlebags or other containers without sacrificing performance.

    High Security:

    Victoria's ride is a distinctive one and is sure to attract a lot of attention, including the wrong sort of attention. To make theft more difficult the Centaur is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature and the electronics are made to be highly resistant to hot-wiring or other forms of tampering. It also requires a special nanokey that is keyed to Victoria's ethernano signature just to start. While it can still be stolen by a determined individual with the appropriate technical know-how, the security is strong enough to discourage casual attempts.

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