Dawn, Glory of the End

Name: Dawn, Glory of the End
Rank: Weak
Type: Rapier
Description:

Dawn, Glory of the End Appearance

Dawn is a long-bladed sword characterized by a complex hilt which is constructed to provide protection for the hand wielding it. While the blade might be broad enough to cut to some degree, the long thin blade lends itself to thrusting. The blade might be sharpened along its entire length or sharpened only from the centre to the tip. It is a weapon mainly used in Minstrel, which is too the location from where Antonia got it, and is a very flexible sword, yet easily breakable. It can be used to write the runes of Ultimate Écriture (Antonia's magic) and it deals D Rank damage.

Strengths:

· Light: This weapon is utterly light, so it can be carried around at ease by Antonia, who isn't really strong.

· Flexible: This weapon is quite flexible, so it can bend a bit before breaking.

· Thin: This weapon is thin, so Antonia can use it to reach to places only something terribly thin can reach.

Weaknesses:

· Easily breaks: Due to the thinnery of the blade, it is terribly easy to break, so it breaks after 2 hits of D Rank spells.

· Too thin: Although being thin was stated as a strength, and still is, this weapon's thinnery can aslo be its biggest weakness, as it makes it easy to break.

· Weak: This weapon deals barely D Rank damage.

Abilities:

· Rune Writing: Antonia can cast spells by writing the runes with Dawn.

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