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    Shakal
    Shakal

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Post by Shakal 12th May 2014, 4:04 am

    Name: Shakal
    Gender: Male
    Age: 28
    Birthday: 10/21
    Sexuality: Straight
    Special Characteristics: One small scar on his right cheek.


    Personality: Out of battle: Shakal is mainly a well kept guy, he doesn't like getting messy, but isn't afraid to do so at the same time. He goes from laid-back to
    eager ad ready-to-go guy periodically, all depending on the situation. He sometimes like to try and crack jokes here and there, but in all honesty he's not that good
    at it. He doesn't have much of a bad side, aside from either a small glare or a bad remark to whoever ticked him off. He's also a bit cocky and tends to take danger head on, but that
    doesn't mean he won't stop to think about it. For maybe a second or two.

    In battle: Shakal tends to wait and let his enemy attack first depending on the situation, so he can get a good understanding at what they can do at the risk of taking an early hit himself.
    After he's got a good perspective, he'll try a few different things out on his opponent to see what would be the best to go with on attacking. He'll then try to proceed with attacking non stop, unless the tides are against him.
    If he's with partners, he'll let them make the first move and then step in shortly after, providing support where he can. He doesn't believe in leaving his partners or friends behind, and will stop at nothing to get them to
    safety if the battle ends up straying in a bad direction for him and his team. He definitely would not want to be a leader, thinking of it as too much responsibility on his hands, and he most likely
    wouldn't be able to handle it. He's fine following what a leader says, but will often stray from what was originally ordered to try his own thing.

    Likes: 1. Team efforts- SHakal likes being with a team, and feeling like he's helping it out. 2. Mountains- Shakal enjoys scaling mountains and such, keeps him busy.
    3. Competition- Shakal is a competitive guy, and always loves a good competition against someone

    Dislikes: 1. Dark magic- AN event in his life made him hate it forever, that and he just finds it plain evil.
    2. Know it alls- Shakal hates people who act like they know everything, and does his best to avoid them.
    3. Cold weather- Shakal is not a big fan of the cold, and will usually just stay indoors during cold seasons.

    Motivations: 1. His team- Shakal will go all out for the best of his team, no matter what. 2. Children- Shakal always loves to help kids out if he sees them, knowing they'll someday be great men.
    3. His grandparents- Shakal's grandpa and grandma were the ones who persuaded him to be a wizard themselves, so he owes them for what he is now.

    Fears: 1. The dentist- Shakal always thinks they'll just pull a tooth if he goes.
    2. The dark- He never knows what could be lurking those dark corners..and he tries his best to stay away from them.
    3. Being alone- Shakal fears that if he's alone, he can be easily targeted and taken out.


    Height: 71.6 Inches
    Weight: 112 lbs.
    Hair: His hair is a light blue color, straight down the middle of his head and spiked up on both sides going along his ears, short.
    Eyes: Light brown
    Skin Tone: Slightly tanned,originally white.
    Appearance: Shakal isn't exactly a body builder, but he has a pretty good upper body build, his legs not being any different. He wears earings, one on each ear. His clothing is a white trench coat that drops all the way down to slightly above his feet black pants and a gray t-shirt underneath.

    Guild: Fairy Tail
    Tattoo: The Guild tattoo is located on the right side of his face, just slightly passed his eye.
    Rank: D-class
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    Post by Guest 12th May 2014, 5:28 am

    Hey there Shakal, glad you managed to get this up =]

    So far the application looks great, however there is only one issue with it and that is that the personality is currently a little short. Here at FTRP you need to have a personality that is a total of 500 words. At the moment you have 300.

    You could perhaps add about how Shakal reacts to Dark Mages and guilds, both in combat and outside of it? You could easily use other parts of your form to add to your personality and fluff it up a little =]

    Other than that there are really very few things need doing, such as sorting out your Motivations and Likes so that they run in numerical order like with your dislikes and fears.

    Post when this is ready to be re-reviewed and I'll happily go over it and - hopefully - approve.
    Shakal
    Shakal

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 5
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Shakal 12th May 2014, 3:58 pm

    Do you mind explaining what you mean by "Ordering the motivations and likes and dislikes" I don't quite understand.

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    Post by Guest 14th May 2014, 2:31 pm

    Basically so that they're laid out:

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    It's only a minor detail so I'm not overly worried about this. The priority is the personality =]

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