Hikari Ryuuken

Name: Hikari Ryuuken
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: May 26th
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Nothin' special really

Personality: Hikari is a mostly cheery person who rarely ever gets angry. She always goes out of her way to help people, even if she gets nothing in return for her services. Hikari is somewhat shy, and always tries her best to be polite. That’s the way she was brought up all her life. She was brought up by a religious couple out in the middle of the woods. Hikari also studies a lot, mostly with battle tactics and such. She likes to keep on top of things. While a little shy, she prefers being around people as opposed to being alone. She will always try her best to protect her friends, even if she ends up getting hurt in the process. She values friendship more than anything.

In battle, she tries her best to aid her opponents, and not lose her cool when facing strong opponents. Sometimes though, that doesn't always go as planned, as she will accidentally let her fear slip out.

Likes: Extremely windy days - This is because she was mainly raised in the outdoors, instead of in a normal house.

Helping people - She was raised to help people.

Tinkering with magitechnology - More specifically making magic powered weapons. She's naturally drawn to it.

Cute little animals - Shes a girl, naturally she is drawn to cute things

Cheese wheels.... - Who doesn't like cheese!? Cheese is good o.o

Dislikes: Insensitive jerks - There's no need to be a jackass

Perverts - Pretty obvious, shes a girl

Dark mages - She dislikes them because all they do is try to hurt people

The smell of milk… - it makes her nauseous

Stepping in dog poo... - WHO LIKES THAT!?! O_O Its nasty xD

Being lied to - She prefers to know the truth even if it hurts her

Motivations: To become a renown mage who helps out the needy, to meet a dragon, and to become strong to protect the people she cares about.
Fears: Pitch black environments - Due to a reoccurring dream she had as a child, where all she could hear was screaming and everything was absolute darkness, it has haunted her ever since.

Death - Not just of herself, but also of those she cares about. No one really wants to die or see loved ones die, Hikari is no different.

Spiders - Especially giant ones. She was born with arachnophobia. Not much else to explain there.

General Appearance


Height: 5’9
Weight: 168 lb
Hair: Blue, fairly long.
Eyes: Brown
Skin Tone: Light
Appearance:

Guild/Council

Guild: Eclipse Soul
Tattoo: Sky Blue, the back of her left hand
Rank: C

I'll review this app:

-Please add description to each of your likes and dislikes

-Come up with 2 more motivations and fears

-Expand on personality, go more in depth with her personality

Bump when edited

OK edited, sorry if its not enough I'm exhausted right now. Hope it's good though!

Adding to what to fix upon

Please try to add description to all your likes and add a space in between likes and dislikes. Also, remove the same in between the likes and don't generalize the likes and dislikes so much, just what SHE doesn't like or like in particular. Detail in how she is in battle and don't do caps in un-needed. And what Shin said.

Bump when fixed

Second edit is up. Hope it's good enough for approval.

-Add description to each of your fears

-Go through likes again, I see some things that should be in dislikes

Bump when edited

Edited. Sorry I suck so bad at this, first time actually doing this kind of thing on a forum :what:

Approved