Ripper(done i think)

Name: Ripper
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Birthday: June 20
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: A massive cross shaped scar, the complete length of his left side of his torso crossing over to his right side. Ripper has a second scar down his right side of his face as well as a all red right eye, that glows in response to his mood. He has elongated canine teeth, claw like nails on both hands and feet, With pointed ears.

Personality:

Social life: Ripper tends to stay to himself watching those around him, spending multiple years in the woods with wolfs alone has made him very stoic, he may join others in some fun and is quick to start a bar brawl just to make himself laugh. He is not seen smiling but if he does its due to tormenting others while adopting very few as friends. He see's his own many humans as a step down from him and animals namely wolves as equals, and as family, often will be seen eating with them instead of his guild mates, this is enforced by his ability to eat raw meat which seems to be off putting. Sticking to the woods when not dealing with the guild, where he can be seen running with the wolves, hunting for food.

He exhibits a wide range of traits, lethargic, bloodthirsty, rebellious, depending on who is around him which makes him very unpredictable. The unpredictable nature of Ripper is further enhanced by more or less a bi polar switch in motives and who he sees as guild mates and those who will just get in his way, Ripper is loyal to his guild but is always staying on guard should he be betrayed, or hunted for his actions in battle, he is often seen as the outcast of his guild even among and as such he avoids making friends although he will join those who are like minded as he is.    

Combat: To Ripper combat is as natural as breathing, spending his youth fighting among the wolves that took him in, he is very forward in his thinking, attack, attack, attack. He became adept at fighting multiple opponents, while making very fast changes to meet the need as he fights. While he likes to fight alone, Ripper can lead and take orders from others in combat like he did with the pack of wolves that raised him, As a leader he scouts ahead in a conflict looking for openings and changes to overwhelm targets. Giving commands through hand signals and quick sentences, he understands how to attack in waves sending the fastest in first seeking to draw out the flaws and attack patterns, then he sends in the stronger ones to press the attack.

When having to fight for himself or under the orders of others, he takes on a quadrupedal stance attacking in bursts of speed attacks, switching to a bipedal stance randomly delivering powerful tameshiwari(breaking arts) like attack's attempting to break bones, rupture organs and break down magic, He uses his own magic with deception often tricking opponents into thinking its either gravity, wind, or earth magic. Ripper has one advantage in combat that is often used in his legend, and that is he eats  humans just like he would any other animal he hunts in the woods, This one factor changes the landscape of many conflicts as the very thought of being eaten forces many to take a purely defensive tactic when fighting him.          
   
Likes:

Ripper loves combat, It makes him high as he draws blood of those he fights, he loves the taste of his own blood and that of others.

Blood seems to provoke a trance like state, it is almost like a drug to him as it may induce a state akin to a berserker and the high is dramatic.  

War is one of Rippers strong suits, he enjoys the chaos that is brought about. It often brings about the strongest fighters and mages from around the world, he often will be seen fighting all who stand before his guild.    

Dislikes:
leashes: as he see’s other canine with them and thus a form of being weak, and easily controlled by humans.

Cats: Ripper hates cats the smell of them, the way they strut around tail high pisses him off and goes through great lengths to put them in there place.  

Vacuums: The high pitch noise of the motor, is very uncomfortable.

Motivations:

Conquest: Conquest of those stronger than him, Ripper seeks to fight and conquer all those who stand before him, He lives for combat as that is his source of enjoyment.

Power: Power is what drives Ripper to do some of the most sickening acts to other humans, as well as teammates should they stand in his way.

A Promise: When his adoptive father the mystic wolf made him promise, too become stronger and not to lose as he was a wolf and wolves do not surrender to any human or beast.

Fears:

Weak opponents: A Boring fight is the main fear of Ripper, He seeks combat with only the strong, and will actively avoid weak mages, he has often weakened himself to have a good fight.

Dog whistles: As they hurt like hell, and tend to induce a dizzy type feeling that Ripper is scared will be used against him.

Losing: Ripper only fear that seems to keep him from dying, Ripper does not want to seem weak and the very thought of losing makes him sulk.

General Appearance


Height: 6'10
Weight: 250
Hair: snow white hair, slicked back forming five main parts leading to side burns that  give Ripper a wolf like disposition.  
Eyes: The right eye has a light blue, with iris and pupil still visible. The left eye is completely red with almost a haunting hue to it.
Skin Tone: His skin tone is that of a white male with a tan.
Appearance: Ripper Stands as a highly muscular tan male, with two large scars on the right side of his chest, forming a cross and stretching to most of his midsection as well as most of his left pectoral. Ripper also has other scars about his body most notably the scar going down his left eye. Ripper wears a dark green karate gi with white fur around the neck and shoulders as well as around the feet.  

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment

Tattoo: The right side of his neck and is gray as stone.
Rank: D

Mr. Ripper wrote:Name: Ripper
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Birthday: June 20
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: A massive cross shaped scar, the complete length of his left side of his torso crossing over to his right side. Ripper has a second scar down his right side of his face as well as a all red right eye, that glows in response to his mood. He has elongated canine teeth, claw like nails on both hands and feet, With pointed ears.

Personality:
Social life: Ripper tends to stay to himself watching those around him, spending multiple years in the woods with wolfs alone has made him very stoic, he may join others in some fun and is quick to start a bar brawl just to make himself laugh. He is not seen smiling but if he does its due to tormenting others while adopting very few as friends.
Combat: To Ripper combat is as natural as breathing, spending his youth fighting among the wolfs that took him in, he is very forward in his thinking, attack, attack, attack. He became adept at fighting multiple opponents, while making very fast changes to meet the need as he fights. While he likes to fight alone, Ripper can lead and take orders from others in combat like he did with the pack of wolfs that raised him.

Personality needs to be at least 500 words long, describing how he is in battle, as a leader, following orders, and in groups / public
   
Likes: Ripper loves combat, It makes him high as he draws blood of those he fights, he loves the taste of his own blood and that of others. War Ripper
Dislikes: leashes as he see’s other canine with them and thus a form of being weak, cats, and Vacuums.
Motivations: Conquest, Ripper seeks to fight and conquer all those who stand before him, He lives for combat thats his source of enjoyment.
Fears: A Boring fight is the main fear of Ripper, Becoming weak and useless, dog whistles they hurt like hell.

Likes, dislikes, motivations, fears all need to be organized in a list form with a sentence reason following it. Example below.
-Combat: [Sentence Reason]
-Blood: [Sentence Reason]
-War Ripper: [Sentence Reason]
   
General Appearance


Height: 6'10
Weight: 250
Hair: snow white hair, slicked back forming five main parts leading to side burns that  give Ripper a wolf like disposition.  
Eyes: The right eye has a light blue, with iris and pupil still visible. The left eye is completely red with almost a haunting hue to it.
Skin Tone: His skin tone is that of a white male with a tan.
Appearance: Ripper Stands as a highly muscular tan male, with two large scars on the right side of his chest, forming a cross and stretching to most of his midsection as well as most of his left pectoral. Ripper also has other scars about his body most notably the scar going down his left eye. Ripper wears a dark green karate gi with white fur around the neck and shoulders as well as around the feet.  

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment

Tattoo: The right side of his neck and is gray as stone.
Rank: D

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Mr. Ripper wrote:Name: Ripper
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Birthday: June 20
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: A massive cross shaped scar, the complete length of his left side of his torso crossing over to his right side. Ripper has a second scar down his right side of his face as well as a all red right eye, that glows in response to his mood. He has elongated canine teeth, claw like nails on both hands and feet, With pointed ears.

Personality:

Social life: Ripper tends to stay to himself watching those around him, spending multiple years in the woods with wolfs alone has made him very stoic, he may join others in some fun and is quick to start a bar brawl just to make himself laugh. He is not seen smiling but if he does its due to tormenting others while adopting very few as friends. He see's his own many humans as a step down from him and animals namely wolves as equals, and as family, often will be seen eating with them instead of his guild mates, this is enforced by his ability to eat raw meat which seems to be off putting. Sticking to the woods when not dealing with the guild, where he can be seen running with the wolves, hunting for food.

He exhibits a wide range of traits, lethargic, bloodthirsty, rebellious, depending on who is around him which makes him very unpredictable. The unpredictable nature of Ripper is further enhanced by more or less a bi polar switch in motives and who he sees as guild mates and those who will just get in his way, Ripper is loyal to his guild but is always staying on guard should he be betrayed, or hunted for his actions in battle, he is often seen as the outcast of his guild even among and as such he avoids making friends although he will join those who are like minded as he is.    

Combat: To Ripper combat is as natural as breathing, spending his youth fighting among the wolves that took him in, he is very forward in his thinking, attack, attack, attack. He became adept at fighting multiple opponents, while making very fast changes to meet the need as he fights. While he likes to fight alone, Ripper can lead and take orders from others in combat like he did with the pack of wolves that raised him, As a leader he scouts ahead in a conflict looking for openings and changes to overwhelm targets. Giving commands through hand signals and quick sentences, he understands how to attack in waves sending the fastest in first seeking to draw out the flaws and attack patterns, then he sends in the stronger ones to press the attack.

When having to fight for himself or under the orders of others, he takes on a quadrupedal stance attacking in bursts of speed attacks, switching to a bipedal stance randomly delivering powerful tameshiwari(breaking arts) like attack's attempting to break bones, rupture organs and break down magic, He uses his own magic with deception often tricking opponents into thinking its either gravity, wind, or earth magic. Ripper has one advantage in combat that is often used in his legend, and that is he eats  humans just like he would any other animal he hunts in the woods, This one factor changes the landscape of many conflicts as the very thought of being eaten forces many to take a purely defensive tactic when fighting him.          
   
Likes:

Ripper loves combat, It makes him high as he draws blood of those he fights, he loves the taste of his own blood and that of others.

Blood seems to provoke a trance like state, it is almost like a drug to him as it may induce a state akin to a berserker and the high is dramatic.  

War is one of Rippers strong suits, he enjoys the chaos that is brought about. It often brings about the strongest fighters and mages from around the world, he often will be seen fighting all who stand before his guild.    

Dislikes:
leashes: as he see’s other canine with them and thus a form of being weak, and easily controlled by humans.

Cats: Ripper hates cats the smell of them, the way they strut around tail high pisses him off and goes through great lengths to put them in there place.  

Vacuums: The high pitch noise of the motor, is very uncomfortable.

Motivations:

Conquest of those stronger than him, Ripper seeks to fight and conquer all those who stand before him, He lives for combat as that is his source of enjoyment.

Power is what drives Ripper to do some of the most sickening acts to other humans, as well as teammates should they stand in his way.  

Fears:

A Boring fight is the main fear of Ripper, He seeks combat with only the strong, and will actively avoid weak mages, he has often weakened himself to have a good fight.

dog whistles they hurt like hell, and tend to induce a dizzy type feeling that Ripper is scared will be used against him.

One more fear and one more motivation. Also, make the fears and motivations the same way you did likes and fears, with the subject, the colin, then sentence reason.

Fears

Cake: He had a cake thrown at him as a baby

Something like that

   
General Appearance


Height: 6'10
Weight: 250
Hair: snow white hair, slicked back forming five main parts leading to side burns that  give Ripper a wolf like disposition.  
Eyes: The right eye has a light blue, with iris and pupil still visible. The left eye is completely red with almost a haunting hue to it.
Skin Tone: His skin tone is that of a white male with a tan.
Appearance: Ripper Stands as a highly muscular tan male, with two large scars on the right side of his chest, forming a cross and stretching to most of his midsection as well as most of his left pectoral. Ripper also has other scars about his body most notably the scar going down his left eye. Ripper wears a dark green karate gi with white fur around the neck and shoulders as well as around the feet.  

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment

Tattoo: The right side of his neck and is gray as stone.
Rank: D

Nice job so far, fix that small thing in the motivations and fears and you should be done~

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