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    Water Dragon Slayer

    Althea
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    Water Dragon Slayer Empty Water Dragon Slayer

    Post by Althea 5th April 2018, 1:19 pm



    Magic Name: Water Dragon Slayer [1st Gen]
    Magic Type: Solitary Slayer [benefits listed below]
    Description:
    Water Dragon Slayer Magic is just what it sounds like, magic specifically attuned to defeating water dragons and other similar beings.  Its origins date back to a time that humanity has long forgotten, one filled to the brim with war and strife.  And now, with the near eradication of the dragon race, very few remain to pass on the magic in its original form.  But the lucky few who were fortunate enough to run into one such willing dragon may be granted magic such as this one.   For Water Dragon Slayer Magic specifically, this includes vast physical strength, potent supportive abilities, and inordinate mental stability.

    The main specialty of Water Dragon Slayer Magic is for its combative purposes, excelling in slaughtering any amount of obstacles that face its user.  The magic allows the user to wield unparalleled physical strength and cast spells infused with the very fiber of their being.  However, this specific breed of magic is much more focused on granting power rather than any of the other latent benefits.  Everything is present with harsh combat in mind, so the "calmer" side of the slayer magic never really gets to show itself.

    Lineage: Eater of Dreams

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    Slayer Benefits:

    Unique Abilities

    Uummat - Water acts as the basis of all life, allowing the user to wield their life force as a weapon.  This grants them the ability to convert their HP directly into MP at will.  However, this isn't possible when the user's HP is less than or equal to 50% of its full total.  Additionally, there is a 2:1 exchange, meaning to gain 10MP, the user would need to use 20HP.

    Floe - With the intermingling of the water produced from the magic and the user's aether-polluted mana, it boosts their vitality to an abnormal level.  As long as a wound isn't immediately fatal, the user will eventually be able to recover from it.  Naturally occurring diseases are rendered ineffective and even lost limbs will grow back when given the time to.  Due to this, they have a passive a 60% HP buff and 5% HP regen every post.

    Arroyo - Like most other slayer magics, this magic grants its user immense physical strength.  This passively increases their strength by 60% and allows them to deal a melee strike that results in a shockwave of highly pressurized air.  The ability can be used once every post and carries melee damage up to 100m at 100m/s.  This deals the same damage as the original physical attack, can never be used alongside melee spells, and any single opponent may never be dealt damage by both the shockwave and the original attack.

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    Water Dragon Slayer Empty -- Spells

    Post by Althea 10th April 2018, 8:40 pm


    Spells

    Signature Spells - 3:

    B - 1:
    A - 8:
    S - 6:
    H - 1:

    Advanced Spells

    B+ - 2:
    A+ - 2:
    S+ - 1:
    H+ - 1:

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    Water Dragon Slayer Empty -- Notes

    Post by Althea 10th April 2018, 8:42 pm


    Notes:


    - Changed a lot of the flavor text
    - Rearranged spell slots to have 1 B-rank, 8 A-rank, 6 S-rank, 2 B+, 2 A+, and 1 S+
    - Added a UA, S rank spells, and an S+ spell from hitting S-rank
    - Renamed Fervor to Uummat [UA] and reworked it so much it might as well be a new ability
    - Changed the buff in Floe [UA] from a 50% spell cost reduction to a 60% mana pool increase and added an effect in passive HP regen
    - Moved Cloudburst [Passive] from A-rank into B-rank and changed its buff from increasing spell durability from 55% to increasing spell resist by 50%
    - Changed Catalaphyllia, Ctenella, Gyrosmilia, Montigyra, and Simplastrea [A] so much their basically new spells
    - Added Galaxea [A]
    - Changed the buffs in Downpour I and II [Passive, A] from increasing phys dmg to a mana pool buff

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 18th April 2018, 8:26 pm

    Hey Rain! Lester here I'm your grader for this round, feel free to ask any questions! You've done good with the magic <33 bump when you've made changes
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    Post by Althea 19th April 2018, 5:32 am

    Changes made, thanks for the feedback!

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 19th April 2018, 1:02 pm

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 26th April 2018, 5:24 am

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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2018, 10:21 am

    For Water Dragon's Crest, increase the duration to 2 to fit with the description.
    Everything else is fine.
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    Post by Althea 3rd May 2018, 12:15 pm

    Change made, thanks for the feedback!
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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2018, 12:34 pm

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    Post by Tempeste 25th June 2018, 1:54 pm

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    Post by Lilium 2nd August 2018, 1:35 pm

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    Post by Althea 2nd August 2018, 2:09 pm

    The feedback is appreciated! Thanks!
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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 6th December 2018, 7:12 pm



    DOWNFALL - This is a form of enhancement present within Althea's magic, passively buffing her melee damage by 40%.
    DOWNPOUR - This is a form of enhancement present within Althea's magic, passively buffing her melee damage by 40%. You got two passive here buffing the same kind of damage by 40 which makes 80% melee passive buff. Either reduce or pick a new damage to buff.


    NAME: Water Dragon's Floe
    RANK: C
    TYPE: Multi-target
    DAMAGE: 22.5HP per post
    RANGE: Physical Contact
    SPEED: N/A please state a speed
    DURATION: 5 posts
    DESCRIPTION: When activated the caster will begin emitting a dense, cool water vapor for the duration of the spell. Once impacted, the target will begin suffering from damage over time for 3 posts, and although it doesn't stack it may be reset. The spell may also help the caster with temperature control for themselves or those around them and it can be adjusted so that there are no physical signs of the spell having been cast.

    NAME: Water Dragon's Overcast
    RANK: A
    TYPE: AoE
    DAMAGE: 35HP per post
    RANGE: 150m
    SPEED: 50m/s
    DURATION: 7 posts
    DESCRIPTION: Once cast, the spell will spontaneously generate a raging storm, the caster acting as it's center. Exactly how violent it is as well as factors such as the quantities of wind and lightning are completely up to them, but in no other way do they have any control over them. Once they enter the storm, the target may suffer from a max of 2.5x A-rank spells worth of damage depending how many posts they spend within it while the caster is granted a flexible 65% buff. But, it must be clarified by the them within their post what it enhanced. Is the wind and the lighting doing damage?








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    Post by Althea 7th December 2018, 3:09 pm

    Heya Kite, thanks for taking the time to grade my magic!  But, I do have to ask for clarification for a few if you don't mind :D

    1.  Do you mind pointing it out in the rules where it says I can't have two different buff sources increasing the same thing?

    2. It doesn't have a speed because it is applied upon contact and "instant" would imply it not lasting all that long, which it does.

    I'm doing the final edit you made, my bad for not clarifying stuff.


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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 9th December 2018, 5:16 pm

    1. I’ll will let its pass since there isn’t any rules regarding it. .

    2. The speed is for how fast the mist spreads over the range state. It is still needed.


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    Post by Althea 10th December 2018, 1:27 pm

    2. Whoops, I didn't actually mean for it to be a mist spell, it was supposed to be more like Arroyo. I've edited both of their descriptions to make things less confusing :'D


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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 11th December 2018, 7:49 am

    Water Dragon Slayer Approv23


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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 31st July 2019, 7:12 am

    Hey Althea, So I'll be grading this for you, all my edits will be in this color, bump when done and I'll take a look.


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    Post by Althea 1st August 2019, 8:18 pm

    made all the edits you asked for, but for some i just completely changed things ;w;


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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 3rd August 2019, 7:40 am

    Hey again, same again,  bump the thread when done and I'll take another look.


    Edit:: So I think you misunderstood my edits, when I asked you you put 'for the duration of the spell' in I wasn't talking about the downside, but actually any buffs, debuffs or drains you had in your magic description itself. So if you had a spell that buffs 65% speed, I wanted you to state AFTER the sentence that it was for the duration of the spell. If you can go through and tweak those based on the previous grading please.

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    Post by Althea 7th August 2019, 11:05 am

    it took me a while to get to it, but hopefully i got it right this time


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    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 8th August 2019, 3:19 am


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