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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 22nd April 2017, 9:05 am


    REQUIP MAGIC

    Primary Benefit I Character may have up to 3 Requip spells active at once

    BOND  MAGIC

    Auxiliary Benefit I Associated companion receives 1 additional ability equal to his rank (up to S Rank)

    ADDITIONAL NOTES

    4 Spell Slots purchased here
    Gain the following benefits from his lineage, Psionic Soul
    50% increase to base Spell Damage of his abilities and spells from Psionic Wrath
    A detrimental 50% decrease in Spell Healing from Psionic Wrath
    MP Cost is replaced by PSY cost. PSY is a resource which replaces his MP through his lineage.

    Previously, HeXarmament Magic was a unique magic used by the members of the Arch Vorbrundt order to mobilize weak mages and make them stronger through the use of implanted chips inside their bodies which allow them to harness spells and gear developed by the magic engineers and technicians. It was their belief that even the weak should have the capacity to change the world that they armed them with said magics. Ultimately, they believe that the Rune Knights and the guilds of Fiore can only do so much. While guilds offered powerful mages that rivals the strongest wizard saints, they are disorganized compared to the Rune Knights. However, the Rune Knights also lacked manpower, which is primarily the reason why the order recruited weaker or non-mages in the first place - to make them stronger and train them in various fields.

    Simply gaining this capacity is not enough to change the world for the better. They needed to be trained as soldiers, peacekeepers who will uproot the seeds of evil and destroy it. A little ambitious, even for the young ruby-eyed recruit named Michael. He was unique in a way that he possessed no magic, nor can he use any of the magic items created by the technicians. Even the magic engineers were dumbfounded. They did, however, find his psychic ability to be fascinating, and has had an entire team dedicated to arming special gear for him, which is similar to the others, but different in a way that it allows him to utilize his psionic energies to use the gear he was given. His abilities were aptly named pseudo magics, as they aren't exactly magics to begin with.

    Sadly, the heretics of the order laid ruin to the organization, and had them most of them massacred, save for Michael and the few handful who escaped, one of which is Michael's designated magic engineer, Giselle. This trauma has caused damage to his mind and, in turn, forgot most of them. What was once an ambitious goal was now reduced to rubble by the traitors.

    Recently, now with the realization that he was an esper, Michael and Giselle went about to improve his arsenals. Before, the codes and spells were a mess and varied that majority of them felt useless. The coding of the magic system was outdated as well, and not very optimal. Giselle, like the genius that she is, managed to rewrite the entire magic system from scratch with a few very useful and situational spells at his disposal. Weapons used to be carried around by the soldiers of the order, making missions a hassle. With the new update, weapons are linked to his pseudo magic and are stored in cyberspace, which can only be described as a parallel dimension where weapons and stuff are stored. Most of all, his armors were overhauled that their beastly motifs were clearer.

    Usually, all forms of magic would require a magic circle of some sorts. This pseudo magic, however, utilizes small hexagonal figures that make up the spells. Thus, the name HeXarmament Magic, though it was previously named that way. Now it's just HeXoldier's Gambit, a name Giselle was proud to come up with.

    Soldier's Gambit is a pseudo magic which provides him a wide array of armors to choose from, each with their own respective specialization such as esponiage (Black Widow), scouting (Mach Cheetah) or making it rain shrapnel (Shellback Artillery). The armors are themed after military roles and appropriate animals and insects, and has their respective colors. Example, his Navy Jaws set is blue, while his Navy Sails set is cyan colored. As with the previous iteration of this pseudo magic, it also contains situational and helpful abilities that improves his quality of life, and they may or may not turn the tides of battle depending on how he uses it.

    UNIQUE ABILITIES

    HeXosuit Materialization I Through the genius and marvel of Giselle's mind, she was able to integrate nanotechnology into his arsenal, allowing him to call forth a flexible but durable armor that is primarily used to be augmented with various armors with a specialized set of skills. While donning this armor, he gains 30% physical damage resistance and 30% magical resistance. While it does provide him resistance against enemy fire, it fails to totally protect him as it is considered a secondary skin.

    HeXyberspace Storage I Michael is able to store and retrieve items from a pocket dimension called the 'Cyberspace' inside his magic. Summoning an item from the pocket dimension requires only mental commands. As a safety precaution, living organisms even the size of a worm cannot be stored within this extra dimensional space. Additionally, he can 'link' his non-requip weapons and armors to the Cyberspace so it can be stored back inside it even if he is a few meters away from it.

    HeXionic Radar I While he lacks magic sensory due to his circumstance of birth, his psionic power makes up for this missing feature, referring to this as a 'Psionic Radar'. A better alternative and combination of his HeXcry and HeX Map, and with the integration of clairvoyance, his Psionic Radar grants Michael a live 3d feed of his surroundings as far as his Psionic Radar (Magic Sensory) can reach, which is displayed on his field of vision. It also displays the location of any creature within the area, but can't display who it is unless he "bookmarks" their identities. Creatures usually appear as a white, blank dot and is nameless, but bookmarking them allows him to identify what it is, and he can change the color of their dots and input their names on it via mental commands. This interface's opacity can be altered from 100% to 0% or anywhere in-between so he can see without any problems.

    Additionally, he can project a holographic display from the data from his Psionic Radar or from his archives for 10 posts. This can be as wide as 5 meters on each dimension and can be interacted with for strategic purposes. For example, anyone can pinpoint locations of interest and place 'dots' to represent allied or enemy forces. When conjuring a holographic display of his Psionic Radar, it also displays dots. The map can be shut off early.

    As this involves the potential involvement of information from players, player owned NPCs, and event owned NPCs, OOC permission is required to be able to utilize this ability without any complaints from the parties involved.

    PLOT ABILITIES

    HeXtatistical Archiving I Michael is able to store and analyze data in a databank within his cyberspace. He is capable of inputting data through mental commands or from recording videos or audio clips for later use. However, he can't share these informations other than through his other (plot) ability, HeXport Data, or through verbal communication. Data collected can be cross referenced with other data to uncover any misinformation or erroneous data from witness testimonies or for from written data. HeXtatistic Archiving can also analyze his opponent's current status, which includes any inflicted status conditions, and MP, but cannot detail their HP and strength, which is up to him to discover. Since this involves information from other players, player owned characters, and event NPCs, OOC permission must be made.

    HeXport Data I Through the marvels of modified Telepathy, Michael is able to send or upload data from his databank to other people or devices 300 meters away from him, allowing for a discreet exchange of information. When uploading data to other computers, he can upload viruses to them in an effort to sabotage their operations or for some other reason. Since this involves information from other players, player owned characters, and event NPCs, OOC permission must be made.

    Psionic Abilities:
    Supersonic Eagle:







    HeXarmament Augmentation - Snipe Hound:


    Last edited by Knight Owl on 14th November 2020, 7:26 pm; edited 84 times in total
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    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Guest 25th April 2017, 7:25 am

    Knight Owl wrote:
    Magic
    Primary Magic: HexArmament Magic
    Secondary Magic: 
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: 
    HexArmament Magic was created as a result of the need for single person missions, and for those who specializes in ranged combat, or for a better description, this magic is designed for war. Most of this magic's spells aim to boost their agility and accuracy, conjure artillery strikes, and make the caster invisible from enemy sight. HexArmament Magic is influenced by war weapons and strategies used by commanders.

    Some of this magic's offensive spells require a gun of some sorts If some of the spells require a gun, this automatically makes it a holder type magic. If you want it to be caster, but still require a weapon for casting means, then the weapon would have to be registered as a UA. , and thus he can utilize other forms of spells if he has no gun. Not only is this magic for long ranged combat, but it also tackles melee, to make up for the disadvantage of having no long ranged weapon if possible; or if the caster wishes to engage in a melee fight.

    Usually, all forms of magic would require a magic circle of some sorts. This magic, however, utilizes small hexagonal figures that make up the spells. Thus, the name HexMagic.

    Strengths: 

    • Balanced - HexMagic has a perfect balance between offense, defense, and utility, allowing the caster to utilize these spells to his advantage.

    • Versatile - HexMagic is versatile, allowing the caster to favor more on offense or defense in a particular situation while pumping out utility spells to further strengthen him in combat.

    • Tactical - HexMagic utilizes unique abilities which are used for him to make tactical strategies for the fight to be in his favor.

    Weaknesses: 

    • Limitations - Though versatile, HexMagic's spells have certain limitations which can potentially conflict with some certain spells, such as no attacking while stealthed. It is important for the caster to know these limitations and concoct a strategic plan.

    • Weapon Reliant - Some of his spells rely on the usage of a gun of some sorts, and as a result, guns are a prerequisite for the said spells.

    • Range Reliant - Most of his offensive spells are designed to be fired from a far away place, such as long range artillery spells and long range sniping spells. Thus, his spells are least effective in a close combat.

    • Selfish - Most of his defensive and utility spells are designed for his own benefit instead of the others. Thus, this magic is not designed as a combat support, though you can say that this magic is designed to support from afar given the range.

    Lineage: 
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    Unique Abilities: 

    • HexData - Red Alert can store data based on his observations and the information he gathered, however, he cannot share them through any means except for verbal communication. HexData can also display the current status of any individual mage, like HP, MP, etc, displayed in a user interface within his helmet.

    • HexSight - This ability functions like a pair of binoculars, allowing him to see from afar without the effort of carrying around one. He can see things 0.5 miles away from his current location.

    • HexMap - This ability allows him to scan his surroundings and projecting a 3d map out of the information given. It detects traps and the current position of any mage. It covers about a 0.5 mile radius. He does not have the power to manipulate the map. This ability will run continuously, thus the map will be updated every second.




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    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 25th April 2017, 8:12 am

    I did the changes (if i even did it correctly.)


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    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Guest 25th April 2017, 10:05 am

    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ E6AbbWA
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    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by ivyleaf33 15th November 2018, 9:10 pm

    Spoiler:

    Moved at the user's request.


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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Knight Owl
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    Lineage : Psionic Soul
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    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 21st November 2018, 10:30 pm

    Changed things. And bump.


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    Lineage : Psionic Soul
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    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
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    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 25th November 2018, 12:30 am

    Will be editing for C-Rank stuff.


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    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by ivyleaf33 2nd December 2018, 1:15 am

    Spoiler:

    Hey, it's ya boi Ivy here to grade your magic~ All edits will be made in this spoopy color in the spoiler above. If you have any questions or think I graded something wrong, feel free to ask below! Let's get to it~


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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 2nd December 2018, 5:44 am

    Fixed! This should be ok, at least.


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    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by ivyleaf33 3rd December 2018, 7:16 am

    Spoiler:

    One last edit - in your last spell!


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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 3rd December 2018, 10:56 am

    That should be all the changes for now.


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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by ivyleaf33 4th December 2018, 3:21 am

    Spoiler:

    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ KhyzeRtP_o


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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


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    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 10th April 2020, 3:21 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

    Spoiler:


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    Character Sheet
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    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 10th April 2020, 2:54 pm

    Heya Knight Owl, Joh here to grade your magic. If you have any questions or require clarification post in this thread and I will get back to you as soon as possible. When the requested edits have been made, simply give me a bump and I will review your magic once more. That said, all of my edits will be found in this color.

    As an overarching edit, I would like to ask you to remove strengths and weaknesses from this magic, as those are outdated and thoroughly obsolete. Further, please make sure to update both this magic and all associated spells to the new magic and spell templates.

    Spoiler:


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    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 10th April 2020, 8:00 pm

    Done with the changes! Also, I would like to clarify that HeX Map can only display dots if the source is from his HeXcry passive, and if a map from his unique ability is used, it does not display any dots. All creatures are white colored dots by default, so he wouldn't know who's who.


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    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 11th April 2020, 11:59 pm

    Bump


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have an Admin as a friend!- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th April 2020, 2:16 am

    Some more edits, same color. As a note for you, every grader has up to 7 days to get back to you about gradings and edits before you may contact them again. Please refrain from bumping your magic multiple times in a row, as this could potentially be seen as pushy, and I can guarantee you that it doesn't hasten your grading process.

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    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 12th April 2020, 4:57 am

    Bumping! Apologies for the double bump Q-Q


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th April 2020, 5:17 am

    Only a few additional clarifications

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    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 12th April 2020, 6:00 am

    Should be all good now :D


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th April 2020, 6:28 am

    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ FbVA7uB

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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11887
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 355
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 4th May 2020, 4:18 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 8th May 2020, 6:47 am

    Hey there, Nessa here to grade this magic for you! All my recommended edits are in this colour! Bump the thread when done and I'll take a look~

    Overall Edit:: Please note the rules are being updated to limit non-summoning/ non-requip type spells to one spell of that type in these magics. As you have two, I'm going to have to ask you to change one of these to Caster. Also these types of spells are capped at one ability max not two.

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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ 60582_s

    Knight Owl
    Knight Owl

    Player 
    Lineage : Psionic Soul
    Position : None
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 424
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 4
    Experience : 1,421,385

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Psionic Ascendance
    Second Magic: Manifold Armory
    Third Magic: Sepulchre's Sigil

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Knight Owl 8th May 2020, 1:04 pm

    Bump! This should all be satisfactory :D


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Completed Re: ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 8th May 2020, 1:39 pm

    Spoiler:

    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ Pg4yhn10


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    ⬡ Soldier's Gambit ⬡ 60582_s


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