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MarikAnderson wrote:
Magic
Primary Magic: Jikū sōsa: Destruction
Secondary Magic: Titan
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Space destruction is a magic based on destruction, the user uses the magic to destroy the space between him and something else or to just destroy the mass of stuff, he can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible for the human eyes.
The user has a special contract with a seal, a destruction seal, this gives him the power of the seal, and also when the user dies, the seal will break destroying his body and anything around him, it will live a black space of nothing.
This seal tries to stay in a mage's body, thats way it gives magic and power to the owner if its necessary, the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him.
The spell not only uses destructive power, the seal is a door of a demon power, he has the power to manipulate space, but he uses it for destruction power. The caster has a special link with the demon, he was chosen by the demon to represent him. The seal has a total manipulation on time and space, but its a strong power hard to control, its used to destroy things, that's what the demon like.
Strengths:
- The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
- The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
- The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can only use time spells until B-Rank.
Weaknesses:
- The magic has a link with a demon, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
- The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
- The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
- The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
- The caster needs a lot of power to use time spells, so he can only use time spells until being B-Rank.
Abilities/Powers:
- Passives:
- Space Destruction:
The user can only use this two times per post. This will increase depending of hi rank (D2, C4, B6, A8, S10)
*Per the user's rank:
D=5 meters
C=10 meters
B=15 meters
A=20 meters
S=25 meters
- Seal Power:
- Seal Emergency:
- D-Rank Spells:
- Invisibility:
Name: Invisibility
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description:The user can destroy the space around him making the space that his body uses disappear, making him invisible. This spell will only work with same and lower ranked mages than the caster, any higher rank mage will be able to feel it and know where he is.
Strengths:
-The user will not be heard, he can talk and walk without making any noise.
-The user becomes invisible against Npc and other D rank mages.
-Low Cool-down
Weaknesses: Duration 2: Posts Cool-Down: 4 posts
-It only works against D ranked mages.
-If he is covered by something as water or ink, anyone will be able to see him.
-They are still able to hit Marik even if they can't see him.
-If Marik is hit by a total of one C rank spell his invisibility will be canceled.
- Quick Step:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- White Zone:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: A magic circle appears under the user, then cracks start to appear in the sky, and the zone around the user is destroyed making any attack that gets closer to him pass trough. Example. The user activates the spell, he will look exactly the same, the only marks will be cracks in the sky, if a fireball goes against the caster, the fireball will appear at the other side of the sphere trespassing him. The sphere will only support a total of 2 D-Rank hits, if a third spell strikes the zone will be destroyed and the user will receive the spell's attack.
Strengths:
-Any mage that will try to attack the user with a fist or physical attacks will pass through the zone too, with out making any damage to the user.
-Anyone who touches the zone will be burned, moving back. Does this do damage?If so how much
-The zone will move with the user and reaches a 4 meters radio. I think you mean radius
-Moving.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-The spell only supports the user.
-The user can't use any spell while being in that state.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower spells.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower mages.
-The caster can't run while being in the zone, the zone will disappear if the user touches it, and the zone only reaches a speed of 5 kilometers per hour.
-The zone will damage the caster's partners as well.
- Invisibility Share:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: The user touches any person, an the space around him will be destroyed, making him invisible to any persons except the caster.
The person becoming invisible won't be heard by anyone, not even the caster, and will receive a D-Rank damage also. This can be used with non-living and living objects. In case of being use against magical objects, their effects will still work being invisible, but they will receive D rank damage as well.
Strengths:
- It can work with friends and enemies.
- It will damage when used against opponents.
- It can be used against living and non living objects.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
- It can't work with himself, this spell only woks with other mages.
- It will damage friends if its used to help them.
- C rank mages and above will be able to perceive the invisible object and hear it.
- The caster will not be able to perceive that person unless he is C rank or above, even if he used the spell.
- C-Rank Spells:
- Spatial Stream... Annihilation:
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Description: Marik creates a magic circle under the enemy without moving a finger, it just appears. When the magic circle is created anyone standing in the circle will lose his power What do you mean lose his power? during the spell, he won't be able to move. The grounds starts to shake and after the user says the words "Kūkan sutorīmu" another big circle appears ten meters above the enemy and a big black stream appears from the circle above dealing C-Rank damage to the enemy, it also destroys any other non-living thing between the circles, the clothes is destroyed too (This doesn't affect Magic weapons and Armors). The circle reaches a radio of 5 meters, anyone in the circle will be affected by the spell, the circle can't be created under the user, it can't have contact with the user or it will be canceled.
The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell, he can't use any other offensive spell the same post he uses this spell.
Strengths:
-The user doesn't need to do any hand move to create the circles, he can just create it if he wants to.
-The enemy will not be able to move while standing in the circle. (This will only affect C or lower ranked mages)
-It also destroys any non living thing between the two circles.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- Any B-Rank or above mage will not be affected by the losing powers effect.
- The user can be interrupted at the middle of the spell canceling the spell.
- The circle will affect the caster's partners too, if they are in the circle they will be hit by the spell.
- The caster can't use any other Damaging spells the same post he uses this spell. So if the spell does damage in any way he can't use it. Also if the user casts a damaging spell before this one he won't be able can't cast this one in the same post.
- The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell. This would equal Repture's limits.
- Spacial Stream... Reflection:
Rank: C
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Description: The user places his hand in front of a spell thrown by the enemy, then the spell stops and a magic cylinder appears in the user's hand. A black and purple stream appears out from the hand destroying the spell and attacking the enemy, dealing C-Rank damage.
Any non-living object attacked by the stream will be completely destroyed, even cloth and weapons, not even dust will be there, the space used for that object will be deleted from the universe.
Strengths:
-Any object hit by the ray will be destroyed, except for magical objects, magical objects will receive C-Rank damage. (Any weapon or item at Strong level or higher can't be destroyed by this spell)
-The spell works as a defensive and offensive spell.
-Low cool-down
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-It doesn't work with physical spells.
-The ray will damage friends as well.
-The spell only works with C or lower rank spells.
-The ray will not destroy magical weapons, they will receive C-Rank damage only.
- Black Spot:
Name: Black Spot
Rank: C
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: Marik punches the air creating cracks in the air, then the cracks break and a big circle around the user is destroyed, it reaches a 10 radio meters, the circle will cause a big pain in any person around the place except the caster when its created, dealing C-Rank damage. Then the space will be completely black, anyone inside there will see nothing, and in the outside the people will see a black sphere, nothing else. The user's seal will start glowing, giving him power to see people inside the sphere, watching only a red shade of them.
Strengths:
-It can attack more than one person.
-The user will be the only one able to see any other person, gaining a big advantage while using this spell.
-The user can make the sphere explode when ever he wants to.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Coold-Down 5 posts.
-It will damage your partners and pets too.
-Your partners and pets will lose the vision as well.
-It doesn't affect blind persons because they can still hear you.
-Any B or higher ranked mage will be able to feel the user, they will see him as a red shade.
- Signature Spells:
- Bang Bang Annihilation :
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Description: The user points at any object with his index finger, then, a magic circle appears at the point of his finger, and a dark ray goes out from it at the speed of a bullet that will deal C-rank damage to any object it hits, working as a special bullet that will make anyone feel a lot of pain and will leave a black dot in the target's body after hitting it. It will destroy any physical object, including clothes. (This won't affect magic objects)
Strengths:
-The Ray will destroy any non physical object.
-It will deal C rank damage to any weapon as well.
-The beam is fast enough to double the speed of a bullet.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- It won't be able to destroy magical objects, they will receive C rank damage as well, but won't be destroy.
- The ray will affect anyone who touches, that means that the user is able to damage his partners and friends..
- The ray can be stopped by putting a weapon in front of it, damaging the weapon but stopping the ray.
- The beam can only hit one target, it will disappear after hitting any object, this includes walls.
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moved for spell addingMr. Anderson wrote:
Magic
Primary Magic: Jikū sōsa: Destruction
Secondary Magic: Titan
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Space destruction is a magic based on destruction, the user uses the magic to destroy the space between him and something else or to just destroy the mass of stuff, he can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible for the human eyes.
The user has a special contract with a seal, a destruction seal, this gives him the power of the seal, and also when the user dies, the seal will break destroying his body and anything around him, it will live a black space of nothing.
This seal tries to stay in a mage's body, thats way it gives magic and power to the owner if its necessary, the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him.
The spell not only uses destructive power, the seal is a door of a demon power, he has the power to manipulate space, but he uses it for destruction power. The caster has a special link with the demon, he was chosen by the demon to represent him. The seal has a total manipulation on time and space, but its a strong power hard to control, its used to destroy things, that's what the demon like.
Strengths:
- The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
- The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
- The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can only use time spells until B-Rank.
Weaknesses:
- The magic has a link with a demon, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
- The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
- The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
- The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
- The caster needs a lot of power to use time spells, so he can only use time spells until being B-Rank.
Abilities/Powers:
- Passives:
- Space Destruction:
The user can only use this two times per post. This will increase depending of hi rank (D2, C4, B6, A8, S10)
*Per the user's rank:
D=5 meters
C=10 meters
B=15 meters
A=20 meters
S=25 meters
- Seal Power:
- Seal Emergency:
- D-Rank Spells:
- Invisibility:
Name: Invisibility
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description:The user can destroy the space around him making the space that his body uses disappear, making him invisible. This spell will only work with same and lower ranked mages than the caster, any higher rank mage will be able to feel it and know where he is.
Strengths:
-The user will not be heard, he can talk and walk without making any noise.
-The user becomes invisible against Npc and other D rank mages.
-Low Cool-down
Weaknesses: Duration 2: Posts Cool-Down: 4 posts
-It only works against D ranked mages.
-If he is covered by something as water or ink, anyone will be able to see him.
-They are still able to hit Marik even if they can't see him.
-If Marik is hit by a total of one C rank spell his invisibility will be canceled.
- Quick Step:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- White Zone:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: A magic circle appears under the user, then cracks start to appear in the sky, and the zone around the user is destroyed making any attack that gets closer to him pass trough. Example. The user activates the spell, he will look exactly the same, the only marks will be cracks in the sky, if a fireball goes against the caster, the fireball will appear at the other side of the sphere trespassing him. The sphere will only support a total of 2 D-Rank hits, if a third spell strikes the zone will be destroyed and the user will receive the spell's attack.
Strengths:
-Any mage that will try to attack the user with a fist or physical attacks will pass through the zone too, with out making any damage to the user.
-Anyone who touches the zone will be burned, moving back (This works as a barrier to stop anyone trying to enter, it doesn't damage people).
-The zone will move with the user and reaches a 4 meters radius.
-Moving.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-The spell only supports the user.
-The user can't use any spell while being in that state.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower spells.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower mages.
-The caster can't run while being in the zone, the zone will disappear if the user touches it, and the zone only reaches a speed of 5 kilometers per hour.
-The zone will damage the caster's partners as well.
- Invisibility Share:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: The user touches any person, an the space around him will be destroyed, making him invisible to any persons except the caster.
The person becoming invisible won't be heard by anyone, not even the caster, and will receive a D-Rank damage also. This can be used with non-living and living objects. In case of being use against magical objects, their effects will still work being invisible, but they will receive D rank damage as well.
Strengths:
- It can work with friends and enemies.
- It will damage when used against opponents.
- It can be used against living and non living objects.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
- It can't work with himself, this spell only woks with other mages.
- It will damage friends if its used to help them.
- C rank mages and above will be able to perceive the invisible object and hear it.
- The caster will not be able to perceive that person unless he is C rank or above, even if he used the spell.
- C-Rank Spells:
- Spatial Stream... Annihilation:
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Description: Marik creates a magic circle under the enemy without moving a finger, it just appears. When the magic circle is created anyone standing in the circle will lose his abilities to move or do anything, he won't feel his body during the spell. The grounds starts to shake and after the user says the words "Kūkan sutorīmu" another big circle appears ten meters above the enemy and a big black stream appears from the circle above dealing C-Rank damage to the enemy, it also destroys any other non-living thing between the circles, the clothes is destroyed too (This doesn't affect Magic weapons and Armors). The circle reaches a radio of 5 meters, anyone in the circle will be affected by the spell, the circle can't be created under the user, it can't have contact with the user or it will be canceled.
The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell, he can't use any other offensive spell the same post he uses this spell.
Strengths:
-The user doesn't need to do any hand move to create the circles, he can just create it if he wants to.
-The enemy will not be able to move while standing in the circle. (This will only affect C or lower ranked mages)
-It also destroys any non living thing between the two circles.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- Any B-Rank or above mage will not be affected by the losing powers effect.
- The user can be interrupted at the middle of the spell canceling the spell.
- The circle will affect the caster's partners too, if they are in the circle they will be hit by the spell.
- The caster can't use any other Damaging spells the same post he uses this spell. So if the spell does damage in any way he can't use it. Also if the user casts a damaging spell before this one he won't be able can't cast this one in the same post.
- The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell. This would equal Repture's limits.
- Spacial Stream... Reflection:
Rank: C
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Description: The user places his hand in front of a spell thrown by the enemy, then the spell stops and a magic cylinder appears in the user's hand. A black and purple stream appears out from the hand destroying the spell and attacking the enemy, dealing C-Rank damage.
Any non-living object attacked by the stream will be completely destroyed, even cloth and weapons, not even dust will be there, the space used for that object will be deleted from the universe.
Strengths:
-Any object hit by the ray will be destroyed, except for magical objects, magical objects will receive C-Rank damage. (Any weapon or item at Strong level or higher can't be destroyed by this spell)
-The spell works as a defensive and offensive spell.
-Low cool-down
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-It doesn't work with physical spells.
-The ray will damage friends as well.
-The spell only works with C or lower rank spells.
-The ray will not destroy magical weapons, they will receive C-Rank damage only.
- Black Spot:
Name: Black Spot
Rank: C
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: Marik punches the air creating cracks in the air, then the cracks break and a big circle around the user is destroyed, it reaches a 10 radio meters, the circle will cause a big pain in any person around the place except the caster when its created, dealing C-Rank damage. Then the space will be completely black, anyone inside there will see nothing, and in the outside the people will see a black sphere, nothing else. The user's seal will start glowing, giving him power to see people inside the sphere, watching only a red shade of them.
Strengths:
-It can attack more than one person.
-The user will be the only one able to see any other person, gaining a big advantage while using this spell.
-The user can make the sphere explode when ever he wants to.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Coold-Down 5 posts.
-It will damage your partners and pets too.
-Your partners and pets will lose the vision as well.
-It doesn't affect blind persons because they can still hear you.
-Any B or higher ranked mage will be able to feel the user, they will see him as a red shade.
- Signature Spells:
- Bang Bang Annihilation :
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Description: The user points at any object with his index finger, then, a magic circle appears at the point of his finger, and a dark ray goes out from it at the speed of a bullet that will deal C-rank damage to any object it hits, working as a special bullet that will make anyone feel a lot of pain and will leave a black dot in the target's body after hitting it. It will destroy any physical object, including clothes. (This won't affect magic objects)
Strengths:
-The Ray will destroy any non physical object.
-It will deal C rank damage to any weapon as well.
-The beam is fast enough to double the speed of a bullet.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- It won't be able to destroy magical objects, they will receive C rank damage as well, but won't be destroy.
- The ray will affect anyone who touches, that means that the user is able to damage his partners and friends..
- The ray can be stopped by putting a weapon in front of it, damaging the weapon but stopping the ray.
- The beam can only hit one target, it will disappear after hitting any object, this includes walls.
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Hey dude. Just need to check. Is it just D ranks that have been added or are there other changes?
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I changed my C rank spells to B and wrote new C rank spells. The ones that a changed to B have some changes about damage and range.
I also edited the description of my magic... It had very low quality, and even if it's not that good, it's better than before. I changed the name just to make it sound more bad ass, didn't change the magic. Only edit the description and name... I hope that's not editing the magic
I also edited the description of my magic... It had very low quality, and even if it's not that good, it's better than before. I changed the name just to make it sound more bad ass, didn't change the magic. Only edit the description and name... I hope that's not editing the magic
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Mr. Anderson wrote:
Magic
Primary Magic: Law of Destruction
Secondary Magic: Titan
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Space destruction Just for correctness shouldn't this have been change to Law of Destruction? is a magic based on destruction. The user uses his own magic power with the help of a seal to destroy the space between him and something else or just to destroy a mass of stuff. He can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible or untouchable.
The user has a special contract with a seal, a destructive seal which gives him the power of time and space destruction. To use this power, the user has burned his skin with black fire, drawing a seal which lets him cast different spells of destruction. To become stronger, Marik created two seals, one by burning his hand, and the other one by burning his eye.
If the user dies, the seal will burn his body, and the user will neither go heaven nor hell.
This seal has his own soul. It tries to stay inside a mage's body, that's why it gives the user magic
power if its necessary. Marik's body is a chest that locks the real power of the seal.
This means that the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him if he wants to.
The seal is hard to control for a human being, it has the power of destroying, manipulating, distorting and creating time and space in any way. A human, can only choose one of this abilities, and Marik has chosen destruction.
Strengths:
- The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
- The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
- The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can only use time spells until B-Rank. Don't you mean can't use spells until B rank
Weaknesses:
- The magic has a link with a demon's seal, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
- The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
- The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
- The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
Abilities/Powers:
Space Destruction.
The user has the ability to destroy the space between him and any other thing, it will be visible, if there is a tree between him and his target, the tree will be visible, but when he moves his hand against the tree, the hand will immediately appear at the other side of the destroyed space. The user can use this to reach stuff at many meters* or lower, he can decide the distance between 1 meter and his limit depending of his rank. He can also touch non-living objects and completely destroy them. Leaving nothing that death space. The user can only destroy car size or lower size objects. (This will deal no damage to anybody or any of their items). Can this be used to damage spells
The user can only use this two times per post. This will increase depending of hi rank (D2, C4, B6, A8, S10)
*Depending on the user's rank:
D=5 meters
C=10 meters
B=15 meters
A=20 meters
S=25 meters
Seal Power.
When the user reaches a Mp of 30%, the seal will start to give him 1Mp per post and 5Mp per post when he is not in battle, the regeneration will stop after reaching 55 mp or above. Seal power can only be used once per thread.
Seal Emergency.
When the user's Hp is 25% or lower, the user will gain 10 Mp the caster can use this ability any time once per thread.
- D-Rank Spells:
- Invisibility:
Name: Invisibility
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description:The user can destroy the space around him making the space that his body uses disappear, making him invisible. This spell will only work with same and lower ranked mages than the caster Than the spell. Not than the caster, any higher rank mage will be able to feel it and know where he is.
Strengths:
-The user will not be heard, he can talk and walk without making any noise. What do you mean by talk without making noise. That doesn't make much sense. Do you mean you can talk, but nobody will hear you
-The user becomes invisible against Npc and other same ranked mages.
-Low Cool-down
Weaknesses: Duration 2: Posts Cool-Down: 4 posts
-It only works against same ranked or lower mages. Anyone higher ranked will be able to feel him.
-If he is covered by something as water or ink, anyone will be able to see him.
-They are still able to hit Marik even if they can't see him.
-If Marik is hit by a total of one C rank spell his invisibility will be canceled.
- White Zone:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: A magic circle appears under the user, then cracks start to appear in the sky and the zone around the user starts to break, the selected zone will end destroyed. Making any attack that gets closer to him pass trough. Example. The user activates the spell, he will look exactly the same, the only marks will be cracks in the sky, if a fireball goes against the caster, the fireball will appear at the other side of the sphere trespassing him. The sphere will only support a total of 2 D-Rank hits, if a third spell strikes the zone will be destroyed and the user will receive the spell's attack. So if I used a B rank on it (for example) would this hit you?
Strengths:
-Any mage that will try to attack the user with a fist or physical attacks will pass through the zone too, with out making any damage to the user. I feel strong enough mages should be able to hit you
-Anyone who touches the zone will be burned, moving back (This works as a barrier to stop anyone trying to enter, it doesn't damage people).
-The zone will move with the user and reaches a 4 meters radius.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-The spell only supports the user.
-The user can't use any spell while being in that state.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower spells.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower mages.
-The caster can't run while being in the zone, the zone will disappear if the user touches it, and the zone only reaches a speed of 5 kilometers per hour.
-The zone will damage the caster's partners as well.
- Invisibility Share:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: The user touches any person, destroying the space around him and making him invisible. No one will be able to see him except for the user and higher ranked mages than the USER. The caster will be able to see him as a red shadow.
The person becoming invisible won't be heard by anyone, not even the caster, and will receive a D-Rank damage also. This can be used with non-living and living objects. In case of being use against magical objects, their effects will still work even if the weapon, armor or item is invisible. The object will also receive D rank damage.
Strengths:
- It can work with friends and enemies.
- It will damage when used against opponents.
- It can be used against living and non living objects.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
- It can't work with himself, this spell only woks with other mages.
- It will damage friends if its used to help them.
- Same ranked mages and above will be able to perceive the invisible object and hear it. It's necessary to be higher rank than the one who casted the spell to see the target.
- The caster will not be able to perceive that person unless he is higher ranked than the affected person, even if he used the spell.
- Quick Step I:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Quick Step II:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Quick Step III:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Quick Step IV:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Quick Step V:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Dimensional Door:
Rank: D
Type: Suportive
Description: The user is able to pull the air, destroying the time and space between his dimension and any other dimension. A black door will appear out from the air. You said you don't get time related spells till B rank and this mentions destroying time
Marik is able to enter to that door and then close it, opening anywhere else inside the user's dimension. The dimension is a white room, nothing else than white. It looks like a box but it has no real limit, if you decide to walk straight, then you will never find something stopping you. Erm...this seems a bit too powerful for a D rank
Strengths:
-The user can use this spell to move to any other place around the world.
-The door can work as an escape from any situation.
-The user can leave both doors open to go out from a place and at the same post return. This is helpful if the user has to take something with him or leave a message.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 3 post
-This spell is useless in battle.
-Only one person can travel at the same time. Anyone entering will go out by finding a black door after two posts inside the white dimension.
-Objects and spells can pierce the door, meaning that if the user is opening a door and entering, someone can interrupt him by shooting a spell or a weapon.
-The user can't use any other spell the same post he uses this spell.
- Destructive Hands:
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 1 Posts.
Description: The user places both hands against any object. A seal will appear in both hands, the original will be purple and the other one black. The object will then explode, destroying it completely. This doesn't work with magical objects as weapons, armors and items. It deals no damage. Cooldown for D's are a minimum of 1 post
Strengths:
-The spell can destroy any physical object.
-It doesn't matter if the object is moving or is ten times heavier than the user, it will still explode.
-Low Cool Down
Weaknesses:
-The spell does no damage.
-The user has to use both hands to cast this spell.
-The spell doesn't work with magical objects.
-The spell doesn't work with leaving things, not even plants.
- C Rank Spells:
Rank: C
Type: Supportive
Duration: 4 Posts.
Cooldown: 7 Posts.
Description:
I don't see how this spell relates to your magic. It doesn't make sense for a 'I destroy space and time
The user takes a heavy breathing, his both tattoos shine and then black thunder's appear around him. A black aura appears around him, black flames that will burn anything they touch. The user's eyes turn white and hi power will increase a lot, he will have a strength and speed bonus of 10% each. His hair will move around and hi teeth will become big fangs.
The power of this spell is that the user gains the ability to control those flames, being able to control a destructive aura that will destroy anything it touches. They also work as arms, wings or anything. The use is able to make them grow and give them shapes, but this won't give him more power or abilities like flying. If he Makes wings then he won't be able to fly.
Strengths:
-This spell gives the user two abilities, the one of controlling the destructive aura and the one of the stat buff.
-The flames can take the shape of anything, but will always look black.
-The flames can work as a shield against any non magical object.
Weaknesses:
-The flames can be eaten by demon or god slayers, not dragon slayer.
-The flames won't do more damage than the one the user doesn't with each hit, they will deal exactly the same damage than one of the user's fist.
-The flames won't burn living things.
-The flames won't burn magical objects, they won't do any damage to them.
- Spacial Stream... Explosion:
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 4 Posts.
Description: The user doesn't need to move to use this spell. A magic symbol shines on Marik's eye. Black and purple thunders appear around him growing and exploding. Creating a massive explosion that will push away any C rank mage or lower ten meter away from the explosion. The spell reaches a 15 meters radius around the user in a shape of a sphere. The explosion will also deal C rank damage to any mage hit by it.
Any physical object touching the explosion will disappear. If the explosion crashed with only one part of a building, then only that part of the building will explode, the other one will stay there, even if it has no support.Strengths:
- Looks Like This:
-The explosion will push away enemies.
-The explosion will destroy any physical object except for magical items.
-The explosion will burn any C rank or lower spell, making the spell work as a defensive an offensive spell.
Weaknesses:
-The explosion won't destroy living things or magical object.
-The explosion will only push C rank mages out of the sphere.
-The explosion will damage friends and foes as well.
-The user can't use any other spell the same post he uses this one.
This doesn't really seem to relate to your magic as a spell. It feels almost like a pseudo-summon in a way and I don't really feel comfortable with itStrengths:
- Dimensional Prison :
Rank: C
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Duration: 3 Posts.
Cooldown: 6 Posts.
Description: By holding the wind and then pulling it, the user opens a black door to a different dimension, destroying the time and space between his dimension and the other one. By throwing anyone inside of the portal, the user is able to close it and leave anyone inside the prison. Another dimension. The dimension is a white room.
Marik once left a very strong creature inside of it, anyone who enters will have to see it, and suffer with it. The user is also able to open a new door under the one inside the dimension, making him appear anywhere around the world. After 3 posts, a portal will appear inside the dimension, if someone decides to walk through it then he will receive D rank damage and will appear where ever he wants to.
- The Creature:
-The user is able to open a portal where anyone can rest or suffer.
-The creature inside of the white zone will do anything Marik says.
-The user can enter the zone if he wants to.
Weaknesses:
-If the 3 posts pass and the opponent hasn't gone out from the door, then he will be able to appear anywhere he wants.
-The user can't open another door with another spell while someone is inside the white room.
-The spell only opens a door, making someone get inside is Marik's problem.
-Anyone imitating the user's magic is able to go out by using this same spell.
-If the user enters the zone then the creature won't wake up.
- B Rank Spells:
- Spatial Stream... Annihilation:
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Description: Marik creates a magic circle under the enemy without moving a finger, it just appears. When the magic circle is created anyone standing in the circle will lose his abilities to move or do anything, he won't feel his body during the spell. The grounds starts to shake and after the user says the words "Kūkan sutorīmu" another big circle appears ten meters above the enemy, and the seal in the user's eye will shine. A big black stream will appear out from the circle above dealing B-Rank damage to the enemy, it also destroys any other non-living thing between the circles (This doesn't affect Magic weapons and Armors). The circle reaches a radio of 10 meters I believe you mean radius. anyone inside the circle will be affected by the spell. The circle can't be created under the user and it can't have contact with the user or it will be canceled.
The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell, he can't use any other offensive spell the same post he uses this spell.
Strengths:
-The user doesn't need to do any hand move to create the circles, he can just create it if he wants to.
-The enemy will not be able to move while standing in the circle. (This will only affect B or lower ranked mages)
-It also destroys any non living thing between the two circles.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 5 posts.
- Any A-Rank or above mage will not be affected by the losing powers effect.
- The user can be interrupted at the middle of the spell canceling the spell.
- The circle will affect the caster's partners too, if they are in the circle they will be hit by the spell.
- The caster can't use any other Damaging spells the same post he uses this spell. So if the spell does damage in any way he can't use it. Also if the user casts a damaging spell before this one he won't be able can't cast this one in the same post.
- The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell. This would equal Repture's limits.
- Spacial Stream... Reflection:
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Description: The user places his hand in front of a spell thrown by the enemy, then the spell stops and a magic cylinder appears in the user's hand. A black stream will be shoot out from the hand destroying the spell and attacking the enemy, dealing B-Rank damage. Give range and speed please
Any non-living object attacked by the stream will be completely destroyed, leaving nothing, not even dust. The space used for that object will be deleted from the universe.
Strengths:
-Any object hit by the ray will be destroyed, except for magical objects, magical objects will receive C-Rank damage. (Any weapon or item at Strong level or higher can't be destroyed by this spell)
-The spell works as a defensive and offensive spell.
-Low cool-down
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-It doesn't work with physical spells.
-The spell can only be activated if there is a spell to destroy.
-The ray will damage friends as well.
-The spell only works with B or lower rank spells.
-The ray will not destroy magical weapons, they will receive B-Rank damage only.
- Black Spot:
Name: Black Spot
Rank: B
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: Marik punches the air creating cracks in the air, then the cracks will break and a big circle around the user will be destroyed. The destroyed zone reaches a 10 radio meters Erm...do you mean a 10 meter radius?. The circle will cause a big pain in any person around the place except the caster when its created, dealing B-Rank damage. Then the space will be completely black, anyone inside there will see nothing, and in the outside the people will see a black sphere, nothing else. The user's seal will start glowing, giving him power to see people inside the sphere, watching only a red shade of them.
Strengths:
-It can attack more than one person.
-The user will be the only one able to see any other person, gaining a big advantage while using this spell.
-The user can make the sphere explode when ever he wants to.
Weaknesses: Duration: 4 posts. Coold-Down 8 posts.
-It will damage your partners and pets too.
-Your partners and pets will lose the vision as well.
-It doesn't affect blind persons because they can still hear you.
-Any A or higher ranked mage will be able to feel the user, they will see him as a red shade.
- Signature Spells:
- Bang Bang Annihilation :
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Description: The user points at any object with his index finger, then, a magic circle appears at the point of his finger, and a dark ray goes out from it at the speed of a bullet Please gives a range and then say how many seconds it takes to cover that range. Bullet speed is actually not a specific speed that will deal B-rank damage to any object it hits, working as a special bullet that will make anyone feel a lot of pain and will leave a black dot in the target's body after hitting it. It will destroy any physical object, including clothes. (This won't affect magic objects)
Strengths:
-The Ray will destroy any non physical object.
-It will deal B rank damage to any weapon too.
-The beam is fast enough to double the speed of a bullet. This contradicts the description
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- It won't be able to destroy magical objects, they will receive B rank damage as well, but won't be destroy.
- The ray will affect anyone who touches, that means that the user is able to damage his partners and friends..
- The ray can be stopped by putting a weapon in front of it, damaging the weapon but stopping the ray.
- The beam can only hit one target, it will disappear after hitting any object, this includes walls.
Comments are in teal. I won't allow you to have five spells all that do the same effect. This is just trying to loophole the cooldown rules.
IF it was a similar spell with a different end result it would be plausible, but as it stands...no.
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Primary Magic: Law of Destruction
Secondary Magic: Titan
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Law of destruction is a magic based on destruction. The user uses his own magic power with the help of a seal to destroy the space between him and something else or just to destroy a mass of stuff. He can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible or untouchable.
The user has a special contract with a seal, a destructive seal which gives him the power of time and space destruction. To use this power, the user has burned his skin with black fire, drawing a seal which lets him cast different spells of destruction. To become stronger, Marik created two seals, one by burning his hand, and the other one by burning his eye.
If the user dies, the seal will burn his body, and the user will neither go heaven nor hell.
This seal has his own soul. It tries to stay inside a mage's body, that's why it gives the user magic
power if its necessary. Marik's body is a chest that locks the real power of the seal.
This means that the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him if he wants to.
The seal is hard to control for a human being, it has the power of destroying, manipulating, distorting and creating time and space in any way. A human, can only choose one of this abilities, and Marik has chosen destruction.
Strengths:
- The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
- The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
- The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can't use time spells until B-Rank.
Weaknesses:
- The magic has a link with a demon's seal, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
- The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
- The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
- The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
Abilities/Powers:
Space Destruction.
The user has the ability to destroy the space between him and any other thing, it will be visible, if there is a tree between him and his target, the tree will be visible, but when he moves his hand against the tree, the hand will immediately appear at the other side of the destroyed space. The user can use this to reach stuff at many meters* or lower, he can decide the distance between 1 meter and his limit depending of his rank. He can also touch non-living objects and completely destroy them. Leaving nothing that death space. The user can only destroy car size or lower size objects. (This will deal no damage to anybody or any of their items, it won't deal damage to spells either).
The user can only use this two times per post. This will increase depending of hi rank (D2, C4, B6, A8, S10)
*Depending on the user's rank:
D=5 meters
C=10 meters
B=15 meters
A=20 meters
S=25 meters
Seal Power.
When the user reaches a Mp of 30%, the seal will start to give him 1Mp per post and 5Mp per post when he is not in battle, the regeneration will stop after reaching 55 mp or above. Seal power can only be used once per thread.
Seal Emergency.
When the user's Hp is 25% or lower, the user will gain 10 Mp the caster can use this ability any time once per thread.
- D-Rank Spells:
- Invisibility:
Name: Invisibility
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description:The user can destroy the space around him making the space that his body uses disappear, making him invisible. This spell will only work with same and lower ranked mages than the spell, any higher rank mage will be able to feel it and know where he is.
Strengths:
-The user will not be heard, he can walk, talk, even shout but no one will hear him.
-The user becomes invisible against Npc and other D rank mages.
-Low Cool-down
Weaknesses: Duration 2: Posts Cool-Down: 4 posts
-It only works against same ranked or lower mages than the spell. Anyone higher ranked will be able to feel him.
-If he is covered by something as water or ink, anyone will be able to see him.
-They are still able to hit Marik even if they can't see him.
-If Marik is hit by a total of one C rank spell his invisibility will be canceled.
- White Zone:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: A magic circle appears under the user, then cracks start to appear in the sky and the zone around the user starts to break, the selected zone will end destroyed. Making any attack that gets closer to him pass trough. Example. The user activates the spell, he will look exactly the same, the only marks will be cracks in the sky, if a fireball goes against the caster, the fireball will appear at the other side of the sphere trespassing him. The sphere will only support a total of 2 D-Rank hits, if a third spell strikes the zone will be destroyed and the user will receive the spell's attack. Any C rank or higher spell will be able to ignore the white zone and will damage Marik.
Strengths:
-Any mage that will try to attack the user with a fist or physical attacks will pass through the zone too, with out making any damage to the user. This will only work with B rank or lower mages.
-Anyone who touches the zone will be burned, moving back (This works as a barrier to stop anyone trying to enter, it doesn't damage people).
-The zone will move with the user and reaches a 4 meters radius.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-The spell only supports the user.
-The user can't use any spell while being in that state.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower spells.
-The spell only works with D-Rank or lower mages.
-The caster can't run while being in the zone, the zone will disappear if the user touches it, and the zone only reaches a speed of 5 kilometers per hour.
-The zone will damage the caster's partners as well.
- Invisibility Share:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: The user touches any person, destroying the space around him and making him invisible. No one will be able to see him except for the user and higher ranked mages than the USER. The caster will be able to see him as a red shadow.
The person becoming invisible won't be heard by anyone, not even the caster, and will receive a D-Rank damage also. This can be used with non-living and living objects. In case of being use against magical objects, their effects will still work even if the weapon, armor or item is invisible. The object will also receive D rank damage.
Strengths:
- It can work with friends and enemies.
- It will damage when used against opponents.
- It can be used against living and non living objects.
Weaknesses: Duration: 2 posts. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
- It can't work with himself, this spell only woks with other mages.
- It will damage friends if its used to help them.
- Same ranked mages and above will be able to perceive the invisible object and hear it. It's necessary to be higher rank than the one who casted the spell to see the target.
- The caster will not be able to perceive that person unless he is higher ranked than the affected person, even if he used the spell.
- Quick Step I:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user destroys instantly the space between a place and him dealing D rank damage to anyone in the zone between Marik and its target while its been destroyed, the user has to give only one step to use this step. The user moves with a normal speed, but the space between him and his target is destroyed so he doesn't need to travel there, he just gives one step to arrive were he wants. Also, if someone is between the destroyed space, he will receive a D-Rank damage at the moment the space is destroyed, this because the space that he covers will be destroyed as well, causing a big pain to his body and destroying part of his intern body, leaving a lot of outside scratches, this would be equal to a D rank damage. This spell has a range of 10 meters straight.
Strengths:
- The user gets the ability to move quickly, an easy way to evade a hit.
- It works as a supportive and offensive spell.
- Even if the user has a range of 10 meters straight, he can move less than that to appear in front of someone or anything.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 2 post
- The user's speed doesn't increase, he is still walking.
- It doesn't work as teletransportation, if the user is been held, he will not be able to move.
- The user won't be able to move someone with him, if he is touching someone, he will not be able to pass trough the destroyed space.
- The damaging effect will also affect partners and pets.
- Black Hole:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: The user places both hands on the floor. The user's eye will glow and then a black line will move out of the user's hands, destroying anything it touches. The line will deal no damage and will only move straight, it will reach a 20 meters distance and a 3 meters per second speed.
If the user decides to, the floor under the end of the line will explode, creating a giant hole with the shape of a circle. It will reach a 10 meters radio and will destroy anything it touches. The explosion will deal D rank damage only.
Strengths:
-This will affect many people at the time.
-The line will destroy any physical object by just touching, except for magical objects as weapons and items. The line reaches a 2 meters deep, meaning that there will be broken under the line.
-The explosion can be created at any time.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool Down: 4 Posts.
-This line will deal no damage.
-This will not affect people with flying abilities.
-The line moves at a very low speed.
-The line can only move straight.
-This will affect the user, and the user's partners.
- Teleportation:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: By taking a heavy breathing and placing his hand against the air, the user is able to destroy the space in front of him of in any other place, and destroying the space around him at the same time. This will move the user torwards any target in a 10 meters radius, working as a teltransportation.
A black line will appear behind the user, that way others will now where did Marik go.
Strengths:
-This spell is very useful, it can work as an scape or to reach something or someone.
-The user doesn't need to move that much to use this spell.
-The spell is instant, just like a teletransportation, it can't be stopped.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool Down: 3 Posts.
-The spell will leave a black line so other people can know where to find him.
-The spell only reaches a 10 metes radius, meaning that reaching Marik won't be hard.
-The user can't use any spell the same post he uses this one.
-Anything having contact with Marik will move with him.
- Dead Hallway:
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: The user destroys a zone between someone and anything else by just snapping his fingers. by making that person move back. The target will appear at the other side of the hallway receiving no damage but teleporting to the other side of the dead hallway. The dead hallway reaches a maximum of 10 meters straight, but the user decides if he does it smaller. Example.
There is a weird cave ten 5 meters behind Guest. By snapping his fingers, Mr. Anderson creates a dead hallway behind Guest with a 5 meter length. By pushing Guest, Guest will fall into the weird cave.
Strengths:
-The user can decide if the hallway will reach the 10 meters or less.
-The hallway can be created in any direction.
-The spell can work against enemies or allies.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool Down: 3 Posts
-The user can't use this spell with himself.
-If the user is not able to move the other person then the spell will become useless.
-The hallway will only move one person, no more.
-The hallway will only reach 10 meters straight.
- Destructive Aura:
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: When the user activates his destructive aura. A symbol starts to glow in his chest and the demon eyes appear right in his face, replacing his eyes. This aura will create a big pressure to everyone around the user.
Any physical object close will disappear slowly turning into dust.
This aura won't deal any type of damage, but it will decrease the other's speed by 20%.
The aura will only affect people and objects around him at a 5 meters radius.
Strengths:
-The aura will destroy any physical object.
-The aura can affect any amount of people or pets.
-The aura will decrease the other's speed, giving the user an advantage in physical combat.
Weaknesses: Duration: 3 Posts Cool Down: 5 Posts.
-The aura will affect friends and partners as well.
-The aura won't affect magical objects.
-The aura won't create any pressure if the opponent is a higher rank than the user.
-This spell doesn't deal any kind off damage.
- Scape:
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Description: The user doesn't need to move to use this spell. If someone or something is moving against anyone. Marik is able to destroy the target's space, making the object pass trough it without touching the original target.
Strengths:
-This spell can be used with any person, object or creature.
-The user doesn't need to move to use this spell.
-This spell can be used with the user.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 3 post
-The spell won't protect other's from C rank or higher spells.
-The spell won't protect others from long range magical weapons as arrows and bullets.
-The spell won't work with C ranked or higher mages, instead of going trough the other they will only feel a strong pressure pushing them back.
-The spell will work with the user's spells even if he doesn't want to, this means that this spell is useless if the user wants to protect himself from someone who uses mimic magic.
- Destructive Hands:
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 2 Posts.
Description: The user places both hands against any object. A seal will appear in both hands, the original will be purple and the other one black. The object will then explode, destroying it completely. This doesn't work with magical objects as weapons, armors and items. It deals no damage.
Strengths:
-The spell can destroy any physical object.
-It doesn't matter if the object is moving or is ten times heavier than the user, it will still explode.
-Low Cool Down
Weaknesses:
-The spell does no damage.
-The user has to use both hands to cast this spell.
-The spell doesn't work with magical objects.
-The spell doesn't work with leaving things, not even plants.
- C Rank Spells:
- Black Sword:
Rank: C
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Duration: 4 Posts.
Cooldown: 7 Posts.
Description: By pointing with his five fingers at any place, object or person. The user creates a sword out from his hand able to destroy any physical object. The sword reaches a 5 meters length and it goes out from the user's arm, starting from the elbow.
If the sword strikes a person while being created, that person will receive C rank damage form the sword.
The sword won't deal any extra damage, it will only give the user the ability to cut any physical object and attack from a longer range.
The sword won't be able to cut spells, only D rank spells. It won't be able to destroy magical objects and items, but it can't be destroyed by any spell. If it disappears because of any reason (Someone sealed the user's arm, someone ate the sword) then the sword will appear in the user's arm again if it's possible.
Strengths:
-The is able to cut any physical object.
-The sword will give the user a big range to attack the opponent.
-The sword will deal damage if it's created at the right moment and the right place.
Weaknesses:
-The sword won't affect magical objects.
-The sword won't give the user any extra damage, he will do the same damage than always.
-Being the sword made out of darkness. It can be eaten by any shadow demon or god slayer. The sword will appear again but it will anyway give the slayer their respective buffs at the moment he eats it.
-The sword can't block spells, only D rank spells.
- Spacial Stream... Explosion:
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 4 Posts.
Description: The user doesn't need to move to use this spell. A magic symbol shines on Marik's eye. Black and purple thunders appear around him growing and exploding. Creating a massive explosion that will push away any C rank mage or lower ten meter away from the explosion. The spell reaches a 15 meters radius around the user in a shape of a sphere. The explosion will also deal C rank damage to any mage hit by it.
Any physical object touching the explosion will disappear. If the explosion crashed with only one part of a building, then only that part of the building will explode, the other one will stay there, even if it has no support.Strengths:
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-The explosion will push away enemies.
-The explosion will destroy any physical object except for magical items.
-The explosion will burn any C rank or lower spell, making the spell work as a defensive an offensive spell.
Weaknesses:
-The explosion won't destroy living things or magical object.
-The explosion will only push C rank mages out of the sphere.
-The explosion will damage friends and foes as well.
-The user can't use any other spell the same post he uses this one.
- Barrier:
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 4 Posts.
Description: The user doesn't need to move to use this spell. Marik's eye starts to glow, then the space in front of the user explodes. Any object moving against him will explode with it and disappear. This will only work with C rank spells or D rank spells.
This deals no damage to people but it will anyway push them back. It won't destroy magical objects, it will only damage them.
The explosion reaches a 4 meters radius and will destroy any physical object, even if it only touches on part of the object. Example.
If the explosion touches the leg of a table only, the the whole table will break.
Strengths:
-This will protect the user from any other spell.
-The user doesn't need to move to use this spell.
-The user can decide where to create the explosion in a distance of 5 meters straight.
Weaknesses:
-The explosion won't push B rank or higher mages.
-The explosion won't destroy magical objects.
-The explosion won't damage living things.
-This will only protect the user, no other people.
- B Rank Spells:
- Spatial Stream... Annihilation:
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Description: Marik creates a magic circle under the enemy without moving a finger, it just appears. When the magic circle is created anyone standing in the circle will lose his abilities to move or do anything, he won't feel his body during the spell. The grounds starts to shake and after the user says the words "Kūkan sutorīmu" another big circle appears ten meters above the enemy, and the seal in the user's eye will shine. A big black stream will appear out from the circle above dealing B-Rank damage to the enemy, it also destroys any other non-living thing between the circles (This doesn't affect Magic weapons and Armors). The circle reaches a 10 meters radius. anyone inside the circle will be affected by the spell. The circle can't be created under the user and it can't have contact with the user or it will be canceled.
The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell, he can't use any other offensive spell the same post he uses this spell.
Strengths:
-The user doesn't need to do any hand move to create the circles, he can just create it if he wants to.
-The enemy will not be able to move while standing in the circle. (This will only affect B or lower ranked mages)
-It also destroys any non living thing between the two circles.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 5 posts.
- Any A-Rank or above mage will not be affected by the losing powers effect.
- The user can be interrupted at the middle of the spell canceling the spell.
- The circle will affect the caster's partners too, if they are in the circle they will be hit by the spell.
- The caster can't use any other Damaging spells the same post he uses this spell. So if the spell does damage in any way he can't use it. Also if the user casts a damaging spell before this one he won't be able can't cast this one in the same post.
- The caster has to see the target to attack with this spell. This would equal Repture's limits.
- Spacial Stream... Reflection:
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Description: The user places his hand in front of a spell thrown by the enemy, then the spell stops and a magic cylinder appears in the user's hand. A black stream will be shoot out from the hand destroying the spell and attacking the enemy, dealing B-Rank damage. The stream will reach a 10 meters per second speed and a 20 meters straight distance.
Any non-living object attacked by the stream will be completely destroyed, leaving nothing, not even dust. The space used for that object will be deleted from the universe.
Strengths:
-Any object hit by the ray will be destroyed, except for magical objects, magical objects will receive C-Rank damage. (Any weapon or item at Strong level or higher can't be destroyed by this spell)
-The spell works as a defensive and offensive spell.
-Low cool-down Not really happy with this as a strength or weakness. Please think of something else.
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-Down: 4 posts.
-It doesn't work with physical spells.
-The spell can only be activated if there is a spell to destroy.
-The ray will damage friends as well.
-The spell only works with B or lower rank spells.
-The ray will not destroy magical weapons, they will receive B-Rank damage only.
- Black Spot:
Name: Black Spot
Rank: B
Type: Supportive/Offensive
Description: Marik punches the air creating cracks in the air, then the cracks will break and a big circle around the user will be destroyed. The destroyed zone reaches a 10 meter radius. The circle will cause a big pain in any person around the place except the caster when its created, dealing B-Rank damage. Then the space will be completely black, anyone inside there will see nothing, and in the outside the people will see a black sphere, nothing else. The user's seal will start glowing, giving him power to see people inside the sphere, watching only a red shade of them.
Strengths:
-It can attack more than one person.
-The user will be the only one able to see any other person, gaining a big advantage while using this spell.
-The user can make the sphere explode when ever he wants to.
Weaknesses: Duration: 4 posts. Coold-Down 8 posts.
-It will damage your partners and pets too.
-Your partners and pets will lose the vision as well.
-It doesn't affect blind persons because they can still hear you.
-Any A or higher ranked mage will be able to feel the user, they will see him as a red shade.
- Signature Spells:
- Bang Bang Annihilation :
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Description: The user points at any object with his index finger, then, a magic circle appears at the point of his finger, and a dark ray goes out from it at a 10 meters per second speed and will reach a 20 meters straight distance. It will deal B-rank damage to any object it hits, working as a special bullet that will make anyone feel a lot of pain and will leave a black dot in the target's body after hitting it. It will destroy any physical object, including clothes. (This won't affect magic objects)
Strengths:
-The Ray will destroy any non physical object. As long as they aren't above B rank. As this makes it seem like you can destroy any spell
-It will deal B rank damage to any weapon too.
-The beam is fast enough to double the speed of a bullet. This is not accurate. You've said it is 10 meters per second. Thats a lot less than double the speed of a bullet
Weaknesses: Instant. Cool-down: 3 posts.
- It won't be able to destroy magical objects, they will receive B rank damage as well, but won't be destroy.
- The ray will affect anyone who touches, that means that the user is able to damage his partners and friends..
- The ray can be stopped by putting a weapon in front of it, damaging the weapon but stopping the ray.
- The beam can only hit one target, it will disappear after hitting any object, this includes walls.
Sorry about the wait. Slipped my mind.
Made comments on the B ranks. Fix those and then i'll double the others
Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
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Character Sheet
First Skill: Arc of Dreams
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Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5
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First Skill: Ten No Kichi
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This looks ok approved
Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
