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    Route du royaume

    popcutefrenzy
    popcutefrenzy

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    Age : 24
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Zodiac Charm Magic
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    Completed Route du royaume

    Post by popcutefrenzy Fri 9 Dec - 4:40

    Name:  Route du royaume
    Rank:  Legendary
    Type: Ribbon Stick
    Description:
     Route du royaume Mininastro_con_bacchetta_portachiavi_fuxia_imagelarge
    Strengths:
    *Its easy to use as the weapon is versatile.
    *Its used to distract its opponent.
    *Its ability is strong when utilize properly.
    Weaknesses:
    *Its not strong in terms being a damaging weapon.
    *It relies on its abilities.
    *Its use is conditional.
    *Proper accuracy is needed when used.
    Abilities:

    Ability:

    Ability 2:


    Last edited by popcutefrenzy on Sat 10 Dec - 19:13; edited 3 times in total
    Raiza
    Raiza

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    Completed Re: Route du royaume

    Post by Raiza Fri 9 Dec - 6:07

    Nice app, only a few concerns, my comments are in this color

    popcutefrenzy wrote:
    Name:  Route du royaume
    Rank:  Legendary
    Type: Ribbon Stick
    Description:
     Route du royaume Mininastro_con_bacchetta_portachiavi_fuxia_imagelarge
    Strengths:
    *Its easy to use as the weapon is versatile.
    *Its used to distract its opponent.
    *Its ability is strong when utilize properly.
    Weaknesses:
    *Its not strong in terms being a damaging weapon.
    *It relies on its abilities.
    *Its use is conditional.
    *Proper accuracy is needed when used.
    Abilities:

    Ability:

    Ability 2:


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     Route du royaume YdfXSKP
    Raiza
    Raiza

    The Red Player


    The Red Player

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Coming Storms- Dark Guild Ace- A-Rank- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Descendant of the First Reaper
    Position : Sinner #5: Wrath
    Posts : 1116
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225,322.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: The Reckoning
    Second Skill: Death's Game
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Route du royaume

    Post by Raiza Sat 10 Dec - 4:14

    ]Name: Snare
    Rank: D
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 post
    Description:
    The weapon once resized, it's other other ability is unlocked. The ribbon will gather magic energy from its user as it follows its target until it gets wrap around it with a speed of 20 mph (increases by 5 on each rank)
    Strengths:
    *Can be used to trap its target.
    *Can be used to hold on a target to stay in place.
    Please mention this can be broken out of by higher ranks.
    Weaknesses:
    *It doesn't work when the other ability is not active.
    *It relies on its length.
    *Can be stopped with a counter attack.

    I apologize for not catching this last time.


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    Raiza
    Raiza

    The Red Player


    The Red Player

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Coming Storms- Dark Guild Ace- A-Rank- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Descendant of the First Reaper
    Position : Sinner #5: Wrath
    Posts : 1116
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225,322.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: The Reckoning
    Second Skill: Death's Game
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Route du royaume

    Post by Raiza Sat 10 Dec - 19:24


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