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    Kindred

    LibertyGear
    LibertyGear

    Player 
    Lineage : Wraith of Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 175
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 7,812

    Character Sheet
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    Second Magic:
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    Kindred Empty Kindred

    Post by LibertyGear 11th January 2020, 7:24 pm

    Kindred GWWwsSC

    Name: Kindred
    Rank: Legendary(+)
    Species: Twilight Twin Spirit
    Type: Combat pet (Bond Pet)
    Proof of Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14656p325-the-pet-shop#390917
    Description: Kindred is the embodiement of the energies clashing within the human vessel of Wraith of Spirit, a soul split but never apart. Although 'they' exist in the physical realm, 'they' are drawn towards the vessel, for it is part of 'them'. Kindred's is a twin spirit born with two bodies and two minds. The one that named herself Lamb is calm, calculative and emotionless. The other that named himself Wolf, is agressive, impulsive and easy to enrage.
    Pic and Quotes:


    ====>Still Pic<====
    Abilities:

    Never one... Without the other:
    Rank: B+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Self
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Despite having two separate bodies, Kindred is a single entity, as such both bodies share the same health pool. Kindred has 40% spell damage reduction and 40% Physical damage reduction and recovers 5% HP every post.

    Everywhere Lamb goes... Wolf is sure to follow.:
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Range: User rank Burst Range (Up to A)
    Speed: User rank Burst Speed (Up to A)
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Lamb uses bow and arrows as 'her' main means of attack, as such 'her' melee attacks have burst range and speed. With Lamb being the core, Wolf can move away, in any direction, up to Burst range to attack enemies in melee with his fangs. Kindred has +X% Speed (X= User rank passive buff up to A).


    Last edited by LibertyGear on 19th January 2020, 8:44 am; edited 3 times in total


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6972
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Kindred Empty Re: Kindred

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 19th January 2020, 3:48 am

    Hey there, I'm here to grade this for you, all edits are in this colour. Bump when the recommended changes have been made.

    Spoiler:

    @LibertyGear wrote:
    Kindred HAnJ1gJ

    Name: Kindred
    Rank: Legendary(+)
    Species: Twilight Spirit
    Type: Combat pet (Bond Pet)
    Proof of Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14656p325-the-pet-shop#390917
    Description: Kindred is the embodiement of the energies clashing within the human vessel of Wraith of Spirit, a soul split but never apart. Although 'they' exist in the physical realm, 'they' are drawn towards the vessel, for it is part of 'them'. Kindred's is a twin spirit born with two bodies and two minds. The one that named herself Lamb is calm, calculative and emotionless. The other that named himself Wolf, is agressive, impulsive and easy to enrage.
    Pic and Quotes:


    ====>Still Pic<====
    Abilities:

    Never one... Without the other:
    Rank: B+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Self
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Despite having two separate bodies, Kindred is a single entity, as such both bodies share the same health pool, but gets +80% HP. Kindred has 40% spell damage reduction and 40% Physical damage reduction. Edit:: As per the rules state : 'Advanced health buffs on items and other equipment can be up to 50% stronger than those not of advanced rank, meaning HP increases can be up to 37% for D+ - B+ ranks and up to 45% per ability for A+ and S+.' and 'In an ability where HP is buffed, nothing else may be buffed along with it. '  This is both too high and has other buffs (the damage reductions), please rework this.

    Everywhere Lamb goes... Wolf is sure to follow.:
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Range: User rank Burst Range (Up to A)
    Speed: User rank Burst Speed (Up to A)
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Lamb uses bow and arrows as 'her' main means of attack, as such 'her' melee attacks have burst range and speed. With Lamb being the core, Wolf can move away, in any direction, up to Burst range to attack enemies with his fangs. Kindred has +X% Speed (X= User rank passive buff up to A).


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    Kindred 60582_s

    LibertyGear
    LibertyGear

    Player 
    Lineage : Wraith of Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 175
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 7,812

    Character Sheet
    First Magic:
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Kindred Empty Re: Kindred

    Post by LibertyGear 19th January 2020, 5:41 am

    changed hp buff to speed


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6972
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Kindred Empty Re: Kindred

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 19th January 2020, 6:43 am

    Another edit, bump when done.

    Spoiler:

    @LibertyGear wrote:
    Kindred HAnJ1gJ

    Name: Kindred
    Rank: Legendary(+)
    Species: Twilight Spirit
    Type: Combat pet (Bond Pet)
    Proof of Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14656p325-the-pet-shop#390917
    Description: Kindred is the embodiement of the energies clashing within the human vessel of Wraith of Spirit, a soul split but never apart. Although 'they' exist in the physical realm, 'they' are drawn towards the vessel, for it is part of 'them'. Kindred's is a twin spirit born with two bodies and two minds. The one that named herself Lamb is calm, calculative and emotionless. The other that named himself Wolf, is agressive, impulsive and easy to enrage.
    Pic and Quotes:


    ====>Still Pic<====
    Abilities:

    Never one... Without the other:
    Rank: B+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Self
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Despite having two separate bodies, Kindred is a single entity, as such both bodies share the same health pool, and gets +80% Speed. Kindred has 40% spell damage reduction and 40% Physical damage reduction. Edit:: Probably should have made this clearer with my last edit, these both fall under the category of a buff effect meaning this is far too high, please lower these numbers so they equate to 90% as a whole. Here you have 160% which is double what you're permitted.

    Everywhere Lamb goes... Wolf is sure to follow.:
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Range: User rank Burst Range (Up to A)
    Speed: User rank Burst Speed (Up to A)
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Lamb uses bow and arrows as 'her' main means of attack, as such 'her' melee attacks have burst range and speed. With Lamb being the core, Wolf can move away, in any direction, up to Burst range to attack enemies with his fangs. Kindred has +X% Speed (X= User rank passive buff up to A).


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    Kindred 60582_s

    LibertyGear
    LibertyGear

    Player 
    Lineage : Wraith of Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 175
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 7,812

    Character Sheet
    First Magic:
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Kindred Empty Re: Kindred

    Post by LibertyGear 19th January 2020, 8:44 am

    changed to have hp regen instead


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6972
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Kindred Empty Re: Kindred

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 19th January 2020, 9:57 am

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    Spoiler:
    @LibertyGear wrote:
    Kindred GWWwsSC

    Name: Kindred
    Rank: Legendary(+)
    Species: Twilight Twin Spirit
    Type: Combat pet (Bond Pet)
    Proof of Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14656p325-the-pet-shop#390917
    Description: Kindred is the embodiement of the energies clashing within the human vessel of Wraith of Spirit, a soul split but never apart. Although 'they' exist in the physical realm, 'they' are drawn towards the vessel, for it is part of 'them'. Kindred's is a twin spirit born with two bodies and two minds. The one that named herself Lamb is calm, calculative and emotionless. The other that named himself Wolf, is agressive, impulsive and easy to enrage.
    Pic and Quotes:


    ====>Still Pic<====
    Abilities:

    Never one... Without the other:
    Rank: B+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Self
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Despite having two separate bodies, Kindred is a single entity, as such both bodies share the same health pool. Kindred has 40% spell damage reduction and 40% Physical damage reduction and recovers 5% HP every post.

    Everywhere Lamb goes... Wolf is sure to follow.:
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Range: User rank Burst Range (Up to A)
    Speed: User rank Burst Speed (Up to A)
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Lamb uses bow and arrows as 'her' main means of attack, as such 'her' melee attacks have burst range and speed. With Lamb being the core, Wolf can move away, in any direction, up to Burst range to attack enemies in melee with his fangs. Kindred has +X% Speed (X= User rank passive buff up to A).


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    Kindred 60582_s


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