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    Ancient Curse

    Grim Reaper
    Grim Reaper

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    Lineage : Ancient Curse
    Position : None
    Posts : 204
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 14,967

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Defense magic
    Second Magic: Offense magic
    Third Magic: Locked

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    Post by Grim Reaper 23rd July 2019, 9:04 am

    Lineage Name: Ancient Curse
    Wielder: Grim Reaper
    Purchase Proof: WIP

    Description
    What would you do to save your people? For one queen she was willing to make a deal with death itself, Sadly the deal turned out to be a curse. This agreement granted the queen the power to protect her people, but twisted her heart and soul to ultimately bring about the ruin of her own kingdom. But the curse did not end there, damning the soul to an seemingly eternal nightmare of their sins that only grew with the passage of time. Driven mad by her own actions, twisted far beyond what was once a pure queen who wanted nothing but to see her people smile.

    Now A vessel of death, a conquer and taker of freedom. A monster hidden in the shell of a human vessel with nothing but time to try and satisfy the emptiness within them left behind by the cruse. Desire for what they can not gain, and no mercy to take it by force or twisted means like spreading a weaker version of the curse to another to have them for eternity.
    Abilities:
    Immortal Greed: Grants a passive additional +100% jewels on job completion.

    Destructive curse: Grants a passive +440% magic damage. (Gaining +40% at S rank.)


    Last edited by Grim Reaper on 14th October 2019, 2:01 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    "Time this world saw what a REAL monster was..."
    Charater | Magic 1 | Magic 2 | Magic 3 | Trackers | Linage
    3.5 of 6 Exp Doublers remaining
    2 of 2 Extra Exp Doublers remaining.
    In progress missions: 1,2,3|4|5|6
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 45
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 31st July 2019, 7:35 am

    Hey Grim, Nessa here, I'll be grading this Lineage for you. All my edits will be in this colour! Bump when you've made the edits and I'll take a look.

    Spoiler:

    @Grim Reaper wrote:Lineage Name: Ancient Curse
    Wielder: Grim Reaper
    Purchase Proof: WIP

    Description
    What would you do to save your people? For one queen she was willing to make a deal with death itself, Sadly the deal turned out to be a curse. This agreement granted the queen the power to protect her people, but twisted her heart and soul to ultimately bring about the ruin of her own kingdom. But the curse did not end there, damning the soul to an seemingly eternal nightmare of their sins that only grew with the passage of time. Driven mad by her own actions, twisted far beyond what was once a pure queen who wanted nothing but to see her people smile.

    Now A vessel of death, a conquer and taker of freedom. A monster hidden in the shell of a human vessel with nothing but time to try and satisfy the emptiness within them left behind by the cruse. Desire for what they can not gain, and no mercy to take it by force or twisted means like spreading a weaker version of the curse to another to have them for eternity.
    Abilities:
    Immortal Greed: Grants a passive choice to either gain +100% Jewels on completion of job for self, OR split this with one other member of the job gaining +50% jewels on completion to both holder of linage and other chosen. (Passive)

    Timeless experience: Those that are often the mentee of this cursed soul are given the curse also. This effect is shown in one of two ways. The most common is that when only the mentor and mentee finish a job gain +50% exp each on top of the mentor/mentee bonus. The second is that by the mentor forfeiting their own +50% can give the Mentee a +100% exp bonus. (Passive) Edit:: As a rule, EXP increasing abilities are not allowed in Player-Made Custom Lineages. Please remove this or change it to a different effect.

    Eternal suffering: So long with the curse, and some time spent fighting against it has given the user two lessons. The first is that she can not escape it, and the second is that she can spread it to others at equal or varying amounts. This knowledge gives a single mind alteration based spell (Max S-rank) That requires OOC permission to be used, and is in addition to any other spells they gain.


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    Grim Reaper
    Grim Reaper

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Job Creator- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Character Application Approved!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Ancient Curse
    Position : None
    Posts : 204
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 14,967

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Defense magic
    Second Magic: Offense magic
    Third Magic: Locked

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    Post by Grim Reaper 11th October 2019, 10:40 am

    Changed the linage up, all set now after such a delay sorry.~


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    "Time this world saw what a REAL monster was..."
    Charater | Magic 1 | Magic 2 | Magic 3 | Trackers | Linage
    3.5 of 6 Exp Doublers remaining
    2 of 2 Extra Exp Doublers remaining.
    In progress missions: 1,2,3|4|5|6
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 45
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th October 2019, 12:17 pm

    Same again, edits in pink, bump when ready.

    Spoiler:

    @Grim Reaper wrote:Lineage Name: Ancient Curse
    Wielder: Grim Reaper
    Purchase Proof: WIP

    Description
    What would you do to save your people? For one queen she was willing to make a deal with death itself, Sadly the deal turned out to be a curse. This agreement granted the queen the power to protect her people, but twisted her heart and soul to ultimately bring about the ruin of her own kingdom. But the curse did not end there, damning the soul to an seemingly eternal nightmare of their sins that only grew with the passage of time. Driven mad by her own actions, twisted far beyond what was once a pure queen who wanted nothing but to see her people smile.

    Now A vessel of death, a conquer and taker of freedom. A monster hidden in the shell of a human vessel with nothing but time to try and satisfy the emptiness within them left behind by the cruse. Desire for what they can not gain, and no mercy to take it by force or twisted means like spreading a weaker version of the curse to another to have them for eternity.
    Abilities:
    Immortal Greed: Grants a passive additional +110% jewels on job completion. (+10% per rank up to S-rank) Edit:: Jewel rewards do not adhere to the buff rules, for a start they don't rank up, they are generally a flat percentage that caps at 100%. Please amend this.

    Destructive curse: Grants a passive +440% magic damage. (+40% per rank up to S rank.) Edit:: Whilst this is within the rules, I'm going to ask you to make this increase per rank a little clearer, as this could potentially be misinterpreted as 440% + 40% per rank up to S. As opposed to just +40% Magic damage buff increase per rank capping at a max increase of 440% via this lineage ability.



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    Ancient Curse 60582_s

    Grim Reaper
    Grim Reaper

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Job Creator- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Character Application Approved!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Ancient Curse
    Position : None
    Posts : 204
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 14,967

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Defense magic
    Second Magic: Offense magic
    Third Magic: Locked

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    Post by Grim Reaper 14th October 2019, 2:02 pm

    fixed the edits needed.~


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    "Time this world saw what a REAL monster was..."
    Charater | Magic 1 | Magic 2 | Magic 3 | Trackers | Linage
    3.5 of 6 Exp Doublers remaining
    2 of 2 Extra Exp Doublers remaining.
    In progress missions: 1,2,3|4|5|6
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 45
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 14th October 2019, 2:04 pm


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    Spoiler:
    @Grim Reaper wrote:Lineage Name: Ancient Curse
    Wielder: Grim Reaper
    Purchase Proof: WIP

    Description
    What would you do to save your people? For one queen she was willing to make a deal with death itself, Sadly the deal turned out to be a curse. This agreement granted the queen the power to protect her people, but twisted her heart and soul to ultimately bring about the ruin of her own kingdom. But the curse did not end there, damning the soul to an seemingly eternal nightmare of their sins that only grew with the passage of time. Driven mad by her own actions, twisted far beyond what was once a pure queen who wanted nothing but to see her people smile.

    Now A vessel of death, a conquer and taker of freedom. A monster hidden in the shell of a human vessel with nothing but time to try and satisfy the emptiness within them left behind by the cruse. Desire for what they can not gain, and no mercy to take it by force or twisted means like spreading a weaker version of the curse to another to have them for eternity.
    Abilities:
    Immortal Greed: Grants a passive additional +100% jewels on job completion.

    Destructive curse: Grants a passive +440% magic damage. (Gaining +40% at S rank.)


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    Ancient Curse 60582_s


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