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    Black Art - Black Soul

    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 21
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Black Magic
    Second Magic: Unavailable
    Third Magic: Unavailable

    Completed Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by Zeref Kage on 20th May 2019, 9:13 pm



    Black Art - Black Soul Coolte12

    (Will train as 2nd Magic after approved)
    Magic Type:
    Takeover
    Description:
    When magic first arose there was a such thing as Black Arts Magic, though there are various different types of magic beneath this overall category. One of the magics under the Black Arts category is Black Soul, a Takeover magic that has found its way to survive the various years of its existence. It is said that the magic is only obtainable when one spends their life trying to unravel the importance and value of light and dark magics along with the measure of others lives. Which in the case of Zeref is how he was able to obtain the Black Soul due to his split personality caused by his inner darkness. The split allows Zeref to see both sides of light and dark in people and various magics, with this knowledge he was able to release the Black Soul from with in his very being.
    Unique Abilities:


    Black Art - Black Soul Coolte11
    (Didn't factor in Solitary Benefit: +30% to HP and MP.)

    C-Rank Spells:

    Name: Darkness Arm Takeover
    Rank: C-Rank
    Type: Partial Takeover
    Melee Damage: Statless
    Range: Statless
    Speed: Statless
    Duration: 5 Posts
    Downside: N/a
    Description: The spell is conjured by Zeref's release of magic after stating "Darkness Release" allowing the takeover to initiate. When the spell is activated it transforms Zeref's right arm into a hardened black form, which is then encased in physical darkness that appears to rise from his arm itself.
    Buff:
    - Buffed 30% Melee Damage
    - Buffed 25% Magical Damage

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    Name: Darkness Leg Takeover
    Rank: C-Rank
    Type: Partial Takeover
    Melee Damage: Statless
    Range: Statless
    Speed: Statless
    Duration: 5 Posts
    Downside: N/a
    Description: The spell is conjured by Zeref's release of magic after stating "Darkness Release" allowing the takeover to initiate. When the spell is activated it transforms Zeref's legs into a hardened black form, which is then encased in physical darkness that appears to create a lower kimono of darkness that flickers like a flame.
    Buff:
    - Buffed 55% Speed

    +C-Rank Spells:
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    Name: Darkness Full Takeover
    Rank: +C-Rank
    Type: Full Takeover
    Melee Damage: +90 HP Buff to Attacks
    Range: Self
    Speed: +180 Meters Per Second to Movement
    Duration: 6 Posts
    Downside: Consumes 45 MP
    Description: Zeref is engulfed in complete darkness looking as though he has been completely consumed, then it disperses leaving behind a completely new Takeover form of Zeref. (Pictured Above)
    Abilities: The abilities this Takeover spell has.

    Signature Spell:

    Name: Darkness Slash
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60HP
    Range: 120 Meters
    Speed: 120 Meters a Second
    Duration: 5 Posts
    Downside: Consumes 30 MP
    Description: The users arm is covered in darkness, then it can be used in one of two ways. Either direct contact from a slashing strike or Zeref can slash sending a crescent shaped wave at the target.

    Ability 1:

    Name: Darkness Enhancement
    Type: Buff/Passive
    Description: Increases melee damage output by 55%

    Ability 2:

    Name: Darkness Enhancement
    Type: Buff/Passive
    Description: Increases speed output by 55%

    Buff: Increases Spell Damage 85%


    Last edited by Zeref Kage on 25th May 2019, 4:58 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by ivyleaf33 on 23rd May 2019, 6:59 am

    Hey Zeref! I'm Ivy, and I'll be grading your magic. First of all, I'd like to recommend that you give the Takeover magic rules another lookover, as it doesn't seem like you quite understand how the magic operates.

    Takeovers consist of Partial and Full Takeover spells, and while you've got a Full Takeover, these spells must be comprised of at least two Partials. Since you have no Partial Takeovers, you cannot have a Full Takeover. At this stage, you may have 3 D rank spells, a D+ rank spell, and 3 C rank spells in addition to your current 1 C+ rank spell (you can have a Unique Ability too!).

    As a result, I'd like you to edit your magic to ensure it falls within Takeover rules before I start doing more specific grading. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions ^^.


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    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 21
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Black Magic
    Second Magic: Unavailable
    Third Magic: Unavailable

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by Zeref Kage on 25th May 2019, 5:00 pm

    Okay I did some math and editing based on my current magic and rank and made the following edits:


    • Added C-Rank Spells:


      • Darkness Arm Takeover
      • Darkness Leg Takeover


    • A few description edits to the Full Takeover


    Finished editing and ready for a further evaluation


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    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 21
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Black Magic
    Second Magic: Unavailable
    Third Magic: Unavailable

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by Zeref Kage on 29th May 2019, 4:06 pm

    Little Bump Here


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    ivyleaf33
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    Character Sheet
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    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by ivyleaf33 on 29th May 2019, 8:07 pm

    Alrighty, there's still quite a bit here that doesn't fall into magic rules.

    1. Your signature spell should be a partial or full takeover, not an ability in a takeover.
    2. Statless spells may not have ANY stats at all. That means the buffs in your two C rank spells should be removed and changed to more general wording, such as "increases the power of his attack" instead of a specific percentage.
    3. Like I said before, this magic can have 6 normal spells of either D or C rank, and two advanced spells of either D+ or C+ rank. Each magic you possess functions on its own, which means you don't count the spell slots you have in your other magics (unless you bought spell slots, which have to be distributed among your magic).
    4. Finally, your full takeover should include which partials go into it. If your Darkness full takeover is made up of your Darkness Arm and Leg partials, please specify that in its description.

    Please feel free to DM me on Discord of any of this is confusing ^^.


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    Black Art - Black Soul OdNtuIpd_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | no longer human | bank | history
    what the hell's going on, can someone tell me please? why i'm switching faster than the channels on tv?


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    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Soul

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux on 4th June 2019, 8:09 am


    Hey Zeref, Just wanted to note that I'll be taking over this grading. If you have any questions, please feel free to DM/PM me, otherwise, once you've made the recommended edits that Ivy suggested, bump the thread and I'll take a look.


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