Pegasus The World's Cuisine 'cooking magic'

Primary Magic: The World’s Cuisine
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user has a selection of different spells that he uses on the enemy. It mostly has a connection to ingredients, spices or cooking an actual dish. One of the major strength of this magic is, is that it can use different the elements that are used during cooking. Because he uses cooking as a magic most of the spells have a preparation post, before using it as an attack.

Strengths:
- Several elements can be used for spells. Like fire, water or ice as long as it has a connection to cooking.
- The spells are associated with different elements based on the dish, for instance for soup you use hot water.
- Spices can be used for different effects to stun the enemy or other effect that makes them unable to fight.
Weaknesses:
- When using cooking spells with different effects, they can be negated by using a spell that would have the opposite effect on cooking. Like when using for instance boiling lobster spell, the boiling effect could be negated by cold water.
- All the spells using an elemental effect have to be bound to cooking or a dish in some sort of way.
- Spell that actual cook will need a preparation post for preparing the dish.



Name: Spice Nostalgia
Rank: D
Type: Spice
Description: The user uses different spices to incapacitate his opponent in different ways. He can combine up to two spices to knock out several senses like seeing, tasting or smelling. The spices are being shot at the enemy from under the users sleeve and it comes in a power form or tiny bits from the spice. The power will hang like a cloud in the opponents face when the user actives the spell by pointing his arm ath the opponent and snipping his fingers and says the name of the spices he wants use.

Spices:
Chili: Hot – A could of Chili Powder appears around the opponents head. Making so that his eyes start to irritate and can’t see anymore for the duration of 1 post
Ginger: Bitter – A cloud of powdered ginger appears from out the users sleeve and is being aimed at his opponent. The great bitter taste of ginger will mate the enemy disoriented for the duration of 1 post.
Oregano: Strong, aromatic – Little oregano bits are launched in the opponents face from the users sleeve. Giving off such a strong aromatic scent that you can’t smell anything anymore and losing your accuracy for the next attack.

Duration: 1 – 2 posts for each spice
Cool down: 3 posts for the entire spell

Strengths:
- Different Spices that each has an other effect.
- The spices can be combined to have some greater effect on the opponent.
- It creates an opening on your opponent to attack them.
- Short cool down
Weaknesses:
- Can only be used on a single opponents. So it’s useless in groups.
- Wind spells can be used to dispatch powder clouds. To make a quicker recovery
- Water spells can be used to clear your mouth. To make a quicker recovery.
- It is a close range spell. So the user have to be at least 2/3 meters close to the enemy for his spices to have any effect.
- The spell is rank limited, and only affects the D and C ranks. It can also affect B ranks but has a much weaker effect on them.


Name: Pepper Bomb
Rank: D
Type: Spice
Description: The user creates a pentacle under his opponent and with that exploits the enemy’s taste buds by increasing their senses in a great amount. Then he mixes several white, black and green pepper powders together in his hat. He then launches it at his opponent like a giant cloud. The pepper cloud gets the opponents mouth and nose. Giving it such a shock of the intensified taste of the peppers that he gets immobilized. It’s like there is some sort of shock that comes from your tongue through the entire nerve system of the body
Because of the preparation the user can hold the pepper powder in his head for the duration of 1 extra post to get closer to the enemy or evade attack. However if the user has the pepper in his hat for more then 2 posts the spell is deactivated.

Duration: 3 posts (1 post for the preparation and 1 for the attack and 1 post for being capacitated if it hits.
Cool down: 5 posts

Strengths:
- Opponents are immobilized.
- Gives you time to prepare your next attack.
- You can’t be attacked by them during the duration
- It damages the nerve system
Weaknesses:
- long cool down in consideration with its duration
- can only be used on one opponent at the time.
- It is a close range spell. So the user have to be at least 4/5 meters close to the enemy for his spices to have any effect.
- Can be countered during the preparation
- The spell is rank limited, and only affects the D and C ranks. It can also affect B ranks but has a much weaker effect on them.




Name: Curry Extravaganza
Rank: D
Type: Dish, fire/hot
Description: The user create a pentacle above his own head from which he summons several ingredients for the Curry dish. That then drop into his hat. In that hat he will use magic to cook the dish up till it’s ready and then launches it as an attack. The attack will originate from his hat like a spouting burst that spouts with significance force in a twirl at the enemy, blasting him away by the impact. It has a 10 meter range.

Duration: 2 posts (1 post preparing, 1 post attack)
Cool down: 3 posts

Strengths:
- Does quite of lot damage because of the impact and force.
- Short cool down.
- The attack is fast
- Because of the spout is twirling towards the enemy it's hard to counter the attack.
Weaknesses:
- It is a physical attack so shield spells work well against them.
- Spells with a equal force like a blast of water that spouts against it works well.
- Can be countered during the preparation
- Can't spout further then it's 10 meter range
- Has a preparation post
- Does less damage to B ranks and higher

Name: Bitter Flavored Miso Soup
Rank: D
Type: Dish, Water
Description: The user summons a cooking pot in front of him with a pentacle above from which several ingredients and water fall down in the pot. He then puts the lid on the pan and start heating the water. Till it starts boiling and creating the Bitter Flavored Miso Soup. He then keeps the lid on the pot creating a lot of pressure. By aiming it at the enemy and releasing the lid from the pot. A powerful spout attack will occur and shoot down at the enemy. Dealing him damage and because of the hot water also 2nd degree burns him. Because the Miso Soup is heavily bitter flavored it is unable to be eaten by slayers of the water element.

Duration: 2 posts (1 post preparing and 1 post for attack)
Cooldown: 3 posts
Strengths:
- Can’t be eaten by slayers
- strong spout attack that can knock the enemy back
- it's hot so it deals 2nd degrees burn damage
- Short cool down
Weaknesses:
- Fire mages have a natural resistant against anything that’s hot. So the burn damage doesn’t work on them.
- It is a physical attack so shield spells work well against them.
- It's limited to a 10 meter range.
- Has a preparation post
- Does less damage to B ranks and higher

...creative, i like it. But you are going to need to go into greater detail on the main description...and all of your spells.

Seriously this is a good idea, but entirely confusing if your details are not all present.

thanks ^^

I've put more detail into the spells and description. And added some range limit to some. Only Curry Extravaganza is still a little bit short. Any feedback on that would be awesome

One thing that I do have to say is...over powered...nothing is a launch attack from you at this point. I see a bunch of just instant over the opponents as though you are literally summoning them instead of doing what you said in the first part of your description; that would actually be interesting to see. Granted spices are not needed, just summoning things that automatically are thrown at people is a bit over powered for all of our spells, there needs to be a reaction time. Like if you launched out of your sleeves the spice in a form of cloud that has a particular range for each for max effect, yet even further down can have a decent effect until it is so scattered by wind it's not really phaseable.

Like i said your magic is highly creative, yet it seems as though you are not aiming it properly into the right direction. The only one that seems to be accurately close is Curry Extravaganza which is the only spout form of attack you have, but you do not explain it's range.

Your meatball spell is also odd as well, keeping large meatballs floating in the air would take a large amount of energy for someone of your level for that kind of a duration, it would seem like launching them out of something like your avatar suggests, a large rounded hat or just some place random. Your magic has the ability of throwing people off greatly because it is so unique and out of the ordinary, yet just summoning things will not cut it. You label this as "Cuisine Cooking Magic" Yet you don't really COOK anything now do you? It would be interesting to not only read in RPs that involve your character fighting, but also out of battle scenarios where you just simply decide to make food for those who are hungry using your magic.

It may seem to be a hassle, but actually having a "Preparing time" for each of your spells where you mix the ingredients quickly into some odd place-like again an over-sized hat- and hurl whatever you made at the opponents, or simply launching spice out from openings of your clothes in the form of a fog. You have so much potential for this magic, you just need to put it into the right order and sequence.

Do you think you can edit your magic again and see if these ideas work or not for you? The whole summoning thing onto or inside a person is just...Too overpowered for any mage really to do, there is always a point in time where they have the ability to dodge or not. Your spells are just....undodgeable in terms of God Modding; yet if you make yourself look more outrageous and unpredictable; you might be able to have others who you are with simply get confused as to what you are doing and they might go along even if you get a miss or a dodge in a dice roll.

I've edited the spells, but still have to work on the main description but you were right about the cooking part. I didn't took the cooking aspect of my magic in consideration even tho I was aiming for it as a magic. Anyway thanks for the feedback appreciate it.

I've put cooking. preparations in the spells that are actually dishes to make it look like I'm actually preparing the spell. Also I got rid of the meatball spell it didn't had a lot to do with cooking. But I'm not entirely sure about the new miso soup spell as well

Change the wording of Incapacitate to like...Stuns, immobilizes or something that doesn't sound like you are killing them or removing a limb.

I want you to find at least 4 strengths and weaknesses for each of your spells, if you can 5 would be even better that way there is more detail you can find and we can better understand your magic as we review apps you perform.

bump

You kinda forgot one weakness on the miso soup and copied an existing one already >< I'm an idiot who cannot type real words on your behalf.

Anyway, i will have someone else look at this now for a second opinion.

I'm an idiot who cannot type real words you're right, I hadn't even noticed. But changed it

...You know i do not remember ever stating that second part of the first post....anyway onto find a second opinion.

Pegasus wrote:Primary Magic: The World’s Cuisine
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user has a selection of different spells that he uses on the enemy. It mostly has a connection to ingredients, spices or cooking an actual dish. One of the major strength of this magic is, is that it can use different the elements that are used during cooking. Because he uses cooking as a magic most of the spells have a preparation post, before using it as an attack.

Strengths:
- Several elements can be used for spells. Like fire, water or ice as long as it has a connection to cooking.
- The spells are associated with different elements based on the dish, for instance for soup you use hot water.
- Spices can be used for different effects to stun the enemy or other effect that makes them unable to fight.
Weaknesses:
- When using cooking spells with different effects, they can be negated by using a spell that would have the opposite effect on cooking. Like when using for instance boiling lobster spell, the boiling effect could be negated by cold water.
- All the spells using an elemental effect have to be bound to cooking or a dish in some sort of way.
- Spell that actual cook will need a preparation post for preparing the dish.



Name: Spice Nostalgia
Rank: D
Type: Spice
Description: The user uses different spices to incapacitate his opponent in different ways. He can combine up to two spices to knock out several senses like seeing, tasting or smelling. The spices are being shot at the enemy from under the users sleeve and it comes in a power form or tiny bits from the spice. The power will hang like a cloud in the opponents face when the user actives the spell by pointing his arm ath the opponent and snipping his fingers and says the name of the spices he wants use.

Spices:
Chili: Hot – A could of Chili Powder appears around the opponents head. Making so that his eyes start to irritate and can’t see anymore for the duration of 1 post
Ginger: Bitter – A cloud of powdered ginger appears from out the users sleeve and is being aimed at his opponent. The great bitter taste of ginger will mate the enemy disoriented for the duration of 1 post.
Oregano: Strong, aromatic – Little oregano bits are launched in the opponents face from the users sleeve. Giving off such a strong aromatic scent that you can’t smell anything anymore and losing your accuracy for the next attack.

Duration: 1 – 2 posts for each spice
Cool down: 3 posts for the entire spell

Strengths:
- Different Spices that each has an other effect.
- The spices can be combined to have some greater effect on the opponent.
- It creates an opening on your opponent to attack them.
- Short cool down
Weaknesses:
- Can only be used on a single opponents. So it’s useless in groups.
- Wind spells can be used to dispatch powder clouds. To make a quicker recovery
- Water spells can be used to clear your mouth. To make a quicker recovery.
- It is a close range spell. So the user have to be at least 2/3 meters close to the enemy for his spices to have any effect.



Name: Pepper Bomb
Rank: D
Type: Spice
Description: The user creates a pentacle under his opponent and with that exploits the enemy’s taste buds by increasing their senses in a great amount. Then he mixes several white, black and green pepper powders together in his hat. He then launches it at his opponent like a giant cloud. The pepper cloud gets the opponents mouth and nose. Giving it such a shock of the intensified taste of the peppers that he gets immobilized. It’s like there is some sort of shock that comes from your tongue through the entire nerve system of the body
Because of the preparation the user can hold the pepper powder in his head for the duration of 1 extra post to get closer to the enemy or evade attack. However if the user has the pepper in his hat for more then 2 posts the spell is deactivated.

Duration: 3 posts (1 post for the preparation and 1 for the attack and 1 post for being capacitated if it hits.
Cool down: 5 posts

Strengths:
- Opponents are immobilized.
- Gives you time to prepare your next attack.
- You can’t be attacked by them during the duration
- It damages the nerve system
Weaknesses:
- long cool down in consideration with its duration
- can only be used on one opponent at the time.
- It is a close range spell. So the user have to be at least 4/5 meters close to the enemy for his spices to have any effect.
- Can be countered during the preparation



Name: Curry Extravaganza
Rank: D
Type: Dish, fire/hot
Description: The user create a pentacle above his own head from which he summons several ingredients for the Curry dish. That then drop into his hat. In that hat he will use magic to cook the dish up till it’s ready and then launches it as an attack. The attack will originate from his hat like a spouting burst that spouts with significance force in a twirl at the enemy, blasting him away by the impact. It has a 10 meter range.

Duration: 2 posts (1 post preparing, 1 post attack)
Cool down: 3 posts

Strengths:
- Does quite of lot damage because of the impact and force.
- Short cool down.
- The attack is fast
- Because of the spout is twirling towards the enemy it's hard to counter the attack.
Weaknesses:
- It is a physical attack so shield spells work well against them.
- Spells with a equal force like a blast of water that spouts against it works well.
- Can be countered during the preparation
- Can't spout further then it's 10 meter range
- Has a preparation post


Name: Bitter Flavored Miso Soup
Rank: D
Type: Dish, Water
Description: The user summons a cooking pot in front of him with a pentacle above from which several ingredients and water fall down in the pot. He then puts the lid on the pan and start heating the water. Till it starts boiling and creating the Bitter Flavored Miso Soup. He then keeps the lid on the pot creating a lot of pressure. By aiming it at the enemy and releasing the lid from the pot. A powerful spout attack will occur and shoot down at the enemy. Dealing him damage and because of the hot water also burns him. Because the Miso Soup is heavily bitter flavored it is unable to be eaten by slayers of the water element.

Duration: 2 posts (1 post preparing and 1 post for attack)
Cooldown: 3 posts
Strengths:
- Can’t be eaten by slayers
- strong spout attack that can knock the enemy back
- it's hot so it does burn damage
- Short cool down
Weaknesses:
- Fire mages have a natural resistant against anything that’s hot. So the burn damage doesn’t work on them.
- It is a physical attack so shield spells work well against them.
- It's limited to a 10 meter range.
- Has a preparation post

Apart from a few spelling mistakes here and there I don't see any major issues. However, I would like you to specify how different ranks of users are effected by the spells. As an S rank, for example, should be able to easily resist the influence. I am ok with them affecting C rank, but at a decreased level. You should not be able to affect B rank and above with your first two abilities. Damage should also not be possible to B ranks, except for maybe tiny amounts. Furthemore, please specify the degree of the burns.

You fixed everything I said and i see no further issues at present so approved