Celestial Spirit Magic: God of the Celestial Spirit Realm Form

Key of the Toadstool:

Key of the White Falcon:

Key of the Wise Owl:

Key of the Broken Tooth:

Key of the Venomous Flower:

Key of the Armored Beetle:

Key of the Swift Fox:

Key of the Flying Leaf:

Key of the Light-bringing Flower:

Key of the Tusky Monster:

Key of the FireBomb:

Key of the Scorpion:

Odhran Aegisbane wrote:Magic

Magic Name: Celestial Spirit Magic: God of the Celestial Spirit Realm Form
Magic Type: Summoner: Solitary
Description:
This is a typical kind of Celestial Spirit Magic, with the user bearing keys that grant them otherworldly allies. Due to their keenly focused blood, however, they can summon an additional celestial spirit simultaneously. In addition, the Spirits are closely tied with the user themselves, fiercely guarding their master.

Unique Abilities:

• Ability: Guardian Spirits: While a summon is active, the user gains an additional 50HP, gaining +50 per rank. (Since this is a flat value being added to your HP, this counts as a base increase, which is, under these circumstances, not permitted. I must ask you to change this to a percentage-based buff, or include a severe and impactful drawback to this ability to justify increasing your base HP)
  
• Ability: Hearty Spirits: Summons gain 50HP, adding an additional +50 per rank. {Unlocks at B} (See above)
  
• Ability: Deadly Spirits:  Sumons have 45% better magic damage, increasing by 5% per rank. {Unlocks at S} (Following these calculations, the buff would be 5% too strong for each given rank, as it would be 50% at C, 55% at B and so on. Consequently, I must ask you to lower the value from 45% to 40%)
  

Spells:

Non-Combatant Summons / Statless Summons:

D-Rank Summons:

(You seem to have misunderstood how Unknown Summoning Keys work. Unknown Summoning keys purchased in shops are different from the ones celestial summoners can create within their magics. These keys here count as equipment, and must this be posted in the WIP Pets & Items subforum and registered through the Items and Pets Approval Thread. For more information on Unknown Keys see this section of the Equipment Rules. I must consequently also ask you to remove these keys from this magic)

Unknown Keys:

(You also seem to have misunderstood Zodiac Keys. These must be created using a spell slot. As you already have 4 spell slots within this magic, you do not have anymore spell slots that could be used to create the zodiac key. Consequently, Zodiac Summons and their abilities also do not rank with you, as they have to be assigned to a set spell slot, their abilities following the rank of spell slot that is used to create the Zodiac. Zodiac summons also only get 3 abilities, not 4, as basic summons only get 2 abilities max and Zodiacs get a single extra ability. I must ask you to rework this accordingly)

Golden Key:

Odhran Aegisbane wrote:Magic

Magic Name: Celestial Spirit Magic: God of the Celestial Spirit Realm Form
Magic Type: Summoner: Solitary
Description:
This is a typical kind of Celestial Spirit Magic, with the user bearing keys that grant them otherworldly allies. Due to their keenly focused blood, however, they can summon an additional celestial spirit simultaneously. In addition, the Spirits are closely tied with the user themselves, fiercely guarding their master.

Unique Abilities:

• Ability: Guardian Spirits: While a summon is active, the user gains an additional 40% health boost, gaining +5% per rank (HP increases between D to B rank cap at 25%, and at 30% between A and S rank. HP increases also cannot be active effects, so I must ask you to either make this a passive ability or change the buff to a different stat)
  
• Ability: Hearty Spirits: Summons gain 40% more HP, gaining an additional 5% per rank. {Unlocks at B} (See above)
  
• Ability: Deadly Spirits:  Sumons have 40% better magic damage, increasing by 5% per rank. {Unlocks at S}
  

Spells:

Non-Combatant Summons / Statless Summons:

D-Rank Summons:

C-Rank Spirits: