by Saraphina 20th December 2019, 11:44 pm
Hey Silvia! I'm Saraphina and I'll be your grader today. My edits will be in
this color so keep a look out for it please. If you have any questions, you can dm me or ask in the thread. Once the edits are done, please bump the thread.
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Silvia wrote:Elemental Threads
Magic Type: Caster Solitary Description: Elemental thread magic is a unique elemental caster magic that is able to form the four main elements of the world into magical thread. The user can then weave these elements to form new ones that can be even more destructive than that of the original elements. This isn't all to the magic, though. The magic is also known as another form of Make magic. It can weave together to create devastating attacks with the 4 main elements alone. Unique Abilities: Elemental Spinning Elemental Thread magic allows the user to spin thread out of elemental attacks. What this means, is that she can absorb some of the energy from an enemy's elemental attack, and turn it into a thread for her spells. This absorption gives her a 25% magical resistance against elemental spells. As well as this, the thread she receives allows her to boost up a spell's damage by 25%, as long as it has the same elemental affinity as the thread. Weave Art The art of weaving is a very meticulous one that requires great concentration. For one to use it well, they have to be very precise. Due to this precision, Silvia can amass great amounts of power, giving her a 50% buff to her spell damage.
Silvia wrote:Signature Spells and Passives- Elemental Discharge:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: Multitarget
Damage: 60 hp
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 110 Mps
Duration: 1 post
Downside: N/A
Description: Silvia forms 7 random elemental threads in her hand. As she does this, she sends them out to all enemies within range, shouting out, "Weave Art: Elemental Discharge!" May you specify how this deals damage please?
Silvia wrote:Advanced Spells- Tidal Wave:
Rank: B+
Category: Offensive
Type: AoE, Buff, Water
Damage: 60 hp
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 75 Mps
Duration: 8 posts
Downside: The buff the spell gives doesn't work if allies go out of it's range.
Description: Silvia forms a ball of water threads, each one over lapping another. They all flow at different speeds and intensities in this ball as they are held together. With this, Silvia screams aloud, "Weave Art: Tidal Wave!" With that, the threads untangle from their clump, as they form into a massive tidal wave. Every single thread is shown, as the tidal wave moves, each having their own unique flow to them. As the tidal wave hits an obstacle, the strings start to explode into water, leaving behind a puddle of water in it's place. As it hits enemies, the force of the tital wave knocks them all the way back to the max range of it. After this attack, the puddles left behind increases the speed of all allies by 90%. These puddles evaporate after the spell's duration, ending the buff given to allies as well.
- Monsoon:
Rank: B+
Category: Supportive
Type: AoE, Buff, HoT, Air
Healing: 30 hp per post
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 75 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A
Description: Silvia forms a ball of air threads, each one over lapping another. They all flow at different speeds and intensities in this ball as they are held together. With this, Silvia screams aloud, "Weave Art: Monsoon!" As she does this, she slams the ball into the ground. As they explode, air begins to circulate around the area, creating a huge tornado where it landed. As the tornado forms, it lifts up everything it's under, 45 meters above the ground. With knowledge, people in the tornado can use the wind to fly through the tornado. Allies are given an 90% speed buff while in the tornado, and are healed for each post. You have one too many effects here (Mobility, Buff, and HoT). B+ spells can only have 2 effects. Mobility also have to be burst range and speed to be used as well. Please remove one effect and fix accordingly ^^
- Flaming Sphere:
Rank: C+
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target, Shield, Buff
Durability: 270 hp
Range: 180 meters
Speed: 180 Mps
Duration: 8 posts Please lower this to 6 posts.
Downside: N/A
Description: Silvia forms a ball of fire threads, each one overlapping the other. They all burn at different heats and intensities as they form the ball. Their colors are anywhere from blue, red, to orange. With this, Silvia screams aloud, "Weave Art: Flaming Sphere!" As she does this, she shoots the ball forward towards an ally, or herself. As the ball touches them, the ball expands to form a sphere of heat around them. The threads used to form it spread extremely thin, making the person seeable through all the fire. The fire then burns away all spells that come near it, until the flame runs out(when the durability runs out). However, this isn't all. The shield also empower's the allies spells that come from inside it. So, if an ally were to shoot out a spell, it would be stronger, and bear the flames of the thread. This means that the ally gains a 85% spell damage buff until the shield breaks or the duration ends.
Silvia wrote:D and C rank spells- C rank Spells:
- Fire Thread:
Rank: D
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst, DoT
Damage: 30 hp per post
Range: 30 Meters
Speed: 30 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of fire in her hand. This thread glows with a bright red fire that surrounds a thin stick of solid flame. She then takes this thread, and yells out, "Weave Art: Fire!" With this, the string darts out from her hand, and towards the nearest enemy. As it hits, the thread explodes, dealing damage to all enemies its flames touch. An ember will then float in the air at the place it landed. This ember will then explode every post after, dealing damage to all enemies it touches. However, the ember will die out if it hasn't damaged an enemy with its explosion, ending the duration of the spell. You have this labeled as D rank with C rank Range and Speed, Duration, and DoT Damage. Please fix this spell accordingly ^^
- Water Thread:
Rank: C
Category: Supportive
Type: AoE, HoT
Damage Healed: 15 hp per post
Range: 60 Meters
Speed: 30 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of water in her hand. This thread seems to flow like water, and gleams with the light around it, making it look glittery to the human eye. With this thread, Silvia sends it upwards into the sky, saying aloud, "Weave Art: Water!" With this, the thread turns into a storm cloud that rains down upon the area around her. This rain heals all allies it touches. The rain will continue to heal allies until it's duration is over. After that, the cloud will dissipate.
- Earth Thread:
Rank: C
Category: Defensive
Type: AoE
Durability 90 hp
Range: 60 Meters
Speed: 30 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: No extra effect
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of rock in her hand. The thread is very flexible, but it seems extremely durable. With this thread, Silvia sinks it into the ground, as she says, "Weave Art; Earth!" This creates a large wall in its place. After it's duration ends, the wall crumbles, and separates into dust.
- Air Thread:
Rank: C
Category: Offensive
Type: Multitarget
Damage: 45 hp
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 65 Mps
Duration: 1 post
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of air in her hand. This thread is visible by the gleam of the light around. As she yells out "Weave Art; Air," she sends the thread, as it swirls around her. After this, the thread breaks apart and turns into actual air, as it sends out streams of it to all enemies within range(up to 6). Once the streams hit, the enemies are dealt damage, and are then knocked back 30 meters.
Silvia wrote:B and A rank spells- B rank Spells:
- Meteor Shower:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: Multitarget
Damage: 60 hp
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 110 Mps
Duration: 1 post
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of fire in one hand, and a thread of earth in the other. With this, she slams both her hands together, to create a thread intertwined with both flame and earth. She then focuses on this thread, shooting it up in the air, and saying, "Weave Art: Meteor Shower!" As she does this, the thread breaks up into 6 pieces of smaller threads. They then start falling to the ground like meteors, hitting all enemies within range. A crater is then formed beneath the enemy, that is 50 meters deep.
- Whirlpool:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: AoE
Damage: 20 hp per post
Range: 100 Meters
Speed: 50 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of water in one hand, and a thread made of air in the other. With this, she slams both of her hands together to create a thread intertwined with both of them. She then sends out this thread towards the ground, yelling aloud, "Weave Art: Whirlpool!" As it hits the ground, the threads seem to multiply as they swirl around, creating a whirlpool. All enemies within it's range are then dragged in towards the center by 50 meters at 50 mps, being dealt damage by its rough current. This then happens for 4 posts after, having the same effect happen each time.
- Sandstorm:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: AoE
Damage: 20 hp per post
Range: 100 Meters
Speed: 50 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of air in one hand, and a thread made of earth in the other. With this, she slams both of her hands together to create a thread intertwined with both of them. She then sends out this thread towards the ground, yelling aloud, "Weave Art: Sandstorm!" As it hits the ground, the threads seem to multiply as they break into tiny particles of sand. All enemies within it's range are then hurt as their skins are scratched with the sand particles. Please include how the DoT happens.
- Scald:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80 hp
Range: 200 Meters
Speed: 200 Mps
Duration: 3 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of water in one hand, and a thread made of fire in the other. With this, she slams both of her hands together to create a thread intertwined with both of them. She then sends out this thread towards an enemy, yelling aloud, "Weave Art: Scald!" As it hits the enemy, their skin burns with the flaming hot water. All spells that then hit that spot deal 60% more damage.
- Murky Swamp:
Rank: B
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 40 hp per post
Range: 50 Meters
Speed: 50 Mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: N/A.
Description: Silvia creates a thread made of water in one hand, and a thread made of earth in the other. With this, she slams both of her hands together to create a thread intertwined with both of them. She then takes this thread and slams it under the ground beneath her, yelling aloud, "Weave Art: Murky Swamp!" As she does this, an explosion of murky water comes from beneath her, damaging all enemies within range. This then leaves behind a pond of murky water around Silvia. However, she floats above it as though there is just regular ground there. Where she moves, the pond follows her. If enemies are on this murky water at the end of each post, the water then makes them feel nauseous and damages them.
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