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    Memory-Make Magic

    Antonia Leviaette
    Antonia Leviaette

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 17th May 2014, 1:01 pm

    Magic


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    Primary Magic:
    Memory-Make Magic

    Secondary Magic:
    N/A

    Caster or Holder:

    Caster

    Description:

    Memory-Make Magic is a Caster-Type Molding Magic which grants the caster the ability to manipulate memories. It also gives the user amazing memory capacity, being able to memorize opponent's heart beats, footsteps and Magic. The caster can also create "memories" of themselves which are similar to holograms. This Magic also allows the user to create new Magic spells by combining spells from other Magic which the user has memorized before. Furthermore, the user is able to negate Magic spells used by the opponent which the user also had already memorized by "forgetting" the spell.

    an extremely unorthodox magic, at least, when its classification is considered. Unlike the traditional Molding Magic, Memory-Make does not tamper with a tangible element, such as Ice; rather, this magic involves with the manipulation of memories at their base form in order to create a variety of visibly disconnected effects that can be traced together to form a single root. This root is the fact that all the memories that can be manipulated by this magic are all sensations that can be felt and visualized by every person; essentially, they each correlate to one or more of the five staple senses: sight, sound, smell, taste, touch. This is the main difference between Memory-Make and any other form of memory controlling magic, as it relies completely on physical memory, rather than emotional memories, such as bonds with other people.

    If Raven tries to represent her own memories in attack, it could be really useful, since she has lived for more than 200 years, has been in loads of battles, and knows many techinques.

    Strengths:

    · The user can manipulate the memories of a person in order to create a person, object or situation that can emotionally destroy or discapacitate the oponnent, depending on what their relationship is with the scene/person created.

    · This magic is generally focusing on representing the spells memorized by the user, so it does not have an element. As long as the Spell is Memorized, it can be used.

    · Excelent Senses: Memory-Make users tend to have enhaced senses of smell, sight, hear and touch.

    Weaknesses:

    · The user must have his fingers on his templates to cast a spell. If he is moved from that position, the spell fails.

    · Absolute concentration: Memory-Make is an extremely difficult magic, and requires the user to be completely calm and concentrated to cast the spell correctly. If the user's concentration is broken, the spell casting might fail.

    · Absolute Focus on Spell-Casting: Since it requires absolute concentration, it also requires absolute focus, which means that the user might have to take his focus away from the battle, which might be fatal for him.

    · The user must see a spell to memorize it, he cannot create it himself.

    Abilities/Powers:

    · Excelent Memory

    · Power over all Elements

    · Enhaced Senses




    D Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Mr Badass on 6th June 2014, 8:02 am; edited 8 times in total


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    Post by Guest 22nd May 2014, 7:49 am

    Hey Izzy.
    Okay first of all you need to have your body parts being one of the three forms (either moon, ice or fire). You can't have all three forms available in a single spell, and plus that would actually become very limiting as you rank up.

    I then need you to write up a technique for each of your takeover spells. These do not count as spell slots, but should be written as if they were spells. Make sure to put them in the same spoiler as the takeover spell they correspond to, and bare in mind you may only have one technique per takeover spell.
    Antonia Leviaette
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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 2nd June 2014, 12:42 pm

    Magic App changed entirely from Elemental Phoenix Takeover to Memory-Make.


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    Post by Guest 2nd June 2014, 1:34 pm

    Alright, good start! However, there are a few changes that need to be made:

    1) A tornado that can consume anything seems too OP for a D-Rank spell. I recommend you provide an example as to how strong your tornado is. For example, can it absorb a building with ease (this is acceptable should you choose to follow my example).

    2) For the sake of telling how easy or difficult it can be to avoid your wolf, I recommend you give a height measurement for a better understanding.

    3) D-Rank Spells should only last for a maximum of 2 posts, and so I ask that you reduce your Duration/Cooldown to your Fire Wolf from 3/5 to 2/4

    4) Not to sound harsh, but your third spell is very OP. It simply sounds like an auto-hit (which is prohibited in this case), and as a D-Rank spell especially, it shouldn't be a spell that's impossible for the enemy to avoid, even while under the illusion. Please adjust this so it is at least impressive for a D-Rank spell. This will also mean editing the Strengths and Weaknesses, as well. Set this spell to 2/4 for a Duration/Cooldown ratio.

    5) Set your final spell to a duration of 2 posts, and a cooldown of 3 posts.


    Overall an impressive start, and as I also possess a Memory-Make Mage, this will be especially difficult for me to handle. When these changes are made, your chances of being approved should be inevitable. I hope our characters encounter each other in the future (this character and Yuuto)
    Antonia Leviaette
    Antonia Leviaette

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 3rd June 2014, 9:23 am

    Changes made, and Illusion spell replaced due to the fact it was very OP .-.


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    Post by Guest 3rd June 2014, 11:04 am

    Two small changes left:

    1) My apologies for forgetting this. Please set your third spell to 2/4 in duration/cooldown
    2) Edit the text in your third spell so it simply deals D-Ranked damage. Also, you should include the maximum width of the wave, as well. Honestly, you should make this wave much larger. (30 feet in height and 50 feet in length recommended). A five foot wave could be jumped over. Also include the speed in which the wave can travel.
    Antonia Leviaette
    Antonia Leviaette

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Mentor : Lyon De Ville
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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 6th June 2014, 8:05 am

    Aye. Changes made, sir.


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    Post by Guest 10th June 2014, 2:25 am

    Yukine's not checked this recently so I'll jump in to approve this as you've made the changes he asked for.

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