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    Akira
    Akira

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    First Skill: Ice Dragon Slayer
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    Post by Akira 2nd May 2012, 5:53 pm

    ------------------- Ice Dragon Slayer -------------------

    Primary Magic: Ice Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Akira's Magic was taught to him by the Ice Dragon, Yukianesa. This magic allows Akira to manipulate the water allowing him to freeze it at his will. Freezing anything to temperatures where life can not exist, even to Sub Zero. Being an Ice Dragon Slayer, during severely cold weather, (Snowing, Hailing, or Raining) as well as when he is near a body of water, he is at a great advantage. Akira can use any source of water in order to increase his vitality and energy even if its boiling water, steam or any liquid(as long as it isn't poisonous). Usually Akira will significantly drop his bodily temperature below freezing, "Sub Zero", which means his body if touched or if someone comes within his reach, they will instantly begin to freeze.

    Strengths: The greatest advantage this magic offers Akira is no blind spots. With the water being everywhere in the atmosphere, he is able to attack from any angle, in any position, at any time. He can feel when an opponent is coming towards his by moving his magic energy throughout the water, meaning the moister on a person's skin (once it is frozen) can also reveal which direction they are coming from. Akira is able to live in the coldest climates/conditions. Akira can also reflect light based attacks from coming in contact with him by using his Ice as a prism reflecting the light away from his body.
    Weaknesses: Even though Akira is able to sense an opponent from any direction (No Blind Spots), it is extremely difficult for him to focus on more than one opponent at a given time. This makes it hard for Akira to deal with opponents who can create mirror images of themselves or replicas. Akira's Magic is extremely weak against heat based magic. Any magic that can create temperatures as hot as the sun would cause his normal magic to melt, but against his "Absolute Zero" they null each other out.

    Abilities/Powers:
    • Akira can devour any source of water, however they must be in a liquid state before they can be devoured. Akira is capable of eating any ice based attacks converting it into energy, but he must first melt the ice into water. With water based attacks is capable of eating without any problems. During Icy or Cold Weather the cost of energy Akira has to use for his magic is cut in half allowing his to use A-S Rank Spells without feeling exhausted.
    • Akira can devour Ice/Water based attacks.
    • Can reflect light based attack using Ice Magic.
    • Resistant to Ice/Water based attacks.
    • Extremely durable and a great amount of stamina when in "Absolute Zero" Mode.
    • Resistance to severely cold weather.
    • Sub Zero: this ability was taught to him by Yukianesa. Akira drop his bodily temperature to below freezing as close as possible to Absolute Zero. In this state Akira's body become extremely cold to the point where he can instantly freeze water by coming within an arm's length of it. Any person who decide to cross paths with Akira will instantly begin to freeze as well. His body will enter a temporary state of death (Coma) until he decides to stop this ability. His stamina and durability increase because of his "Death State", since his body no longer needs to use energy for movement. Sub Zero only last four posts due to Akira not fulling mastering this ability. Any S-H Rank Offensive spell will cause Akira's Sub Zero state to instantly diminish. With Sub Zero it takes 3 post for a person to completely freeze once they come near him.
    • Dragon Force
    • Freezing:The effect behind most of Akira's spells is the opponent freezing. When an opponent freezes whether it is in Sub Zero Mode or by any Rank Spell, the opponent is invulnerable to any attacks. The way the Ice is designed is to keep the opponent from escaping but at the same time, not doing any physical harm to an opponent. The freezing can be broken by fire or light spell that is the same as the spell that Akira had cast. So an A Rank Fire/Light Spell can remove the freezing effect of an A Rank Spell of Akira's.


    ------------------- Spells -------------------



    D Rank Spells:

    C Rank Spells:

    B Rank Spells:

    A Rank Spells:
    S Rank Spells:


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    Post by Xana 5th May 2012, 9:21 pm

    Oof... Looks like my character won't stand a chance against yours... XD

    Anyway, for a WIP, it's looking great! Now just add some spells and we'll be on our way. :D
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    Post by Akira 20th May 2012, 8:59 am

    Bumpity Bump!
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    Post by Zeno 21st May 2012, 4:09 am

    I'll need a duration for your Absolute Zero as well as a nice drawback.
    The angle you're playing at with your magic is more like a Water Dragonslayer so the feeling moisture and sensing through water and everything will have to go. Try to stick with actual ice as much as you can. I know that water and ice are the same element, but otherwise there won't be a difference between water and ice dragonslayer.

    - Coat: blind for 1 post will suffice. How long can the coat stay on his body?

    - Arctic Aura: make it so that whenever Akira needs to walk on water, he changes the surface of the water into ice when he walks on it.

    - Purification: Shuhei tried to play this card as well. Yours is a bit more developed though. However you will need to add a duration as to how long it takes for it to extract a poison or heal a burn wound. You can't cure poisons or diseases that are higher than D Rank though.

    - Winter Solstice: Yeah... No not like that. Especially not with a D Rank Spell. I would prefer it if this affects the cooldowns and durations more than the actual power of the spells.

    - Icy Haze: " except Light users and Akira to become blind for two posts after the haze has lifted." very convenient. Why would Akira not be affected?

    - Arctic Volley: ISH OKAAY

    - Icy Mage: Is also fine.

    - Glacial Dragon's Wing: Its effect on A Rank Def Spells? Higher cooldown please.

    - Rage: Higher cooldown. Also, what's your definition of frozen? Frozen solid? or can the victim still move but just a lot less? The thing with frozen solid is that once your opponent is frozen, you have complete free game. That's a bit too powerful.

    - Claw: cooldown? ( B Ranks should be around 5 post cooldown. )
    - Fang; Higher cooldown
    - Roar: higher cooldown
    - Aegis: Too strong. Half its power.
    - Dungeon: looks okay.
    - Meteo: looks okay.

    I general, I like your spells a lot. I can see that Shu and you will make a great team, as planned. The thing is that I need another downside for Akira himself. All of the weaknesses pretty much are the natural weakness against heat users. The thing is that Akira constantly stops his opponent in his movements, and stops him from moving for quite a while with most of his spells. If it plays out nicely, every spell with a "freeze" effect could lead to a perfect opening to finish the opponent off. It's a tad too powerful. Correct me if I'm wrong in my interpretation.


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    Post by Seijin 22nd May 2012, 4:37 am

    Also note that Absolute Zero would be impossible to reach O.o so basically anybody with a magic based on Absolute Zero would be insanely impossible to beat.
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    Post by Akira 25th May 2012, 2:52 pm

    I checked Shuhei's cooldowns, they are almost the same, or exactly the same as mine. Just wondering why my cooldowns must or have to be higher.
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    Post by Zeno 6th June 2012, 8:11 am

    New cooldown rules have been added. Change them according to the new rules and fix the other problems and then it should be fine.


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    Post by Akira 19th June 2012, 5:59 pm

    BUMPITY Bump!
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    Post by Emilia Hawke 3rd July 2012, 1:54 pm

    Well this has been sitting for a while. I've read your magic several times since you last bumped this, even though I wasn't a mod then xD. Everything appears to be order with everything and I see no real problems with it. You really did design some of your spells to work well with Shueheis :P Anyway, I approve of this magic app.


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