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    Yoruen's Holder Weapon

    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 26th January 2023, 1:32 am

    Notes:


    Name: Tenshun
    Grade: Artifact
    Type: Weapon
    Proof of Acquisition: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t37730p425-the-armory#425698
    Description: A chokuto that was offered as an offering to Amatsu, a storm dragon said to have once protected ancient Midi from weather-related disasters. As a tool of worship to Amatsu, the sword is said to be blessed by Amatsu as it bestows magical benefits to its user. Ten years ago, it was stolen by treasure hunters from Amatsu's weakly-protected and mostly forgotten shrine, and brought to Fiore to be sold but it was recovered by Yoruen when he stumbled upon them. Ever since then, he has claimed it as his personal weapon. Yoruen wears the sword behind his waist on his belt, and when he needs to use it, will shift the sheath to his left side before pulling the blade. Tenshun is of extremely simple and meager design, possessing a white wooden handle and sheath, without a sword guard. A beige line runs down the whole length of the handle, whereas the beige line on the sheath is split by a beige carving of Amatsu's silhouette at the middle point of the sheath. When sheathed, the handle and sheath closes seamlessly as if the sheathed sword is a white staff (which Yoruen also sometimes use it as).

    Abilities:
    Name: Amatsu's Blessing I
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: The blessing of Amatsu is granted to whoever holds this sword. Yoruen's Strength is passively increased by 60%.

    Name: Amatsu's Blessing II
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: The blessing of Amatsu is granted to whoever holds this sword. Yoruen's Spell Damage is passively increased by 60%.

    Name: Amatsu's Blessing III
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: The blessing of Amatsu is granted to whoever holds this sword. Yoruen's Speed is passively increased by 60%.

    Name: Windborne Messenger
    Rank: A
    MP Cost: 50 MP
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 100 HP
    Range: 300 meters
    Speed: 300 m/s
    Duration: 7 posts
    Downside: -
    Description: Amatsu takes form with a swing of the blade, a gust of wind that takes the form of a serpentine creature with wings capable of chasing down the target and doing cutting damage. Windborne Messenger is able to home in on the target and is also capable of attacking targets protected by magical barriers, but 50% damage will be reduced in such cases.


    Last edited by Yoruen Jinryu on 26th January 2023, 7:40 am; edited 1 time in total


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    Post by Guest 26th January 2023, 4:45 am

    Hey there, Med here to look this over, before I grade this there are a couple of things that I need to mention.

    1. The weapon you've linked is an artifact rather than artifact+.

    2. It has two more abilities than it should have. If it's meant to be a holder weapon then you need to link the magic app that it's connected to. The magic doesn't have to be finished but at least started.

    When you've sorted out these two issues then I'll grade this. :)

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    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 26th January 2023, 7:42 am

    Hi Medeia, thanks for picking this up.

    My replies to your points:

    1. My bad on that. Yup, it’s an Artifact weapon. Corrected it in the template.

    2. Yup, it has 4 abilities in total from the Holder magic primary benefit. I’ve linked the magic here too.

    Thanks!


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    Post by Guest 26th January 2023, 7:45 am

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