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    Flame Magic

    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Flame Magic Empty Flame Magic

    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 22nd July 2022, 8:37 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: Flame Magic
    Magic Type: Caster (Solitary Benefit: +25% MP cost reduction)
    Description: A magic that allows the user to generate and manipulate fire at will. At higher levels of mastery, the user is able to momentarily transform into fire itself. James is able to link up the fire magic with the mystical flames of his left arm, greatly increasing his control over the flames and their destructive potential.
    Unique Abilities: Flame Aura - James passively empowers himself with his fire magic, allowing him to enhance his abilities such as:
    • Enhancing spell damage and spell range by 60% each
    • Enhancing shield durability and spell healing effectiveness by 60% each
    • Enhancing his HP and MP by 60% each




    Spells
    # Signature
    Signature Spells:

    # Advanced
    Advanced Spells:

    # Normal - 15 slots (6 S-rank, 9 A-rank)
    Normal Spells:


    Last edited by James Hill on 15th November 2022, 7:44 pm; edited 7 times in total


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    Flame Magic Empty Re: Flame Magic

    Post by Guest 22nd July 2022, 1:00 pm

    Hey there, Med here to look this over. There's only a few small things which you'll find in blue.

    Magic:
    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Flame Magic Empty Re: Flame Magic

    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 24th July 2022, 9:20 am

    Hi Medeia, I've made the changes as per your remarks.

    I've also made some additional changes you might wanna revisit:


    • Burning Step Instant Strike - I didn't realized I had forgotten to use an effect for this spell, so I've added a speed buff.
    • Vermillion Bird Ignited Body - Removed this spell
    • Enkindled Strength & Enkindled Speed - Added 2 passive spells
    • Firebird Chaser - Newly added spell.


    Thanks!


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    Flame Magic Empty Re: Flame Magic

    Post by Guest 24th July 2022, 11:53 am

    Round 2.

    Magic:
    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 28th July 2022, 6:33 am

    Sorry for the noobish mistakes. I have revised them all.

    Hopefully it's all good now.


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    Flame Magic Empty Re: Flame Magic

    Post by Guest 28th July 2022, 6:39 am

    Magic:

    Flame Magic QlhAT3Z
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    Post by Guest 2nd November 2022, 7:43 am

    Magic:

    Flame Magic 9DH5Ncy
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    Post by Guest 10th November 2022, 6:53 am

    Hey there James, Med here to look this over, you'll find my edits in blue.

    Magic:
    Yoruen Jinryu
    Yoruen Jinryu

    Player 
    Lineage : Kirin's Blessing
    Position : None
    Posts : 275
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 25,112

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Yoruen's Wind Blade Style
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Flame Magic Empty Re: Flame Magic

    Post by Yoruen Jinryu 15th November 2022, 7:47 pm

    Hi Medeia, please my replies to your edits here:

    Signature
    - Fire Spear - Changed the wording of the spell so that it doesn't confuse anyone with the word "pierce" and the piercing effect.
    - Fire Step - Added the "once per post".

    Advanced
    - Blazing Whirlwind - Added max no of targets and also amended speed and range.

    Normal
    - Shooting Stars - Added max no of targets
    - Fire Shield - Changed "damage" to "durability"
    - Great Fire Destruction - Changed the effect so that the magic resistance debuff is removed
    - Healing Fire - Changed "damage" to "healing"
    - Fire Bird - Changed the description so that it's clear that it's a normal spell attack. Flight for multiple targets is a plot effect.

    Thanks!


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    Post by Guest 16th November 2022, 3:28 am

    Magic:

    Flame Magic QlhAT3Z

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