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    Qliphoth: Mortal Coil

    Thagirion
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    First Skill: Abysmal Blackness
    Second Skill: Mortal Coil
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    Post by Thagirion 2nd June 2019, 11:01 am

    Qliphoth: Mortal Coil Eterna10
    "You understand the laws of nature. All things age, all things die. In the end, our sun burns out, our universe grows cold and perishes."



    Magic Name: Qliphoth: Mortal Coil
    Magic Type: Slayer Page 4, Post 80
    Description:
    Every being in the material world, even the material universe itself knows only a single truth, and that is that all things inevitably end. Whether through fighting or old age, human lives end, just like the lives of animals and plants eventually reach a natural end. Because that is exactly what death is, a natural conclusion to a life lived. Whether that person lived a good or a bad life does not matter in the end, for they all stop breathing, their hearts stop beating and their bodies rot in the ground or burn in a furnace. Originally intended to just be a dweller of the darkness that existed before the universe, the ability to put an end to material things was eventually bestowed upon Thagirion in order to fight the formation of the universe that drove out the infinite dark. Using it to make all manner of things disappear before they had the chance to become what they were meant to be, it eventually grew to be more.

    Instead of being a force of destruction, it turned into a macabre force of creation as well. By using his own material form, he learned how to utilize his own bone structure and increase the density and shape of it in all manner of different shapes and sizes. Aiding him in restructuring his body for a plethora of purposes, altering the ground around him as he sees fit and more, destroying is no longer all that it is good for. That said, destruction is still by far the strongest factor of this magic. While other magics were based more around being fast, the offensive spells belonging to this magic focus entirely on brutally overpowering his enemies. Controlling forces of decay to make things wither, spoil, rot and break down on a mollecular and magical level, Thagirion twists it to either protect himself or to outright obliterate eyesores.

    Finally, as a result of the codex that exists at the core of his being, this magic utilizes it to make it do more than just memorize spells. Spirits and ghosts eaten or otherwise destroyed through his magic are stored within it. Allowing Thagirion to use these templates for his shapeshifting and mimicry abilities, it makes them more than just seem realistic as they are in fact the real deal.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Outlandish: Learning how to tinker with primordial powers such as darkness, souls and other such concepts, Thagirion's magical power had to be of a very high level. This is not so much a side effect of him possessing these powers, but because of his millennia old form housing within his material shell. Tapping into this force for the sake of utilizing his dark magics, quite a lot of unfortunate events need to transpire in order to make him run out. Magic Power +60%.
    • Over in a Heartbeat: As sudden as death itself when it comes upon those who have run out of time on this earth, the magical powers and properties at Thagirion's command are incredibly fast. So fast even that most won't be able to even react to it as death descends upon them. Spell Speed +60%.
    • Death God: Controlling some of the essential factors when it comes to ending all things, controlling the spirit, the earth, one's skeletal structure and even the forces of decay itself, there are those that have witnessed Thagirion's power and considered him to be an aspect of death. Capable of making things he touches crumble to dust, even magical forces must inevitably perish to it. Spell Damage +60%.


    Passive Abilities:

    • S Rank: Spell Damage +60%.
    • S Rank: Spell Damage +60%.
    • S Rank: Spell Speed +60%.
    • S Rank: Spell Speed +60%.


    +50% Spell Damage
    +50% Speed
    +50% Strength


    [i]Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability (See below)
    Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:

    2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
    1 Rank Above Character: 10%
    Same Rank as Character: 25%
    1 Rank below Character: 35%
    2 Ranks below character: 50%



    Signature Spells:
    Advanced Spells:
    Normal Spells:


    Trained Link: Kendov Descent


    Last edited by Thagirion on 17th May 2020, 10:47 am; edited 101 times in total
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    Post by Shane Stern 5th June 2019, 9:28 pm

    Hi Vetis, I'm Shane and I will be one doing the grading your magic. No worries, I'm new but I'm not doing this alone. All edits or suggestions will be made in this color.

    Vetis wrote:Magic Name: Sahrot Thur ("Mighty Overlord")
    Magic Type: Requip (Solitary)
    Magic Description:
    Having found this magic while working a job for an archaeological society searching the western portion of Fiore for traces of ancient civilizations, Solmar came across the grave of a once-powerful Chieftain's tomb. With help from the archaeologists, it was learned that the race the chieftain and his men belonged to were one consisting of great warriors and hunters called the Kendov, who used no real magic of their own. Instead, they relied on magical artifacts, their instincts and the strength of their bodies and will. Hunting and killing the largest of creatures, not even flinching when facing dragons or demons, many of them have gone down in the annals of their people as heroes or even demi-gods. Passing their armor and weaponry down to those that came after them, many of them were eventually entombed when their people became integrated with the people of Fiore. Remaining in their resting place until found, these armors and weapons can be bound with the wielder of the Sahrot Thur. Some notable wielders of the Sahrot Thur are stated below:

    Sahrot Thur Wielders:

    Once a type of magic that was known to all of the Kendov, it was also the only type of magic that they knew. Calling it a connection they shared with their gods rather than magic, they used their specially crafted gear in order to fight and raid along the shores of old Fiore as their own ancestral lands had sunk beneath the waves due to the aftermath of a battle with one of the largest dragons of their time. Seeking to make a new place their home, the few hundred that survived were all capable of bringing out a weapon and an armor they believed was blessed by the gods. As the sole remaining user of this magic, Solmar is well aware that there is really nothing divine about the weapons or armor he wields through it, though it will come as no surprise that it is in fact very powerful in the right hands.

    All weapons and armor of Kendov making can only be activated or called forth by the wilder of the Sahrot Thur, this being how they kept others from looting their gravesites and tombs. Ranging from heavy to medium armors, the primary weapons used by the Kendov were swords, axes, spears and war hammers. Not being the kind to hunt with bow and arrow, they preferred to do their hunting and their fighting up close and personal, like all real men should. Many of the weapons and armors alike were crafted in a manner that allowed them to fight against the magicians of the old days in Fiore, as well as magic wielding monsters such as dragons and demons. But at the end of the day, the power behind the weapons themselves is often enough to face down any monster, magical or not.

    Unique abilities:
    Mul Keindren: All those who have wielded the Sahrot Thur before him have all had one thing in common, a tremendous amount of strength that allowed them to fight swiftly while wielding large weapons and heavy armor. This physical strength is passed down through the bloodline, moving from one wielder to the next, awakening as they unlock this magical power for themselves. Being of Kendov descent, Solmar too has the kind of physical strength that allows him to wrestle a bear and to wield a massive slab of steel with one hand.
    +50% Strength

    Venbonir: As the only living Kendov that made it across the ocean, quickly adjusting to a new land was of the essence. To this extent, those in possession of the Sahrot Thur adjusted even faster as their very magic along with their willpower and ferocity in the hunt and in battle caused the rest of their body to adapt to this lifestyle. Even now, new wielders of the Sahrot Thur have this passed won to them as well, allowing them to move faster than most, even while wielding very heavy equipment.
    +50% Speed

    Solitary Requip Benefit: Can have up to 4 Requip spells active at once.
    -> This is just a suggestion but it would be better if you can put this somewhere near where you state your type of magic. Doesn't really matter with this position though.


    Refined Requip:


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    Thagirion
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    Post by Thagirion 6th June 2019, 7:47 am

    I made all of the changes, but i'll still be adding in a sixth ability because I followed your advice and made one of the abilities into an RP Only. Though I still have a few questions, and things to state:

    Kendov Craftsmanship:
    - I changed this to advanced, though there lies a question there. Since the blade enhances attacks channeled through it, how high would the % boost be at Advanced, and how high would it be at Normal?

    Oversized Strikes:
    - Changed to just armor penetration on physical attacks.

    Kinetic Energy Redistribution:
    - Changed from 50% to 75%


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    Post by Shane Stern 8th June 2019, 12:42 am

    Qliphoth: Mortal Coil Bgk37lA

    Approved:


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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 2nd August 2019, 9:43 am

    Moved and unlocked at user's request

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 8th August 2019, 4:32 am

    Hey Solmar, you know me. So I'm here to grade this for you, all my edits will be in this colour. Bump when yu've made the changes and I'll take a look~

    Edit:: First of all, I've noticed you have more than one magic, as a rule all second and thirds magics must be achieved either a training thread or purchased in the magic shop. These must also be linked in the magic themselves, if this is your first magic please state so, otherwise be sure to include the aforementioned link.

    Additionally, in accordance with the new magic rules, there is now a new part of the template that requires completion in regards to spell categories, I have gone ahead and put these in the relevant parts of the magic in where they need to be added.


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    Thagirion
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    Post by Thagirion 11th August 2019, 10:26 am

    All things should be edited now.
    Added the training link at the bottom of the spell page.

    Also, in regards to the spell swords that can be wielded, I added that the 50% speed only goes for the spell itself, not for the speed when wielded. Feel free to respond on Discord when you read it, might be easier to talk about it like that since I feel like i'm either reading the issue wrong (which is very very likely), or there's been a misunderstanding.
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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 13th August 2019, 5:27 am

    Same again, bump when done.
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    Post by Thagirion 13th August 2019, 9:59 am

    Alright, that should be everything, I think.
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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 13th August 2019, 11:28 am

    One final tweak and we should be good, bump when ready.

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    Thagirion
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Abysmal Blackness
    Second Skill: Mortal Coil
    Third Skill: Border-Realm

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    Post by Thagirion 13th August 2019, 12:40 pm

    All done, made a mistake on the speed thing since I didn't take it down from 375 before, which is something I apparently forgot. But with these changes to 50% speed, I can leave it as is, since 50% of 250 is 125, so the 375 is fine.
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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 13th August 2019, 12:50 pm

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 2nd October 2019, 11:17 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Thagirion
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    Post by Thagirion 9th October 2019, 1:42 pm

    So this is done now, though I wanted to point out and ask for a few things when they are being graded, as well as some things to consider when doing so.


    1. The Refined Requip sword is made up of 3 Artifact+ weapons. Judging by the rules I managed to find, I gave it the seven abilities I believed it was allowed to have. I am not entirely sure if I did everything right with the precise ranks of the abilities though as the amount of rules and different places to scroll over and study to make them properly was a little overwhelming or confusing at times.

    2. I made it so the Refined Requip and the Requip sword are connected to one another. Since Negate/Redirect rules seemed pretty straight-forward, I made it so that the first sword can Negate when on its own. When both swords are present, one sword can negate and the other can redirect it. I figured this would be fine and a more interesting way of working with it while also putting some restrictions on something that doesn't really need additional restrictions for the sake of more fun RP.

    3. With regards to the swords, I don't really know how much HP and damage to give them as i'm not sure whether I need to go with the health of the weapon or by the health of a magic weapon as they are technically both. Also, for the first sword, I was confused a bit as it said the damage and health were the same as the combined weapons put into it. And seeing as those are three Artifact+ weapons, I wondered how much that would translate to.



    But yeah, that's most of it for now. Figured i'd ask.
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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 14th October 2019, 6:33 am

    Heya Solmar, sorry for the delay, Joh back to grade your magic. You know how this goes by now so as usual, all of my edits will be in this color. To address your questions:

    1. The ranks of your requip abilities are mostly correct. I've made a comment where you can increase the ranks of an ability.

    2. Unfortunately, for both redirection and negation effects MP must still be paid in order to negate or redirect the spells in question.

    3. Requips still use requip values for their HP and melee damage with the added benefit for the type of equipment used in the creation of the requip spell. In your case, this equates to an increased melee damage value, multiplying the original melee damage value for a requip of that rank with 2.5x. I've commented where this applies which should hopefully clarify your confusion.

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    Post by Thagirion 11th November 2019, 3:24 pm

    Took me a while to figure out what to do with a couple of things, but I made sure to go over and fix all of the changes. So, as far as I can tell, it's all fixed and ready.
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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 14th November 2019, 11:30 pm

    A few more minor edits in the same color

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    Post by Thagirion 17th November 2019, 1:07 pm

    Oof, sorry.

    That should be everything.
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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 19th November 2019, 8:59 am

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 27th November 2019, 3:20 pm

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Post by Ray Jyx 6th May 2020, 1:35 am

    Your Grading!:


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    Post by Thagirion 11th May 2020, 11:13 am

    My bad on the Slayer thing, I just copy/pasted it from the template I used from my other Slayer magic, but that was a Demon slayer. Fixed it.

    Also, I didn't know the health and mp cancelling wasn't a thing. I changed it to halving it for the duration, is that allowed as an effect?

    Went over all of the other things too, and I do believe that everything "should" be fixed by now. But since my head is like a cheesegrate, things probably felt through the cracks here or there.
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    Post by Ray Jyx 17th May 2020, 3:59 am

    your grading!:


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    Post by Thagirion 17th May 2020, 10:39 am

    Went over it, and I think I got it all this time.
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    Post by Ray Jyx 17th May 2020, 3:06 pm

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