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    Hodgepodge

    Tsubasa Kageyama
    Tsubasa Kageyama

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Hodgepodge
    Second Magic: XVI Battle Suit
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    Completed Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 12th April 2020, 10:54 am

    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own. Now, Tsubasa has gained the courage and experience to grow and change his spells with experience. Additionally, he's gained a few spells when he most recently returned home and once again trained with his old masters.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: Ramp Up - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. His Movement speed ranks up by +10% per different class of spell cast, capping at Rank[Up to S, caps at passive buffs]. Once it reaches cap, he regains a passive 5% HP per post [Capped by regular site regulations.]

    • Ability: Under the Light of the Moon - Since the realization of the depth of the magic within him, not just what has been taught to him, Tsubasa's Hodgepodge has evolved slightly. All of his magic is now tinged with light. This means slayers who attempt to devour it can only devour half (and thus regain half the MP), unless they could also devour light magic. This also means that it is more harmful against weak demons [NPCs only, others with permission].

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300 Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa or a shoving motion with his hand, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed is decreased by 55%. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability: Tsubasa’s Punch to the Face
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: This is a spell that Tsubasa sort of came up with on the fly, although it’s hardly original. He covers his fist with force energy and tries to clock his opponent in the face. This jarring punch reduces spell damage by 55% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “Melandrach, The Ancient Rain”:



    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 60 HP
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach, summoning a wide wave of energy that crashes onto the battlefield with soothing waters. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 90%. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Guard
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Using the power of Melandrach’s water based magic, Tsubasa collects a quick grip of water and throws it up before him, forearms facing his opponent and using the water to block whatever is coming at him. Additionally, this grants an additional +60% Buff to Spell Healing while it sustains. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Sphere
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 195HP
      Range: 315M
      Speed: 315Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Downside: -30% reduced range/speed for +30% increased damage.
      Description: Tsubasa summons a massive sphere of water, and straight up dunks it on his opponent. This immobilizes the opponent for the first round [Following all site rules of immobilization including preventing stun locking and requiring recast for another immobilization] and sustains a -100% debuff decrease to spell healing on opponents throughout the duration. This counts as a water and void spell.



    “The Wandering Flare Urazuki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazuki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at an enemy. The three sparks converge into a single one, in an attempt to strike the opponent. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Flamethrower
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 150 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts
      Downside: 5% HP damage per round for +50% damage.
      Description: Urazuki’s Flamethrower is something of a bastardization of the actual spells that were taught by Urazuki. Rather than a quick spark of energy, this is a sustained current of flame. This is quite draining and deals 5% HP damage to Tsubasa as well for as long as he chooses to endure it (Up to the spell’s duration). This counts as a fire and darkness spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 50 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazuki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. Initially it looks exactly like Urazuki's Cinders, witht he exception of being purple instead of red. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this enduring flame weakens the opponent's resolve. While this flame burns, the opponent's magical resistance is reduced by 50%, and physical by 15%. This counts as a fire spell.



    “Shyrrik and Wynna, Void Champions”:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. Tsubasa's eyes turn entirely dark, nearly a vantablack and he asks a key phrase "What are you afraid of?". He attempts to connect to his opponent via thin strings of energy that extend from his fingertips like a puppeteer. If successful, it drains of 5% HP per turn for the duration. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: A Rank
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 300HP
      Range: 75M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.

    • Name: Shyrrik and Wynna’s Synergy
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst
      Damage:
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: [Rank Spell Duration]
      Description: Utilizing the strengths of both Wynna and Shyrrik’s natural void abilities, Tsubasa has gained the ability to create small void holes to negate energy. By paying the original MP cost of the opponent's spell (up to B rank), Tsubasa can negate a single spell that comes into contact with Synergy. If the B Rank (or lower) single spell is a void or light spell, Tsubasa can redirect it at the opponent or a third party instead by paying twice the original MP cost of the spell as well as the cost to negate it. The reflection can happen only once per post.



    “The Lightning Queen Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. It manifests as an electric whip which attempts to strike the opponent and, if possible, wrap around them. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Thunderous Triumph
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Although Tsubasa could never properly imitate Thaola’s serious presence, her general positive energy has rubbed off on him, allowing him to sustain battles longer. This provides a +50% Buff to MP.



    “Dayu of the Stone:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.

      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell.



    “Yamagi Kageyama, Grand Priest of Kyukei Temple”:



    • Name: Heiwa na Kyuusoku
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 75 MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: Single Target
      Healing: 150HP
      Range: 450M
      Speed: 450Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Description: After his most recent visit home, Tsubasa’s father became concerned for his son. Therefore he took the time to teach Tsubasa one of the only spells he knew, an ancient magic passed down the main branch of the Kageyama line. It was designed to give a burst of energy to even the most exhausted warriors. When blessed with the Heiwa na Kyuusoku (Peaceful Respite), mages will be healed and rejuvenated with a further 5% HP regeneration for the duration of the spell. Additionally, they will be blessed with +100% Spell Durability throughout the spell’s duration. Supposedly, this spell is capable of mending bones immediately [Fluff]. This counts as a holy spell.




    Last edited by Tsubasa Kageyama on 23rd May 2020, 6:30 pm; edited 13 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing My Upgrades More!)


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    Saraphina

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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 16th April 2020, 8:11 pm

    Hey Tsubasa! You know me, I'll be your grader today.

    Before I can actually grade your magic, I'll need you to include MP Cost and Category for me please as per the Magic/Spell Template. When that is all done and settled, please bump the thread. If you have any questions, you can dm me or ask in the thread ^^

    ♕♕:

    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge



    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: Randomizer Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Therefore, as long as Tsubasa never uses the same school of magic twice in a row, the damage of his Burst and Single Target spells receive a Spell Damage buff of [Character Rank Buff-10%/2] and a Spell Speed buff of 15%. His Signature Spells are the exception to this, and always retain the buffs.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.
    • Ability:


    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: C [Ranks up to A]
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 60 HP
      Range: 120M
      Speed: 120 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy smashes into the opponent.Tsubasa can ride the tail of this energy, increasing his movement and spell speed by 22% each, provided he is moving towards the target.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: D
      Type: Single
      Damage: 40 HP Magic
      Range: 15M
      Speed: 15Mp/s
      Duration: Instant
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Sarya's Vines
      Rank: D
      Type: Multi-target
      Damage: 30 HP Magic
      Range: 45 Meters
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: A gift from Sarya, a rather solemn mage who specialized in nature magic, Tsubasa’s hand gestures pull up vines, thorns or thin ropes of stone that wrap around his opponents and impede their speed. If it connects, this spell reduces opponent’s movement speed by 10% for one round. This counts as a nature spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Vapors
      Rank: D Rank
      Type: Area of Effect
      Healing: 20HP
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 15Mp/s
      Duration: 3 Rounds
      Description: With some eccentric hand gestures, Tsubasa summons misty vapors around the battlefield. Any allies within the area will feel a bit revitalized, as taught to him by an elderly mage Melandrach. This counts as a water spell.


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Flash
      Rank: D+
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 60 HP
      Range: 90 M
      Speed: 90 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant
      Description: Crackling energy through runs through Tsubasa’s body in a dangerous but powerful spell taught to him by the wild and hungry mage Thaola, a single blast of electricity at an opponent, this tends to stop them in their tracks. This limits the opponent from moving closer to Tsubasa for one round, although they may still move otherwise. This counts as a lightning spell.



    C-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Dreams of Shyrrik
      Rank: C Rank
      Type: Utility/Buff
      Damage:
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds
      Description: A more meditative skill that requires Tsubasa to chill out for a damn second, but he is rewarded by more focus and precision. This spell grants Tsubasa a 55% increase to his movement speed. This counts as a light spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: C Rank
      Type: Utility/Buff
      Damage:
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, which was intended to completely absorb a damaging spell. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield allows him to raise his Spell Damage Resistance by 20% by draining some of the energy of incoming spells. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Sparks
      Rank: C
      Type: Single
      Damage: 30 HP Magic (30 HP DoT)
      Range: 120M
      Speed: 120Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds (Or until 2.5x Dmg)
      Description: On his way back from his business trip, Urazaki saw the progress that Tsubasa had made and decided to show him the next level of the Cinders technique. The Sparks technique is a series of snaps across the opponent’s body that ignite into flames that extinguish just as quickly, ideally leaving burns on their body which continue to smoulder. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Barrage
      Rank: C+
      Type: Area of Effect
      Damage: 45 HP
      Range: 90 M
      Speed: 90 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant
      Description: Building up the energy beyond his ease of control, Tsubasa lets the energy surround him and fire off in a cone at any enemies nearby. Thaola did not exactly teach him how to do this, thus the the spell has a tendency to go a little haywire. This, like the previous incarnation, prevents enemies from moving any closer to him for one round. This counts as a lightning spell.



    “B-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmares
      Rank: B
      Type: Debuff
      Damage: 2% HP/MP drain per round.
      Range: 100M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: The opposite of the dream state that Shyrrik taught Tsubasa about controlling himself, the nightmare engages any of Tsubasa’s opponents within range and drains them of a minute amount of their life force for the duration of the spell as the void fills with their own darkest fears. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Clarity
      Rank: B
      Type: Utility/Buff
      Damage:
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Round
      Description: Wynna, perhaps a little too eager to teach Tsubasa some spells of his own, decided to show him the opposite side of the void, unaware that he had also been training with Shyrrik. Wynna’s Clarity fills the battlefield with a soothing light, allowing Tsubasa and his allies to gain awareness of the battlefield, increasing Spell Damage of all allies by 60%. This can’t be used while Shyrrik’s Nightmares is active. This counts as a light spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Bubbles
      Rank: B Rank
      Type: Area of Effect
      Healing: 30HP
      Range: 60M
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds
      Description: A more powerful version of the previous spell taught by Melandrach, Tsubasa instead summons a wide range of bubbles which serve to both soothe the wounds of allies and make spells more difficult for opponents to connect. This technique reduces the spell range of opponent’s spells by 10%. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Chain Lightning
      Rank: B+
      Type: Single (Multi-Target)
      Damage: 120HP (90 HP, 60 HP)
      Range: 225 M
      Speed: 165 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant
      Description: This is an upgraded version of Thaola’s Lightning Flash, which Tsubasa learned in exchange for a custom cake and several small rolls. This lightning blast hits one target, but can also chain up to two more if possible, dealing reduced damage per person. Due to the power of the spell and its constant flow, the MP cost increases by 10 per extra enemy hit. This counts as a lightning spell.




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    Tsubasa Kageyama
    Tsubasa Kageyama

    Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Demon Slayer- Christian Minecraft Server- Achiever- Character Application Approved!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Adventurer’s Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 232
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Mercury Arsenault
    Experience : 27,729

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Hodgepodge
    Second Magic: XVI Battle Suit
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 16th April 2020, 9:23 pm

    Thank you Sara! I did the thing and hopefully did everything correctly!!


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

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    ... what will you fall for?
    Saraphina
    Saraphina

    The White Queen


    The White Queen

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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 20th April 2020, 12:41 am

    Thank you kindly! Edits will be made in this color, so please keep a look out for it. Once again, if you have any questions feel free to dm/pm me or post them in this thread. Bump when done ^^

    As an overarching edit, I'll need you to please put in the actual spells rank MP Costs numbers for me please rather than 'Rank Cost'. With that, here's your grading:
    ♕♕:

    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge



    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: Randomizer Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Therefore, as long as Tsubasa never uses the same school of magic twice in a row, the damage of his Burst and Single Target spells receive a Spell Damage buff of [Character Rank Buff-10%/2] and a Spell Speed buff of 15%. His Signature Spells are the exception to this, and always retain the buffs.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.
    • Ability:


    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: C [Ranks up to A] [Signature spells rank up to max S rank, so you can bump this up. And as you are B rank, you may bump this up to B rank as well.]
      MP Cost: Rank Cost [Signature spells don't cost anything]
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 60 HP
      Range: 120M
      Speed: 120 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant [Spells can't have a duration of 'instant'. Please correct accordingly.]
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy smashes into the opponent [This sounds a tick like an autohit, please reword a bit ^^].Tsubasa can ride the tail of this energy, increasing his movement and spell speed by 22% each, provided he is moving towards the target. [This sounds like you have two effects, in which isn't allowed (buff and mobility). Signature spells are limited to one effect regardless of rank or spell type. Please remove an effect ^^]

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: D
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 40 HP Magic
      Range: 15M [This can be bumped up to 60 meters if you wish]
      Speed: 15Mp/s [This can be bumped up to 60 meters per second if you wish]
      Duration: Instant [See previous Duration comment.]
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Sarya's Vines
      Rank: D
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Multi-target
      Damage: 30 HP Magic
      Range: 45 Meters
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: A gift from Sarya, a rather solemn mage who specialized in nature magic, Tsubasa’s hand gestures pull up vines, thorns or thin ropes of stone that wrap around his opponents and impede their speed. If it connects, this spell reduces opponent’s movement speed by 10% for one round. This counts as a nature spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Vapors
      Rank: D Rank
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Supportive
      Type: Area of Effect
      Healing: 20HP
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 15Mp/s
      Duration: 3 Rounds
      Description: With some eccentric hand gestures, Tsubasa summons misty vapors around the battlefield. Any allies within the area will feel a bit revitalized, as taught to him by an elderly mage Melandrach. This counts as a water spell.


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Flash
      Rank: D+
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 60 HP
      Range: 90 M
      Speed: 90 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant [See previous Duration comment.]
      Description: Crackling energy through runs through Tsubasa’s body in a dangerous but powerful spell taught to him by the wild and hungry mage Thaola, a single blast of electricity at an opponent, this tends to stop them in their tracks. [This last bit sounds like an auto hit. Please reword a bit.] This limits the opponent from moving closer to Tsubasa for one round, although they may still move otherwise. This counts as a lightning spell.



    C-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Dreams of Shyrrik
      Rank: C Rank
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Supportive [As this spell doesn't do damage, this would be an Auxiliary. Aux category spells don't heal, deal, or block damage.]
      Type: Utility/Buff [This isn't a spell Type. Spell type is Single Target, Multiple, Area of Effect, Burst, or Passive. Please change accordingly]
      Damage:
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds
      Description: A more meditative skill that requires Tsubasa to chill out for a damn second, but he is rewarded by more focus and precision. This spell grants Tsubasa a 55% increase to his movement speed. This counts as a light spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: C Rank
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Supportive [See previous spell Category comment.]
      Type: Utility/Buff [See previous spell Type comment.]
      Damage:
      Range: 30M
      Speed: 30Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, which was intended to completely absorb a damaging spell. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield allows him to raise his Spell Damage Resistance by 20% by draining some of the energy of incoming spells. This counts as a void spell. [You cannot drain spell energies. If you are negating spells, you would have to have a drawback or the mana cost that the opponent paid in order to negate on top of the cost of the spell.]

    • Name: Urazuki’s Sparks
      Rank: C
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 30 HP Magic (30 HP DoT)
      Range: 120M
      Speed: 120Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Rounds (Or until 2.5x Dmg)
      Description: On his way back from his business trip, Urazaki saw the progress that Tsubasa had made and decided to show him the next level of the Cinders technique. The Sparks technique is a series of snaps across the opponent’s body that ignite into flames that extinguish just as quickly, ideally leaving burns on their body which continue to smoulder. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Barrage
      Rank: C+
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: Area of Effect
      Damage: 45 HP
      Range: 90 M
      Speed: 90 Mp/s [C+ AoE speed is 45 meters per second. Please lower accordingly.]
      Duration: Instant [See previous Duration comment.]
      Description: Building up the energy beyond his ease of control, Tsubasa lets the energy surround him and fire off in a cone at any enemies nearby. Thaola did not exactly teach him how to do this, thus the the spell has a tendency to go a little haywire. This, like the previous incarnation, prevents enemies from moving any closer to him for one round. This counts as a lightning spell.



    “B-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmares
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Auxillary
      Type: Debuff [Please see previous spell Type comment.]
      Damage: 2% HP/MP drain per round.
      Range: 100M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: The opposite of the dream state that Shyrrik taught Tsubasa about controlling himself, the nightmare engages any of Tsubasa’s opponents within range and drains them of a minute amount of their life force for the duration of the spell as the void fills with their own darkest fears. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Clarity
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Supportive [Please see previous spell Category comment.]
      Type: Utility/Buff [Please see previous spell Type comment.]
      Damage:
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Round
      Description: Wynna, perhaps a little too eager to teach Tsubasa some spells of his own, decided to show him the opposite side of the void, unaware that he had also been training with Shyrrik. Wynna’s Clarity fills the battlefield with a soothing light, allowing Tsubasa and his allies to gain awareness of the battlefield, increasing Spell Damage of himself and all allies by 60%. This can’t be used while Shyrrik’s Nightmares is active. This counts as a light spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Bubbles
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Supportive/Effect
      Type: Area of Effect
      Healing: 30HP
      Range: 60M
      [b]Speed:
      30Mp/s
      [b]Duration:
      5 Rounds
      Description: A more powerful version of the previous spell taught by Melandrach, Tsubasa instead summons a wide range of bubbles which serve to both soothe the wounds of allies and make spells more difficult for opponents to connect. This technique reduces the spell range of opponent’s spells by 10%. This counts as a water spell.

      [/b][/b]
    • Name: Thaola’s Chain Lightning
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: Rank Cost
      Category: Offensive
      Type: (Multi-Target)
      Damage: 120HP (90 HP, 60 HP) [B+ MT damage is 90 HP max on it's own without a downside for multiple targets at once should they hit. Please lower this accordingly.]
      Range: 225 M
      Speed: 165 Mp/s
      Duration: Instant [See previous Duration comment.]
      Description: This is an upgraded version of Thaola’s Lightning Flash, which Tsubasa learned in exchange for a custom cake and several small rolls. This lightning blast hits one target, but can also chain up to two more if possible, dealing reduced damage per person. Due to the power of the spell and its constant flow, the MP cost increases by 15 per extra enemy hit. This counts as a lightning spell. [If you wish, you can make the MP cost a downside and increase the damage by 50% max.]




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 21st April 2020, 2:54 pm

    Sara, thank you so much for all your help.
    With a lot of help from my friends and inspiration from all over, I've done a top down redo of my magic with the general heart remaining the same. I hope this doesn't cause too much trouble!!


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 25th April 2020, 10:38 am

    Eyo my dear. Grading will be in the same color again, keep a look out for it. ^^ Bump when the edits are made <3

    ♕♕:

    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge



    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: B [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 80 HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200 Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed towards Tsubasa is decreased by 50%. The opponent may still move otherwise without penalty. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “C-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: C+ [Ranks up to A+]
      MP Cost: 45MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 45 HP Magic [Auxiliary spells don't deal damage. Spells in general do not take mana/magic power as well. Please either fix the category, or remove the damage.]
      Range: 90M
      Speed: 45Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, all negative effects on them are reduced by 1 round. (IE: A DoT that would last 5 rounds, lasts 4) This counts as a water spell. [Unfortunately, you cannot counter DoTs, and cannot reduce durations this way. Please rework this.]


    “B-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for increased damage. [Please state that the increase to damage is 25%]
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 40 HP Magic [This can be bumped up to 80 HP if you wish]
      Range: 60M [This can be bumped up to 200 meters if you wish.]
      Speed: 60Mp/s [This can be bumped up to 200 meters per second if you wish]
      Duration: 6 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazaki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. [This sounds like an autohit. If this is to be a DoT, then you have too much damage per post and duration that you have. Please fix accordingly.] Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell.



    “B-Rank Spells “Shyrrik and Wynna:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: Debuff [This can be removed as there is no debuff effect in your spell.]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst - Supportive - Buff [If this is to also buff, please include what it buffs, but if it also heals, then you have too much effects for the rank and will need to remove one. Please fix accordingly.]
      Durability: 240HP [If this also heals, then please lower this to 160 HP for durability, and include how much it heals.]
      Range: 30M [You can bump this up to 50 meters if you wish.]
      Speed: 30Mp/s [You can bump this up to 50 meters per second if you wish.]
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.




    “B-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: Reduced Range/Speed for additional damage. [Please include the percentage of how much reduced range and speed for the percentage of additional damage you're receiving.]
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects, it prevents the opponent using any teleportation effects throughout the duration of the spell [This sounds like an immobilization and thus would have to be for one post every other post should the opponent be hit again.]. Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Cage
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 40HP
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was designed by Thaola as a last resort, to give the caster time to recoup. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponents for one round [Please state that the immobilization can only happen every other post if the opponent is hit again.], then reduces movement speed by 60% for the remainder of the spell’s duration. This counts as a lightning spell.




    “B-Rank Spells:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. So long as Tsubasa remains between it and the opponent, the next round of offensive spells cast at Tsubasa will receive a 60% speed reduction. Following that, the fist crumbles into dust. This counts as a nature spell. [I'm going to need you to reword this please. Debuffs only happen during the duration of the spell that casts them and must apply to the character as a whole rather than to any specific spells for the duration of the spell.]

    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: D Rank [With the rest of your stats, this would have to be changed to B rank.]
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Supportive - Buff [Since you aren't healing anything with your spell, you'll need to remove 'Supportive', but if you are to heal, this wouldn't be a duel category. Please remove Supportive.]
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 25th April 2020, 6:03 pm

    Hopefully I did it right! I promise I am doing my best!!


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 29th April 2020, 9:29 am

    Edits will be in the same color again ^^ bump when done

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    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned - Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: B [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 80 HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200 Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed towards Tsubasa is decreased by 50%. The opponent may still move otherwise without penalty. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “C-Rank Spells - Melandrach:


    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: C+ [Ranks up to A+]
      MP Cost: 45MP
      Category: Auxiliary [Auxiliary spells don't deal, block, or heal damage. Please fix accordingly.]
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 45 HP [Auxiliary spells don't deal, block, or heal damage. Please fix accordingly.]
      Range: 90M
      Speed: 45Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 75% [This can be bumped up to 85% if you wish.]. This counts as a water spell.


    “B-Rank Spells - Urazaki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 40 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazaki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell.



    “B-Rank Spells - “Shyrrik and Wynna:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst - Supportive [If this doesn't heal, please remove supportive to clear up confusion]
      Durability: 240HP [If this also heals, then please lower this to 160 HP for durability, and include how much it heals.]
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.




    “B-Rank Spells - Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+ [Rank up to A+]
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post [Please include that they would have to be hit again to be immobilized.]). If the opponent is already immobilized, it will deal an additional +25% lightning damage instead [This isn't allowed. It is like buffing a single given spell's damage, which is not allowed. Please remove this.]. Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Cage
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 40HP
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was designed by Thaola as a last resort, to give the caster time to recoup. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponents for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post [Please include that they would have to be hit again to be immobilized.]), then reduces movement speed by 60% for the remainder of the spell’s duration. This counts as a lightning spell.




    “B-Rank Spells - Dayu:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank [Rank up to A]
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive - Debuff
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. So long as Tsubasa remains between it and the opponent, the next round of spells that target Tsubasa will receive a 60% speed reduction. Following that, the fist crumbles into dust. This counts as a nature spell. [I'm going to need you to reword this please. Debuffs only happen during the duration of the spell that casts them and must apply to the character as a whole rather than to any spells for the duration of the spell.]

    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 29th April 2020, 12:03 pm

    Gasp! I've done it again!


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 4th May 2020, 4:21 pm

    A couple little things in Dayu’s Fist. Same color, bump when done~!

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    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned - Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: B [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 80 HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200 Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed towards Tsubasa is decreased by 50%. The opponent may still move otherwise without penalty. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “C-Rank Spells - Melandrach:


    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: C+ [Ranks up to A+]
      MP Cost: 45MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 45 HP
      Range: 90M
      Speed: 45Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 85%. This counts as a water spell.


    “B-Rank Spells - Urazaki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 40 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazaki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell.



    “B-Rank Spells - “Shyrrik and Wynna:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.




    “B-Rank Spells - Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+ [Rank up to A+]
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Cage
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 40HP
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was designed by Thaola as a last resort, to give the caster time to recoup. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponents for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization), then reduces movement speed by 60% for the remainder of the spell’s duration. This counts as a lightning spell.




    “B-Rank Spells - Dayu:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank [Rank up to A]
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive - Debuff [Only wish to be sure, this spell doesn't debuff, correct? If it does, please clarify what it debuffs during the duration of the spell.]
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell. [If this spell debuffs, then you have one too many effects (teleportation and debuff). B rank spells can have one effect. One will need to be removed please.]
      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 5th May 2020, 1:56 am

    My mistake! All done! Looks like we're in the home stretch!!


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Saraphina 9th May 2020, 5:34 pm

    ♕♕:
    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned - Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: B [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 80 HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200 Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed towards Tsubasa is decreased by 50%. The opponent may still move otherwise without penalty. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “C-Rank Spells - Melandrach:


    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: C+ [Ranks up to A+]
      MP Cost: 45MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 45 HP
      Range: 90M
      Speed: 45Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 85%. This counts as a water spell.


    “B-Rank Spells - Urazaki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 40 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazaki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell.



    “B-Rank Spells - “Shyrrik and Wynna:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.




    “B-Rank Spells - Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+ [Rank up to A+]
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Cage
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 40HP
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was designed by Thaola as a last resort, to give the caster time to recoup. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponents for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization), then reduces movement speed by 60% for the remainder of the spell’s duration. This counts as a lightning spell.




    “B-Rank Spells - Dayu:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank [Rank up to A]
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.
      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.



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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 16th May 2020, 5:19 am

    Spoiler:
    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank.

    • Ability: Thick Skinned - Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: B [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 80 HP
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200 Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed towards Tsubasa is decreased by 50%. The opponent may still move otherwise without penalty. This counts as a Force spell.

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    Spells:

    “C-Rank Spells - Melandrach:


    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: C+ [Ranks up to A+]
      MP Cost: 45MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 45 HP
      Range: 90M
      Speed: 45Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 85%. This counts as a water spell.


    “B-Rank Spells - Urazaki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazaki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 40 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazaki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell.



    “B-Rank Spells - “Shyrrik and Wynna:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.




    “B-Rank Spells - Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+ [Rank up to A+]
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Cage
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive/Effect
      Type: AoE
      Damage: 40HP
      Range: 100 Meters
      Speed: 50 Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was designed by Thaola as a last resort, to give the caster time to recoup. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponents for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization), then reduces movement speed by 60% for the remainder of the spell’s duration. This counts as a lightning spell.




    “B-Rank Spells - Dayu:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank [Rank up to A]
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.
      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.



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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Johann 19th May 2020, 11:53 am

    Heya Aya, stole this magic from Nessa so I'm here to grade now. As usual, you will be able to find all of my edits in this color. Contact me with any questions you may have and I'll get back to you as soon as possible, and when the requested edits have been made give me a bump and I'll review this magic once more. That said, let's jump right into the grading:

    First, I must bring up that you are currently using 4 passive spells in this magic, while you possess only 12 regular spells. As only 1/4th of your spells may be turned into passive spells, that would mean that you could turn 3 of your 12 spells into passives. Subsequently, I am forced to ask you to rework one of your passive spells into an active spell.

    Spoiler:
    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own. Now, Tsubasa has gained the courage and experience to grow and change his spells with experience. Additionally, he's gained a few spells when he most recently returned home and once again trained with his old masters.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: This and That - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. Each time he uses a different class of magic in a row, his spell and movement speed buffs up +10% to a cap of Tsubasa’s Rank [Capping at S]. (IE: D-Rank caps at 40%, C-Rank caps at 45%, etc). Should Tsubasa use the same class of magic twice and a row, this buff will drop down to the next lowest rank. (At current, you are buffing 2 separate stats in this UA, which actually means that the total buff for this UA would be, at current, 110% max (a 55% buff to spell speed and a 55% buff to movement speed), which is too much for an A rank passive ability. As such, I must ask you to rework this ability accordingly)

    • Ability: Thick Skinned - Tsubasa is an incredibly stubborn young man. His HP is boosted by 40% and Melee damage is resisted by 15%.

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300 Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa or a shoving motion with his hand, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed is decreased by 55%. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability: Tsubasa’s Punch to the Face
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: This is a spell that Tsubasa sort of came up with on the fly, although it’s hardly original. He covers his fist with force energy and tries to clock his opponent in the face. This jarring punch reduces spell damage by 55% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a Force spell.

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    Spells:

    “Melandrach, The Ancient Rain”:



    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 60 HP
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 90%. This counts as a water spell. (This spell seems a little vague, as it doesn't appear to possess a physical manifestation or method of casting/expelling the spell, which I would like to ask you to add)

    • Name: Melandrach’s Guard
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Using the power of Melandrach’s water based magic, Tsubasa collects a quick grip of water and throws it up before him, forearms facing his opponent and using the water to block whatever is coming at him. Additionally, this grants an additional +60% Buff to Spell Healing while it sustains. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Sphere
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 190HP
      Range: 335M
      Speed: 335Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Downside: roughly -25% reduced range/speed for roughly +25% increased damage. (Unfortunately, we round down on FTRP, which means that with a 25% damage increase, the damage would add up to only 187 HP. You'd have to adjust the damage of the spell accordingly or adjust the percentages in order to grant you the desired damage increase)
      Description: Tsubasa summons a massive sphere of water, and straight up dunks it on his opponent. This immobilizes the opponent for the first round [Following all site rules of immobilization including preventing stun locking and requiring recast for another immobilization] and sustains a +100% buff increase to spell healing throughout the duration. This counts as a water and void spell.



    “The Wandering Flare Urazuki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazuki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at his enemy (As I am assuming this spell is a Single Target spell, this is a little unclear. Does every spark deal a portion of the spell's damage, thus making them separate projectiles, or do all sparks combined count as a singular projectile and deal the spell's damage only when combined? Please clarify). This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Flamethrower
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 150 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts
      Downside: 5% HP damage per round for +50% damage.
      Description: Urazuki’s Flamethrower is something of a bastardization of the actual spells that were taught by Urazuki. Rather than a quick spark of energy, this is a sustained current of flame. This is quite draining and deals 5% HP damage to Tsubasa as well for as long as he chooses to endure it (Up to the spell’s duration). This counts as a fire and darkness spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 50 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazuki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. If this attack connects (What form does this attack take in the first place? This is not really clear, meaning that I am forced to ask you to clarify that a bit more), it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this flame is easier to ignite. While this flame endures, other fire spells deal +50% more damage. This counts as a fire spell and a light spell. (It isn't actually very clear what this actually is - a spell damage buff to the user of the spell or a magic damage resistance debuff to the target, as it could be interpreted as either. I must ask you to clarify this. Further, both buffs and debuffs can never apply to set types of spells, i.e. "Fire spells", for example, and must always apply to characters as a whole, meaning that I must also ask you to rework this effect accordingly)



    “Shyrrik and Wynna, Void Champions”:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. During the duration of this spell, the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell. (This spell, at current, is worded like an auto-hit, as the spell does not possess an obvious physical component, such as a projectile, for example, that can be dodged in order to avoid the spell and its effects. Please change this accordingly)

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: A Rank
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 300HP
      Range: 75M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.

    • Name: Shyrrik and Wynna’s Synergy
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Utilizing the strengths of both Wynna and Shyrrik’s natural void abilities, Tsubasa has gained a capability of sustaining further damage by creating miniature black holes that are capable of voiding a small amount of the energy that comes at him [Fluff]. His magical damage resistance is increased by a 50% buff.



    “The Lightning Queen Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. If this spell connects (How is the spell used to attack? Please clarify), it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning and light spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Thunderous Triumph
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Although Tsubasa could never properly imitate Thaola’s serious presence, her general positive energy has rubbed off on him, allowing him to sustain battles longer. This provides a +50% Buff to MP.



    “Dayu of the Stone:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.
      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell and a light spell.



    “Yamagi Kageyama, Grand Priest of Kyukei Temple”:



    • Name: Kyukei Heiwa
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 75 MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: Single Target
      Healing: 150HP
      Range: 450M
      Speed: 450Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Description: After his most recent visit home, Tsubasa’s father became concerned for his son. Therefore he took the time to teach Tsubasa one of the only spells he knew, an ancient magic passed down the main branch of the Kageyama line. It was designed to give a burst of energy to even the most exhausted warriors. When blessed with the Kyukei Heiwa (Peaceful Rest), mages will be healed and rejuvenated with a further 5% HP regeneration for the duration of the spell. Additionally, they will be blessed with +100% Spell Durability throughout the spell’s duration. Supposedly, this spell is capable of mending bones immediately [Fluff]. This counts as a holy spell.




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 19th May 2020, 4:22 pm

    Joh! I did it! I did also changed some small things to reflect my character's recent changes so I hope it's not too much of a nuisance. Thank you!!


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Johann 22nd May 2020, 4:07 am

    Just a few more edits, same color

    Spoiler:

    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own. Now, Tsubasa has gained the courage and experience to grow and change his spells with experience. Additionally, he's gained a few spells when he most recently returned home and once again trained with his old masters.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: Ramp Up - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. His Movement speed ranks up by +10% per different class of spell cast, capping at Rank[Up to S] (Please specify that this caps at passive buff numbers). Once it reaches cap, he regains a passive 5% HP per post [Capped by regular site regulations.]

    • Ability: Under the Light of the Moon - Since the realization of the depth of the magic within him, not just what has been taught to him, Tsubasa's Hodgepodge has evolved slightly. All of his magic is now tinged with light. This means slayers who attempt to devour it can only devour half (and thus regain half the MP), unless they could also devour light magic. This also means that it is more harmful against weak demons [NPCs only, others with permission].

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300 Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa or a shoving motion with his hand, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed is decreased by 55%. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability: Tsubasa’s Punch to the Face
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: This is a spell that Tsubasa sort of came up with on the fly, although it’s hardly original. He covers his fist with force energy and tries to clock his opponent in the face. This jarring punch reduces spell damage by 55% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “Melandrach, The Ancient Rain”:



    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 60 HP
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach, summoning a wide wave of energy that crashes onto the battlefield with soothing waters. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 90%. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Guard
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Using the power of Melandrach’s water based magic, Tsubasa collects a quick grip of water and throws it up before him, forearms facing his opponent and using the water to block whatever is coming at him. Additionally, this grants an additional +60% Buff to Spell Healing while it sustains. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Sphere
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 195HP
      Range: 315M
      Speed: 315Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Downside: -30% reduced range/speed for +30% increased damage.
      Description: Tsubasa summons a massive sphere of water, and straight up dunks it on his opponent. This immobilizes the opponent for the first round [Following all site rules of immobilization including preventing stun locking and requiring recast for another immobilization] and sustains a -100% debuff decrease to spell healing on opponents throughout the duration. This counts as a water and void spell.



    “The Wandering Flare Urazuki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazuki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at an enemy. The three sparks converge into a single one, in an attempt to strike the opponent. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Flamethrower
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 150 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts
      Downside: 5% HP damage per round for +50% damage.
      Description: Urazuki’s Flamethrower is something of a bastardization of the actual spells that were taught by Urazuki. Rather than a quick spark of energy, this is a sustained current of flame. This is quite draining and deals 5% HP damage to Tsubasa as well for as long as he chooses to endure it (Up to the spell’s duration). This counts as a fire and darkness spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 50 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazuki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. Initially it looks exactly like Urazuki's Cinders, witht he exception of being purple instead of red. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this enduring flame weakens the opponent's resolve. While this flame burns, the opponent's magical resistance is reduced by 65% (Debuffs to resistances, both magical and physical, cap at 50% max). This counts as a fire spell.



    “Shyrrik and Wynna, Void Champions”:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. Tsubasa's eyes turn entirely dark, nearly a vantablack and he asks a key phrase "What are you afraid of?". If the spell is not resisted (blocked or dodged as a verbal/visual spell would be), the opponent is drained of 5% HP per turn. This counts as a void spell. (This is still adjacent to an auto-hit, as the spell doesn't possess a component that can physically be dodged by opponents in order to avoid the spell, i.e. a projectile that is fired at them or something comparable. Uttering a phrase or even visual activation of a spell do, unfortunately, not constitute a circumstance that reasonably allows targets to dodge a spell and its effects, which means that I am forced to ask you to rework this spell once more, taking this into account)

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: A Rank
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 300HP
      Range: 75M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.

    • Name: Shyrrik and Wynna’s Synergy
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: [Negated Spell's Cost] (This section denotes a spells own MP cost. For negation effects, you must pay the cost of the spell that contains such an effect, i.e. B rank spell cost in this case, to cast the spell in the first place, on top of the MP of the spell being negated)
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst
      Damage:
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: 1
      Description: Utilizing the strengths of both Wynna and Shyrrik’s natural void abilities, Tsubasa has gained the ability to create small void holes to negate energy. By paying the MP cost (following all site rules), Tsubasa can negate a single spell aimed at himself or an ally (I must ask you to include a couple of additional stipulations to this negation effect. First, I must ask you to specify that only spells coming in contact with this spell itself may be negated, that the original cost of the spell being negated must be paid in order to negate it in addition to the cost of this spell itself, and that only spells or abilities of B rank or lower can be negated through the use of this effect). If it is a void or light spell, Tsubasa can redirect it at the opponent or a third party instead. (As this is a reflection effect, which functions like negations with minor differences, I must ask you to include the following stipulations for this reflection effect: Please specify that only one spell per post may be reflected through the use of this effect, that the spell or ability being reflected must make physical contact with this spell in order to be reflected, that only spells of B rank or lower may be reflected through the use of this effect, and that two times the original MP cost of the spell or ability must be paid, in addition to the cost of this spell itself, in order to successfully reflect it)



    “The Lightning Queen Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. It manifests as an electric whip which attempts to strike the opponent and, if possible, wrap around them. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Thunderous Triumph
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Although Tsubasa could never properly imitate Thaola’s serious presence, her general positive energy has rubbed off on him, allowing him to sustain battles longer. This provides a +50% Buff to MP.



    “Dayu of the Stone:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.

      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell.



    “Yamagi Kageyama, Grand Priest of Kyukei Temple”:



    • Name: Kyukei Heiwa
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 75 MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: Single Target
      Healing: 150HP
      Range: 450M
      Speed: 450Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Description: After his most recent visit home, Tsubasa’s father became concerned for his son. Therefore he took the time to teach Tsubasa one of the only spells he knew, an ancient magic passed down the main branch of the Kageyama line. It was designed to give a burst of energy to even the most exhausted warriors. When blessed with the Kyukei Heiwa (Peaceful Rest), mages will be healed and rejuvenated with a further 5% HP regeneration for the duration of the spell. Additionally, they will be blessed with +100% Spell Durability throughout the spell’s duration. Supposedly, this spell is capable of mending bones immediately [Fluff]. This counts as a holy spell.




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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Tsubasa Kageyama 23rd May 2020, 6:31 pm

    I think I did it Joh!
    Also I updated the name of the Heiwa spell because the Japanese was wrong and I am a weeb.


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    Completed Re: Hodgepodge

    Post by Johann 26th May 2020, 6:07 am

    Hodgepodge FbVA7uB

    Spoiler:
    @Tsubasa Kageyama wrote:
    Magic Name: Hodgepodge


    Magic Type: Caster [Solitary +25% to MP Cost Reduction]
    Description: To say that Tsubasa developed Hodgepodge on his own is not exactly true. Hodgepodge is just as it is named; it is a gathering of the different skills and magics that he learned from mages as they travelled throughout his family’s temple. Trading sweets for spells turned out to be beneficial in more than a few ways, and it has made him adept at quickly learning what others are willing to teach him, and adapting these spells to make them his own. Now, Tsubasa has gained the courage and experience to grow and change his spells with experience. Additionally, he's gained a few spells when he most recently returned home and once again trained with his old masters.

    Hodgepodge is used in conjunction with Tsubasa’s energetic nature, with over the top gestures, shouting the names of spells and basically never stopping until the battle is finished. Though these spells have different origins and abilities, he has mashed them together into a working Magic, much like an expert chef can create delicious meatloaf out of whatever is in the fridge.

    Tsubasa can also create a delicious meatloaf.


    Unique Abilities:


    • Ability: Ramp Up - Tsubasa has several different schools of magic all under his belt, and combined with his innate energetic personality, allows him to get a little hyped up as he uses his different types of magic. His Movement speed ranks up by +10% per different class of spell cast, capping at Rank[Up to S, caps at passive buffs]. Once it reaches cap, he regains a passive 5% HP per post [Capped by regular site regulations.]

    • Ability: Under the Light of the Moon - Since the realization of the depth of the magic within him, not just what has been taught to him, Tsubasa's Hodgepodge has evolved slightly. All of his magic is now tinged with light. This means slayers who attempt to devour it can only devour half (and thus regain half the MP), unless they could also devour light magic. This also means that it is more harmful against weak demons [NPCs only, others with permission].

    • Ability:



    Signature Spells:


    • Name: Tsubasa’s Force Blast
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300 Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: The most basic of spells and one that Tsubasa has been toying with the longest. With a wide-eyed glare from Tsubasa or a shoving motion with his hand, a burst of force damage almost like a solid wall of raw energy soars towards the opponent. If hit by this, movement speed is decreased by 55%. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability: Tsubasa’s Punch to the Face
      Rank: A [Ranks up to S]
      MP Cost:
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 100 HP
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: 7 Posts.
      Description: This is a spell that Tsubasa sort of came up with on the fly, although it’s hardly original. He covers his fist with force energy and tries to clock his opponent in the face. This jarring punch reduces spell damage by 55% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a Force spell.

    • Ability:


    Spells:

    “Melandrach, The Ancient Rain”:



    • Name: Melandrach’s Waves
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: AoE
      Healing: 60 HP
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Posts
      Description: Tsubasa focuses on the restorative properties taught to him by the Water Mage Melandrach, summoning a wide wave of energy that crashes onto the battlefield with soothing waters. While allies remain within the radius of the spell, their spell damage increases by 90%. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Guard
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 240HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Using the power of Melandrach’s water based magic, Tsubasa collects a quick grip of water and throws it up before him, forearms facing his opponent and using the water to block whatever is coming at him. Additionally, this grants an additional +60% Buff to Spell Healing while it sustains. This counts as a water spell.

    • Name: Melandrach’s Sphere
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 195HP
      Range: 315M
      Speed: 315Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Downside: -30% reduced range/speed for +30% increased damage.
      Description: Tsubasa summons a massive sphere of water, and straight up dunks it on his opponent. This immobilizes the opponent for the first round [Following all site rules of immobilization including preventing stun locking and requiring recast for another immobilization] and sustains a -100% debuff decrease to spell healing on opponents throughout the duration. This counts as a water and void spell.



    “The Wandering Flare Urazuki:


    • Name: Urazuki’s Cunning
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Like the uncontrolled flames, Tsubasa was taught that to be unpredictable can be an advantage if used properly. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to movement speed.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Cinders
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 100 HP Magic
      Range: 150M
      Speed: 150Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Post
      Downside: Range/Speed Reduced by 25% for a 25% increase to damage.
      Description: Utilizing the most basic skill taught to him by wandering mage Urazuki, with three consecutive snaps of his fingers, Tsubasa sends a quick series of fiery sparks at an enemy. The three sparks converge into a single one, in an attempt to strike the opponent. This counts as a fire spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Flamethrower
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single
      Damage: 150 HP
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Posts
      Downside: 5% HP damage per round for +50% damage.
      Description: Urazuki’s Flamethrower is something of a bastardization of the actual spells that were taught by Urazuki. Rather than a quick spark of energy, this is a sustained current of flame. This is quite draining and deals 5% HP damage to Tsubasa as well for as long as he chooses to endure it (Up to the spell’s duration). This counts as a fire and darkness spell.

    • Name: Urazuki’s Blaze
      Rank: A
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target - DoT
      Damage: 50 HP Magic (Continues until 2.5x damage has been dealt)
      Range: 300M
      Speed: 300Mp/s
      Duration: 5 Posts (or until max damage)
      Description: An enduring version of Urazuki’s Cinders, Tsubasa was taught to try to keep the flames going on his opponents’ form for as long as possible. Initially it looks exactly like Urazuki's Cinders, witht he exception of being purple instead of red. If this attack connects, it will continue to burn until 2.5x damage is dealt. Additionally, this enduring flame weakens the opponent's resolve. While this flame burns, the opponent's magical resistance is reduced by 50%, and physical by 15%. This counts as a fire spell.



    “Shyrrik and Wynna, Void Champions”:


    • Name: Shyrrik’s Nightmare
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: [HP Drain]
      Range: 200M
      Speed: 200Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: This spell was taught by a more serious mage named Shyrrik, how to affect others’ dreams and, especially, show them either a projection of own worst fears [With OOC permission] or merely attempt to pull them into the realm of nightmares themselves. Tsubasa's eyes turn entirely dark, nearly a vantablack and he asks a key phrase "What are you afraid of?". He attempts to connect to his opponent via thin strings of energy that extend from his fingertips like a puppeteer. If successful, it drains of 5% HP per turn for the duration. This counts as a void spell.

    • Name: Wynna’s Shield
      Rank: A Rank
      MP Cost: 50MP
      Category: Defensive
      Type: Burst
      Durability: 300HP
      Range: 75M
      Speed: 75Mp/s
      Duration: 7 Rounds
      Description: Wynna was a young, energetic mage just like Tsubasa himself who specialized in void spells. Due to Tsubasa’s high spirit but low skill, he could never quite master the full spell, rather a weakened version of it. Rather, for the duration of the spell, Wynna’s Shield creates a small black hole which acts as a barrier against incoming attacks. This counts as a void spell.
      Plot Ability: This ability can be used by pulling different inanimate objects in the way of Tsubasa and the offensive spell, usually with NPCs in jobs or with OOC permission from other players. This is just window dressing for the spell and doesn’t affect its stats at all.

    • Name: Shyrrik and Wynna’s Synergy
      Rank: B
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst
      Damage:
      Range: Burst
      Speed: Burst
      Duration: [Rank Spell Duration]
      Description: Utilizing the strengths of both Wynna and Shyrrik’s natural void abilities, Tsubasa has gained the ability to create small void holes to negate energy. By paying the original MP cost of the opponent's spell (up to B rank), Tsubasa can negate a single spell that comes into contact with Synergy. If the B Rank (or lower) single spell is a void or light spell, Tsubasa can redirect it at the opponent or a third party instead by paying twice the original MP cost of the spell as well as the cost to negate it. The reflection can happen only once per post.



    “The Lightning Queen Thaola:


    • Name: Thaola’s Lightning Lash
      Rank: B+
      MP Cost: 60 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Single Target
      Damage: 150HP
      Range: 225M
      Speed: 225Mp/s
      Duration: 8 Rounds
      Downside: -25% reduced range/speed for +25% increased damage.
      Description: The most powerful spell Thaola was willing to teach Tsubasa, this spell takes full advantage of the power of lightning. It manifests as an electric whip which attempts to strike the opponent and, if possible, wrap around them. If this spell connects, it immobilizes the opponent for one round (immobilization can only happen once every other post and must connect to immobilize again, following all site rules for immobilization). Additionally, this spell increases Tsubasa’s movement speed by 90% for the duration of the spell. This counts as a lightning spell.

    • Name: Thaola’s Thunderous Triumph
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Although Tsubasa could never properly imitate Thaola’s serious presence, her general positive energy has rubbed off on him, allowing him to sustain battles longer. This provides a +50% Buff to MP.



    “Dayu of the Stone:


    • Name: Dayu’s Repose
      Rank: B
      MP Cost:
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Passive
      Damage:
      Range: Self
      Speed: Self
      Duration: Passive
      Description: Dayu may have been Tsubasa’s first real mentor. The ancient mage spent many weeks at Tsubasa’s temple, claiming to stay mostly for the food. One of the most important things Dayu taught Tsubasa is that battles are as mental as they are physical. Thus, Tsubasa has trained up his mana reserves under the tutelage of the peaceful Earth wizard. Tsubasa gains a passive +50% buff to MP.

    • Name: Dayu’s Fist
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40 MP
      Category: Offensive
      Type: Burst
      Damage: 80HP
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 1 Round
      Description: The Land around us can shield us but it can also be a powerful offensive and defensive tool. With Dayu’s Fist, Tsubasa literally creates a fist of stone that punches towards the opponent. Tsubasa can use this fist to teleport, following all site rules of teleportation. This counts as a nature spell.

      Plot Ability: This spell can cause Tsubasa to teleport by engulfing him in it and rushing him forward within the fist, cracking open like an egg upon arrival. This does not create a shield, does not change the damage or any other features of the spell. It's just window dressing and potentially hilarious.


    • Name: Dayu’s Commune
      Rank: B Rank
      MP Cost: 40MP
      Category: Auxiliary
      Type: Burst - Buff
      Durability:
      Range: 50M
      Speed: 50Mp/s
      Duration: 6 Rounds
      Description: Realizing that Tsubasa had trouble relaxing, paying attention and generally sitting still, Dayu’s first task was to teach him to take a moment to analyze his situation and make the most of his own energies. Throughout the duration of this spell, Tsubasa’s spell damage is increased by 60%. This counts as a nature spell.



    “Yamagi Kageyama, Grand Priest of Kyukei Temple”:



    • Name: Heiwa na Kyuusoku
      Rank: A+
      MP Cost: 75 MP
      Category: Supportive
      Type: Single Target
      Healing: 150HP
      Range: 450M
      Speed: 450Mp/s
      Duration: 9 Rounds
      Description: After his most recent visit home, Tsubasa’s father became concerned for his son. Therefore he took the time to teach Tsubasa one of the only spells he knew, an ancient magic passed down the main branch of the Kageyama line. It was designed to give a burst of energy to even the most exhausted warriors. When blessed with the Heiwa na Kyuusoku (Peaceful Respite), mages will be healed and rejuvenated with a further 5% HP regeneration for the duration of the spell. Additionally, they will be blessed with +100% Spell Durability throughout the spell’s duration. Supposedly, this spell is capable of mending bones immediately [Fluff]. This counts as a holy spell.




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