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    Insatiable Hunger

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    Completed Insatiable Hunger

    Post by DOPPO on 9th December 2018, 9:34 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster (Solitary)
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    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. In addition to this, his body can manifest into properties of anything he's recently digested. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability: By taking on the properties of food he's consumed and recently digested, Chiyuki can excel in things people would not normally think of. If he consumes something with gils, he will be able to breathe underwater and see clearly. If he's eats something with an incredible sense of smell, his own sense of smell is heightened, and etc.


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 100m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: S
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 60
    Range: 200m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 200 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage. (A-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in melee damage. (B-rank)

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    B-ranks:

    Crickets:
    Name: Crickets
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 40
    Range: 100
    Speed: 50
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Crickets is the food of the future in many nations over Earthland, and Chiyuki doesn’t discriminate when it comes to battle! If Chiyuki consumes and digests crickets, he will have incredible leaping ability in combat. When he lands from great heights, the surface around him will crumble and shatter, damaging anyone within his range and increase Chiyuki's melee damage by 60%.

    Scrumptious Seeds:
    Name: Scrumptious Seeds
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 40
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s cheeks begin to fill up with something before he spits at a single target with a barrage of seeds he’s recently consumed. The seeds are elevated and are akin to magical bullets, and while he shoots them from his mouth, they can also be shot from any part of his skin. These seeds can pierce shields and armor in exchange for reduced damage potency. The collective barrage deals the spell's damage.

    Ice, Ice, Baby:
    Name: Ice, Ice, Baby!
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  An icy mist begins to surround Chiyuki if he has recently consumed ice cubes. Any motion he makes is accompanied by a wave of ice that mimics it. For example, if Chiyuki punches forward, thick waves of ice will protrude from any nearby surface and puncture any targets struck by it. If he kicks upwards, ice will instantaneously shoot upwards from the ground. Only a single attack directed at a single target may be made with this spell. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 60%.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 60% speed buff.

    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Marshmallow:
    Name: Marshmallow
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: If Chiyuki has consumed marshmallows recently, this spell is viable. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's body becomes soft and squishy while capable of creating sticky, sweet webs from his body. While this spell is active, spells and abilities B-rank and lower can be reflected onto the caster if they strike Chiyuki in exchange for double the mana cost. Only a single spell per post may be reflected.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: Melee
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned and suffers damage from the suffocation. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:

    Takoyaki Tentacles:
    Name: Takoyaki Tentacles
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 100
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s limbs and/or appendages will begin to extend and transform into tentacles with suction cups to stick to objects and elasticity to extend if he consumes squid, octopus, or anything with similar properties. With this spell, he can grab opponents, throw them, immobilize them (should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again), and stick to surfaces. Additionally, spells and abilities that are within his grasp can be negated in exchange for doubling the mana cost. Only spells and abilities of A-rank or lower may be negated, and only a single spell or ability may be negated per post using this spell. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell

    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned, and should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter (LOCKED):
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch. When targets are struck, they can be stunned for every other post and suffer from a 50% increase to spell costs.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    Apples to Apples:
    Name: Apples to Apples
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While this spell’s name speaks of apples, any fruit or vegetable with acid makes this spell applicable. While the acid in fruit and vegetables is harmless, the acid Chiyuki creates from eating it is elevated and deadly.

    When this spell is activated, Chiyuki will begin to drip with this acid as if he were sweating profusely. The ground he touches will melt with every step and people make contact with the acid will suffer second to third-degree burns. Chiyuki attacks with this spell through shooting streams of acid through any part of his skin or by spitting. Targets struck by this spell are drained 5% (max) of their MP per post. In addition to this, spell damage is increased by 100% during the duration of this spell. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell

    S-ranks:
    Soda Pop!:
    Name: Soda Pop!
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While not specifically restricted to sodas, any carbonated drink that Chiyuki digests can manifest into this spell. When this spell is activated, Chiyuki’s skin will begin to bubble. Anything he makes contact with within his range is viable to combust, similar to that of the popping of carbon dioxide bubbles in soda. To land an attack on his opponents, a bubble will quickly inflate on any part of his body and combust. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    If struck by this spell, targets will be drained 5% of their MP per post (max). Additionally, this spell grants Chiyuki a 70% spell damage increase.

    Pufferfish:
    Name: Pufferfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spikes protrude from Chiyuki’s body, similar to that of a pufferfish he must consume ahead of time, and punctures a single target within range. It can extend from something as small as his fingers or as large as his entire body in all directions. During the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. In addition to this, the spikes can puncture the barriers of a single target in exchange for reducing its damage by 50% when it does.

    Swordfish:
    Name: Swordfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Rarer to see because of the accessibility of this delicacy, when Chiyuki consumes this fish, his limbs and appendages are capable of turning into “swords” similar to the swordfish’s beak/spear. This spell pierces armor and shields in exchange for reducing it's base damage by 50% when it does. Additionally, during the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    Ishgar. . . Smash!!:
    Name: Ishgar. . . Smash!!
    Rank: S+
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 180
    Range: 600
    Speed: 600
    Duration: 12
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to feel raw power swell in his fist. Veins will begin to bulge, the whites in his eyes will take over, and the ground around him will shake. When Chiyuki releases this power into a single strike, the surface around him will shatter and implode. The target struck is immobilized for every other post. Additionally, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 105%. If struck again, the target will be stunned again and reapply the effect.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 12th December 2018, 12:52 pm

    Heyo, uh, "Doppo", I'm Jo and I'll be the one grading this magic today. Questions and clarifications in this thread as always. All edits will be done in this beautiful colour. Bump when you're done :D

    Spoiler:

    @DOPPO wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 65% increase in melee damage. ( A passive A Rank buff caps at 55%. Lower this by 10%)
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 65% increase in spell damage. (See above)
    • Ability:


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 75m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50
    Range: 150m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 150 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in magical resistance. (D rank passive buffs cap at 40%)
    - Chiyuki gains a 65% increase in melee damage. (A rank passive buffs cap at 55%)
    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in spell speed. (D rank passive buffs cap at 40%)

    D-ranks:
    Recuperate:
    Name: Recuperate
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 40
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki relaxes and taps into his bodily fats to restore energy.

    Flex:
    Name: Flex
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 80 (Two D's)
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki flexes, his muscles tenser and able to take more hits. He is able to ignore damage until his defense breaks.

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 5 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be 3x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x C Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and every other post afterwards and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 55% speed buff.

    B-ranks:
    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be 3.5x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x B Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Bonebreaker:
    Name: Bonebreaker
    Rank: B
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki dashes from target to target anywhere within his range and strikes them, bruising their bodies and causing it to ache, so much so they suffer damage. All struck targets are stunned and will continue to stun every other post.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 6 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be 3.5x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x B Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned every other post and suffers damage from the suffocation. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 8 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be ~3.4x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x B+ Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 8 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be ~3.4x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x B+ Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:
    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned and will continue to be stunned every other post. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter:
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 9 (DoT spells cap at 2.5x worth of their ranks damage, with the current duration it would be 5x rank damage total. Please change this so it maxes out at 2.5x A+ Rank damage max)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun every other post.

    Lunch Break:
    Name: Lunch Break
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki taps into his bodily fat and restores health as he uses stored energy to heal wounds and energize him.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by DOPPO on 12th December 2018, 2:36 pm

    Bumping just for you bb


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 12th December 2018, 2:56 pm

    Insatiable Hunger  1cEJcPL

    Spoiler:
    @DOPPO wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 55% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 55% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability:


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 75m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50
    Range: 150m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 150 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in magical resistance.
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage.
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in spell speed.

    D-ranks:
    Recuperate:
    Name: Recuperate
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 40
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki relaxes and taps into his bodily fats to restore energy.

    Flex:
    Name: Flex
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 80 (Two D's)
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki flexes, his muscles tenser and able to take more hits. He is able to ignore damage until his defense breaks.

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and every other post afterwards and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 55% speed buff.

    B-ranks:
    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Bonebreaker:
    Name: Bonebreaker
    Rank: B
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki dashes from target to target anywhere within his range and strikes them, bruising their bodies and causing it to ache, so much so they suffer damage. All struck targets are stunned and will continue to stun every other post.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned every other post and suffers damage from the suffocation. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:
    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned and will continue to be stunned every other post. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter:
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun every other post.

    Lunch Break:
    Name: Lunch Break
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki taps into his bodily fat and restores health as he uses stored energy to heal wounds and energize him.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 2nd September 2019, 11:50 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

    Spoiler:
    @DOPPO wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 55% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 55% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability:


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 75m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50
    Range: 150m
    Speed: 75m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 150 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in magical resistance.
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage.
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in spell speed.

    D-ranks:
    Recuperate:
    Name: Recuperate
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 40
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki relaxes and taps into his bodily fats to restore energy.

    Flex:
    Name: Flex
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 80 (Two D's)
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki flexes, his muscles tenser and able to take more hits. He is able to ignore damage until his defense breaks.

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and every other post afterwards and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: C
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 55% speed buff.

    B-ranks:
    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Bonebreaker:
    Name: Bonebreaker
    Rank: B
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki dashes from target to target anywhere within his range and strikes them, bruising their bodies and causing it to ache, so much so they suffer damage. All struck targets are stunned and will continue to stun every other post.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned every other post and suffers damage from the suffocation. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:
    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned and will continue to be stunned every other post. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter:
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun every other post.

    Lunch Break:
    Name: Lunch Break
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: n/a
    Speed: n/a
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki taps into his bodily fat and restores health as he uses stored energy to heal wounds and energize him.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by DOPPO on 8th September 2019, 6:18 pm

    For Grader's Convenience:

    - Updated magic description to reflect inclusion of new types of spells:

    - Increased UA Stat percentage.

    - Added last UA

    - Added categories to all spells

    - Updated range, speeds, and damage of both signature spells.

    - Added new passive

    - Changed all passives to melee damage increases

    - Removed both D-ranks and relocated their spell slots

    - Added "Crickets", "Scrumptious Seeds", "Ice, Ice, Baby", "Marshmallow", "Takoyaki Tentacles", "Apples to Apples"

    - Increased speed buff percentage in "Bodybuilding" and changed the duration from 5 to 6.

    - Removed "Bonebreaker" and "Lunch Break"

    - Added effects to "Weightlifter"

    - Added S-ranks

    (9/8/2019)


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 24th September 2019, 8:22 am

    Hello, Doppo. Joh here today to grade your magic. You know how this goes so all edits in this color. As an overarching comment, you are utilizing 19 regular spell slots in this magic while the max you can normally have is 15. If you are using additionally acquired spell slots in this magic I need you to link the proof of acquisition for the additional spells.

    Spoiler:
    @DOPPO wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster (Please specify the benefit level of this magic, i.e. Solitary, Primary, Auxiliary)
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. In addition to this, his body can manifest into properties of anything he's recently digested. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability: By taking on the properties of food he's consumed and recently digested, Chiyuki can excel in things people would not normally think of. If he consumes something with gils, he will be able to breathe underwater and see clearly. If he's eats something with an incredible sense of smell, his own sense of smell is heightened, and etc.


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 100m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: A (Scales to S)
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 60
    Range: 200m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 150 meters. (The range specified in the description of the spell and the range specified above don't match. Please clarify this)

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage. (A-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in melee damage. (B-rank)

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: n/a (All spells need a range, "Self" would be adequate in this case)
    Speed: n/a (See above)
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and every other post afterwards and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell. (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly)

    B-ranks:

    Crickets:
    Name: Crickets
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Healing: 80 (Since this is an offensive spell I must ask you to change "Healing" to "Damage". Also, since this is an AoE spell, please lower the damage from 80 to 40)
    Range: 100
    Speed: 50
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Crickets is the food of the future in many nations over Earthland, and Chiyuki doesn’t discriminate when it comes to battle! If Chiyuki consumes and digests crickets, he will have incredible leaping ability in combat. When he lands from great heights, the surface around him will crumble and shatter, damaging anyone within his range and increase Chiyuki's melee damage by 60%.

    Scrumptious Seeds:
    Name: Scrumptious Seeds
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 40
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s cheeks begin to fill up with something before he spits at a single target with a barrage of seeds he’s recently consumed. The seeds are elevated and are akin to magical bullets, and while he shoots them from his mouth, they can also be shot from any part of his skin. These seeds can pierce shields and armor in exchange for reduced damage potency. (Does the collective barrage deal the spell's damage or does every single projectile only deal a portion of the spell's damage? At current, this sounds more like a Multi Target spell, so I need you to clarify this one for me)

    Ice, Ice, Baby:
    Name: Ice, Ice, Baby!
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  An icy mist begins to surround Chiyuki if he has recently consumed ice cubes. Any motion he makes is accompanied by a wave of ice that mimics it. For example, if Chiyuki punches forward, thick waves of ice will protrude from any nearby surface and puncture any targets struck by it. If he kicks upwards, ice will instantaneously shoot upwards from the ground. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 60%. (This spell is worded like a Multi Target spell. If you wish to retain it as a Single Target spell please clarify that only a single attack directed at a single opponent may be made with this spell per post)


    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: n/a (All spells need a range, "Self" would be adequate in this case)
    Speed: n/a (See above)
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 60% speed buff.

    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Marshmallow:
    Name: Marshmallow
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: If Chiyuki has consumed marshmallows recently, this spell is viable. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's body becomes soft and squishy while capable of creating sticky, sweet webs from his body. While this spell is active, spells and abilities B-rank and lower can be reflected onto the caster if they strike Chiyuki in exchange for double the mana cost. (Please specify that only a single spell per post may be reflected)

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: n/a (All spells require a spell, "Melee" should be sufficient in this case)
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned every other post and suffers damage from the suffocation. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%. (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly)
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:

    Takoyaki Tentacles:
    Name: Takoyaki Tentacles
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 100
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s limbs and/or appendages will begin to extend and transform into tentacles with suction cups to stick to objects and elasticity to extend if he consumes squid, octopus, or anything with similar properties. With this spell, he can grab opponents, throw them, immobilize them (for every other post) (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly. Also, since this is a single target spell, please specify that only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell), and stick to surfaces. Additionally, spells and abilites that are within his grasp can be negated in exchange for doubling the mana cost. (Please specify that only spells and abilities of A rank or lower may be negated, and only a single spell or ability may be negated per post using this spell)

    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned and will continue to be stunned every other post (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly). Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter:
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch. When targets are struck, they can be stunned for every other post and suffer from a 65% increase to spell costs (Increases to spell cost cap at 50% max).

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun every other post (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly).

    Apples to Apples:
    Name: Apples to Apples
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While this spell’s name speaks of apples, any fruit or vegetable with acid makes this spell applicable. While the acid in fruit and vegetables is harmless, the acid Chiyuki creates from eating it is elevated and deadly.

    When this spell is activated, Chiyuki will begin to drip with this acid as if he were sweating profusely. The ground he touches will melt with every step and people make contact with the acid will suffer second to third-degree burns. Chiyuki attacks with this spell through shooting streams of acid through any part of his skin or by spitting. Targets struck by this spell are drained 5% of their MP each time they are struck (This has to be capped at 5% per post max). In addition to this, spell damage is increased by 100% during the duration of this spell. (Since this is a single target spell, please additionally specify that only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell)

    S-ranks:
    Soda Pop!:
    Name: Soda Pop!
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While not specifically restricted to sodas, any carbonated drink that Chiyuki digests can manifest into this spell. When this spell is activated, Chiyuki’s skin will begin to bubble. Anything he makes contact with within his range is viable to combust, similar to that of the popping of carbon dioxide bubbles in soda. To land an attack on his opponents, a bubble will quickly inflate on any part of his body and combust. (Since this is a single target spell, please additionally specify that only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell)

    If struck by this spell, targets will be drained 5% of their MP each time they are hit (This has to be capped at 5% per post max). Additionally, this spell grants Chiyuki a 70% spell damage increase.

    Pufferfish:
    Name: Pufferfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spikes protrude from Chiyuki’s body, similar to that of a pufferfish he must consume ahead of time, and punctures targets within range (Since this is a single target spell, it can only be used to puncture a single opponent within the spell's range only once per post for the spell's duration. Please change this accordingly). It can extend from something as small as his fingers or as large as his entire body in all directions. During the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. In addition to this, (Description cuts off here. Please clarify)

    Swordfish:
    Name: Swordfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 60
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Rarer to see because of the accessibility of this delicacy, when Chiyuki consumes this fish, his limbs and appendages are capable of turning into “swords” similar to the swordfish’s beak/spear. This spell pierces armor and shields in exchange for reducing it's base damage by 50%. Additionally, during the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. (Please specify that only a single strike against a single opponent may be performed per post for the duration of the spell)

    Ishgar. . . Smash!!:
    Name: Ishgar. . . Smash!!
    Rank: S+
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 180
    Range: 600
    Speed: 600
    Duration: 12
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to feel raw power swell in his fist. Veins will begin to bulge, the whites in his eyes will take over, and the ground around him will shake. When Chiyuki releases this power into a single strike, the surface around him will shatter and implode. The target struck is immobilized for every other post (You can only stun someone for one post after the initial hit, since stunning them every post thereafter without actually hitting an opponent again to reapply the effect would be considered an auto-hit/stun. Please change this accordingly). Additionally, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 105%.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by DOPPO on 4th October 2019, 8:53 am

    OwO What's this?! I finally bumped?


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 7th October 2019, 11:21 pm

    One minor edit, same color. Also, the spell slot purchase you linked specifies the purchase of 3 additional spell slots, meaning the max you could have in this magic would be 18 spell slots, while you currently possess 19. If you have acquired the additional spell slots somewhere else I need you to link that proof of purchase as well, or alternatively remove one spell slot or buy an additional one and link the proof of purchase within this magic.

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    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster (Solitary)
    Proof of Spell Slot Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14653p800-the-magic-shop#380291
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. In addition to this, his body can manifest into properties of anything he's recently digested. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability: By taking on the properties of food he's consumed and recently digested, Chiyuki can excel in things people would not normally think of. If he consumes something with gils, he will be able to breathe underwater and see clearly. If he's eats something with an incredible sense of smell, his own sense of smell is heightened, and etc.


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 100m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: S
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 60
    Range: 200m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 200 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage. (A-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in melee damage. (B-rank)

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    B-ranks:

    Crickets:
    Name: Crickets
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 40
    Range: 100
    Speed: 50
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Crickets is the food of the future in many nations over Earthland, and Chiyuki doesn’t discriminate when it comes to battle! If Chiyuki consumes and digests crickets, he will have incredible leaping ability in combat. When he lands from great heights, the surface around him will crumble and shatter, damaging anyone within his range and increase Chiyuki's melee damage by 60%.

    Scrumptious Seeds:
    Name: Scrumptious Seeds
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 40
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s cheeks begin to fill up with something before he spits at a single target with a barrage of seeds he’s recently consumed. The seeds are elevated and are akin to magical bullets, and while he shoots them from his mouth, they can also be shot from any part of his skin. These seeds can pierce shields and armor in exchange for reduced damage potency. The collective barrage deals the spell's damage.

    Ice, Ice, Baby:
    Name: Ice, Ice, Baby!
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  An icy mist begins to surround Chiyuki if he has recently consumed ice cubes. Any motion he makes is accompanied by a wave of ice that mimics it. For example, if Chiyuki punches forward, thick waves of ice will protrude from any nearby surface and puncture any targets struck by it. If he kicks upwards, ice will instantaneously shoot upwards from the ground. Only a single attack directed at a single target may be made with this spell. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 60%.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 60% speed buff.

    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Marshmallow:
    Name: Marshmallow
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: If Chiyuki has consumed marshmallows recently, this spell is viable. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's body becomes soft and squishy while capable of creating sticky, sweet webs from his body. While this spell is active, spells and abilities B-rank and lower can be reflected onto the caster if they strike Chiyuki in exchange for double the mana cost. Only a single spell per post may be reflected.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: Melee
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned and suffers damage from the suffocation. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:

    Takoyaki Tentacles:
    Name: Takoyaki Tentacles
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 100
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s limbs and/or appendages will begin to extend and transform into tentacles with suction cups to stick to objects and elasticity to extend if he consumes squid, octopus, or anything with similar properties. With this spell, he can grab opponents, throw them, immobilize them (should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again), and stick to surfaces. Additionally, spells and abilities that are within his grasp can be negated in exchange for doubling the mana cost. Only spells and abilities of A-rank or lower may be negated, and only a single spell or ability may be negated per post using this spell. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell

    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned, and should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter:
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch. When targets are struck, they can be stunned for every other post and suffer from a 50% increase to spell costs.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    Apples to Apples:
    Name: Apples to Apples
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While this spell’s name speaks of apples, any fruit or vegetable with acid makes this spell applicable. While the acid in fruit and vegetables is harmless, the acid Chiyuki creates from eating it is elevated and deadly.

    When this spell is activated, Chiyuki will begin to drip with this acid as if he were sweating profusely. The ground he touches will melt with every step and people make contact with the acid will suffer second to third-degree burns. Chiyuki attacks with this spell through shooting streams of acid through any part of his skin or by spitting. Targets struck by this spell are drained 5% (max) of their MP per post. In addition to this, spell damage is increased by 100% during the duration of this spell. (Since this is a single target spell, please additionally specify that only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell)

    S-ranks:
    Soda Pop!:
    Name: Soda Pop!
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While not specifically restricted to sodas, any carbonated drink that Chiyuki digests can manifest into this spell. When this spell is activated, Chiyuki’s skin will begin to bubble. Anything he makes contact with within his range is viable to combust, similar to that of the popping of carbon dioxide bubbles in soda. To land an attack on his opponents, a bubble will quickly inflate on any part of his body and combust. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    If struck by this spell, targets will be drained 5% of their MP per post (max). Additionally, this spell grants Chiyuki a 70% spell damage increase.

    Pufferfish:
    Name: Pufferfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spikes protrude from Chiyuki’s body, similar to that of a pufferfish he must consume ahead of time, and punctures a single target within range. It can extend from something as small as his fingers or as large as his entire body in all directions. During the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. In addition to this, the spikes can puncture the barriers of a single target in exchange for reducing its damage by 50% when it does.

    Swordfish:
    Name: Swordfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Rarer to see because of the accessibility of this delicacy, when Chiyuki consumes this fish, his limbs and appendages are capable of turning into “swords” similar to the swordfish’s beak/spear. This spell pierces armor and shields in exchange for reducing it's base damage by 50% when it does. Additionally, during the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    Ishgar. . . Smash!!:
    Name: Ishgar. . . Smash!!
    Rank: S+
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 180
    Range: 600
    Speed: 600
    Duration: 12
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to feel raw power swell in his fist. Veins will begin to bulge, the whites in his eyes will take over, and the ground around him will shake. When Chiyuki releases this power into a single strike, the surface around him will shatter and implode. The target struck is immobilized for every other post. Additionally, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 105%. If struck again, the target will be stunned again and reapply the effect.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by DOPPO on 1st November 2019, 6:23 am

    Updated. Locked "Weightlifter" from use until I can afford another spell slot.


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    Completed Re: Insatiable Hunger

    Post by Johann on 7th November 2019, 1:44 pm

    Insatiable Hunger  FbVA7uB

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    Magic Name: Insatiable Hunger
    Magic Type: Caster (Solitary)
    Proof of Spell Slot Purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14653p800-the-magic-shop#380291
    Description: Chiyuki has the stomach akin to a bottomless chasm; there's simply no end to his hunger! Constantly, one will see Chiyuki eating something, whether it be a bag of chips or a platter of cake. Regardless of what it is, Chiyuki scoffs it down quickly and consistently finds ways to eat again. He then stores the energy given by whatever he eats in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue for later use. Chiyuki, because of his magic, can never seem to gain or lose weight and instead maintains a steady weight.

    By taking the glycogen (or carbohydrate energy) and the energy stored in his fat, liver, and muscle tissue, Chiyuki gains superhuman abilities. His strength, speed, fortitude, and basic sensibilities are heightened, any body fat is transformed into refined muscle, and even his attitude becomes more energetic. In addition to this, his body can manifest into properties of anything he's recently digested. Using the power of his body and stomach, Chiyuki takes the offensive and combats opponents.
     
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in melee damage.
    • Ability: Using the glycogen and energy stored in his body, Chiyuki gains 60% increase in spell damage.
    • Ability: By taking on the properties of food he's consumed and recently digested, Chiyuki can excel in things people would not normally think of. If he consumes something with gils, he will be able to breathe underwater and see clearly. If he's eats something with an incredible sense of smell, his own sense of smell is heightened, and etc.


    Signature Spells:

    Dash:
    Name: Dash
    Rank: S
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 0
    Range: 100m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using any one of his appendages, Chiyuki dashes in any direction.


    Belch:
    Name: Belch
    Rank: S
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 60
    Range: 200m
    Speed: 100m
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki inhales deeply before releasing a belch from the depths of his stomach, damaging anyone within his range and knocking them back for 200 meters.

    Passives:

    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 55% increase in melee damage. (A-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 40% increase in melee damage. (D-rank)
    - Chiyuki gains a 50% increase in melee damage. (B-rank)

    C-ranks:
    Exercise:
    Name: Exercise
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: n/a
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki takes a deep breath and gains a 55% melee damage buff.

    Headbutt:
    Name: Headbutt
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 + 30 (DoT)
    Range: 120
    Speed: 120
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki slams his head into another's, stunning them for a post and giving them a powerful headache that lasts for the duration of the spell. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    B-ranks:

    Crickets:
    Name: Crickets
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 40
    Range: 100
    Speed: 50
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Crickets is the food of the future in many nations over Earthland, and Chiyuki doesn’t discriminate when it comes to battle! If Chiyuki consumes and digests crickets, he will have incredible leaping ability in combat. When he lands from great heights, the surface around him will crumble and shatter, damaging anyone within his range and increase Chiyuki's melee damage by 60%.

    Scrumptious Seeds:
    Name: Scrumptious Seeds
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 40
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s cheeks begin to fill up with something before he spits at a single target with a barrage of seeds he’s recently consumed. The seeds are elevated and are akin to magical bullets, and while he shoots them from his mouth, they can also be shot from any part of his skin. These seeds can pierce shields and armor in exchange for reduced damage potency. The collective barrage deals the spell's damage.

    Ice, Ice, Baby:
    Name: Ice, Ice, Baby!
    Rank: B
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  An icy mist begins to surround Chiyuki if he has recently consumed ice cubes. Any motion he makes is accompanied by a wave of ice that mimics it. For example, if Chiyuki punches forward, thick waves of ice will protrude from any nearby surface and puncture any targets struck by it. If he kicks upwards, ice will instantaneously shoot upwards from the ground. Only a single attack directed at a single target may be made with this spell. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 60%.

    Bodybuilding:
    Name: Bodybuilding
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxillary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 0
    Range: Self
    Speed: Self
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki hangs his tongue out, now gaining a 60% speed buff.

    Bruising:
    Name: Bruising
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 per post (Damage over Time)
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes an opponent anywhere within arms length of him, causing the struck area to bruise and bleed. If the opponent is not within arms length, Chiyuki punches or kicks the air surrounding him and strikes the target with an acute air pressure from the astonishing force of his blow.

    Marshmallow:
    Name: Marshmallow
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80
    Range: 200
    Speed: 200
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: If Chiyuki has consumed marshmallows recently, this spell is viable. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki's body becomes soft and squishy while capable of creating sticky, sweet webs from his body. While this spell is active, spells and abilities B-rank and lower can be reflected onto the caster if they strike Chiyuki in exchange for double the mana cost. Only a single spell per post may be reflected.

    Chokehold:
    Name: Chokehold
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 + 40 Per Post (DoT)
    Range: Arms Length
    Speed: Melee
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki grabs ahold of someone and latches onto them via headlock. When latched by him, the target is stunned and suffers damage from the suffocation. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. When latched on, Chiyuki's melee damage is buffed by 60%.
     

    Gale Force:
    Name: Gale Force
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki clenches his fist and strikes the air around him, sending forces of air to his opponents at astonishing speeds. The winds are practically invisible and cuts any target who is struck by them, making them bleed for the duration of the spell. When struck by the winds, targets are disoriented.

    Heartburn:
    Name: Heartburn
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 90 + 45 (DoT)
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to drool excessively, panting and holding his mouth open. When this spell is cast, Chiyuki experiences a magical-induced heartburn in which whenever he licks or spits his drool or stomach contents at an opponent, it will stick to their bodies and burn them. All struck targets will suffer a 90% speed debuff.

    A-ranks:

    Takoyaki Tentacles:
    Name: Takoyaki Tentacles
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Defense: 100
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki’s limbs and/or appendages will begin to extend and transform into tentacles with suction cups to stick to objects and elasticity to extend if he consumes squid, octopus, or anything with similar properties. With this spell, he can grab opponents, throw them, immobilize them (should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again), and stick to surfaces. Additionally, spells and abilities that are within his grasp can be negated in exchange for doubling the mana cost. Only spells and abilities of A-rank or lower may be negated, and only a single spell or ability may be negated per post using this spell. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell

    Earthshatter:
    Name: Earthshatter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 50 + 25 per post (DoT)
    Range: 150
    Speed: 75
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki strikes the ground, causing the surface to rumble and rapture, along with the air around it. Anyone within this area is stunned, and should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again. Bruises will form and targets will begin to bleed under their bruises.

    Weightlifter (LOCKED):
    Name: Weightlifter
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 60
    Range: 150
    Speed: 110
    Duration: 7
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki's muscle tissue expands and tightens, allowing him to launch objects of unlikely weights at targets that he would not normally be able to launch. When targets are struck, they can be stunned for every other post and suffer from a 50% increase to spell costs.

    Sucker Punch:

    Name: Sucker Punch
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 150 + 75 (DoT)
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 4
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki quickly strikes an opponent, knocking them back 450 meters and breaking their flesh, causing them to ache or bleed. They then suffer damage and will stun. Should Chiyuki strike them again, they may be stunned again.

    Apples to Apples:
    Name: Apples to Apples
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 150
    Range: 450
    Speed: 450
    Duration: 9
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While this spell’s name speaks of apples, any fruit or vegetable with acid makes this spell applicable. While the acid in fruit and vegetables is harmless, the acid Chiyuki creates from eating it is elevated and deadly.

    When this spell is activated, Chiyuki will begin to drip with this acid as if he were sweating profusely. The ground he touches will melt with every step and people make contact with the acid will suffer second to third-degree burns. Chiyuki attacks with this spell through shooting streams of acid through any part of his skin or by spitting. Targets struck by this spell are drained 5% (max) of their MP per post. In addition to this, spell damage is increased by 100% during the duration of this spell. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell

    S-ranks:
    Soda Pop!:
    Name: Soda Pop!
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: While not specifically restricted to sodas, any carbonated drink that Chiyuki digests can manifest into this spell. When this spell is activated, Chiyuki’s skin will begin to bubble. Anything he makes contact with within his range is viable to combust, similar to that of the popping of carbon dioxide bubbles in soda. To land an attack on his opponents, a bubble will quickly inflate on any part of his body and combust. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    If struck by this spell, targets will be drained 5% of their MP per post (max). Additionally, this spell grants Chiyuki a 70% spell damage increase.

    Pufferfish:
    Name: Pufferfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spikes protrude from Chiyuki’s body, similar to that of a pufferfish he must consume ahead of time, and punctures a single target within range. It can extend from something as small as his fingers or as large as his entire body in all directions. During the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. In addition to this, the spikes can puncture the barriers of a single target in exchange for reducing its damage by 50% when it does.

    Swordfish:
    Name: Swordfish
    Rank: S
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 120
    Range: 400
    Speed: 400
    Duration: 10
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Rarer to see because of the accessibility of this delicacy, when Chiyuki consumes this fish, his limbs and appendages are capable of turning into “swords” similar to the swordfish’s beak/spear. This spell pierces armor and shields in exchange for reducing it's base damage by 50% when it does. Additionally, during the duration of this spell, spell damage is increased by 70%. Only a single attack against a single opponent may be made per post using this spell.

    Ishgar. . . Smash!!:
    Name: Ishgar. . . Smash!!
    Rank: S+
    Type: Single Target
    Category: Offensive
    Damage: 180
    Range: 600
    Speed: 600
    Duration: 12
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Chiyuki begins to feel raw power swell in his fist. Veins will begin to bulge, the whites in his eyes will take over, and the ground around him will shake. When Chiyuki releases this power into a single strike, the surface around him will shatter and implode. The target struck is immobilized for every other post. Additionally, Chiyuki's spell damage is increased by 105%. If struck again, the target will be stunned again and reapply the effect.


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