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    Tuna
    Tuna

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    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hihiirogane (日色金) - Sun-Colored Metal
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Tuna 20th January 2013, 8:51 am

    K, so my first try. Hope its ok. I'll be glad to take constructive criticism though.

    Name: Josef Ganz
    Gender: Male
    Age: 22
    Birthday: 12.12.
    Sexuality: Homosexual
    Special Characteristics: A vertical scar on his right eye, making him blind on the white-coloured eye. The vacant ring finger on his left hand and scar running up from the spot his ring finger should be, up to his elbow.

    Personality:
    Ganz always introduces himself with his surname, making his first name nearly extinct. His mostly calm and soothing words making him seem like a nice guy are contradicted by his actions. His hands are bloody and he never made himself anything out of violence, having it manifested as a part of his life. He parts his violent, brutal and emotional battling attitude with his usual self which always tries to be polite, nice, outgoing and hiding his real self. His real thoughts, always striving for more power and battling experience, are locked up in himself and only appear during combat. Even during his daily workout, when he is alone, he tries to keep his cool and concentrate on momentary goals. He doesn't really mind socializing, since it supports the lock on his real mind, but keeps his relationships superficial and unmeaningful for him. His unwilling to emotional attachement has proved itself as a benefit to his striving for power, never having emotionally attached himself to even some kind of object. In his youth time he had set his goal as letting his strength leave an impression behind for him.
    Even though he acts it cool, when someone is impressed by his strength he feels satisfied and motivated to fight. Even though his greatest goal is achieving the strength to even challenge the gods themselves and becoming a legend that will be talked about as a myth in 1000, maybe 2000 years, deeply inside he knows true satisfaction will only be granted if he lays off his arrogant and selfish thoughts of achieving power and burning himself into the minds of the people.

    The lock on his thoughts breaks as soon as he engages combat. Only being set on displaying his strength and defeating his opponent he shuts his mind off of the rest of the world and only concentrates on fighting. This attitude has caused casualties several times, which is why Ganz has given up on applying to Legal Guilds, which never really want him, and had the thought of joining a Dark Guild since they never care about the history of their members as long as they do the job.
    His fighting style is unrelenting, violent though driven to perfection and precision through daily training. Although, letting his emotions out when battling has had its negative influence on his battles due to his emotionality towards his thoughts. His craving for strength, has let him fall into desperation several times when facing a stronger opponent. His inability to accept losses has made him lose it here and there. Ultimately, his strength is his greatest tool and his incapability to lose his greatest weakness when fighting.

    Since his mind is only set on gaining strength you could think he is a rather good person to be ruled over by a leader. He also usually gets the job done. However, his self-centeredness let's him often forget the objectives and goals actually set. His selfish acting often got him kicked out, out of Legal Guilds.
    He also could never see himself as a leader, not that anybody has ever done it, but he could never sufficiently care for people who act under him. Always facing fights alone, he never would want to be someone who gets helped during fights.

    Taking everything into account, Ganz' selfish personality is despised by many. He doesn't care for people and can display a great amount of strength speaking for him. Hoping he will find a guild which will cover his needs and also let him in, he is constantly striving to achieve greater strength.

    Likes:
    -Appreciation of his strength. It affirms for him, that there are people he is already stronger than or that acknowledge his strength.
    -Fighting. Despite Ganz seeing fighting only as a tool to grow stronger, he actually enjoys it to every last bit.
    -Animals. He sees part of himself in them. Always striving for strength, even though for different reasons, is their reason for living.

    Dislikes:
    -Looking down on him. He feels the need to prove himself to anybody who questions him.
    -People who think they are innocent or better than anybody else, because he has seen the selfishness of people everywhere, from every corner of the world. He sees the people who deny things like selfishness and arrogancy as hypocrits to the world.
    -Weakness. He respects anyone that stands up to fight but he doesn't tolerate backing down, no matter on which occasion.

    Motivation:
    Generally, his beliefs and his view towards the world are what keep him going on.
    -His belief in the fate of the universe. That everything happening, ever happened and everything that will happen, happens out of reason and that there is no such thing as random occurences.
    -His belief, that there is no human who is special and that he an grow stronger than anybody, no matter where he comes from.
    -His belief, that no human is truly important for the world unless he leaves an image of him behind, to be seen even after his death.
    -His confidence in his strength and that his strength will constantly grow, no matter what.

    General Appearance:

    Height: 5'7''
    Weight: 160 lbs
    Hair: White, shoulder-length hair. Tied to a short spiky pony tail with a fringe tucked behind his ear.
    Eyes: Brown eyes.
    Skin tone: Tanned skin.
    Appearance: Buff, athletic and muscular. Well-proportioned body all together and peaks in a few scarred places on his chest, thighs and sides.
    Usually wears different coloured tank tops and skinny chino shorts with sandals. His toleration of weather is rather high, since his training also contained training under extreme conditions. That's why he barely changes his clothes. He chooses light clothing over thick clothing because of his need for agility when fighting.

    Guild: Savage Skull.
    Tattoo: Over his spine under his pony tail
    Rank: D


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    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

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    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 20th January 2013, 9:08 am

    Josef Ganz wrote:K, so my first try. Hope its ok. I'll be glad to take constructive criticism though.

    Name: Josef Ganz
    Gender: Male
    Age: 22
    Birthday: 12.12.
    Sexuality: Homosexual
    Special Characteristics: A vertical scar on his right eye, making him blind on the white-coloured eye. The vacant ring finger on his left hand and scar running up from the spot his ring finger should be, up to his elbow.

    Personality:
    Ganz always introduces himself with his surname, making his first name nearly extinct. His mostly calm and soothing words making him seem like a nice guy are contradicted by his actions. His hands are bloody and he never made himself anything out of violence, having it manifested as a part of his life. He parts his violent, brutal and emotional battling attitude with his usual self which always tries to be polite, nice, outgoing and hiding his real self. His real thoughts, always striving for more power and battling experience, are locked up in himself and only appear during combat. Even during his daily workout, when he is alone, he tries to keep his cool and concentrate on momentary goals. He doesn't really mind socializing, since it supports the lock on his real mind, but keeps his relationships superficial and unmeaningful for him. His unwilling to emotional attachement has proved itself as a benefit to his striving for power, never having emotionally attached himself to even some kind of object. In his youth time he had set his goal as letting his strength leave an impression behind for him.
    Even though he acts it cool, when someone is impressed by his strength he feels satisfied and motivated to fight. Even though his greatest goal is achieving the strength to even challenge the gods themselves and becoming a legend that will be talked about as a myth in 1000, maybe 2000 years, deeply inside he knows true satisfaction will only be granted if he lays off his arrogant and selfish thoughts of achieving power and burning himself into the minds of the people.

    The lock on his thoughts breaks as soon as he engages combat. Only being set on displaying his strength and defeating his opponent he shuts his mind off of the rest of the world and only concentrates on fighting. This attitude has caused casualties several times, which is why Ganz has given up on applying to Legal Guilds, which never really want him, and had the thought of joining a Dark Guild since they never care about the history of their members as long as they do the job.
    His fighting style is unrelenting, violent though driven to perfection and precision through daily training. Although, letting his emotions out when battling has had its negative influence on his battles due to his emotionality towards his thoughts. His craving for strength, has let him fall into desperation several times when facing a stronger opponent. His inability to accept losses has made him lose it here and there. Ultimately, his strength is his greatest tool and his incapability to lose his greatest weakness when fighting.

    Since his mind is only set on gaining strength you could think he is a rather good person to be ruled over by a leader. He also usually gets the job done. However, his self-centeredness let's him often forget the objectives and goals actually set. His selfish acting often got him kicked out, out of Legal Guilds.
    He also could never see himself as a leader, not that anybody has ever done it, but he could never sufficiently care for people who act under him. Always facing fights alone, he never would want to be someone who gets helped during fights.

    Taking everything into account, Ganz' selfish personality is despised by many. He doesn't care for people and can display a great amount of strength speaking for him. Hoping he will find a guild which will cover his needs and also let him in, he is constantly striving to achieve greater strength.

    Likes:
    -Appreciation of his strength. It affirms for him, that there are people he is already stronger than or that acknowledge his strength.
    -Fighting. Despite Ganz seeing fighting only as a tool to grow stronger, he actually enjoys it to every last bit.
    -Animals. He sees part of himself in them. Always striving for strength, even though for different reasons, is their reason for living.

    Dislikes:
    -Looking down on him. He feels the need to prove himself to anybody who questions him.
    -People who think they are innocent or better than anybody else. Why
    -Weakness. He respects anyone that stands up to fight but he doesn't tolerate backing down, no matter on which occasion.

    Motivation:
    Generally, his beliefs and his view towards the world are what keep him going on.
    -His belief in the fate of the universe. That everything happening, ever happened and everything that will happen, happens out of reason and that there is no such thing as random occurences.
    -His belief, that there is no human who is special and that he an grow stronger than anybody, no matter where he comes from.
    -His belief, that no human is truly important for the world unless he leaves an image of him behind, to be seen even after his death.
    -His confidence in his strength and that his strength will constantly grow, no matter what.

    General Appearance:

    Height: 5'7''
    Weight: 160 lbs
    Hair: White, shoulder-length hair. Tied to a short spiky pony tail with a fringe tucked behind his ear.
    Eyes: Brown eyes.
    Skin tone: Tanned skin.
    Appearance: Buff, athletic and muscular. Usually wears tank tops and short skinny-pants with sandals. When it gets too cold he'll wear a Sweater without a hoodie. Please go into more detail

    Guild: One of the three Dark Guilds. Please pick a guild.
    Tattoo: Over his spine under his pony tail
    Rank: D, I guess since this is my first character


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    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 20th January 2013, 9:21 am

    Approved.


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    I hope this is going to work out Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    I hope this is going to work out Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 20th January 2013, 2:24 pm

    Modified to change to D rank. Whilst very good i don't think its 'exceptional' enough to be C rank. Sorry for the mistake. Didn't realise when I read over it. Still you are approved at D. Also, when I was first checking this it did say D, as you can see in my quote.


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    I hope this is going to work out Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    I hope this is going to work out Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

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