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    Night fall

    Pandora
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    Night fall Empty Night fall

    Post by Pandora 12th November 2016, 6:46 pm

    Weapon obtained from this job: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t18653p250-ending-a-job-cancel-finish#270717

    Name: Nights Fall
    Rank: Legend
    Type: Sword
    Description:
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    Strengths:
    ❀ Due to being forged from parts of a slain beast that dealt bleeding damage, strikes from this blade deal the user’s rank in melee damage for the post after each slash.
    ❀ Both abilities on this blade cause magic bleed damage of the user’s rank for the post after their used.
    ❀ A lighter weapon like this is easier for a child like Frey to wield.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ A blade is narrow, thus one must aim their strikes carefully or clearly they'll miss.
    ❀ A sword can be taken from it’s wielder and used against them
    ❀ Due to Frey’s habit of hiding shiny objects, she might accidently hide her own weapon.
    ❀ Even though this weapon is extremely light it is still rather large for a child.
    ❀ Bleeding damage is done on per post not per slash, so even if she strikes multiple times, someone will only sustain bleed damage for one strike.


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    Night fall Empty Re: Night fall

    Post by Guest 12th November 2016, 7:20 pm

    Hey, Frey!
    All my comments are going to be in this rad color.
    Bump once the edits are made so i can look over this once more.

    Frey Rune wrote:Weapon obtained from this job: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t18653p250-ending-a-job-cancel-finish#270717

    Name: Nights Fall
    Rank: Legend
    Type: Sword
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    Strengths:
    ❀ Due to being forged from parts of a slain beast that dealt bleeding damage, strikes from this blade deal the user’s rank in melee damage for the post after each slash. Please change or remove this strength
    ❀ Both abilities on this blade cause magic bleed damage of the user’s rank for the post after their used.  "Bleed damage"? Please explain. You cannot cause extra damage after a slash, if that is what it's supposed to mean
    ❀ A lighter weapon like this is easier for a child like Frey to wield.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ A blade is narrow, thus one must aim their strikes carefully or clearly they'll miss.
    ❀ A sword can be taken from it’s wielder and used against them
    ❀ Due to Frey’s habit of hiding shiny objects, she might accidently hide her own weapon.
    ❀ Even though this weapon is extremely light it is still rather large for a child.
    ❀ Bleeding damage is done on per post not per slash, so even if she strikes multiple times, someone will only sustain bleed damage for one strike.


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