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    Itova Malsvire

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    Night fall

    Post by Itova Malsvire on 12th November 2016, 6:46 pm

    Weapon obtained from this job: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t18653p250-ending-a-job-cancel-finish#270717

    Name: Nights Fall
    Rank: Legend
    Type: Sword
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    Strengths:
    ❀ Due to being forged from parts of a slain beast that dealt bleeding damage, strikes from this blade deal the user’s rank in melee damage for the post after each slash.
    ❀ Both abilities on this blade cause magic bleed damage of the user’s rank for the post after their used.
    ❀ A lighter weapon like this is easier for a child like Frey to wield.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ A blade is narrow, thus one must aim their strikes carefully or clearly they'll miss.
    ❀ A sword can be taken from it’s wielder and used against them
    ❀ Due to Frey’s habit of hiding shiny objects, she might accidently hide her own weapon.
    ❀ Even though this weapon is extremely light it is still rather large for a child.
    ❀ Bleeding damage is done on per post not per slash, so even if she strikes multiple times, someone will only sustain bleed damage for one strike.


    Abilities:
    Ability:

    Name: Crawlers Eclipse
    Rank: A (starts at C)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: This blade was made from the body parts of a deceased sea monster, while its other parts were made from items found on that same sea floor. Nights Fall still holds the power of its slain beast so when activated scalding water seeps from the blades pores surrounding it, this water deals it's users rank in damage up until A rank and causes a burn worth 25% of the initial strikes damage to appear where someone was sliced.
    Strengths:
    ❀ Burn damage is done by strike, so if she can manage to hit someone more than once, she can do a decent amount of damage to them.
    ❀ This attack can cut through earth attacks of it’s own rank or lower due to the concentrated water around the blade.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ Due to the burn effect being caused by water, those who use water can not be burned by this.
    ❀ Since most fire user’s are immune to being burnt anyways, they are also immune to being burned by this.
    ❀ Despite being heated water, if exposed to high ranked fire spells, the water can be boiled away rendering the attack useless
    ❀ Frey has an earth body so if this is somehow used against her it could do 25% more damage to her total.
    ❀ This attack relies on the water remaining hot, thus underwater this attack is useless.


    Ability 2:

    Name: Dark Forest
    Rank: B (starts at D)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 Posts
    Description: When using this earth element based attack, black leaf patterns appear on the blade until it’s entirely encased in the color of the dark night sky. Each slash of this attack does it’s rank in damage up until B rank where it cuts off.
    Strengths:
    ❀ This attack can cut through fire spells of it’s own rank or below
    ❀ Able to cut through light spells of its rank or lower
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ Even when it cuts through an attack, it doesn’t negate it, so anyone not directly behind frey is still damaged.
    ❀ Clearly regardless of the element of them spells of higher ranks can not be cut through.
    ❀ Since this relies on the blade, if she drops it, frey can’t use the ability.
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    Re: Night fall

    Post by Madame Astrid on 12th November 2016, 7:20 pm

    Hey, Frey!
    All my comments are going to be in this rad color.
    Bump once the edits are made so i can look over this once more.

    Frey Rune wrote:Weapon obtained from this job: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t18653p250-ending-a-job-cancel-finish#270717

    Name: Nights Fall
    Rank: Legend
    Type: Sword
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    Strengths:
    ❀ Due to being forged from parts of a slain beast that dealt bleeding damage, strikes from this blade deal the user’s rank in melee damage for the post after each slash. Please change or remove this strength
    ❀ Both abilities on this blade cause magic bleed damage of the user’s rank for the post after their used.  "Bleed damage"? Please explain. You cannot cause extra damage after a slash, if that is what it's supposed to mean
    ❀ A lighter weapon like this is easier for a child like Frey to wield.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ A blade is narrow, thus one must aim their strikes carefully or clearly they'll miss.
    ❀ A sword can be taken from it’s wielder and used against them
    ❀ Due to Frey’s habit of hiding shiny objects, she might accidently hide her own weapon.
    ❀ Even though this weapon is extremely light it is still rather large for a child.
    ❀ Bleeding damage is done on per post not per slash, so even if she strikes multiple times, someone will only sustain bleed damage for one strike.


    Abilities:
    Ability:

    Name: Crawlers Eclipse
    Rank: A (starts at C)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts State that this increases by +2 posts per rank until it maxes out
    Description: This blade was made from the body parts of a deceased sea monster, while its other parts were made from items found on that same sea floor. Nights Fall still holds the power of its slain beast so when activated scalding water seeps from the blades pores surrounding it, this water deals it's users rank in damage up until A rank and causes a burn worth 25% of the initial strikes damage to appear where someone was sliced.
    Strengths:
    ❀ Burn damage is done by strike, so if she can manage to hit someone more than once, she can do a decent amount of damage to them.
    ❀ This attack can cut through earth attacks of it’s own rank or lower due to the concentrated water around the blade.
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ Due to the burn effect being caused by water, those who use water can not be burned by this.
    ❀ Since most fire user’s are immune to being burnt anyways, they are also immune to being burned by this.
    ❀ Despite being heated water, if exposed to high ranked fire spells, the water can be boiled away rendering the attack useless
    ❀ Frey has an earth body so if this is somehow used against her it could do 25% more damage to her total.
    ❀ This attack relies on the water remaining hot, thus underwater this attack is useless.


    Ability 2:

    Name: Dark Forest
    Rank: B (starts at D)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 Posts Yet again, state that this increases by +2 posts per rank until it maxes out
    Description: When using this earth element based attack, black leaf patterns appear on the blade until it’s entirely encased in the color of the dark night sky. Each slash of this attack does it’s rank in damage up until B rank where it cuts off.
    Strengths:
    ❀ This attack can cut through fire spells of it’s own rank or below
    ❀ Able to cut through light spells of its rank or lower
    Weaknesses:
    ❀ Even when it cuts through an attack, it doesn’t negate it, so anyone not directly behind frey is still damaged.
    ❀ Clearly regardless of the element of them spells of higher ranks can not be cut through.
    ❀ Since this relies on the blade, if she drops it, frey can’t use the ability.


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