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    Hana Akki

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    Hana's pet

    Post by Hana Akki on 5th November 2015, 6:52 pm

    Name: Tsubaki
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Flying cat
    Type: Combat pet
    Description:

    Tsubaki's personality is always happy and cheerful.

    Abilities:She can fly and create fire just by gazing at wanted target

    Ability template:

    Name: Kasai
    Rank: Weak
    Description: Tsubaki gazes at her target and says "Kasai", catching the target to catch on fire which can't be put out until five seconds has passed
    Strengths: Will be able to make a wall of fire for protection
    Will be able to use fire as a distraction
    Can light enemies on fire if need be
    Weaknesses:
    If an a-ranked water spell is casted upon her fire it will go out immediately
    Tsubaki can't get cold water in her eyes


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    Re: Hana's pet

    Post by Mistress Venir on 6th November 2015, 5:57 pm

    Okey dokey sorry for the delay! I'm here at last! All edits requested are made in this fabulous color! If you have any questions please feel free to PM them to me!

    Hana Akki wrote:Name: Tsubaki
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Flying cat
    Type: Combat pet
    Description:

    Tsubaki's personality is always happy and cheerful.

    Abilities:She can fly and create fire just by gazing at wanted targetFlying would count as one ability, be sure to also insert the ability template for this ability. More than likely this would be your "D-Rank" ability for the cat.

    Ability template:

    Name: Kasai
    Rank: Weak(This would also be D-Rank, if you were C-Rank then this ability would be a C-Rank as per the pet rules (A weak pet has 1 D-Rank ability and 1 C-Rank unless of course the user is below C-Rank in which case it has 2 D-Rank abilities until the user reaches C.)
    Description: Tsubaki gazes at her target and says "Kasai", catching the target to catch on fire which can't be put out until five seconds has passed(Please make it so that it isn't just an autohit ability.)
    Strengths: Will be able to make a wall of fire for protection(That would be an entirely different ability, nowhere in your description does it say that this happened/can happen.)
    Will be able to use fire as a distraction
    Can light enemies on fire if need be
    Weaknesses:
    If an a-ranked water spell is casted upon her fire it will go out immediately (C-Ranked)
    Tsubaki can't get cold water in her eyes


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    Re: Hana's pet

    Post by Hana Akki on 13th November 2015, 5:42 pm

    Name: Tsubaki
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Flying cat
    Type: Combat pet
    Description:

    Tsubaki's personality is always happy and cheerful.

    Abilities:
    #1:Flying
    D-Rank
    Tsubaki flaps her wings to fly
    Strengths: Wind can help make it easier to fly
    Weaknesses: Can't get or hurt wings too wet or she can't fly

    Ability template:

    Name:
    Flying
    Rank: D

    Description: She can fly
    Strengths: Wind helps make it easier to fly and Can fly away from enemies

    Weaknesses:
    Her wings cant get hurt or wet or she wont be able to fly

    (Just deleted the whole Kasai idea cuz im sick and tired of dealing with it)


    Last edited by Hana Akki on 21st November 2015, 11:09 am; edited 1 time in total


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    Re: Hana's pet

    Post by Mistress Venir on 14th November 2015, 5:12 pm

    Hana Akki wrote:Name: Tsubaki
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Flying cat
    Type: Combat pet
    Description:

    Tsubaki's personality is always happy and cheerful.

    Abilities:She can fly (You still didn't put this ability into a proper template:

    Name:(name of the attack/ability)
    Rank: (Rank of the ability)
    Description:(how is it used?)
    Strengths:(list all the advantages)
    Weaknesses:(list all the disadvantages)

    Kasai (Rank A)

    Ability template: D-Rank

    Name: Kasai (She gets this at rank A, which would be to concentrate her eyes on her target for an amount of time and then they'll catch on fire :/)
    Flying
    Rank: D

    Description: (She gets this at rank A, which would be to concentrate her eyes on her target for an amount of time and then they'll catch on fire :/, I'll be sure to to get permission and pay for it though)(Just making sure that you know that A-Rank for a pet would essentially be a Legendary pet which is 60,000 Jewels.)
    She can fly (I'm assuming you forgot to remove this from the last edit?)
    Strengths:
    Kasai: Will be able to use fire as a distraction
    Can light enemies on fire if need be
    Fly: Can fly away from enemies(As I said please fill out a separate ability template for this one.)

    Weaknesses:
    Kasai: If a C-ranked water spell is casted upon her fire it will go out immediately
    Tsubaki can't get cold water in her eyes
    (Must have one more strength than weakness.)

    Fly: Her wings cant get hurt or she wont be able to fly(As I said please fill out a separate ability template for this one.)

    Note: Also when going through edits just edit your original post instead of doing a whole new post with the edits in it as it will clutter the thread and be confusing later on if someone comes to grade it again.




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    Re: Hana's pet

    Post by Hikachu on 6th December 2015, 6:18 am

    Will be moving this app to the WIP forum.


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