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    Fire Dragon Slayer

    Hakora Pendragoon
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Sun 22 Feb 2015 - 21:52

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Blue Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Fire Dragon Slayer Magic is a type of Dragon Slayer Magic that grants the user various characteristics typical of a Fire Dragon: lungs capable of spewing flames, scales that grant protection against fire, and nails covered in flames. Consequently, Fire Dragon Slayer Magic allows the user to produce and control fire from any part of their body, which can be used both in melee and as a ranged form of offense. The generated flames can be manipulated in a wide variety of ways, their “type” can be changed at will, and they can even be given a material consistency. Such fire seems to have a “blunt” effect to it, seemingly causing bludgeoning damage alongside burning. The fire produced by this type of Magic produces much more heat than a standard one, with even the user’s body temperature being capable of melting iron and burning off poison and stigmata's; not only that, but the user’s fire is strictly connected to their feelings, meaning the more emotional they get, the more their flames will increase exponentially in temperature, something that is referred to as “Flames of Emotion”.

    In addition, the user can consume external sources of fire to restore their body to a healthy state and regain their reserves of strength, something that also makes them immune to most types of fire, due to their capability of nullifying fire-based attacks by sucking them in and eating them; the consumed fire also seems to possess a different “taste” according to its “quality”. However, the user can’t eat their own flames, or things set on fire by them, to reinvigorate themselves. While classes of flames that are “higher” in rank to those produced by this type of Magic (like those employed by a Flame God Slayer) can’t be eaten directly and will therefore damage the user, momentarily self-nullifying all of the user’s Magic Power will grant them enough room to consume and even use such flames.
    If a Fire Dragon Slayer is somehow capable of successfully eating lightning, they will enter Lightning Flame Dragon Mode. In this form, the lightning and flames will fuse and the user's attacks will possess the properties and destructive ability of both elements.

    Hakora uses his magic with melee and ranged attacks, but will also pair it with his sword. Hakora has a dragon sleeping inside him. Hakora is providing her with longer life and the dragon is providing Hakora with wisdom, his linage of Dragon's spirit and the magic itself. With Igneel dying many years ago, she is not the dragon that lives inside Hakora. The dragon's name is Sapphire and she is the Dragon of the blue flame making Hakora's flames blue as well.


    Strengths:
    - The caster is able to consume fire to regenerate his reserve of magical energy and enter Dragon Force, which covers parts of his body with powerful fire dragon scales, while it also augments his spell power by 50% and boosts all of his stats to being equal to those he will hold at the next stage of his development.

    - Enhanced senses, the caster possesses extremely augmented senses, namely their sense of smell and their hearing. This can make the user rather skilled at tracking and gathering information that could prove to be useful on jobs.

    - Burning, fire dragon slayer magic, true to its name, focuses around causing burning damage. At the base rank of D-rank they can only cause 2% burning damage. At the second rank of C-rank they can cause 4% burning damage. When they hit B-rank they can cause 6% burning damage. At A-rank they can cause 8% burning damage. When the user hits S-Class rank wise they can cause 10% burning damage.

    - This brand of Dragon Slayer Magic revolving around fire is obvious effective against Ice-based Magic's as fire melts ice. This brand of Dragon Slayer Magic is strong against Plants/Wood as fire burns through them reducing them to ashes. This magic is also strong against Iron as fire can expand, weaken, and melt iron. This magic can even potentially be strong against wind magic as said wind can be used to possibly enhance the power of a spell. Also if the fire can be heated enough it can steam through water magic.

    Weaknesses:

    - The caster cannot eat the fire he produces.

    - Certain Frequencies: The caster, due to their heightened hearing is also susceptible to incredibly loud noises, or those that are of a pitch normal human's cannot hear it.

    - Water-based Magic's, this magic revolving around the element of fire holds a significant weakness towards damage. However, if the user become enraged enough they may be able to counteract this disadvantage to a slight degree. They are especially weak against the Storm Dragon Slayer, Torrent God Slayer, and Ocean Demon Slayer. This extreme weakness being due to the fact that water puts out fire.

    -Flame God/Devil Slayers are able to consume the fire produced by the caster spells, while the caster is unable to do the same to their God/Devil Slaying counterparts without causing themselves a considerable amount of harm in the process, even attempting such a thing being tat amount to pseudo-suicide.

    - Incantations, some of the spells, namely Signature Spells seem to have a sort of incantation tied in to them, which in the long run means they are burning at least some time with reciting said incantation. So some spells will have a channeling time requirement.

    - Motion Sickness, Hakora, like all Dragon Slayer's, suffers from motion sickness. Though, his is a wee bit excessive. He doesn't even have to be on a boat, train, or other form of transportation, just talk about it in his presence of get him to think about transportation and you'll have turned him into a sitting duck.

    Lineage:
    Dragon Spirit:
    Description: In the medieval ages, a golden dragon was said to have lived. It was said that this dragon was the wisest dragon of all. He, before his death, gave part of his soul to a farmer, and the man used his new found power to help protect those he loved. Little more is known about the mysterious abilities he has gained due to the lack of descendants that were carried on, but legends claim that through the dragon's spirit, the man gained immense insight and foresight, much like the dragon himself had.
    Ability: Dragon Spirit allows the user to sense or predict all events ahead allowing him to avoid sticky situations. Can avoid all traps during the duration.
    Usage: The Active Ability can be used to actually predict events ahead for 3 posts and can only be used once per thread. The Passive Ability works as an additional sense that tells the user something is wrong, but without revealing any details.

    Unique Abilities:

    - Dragon Heat: Hakora, as the Fire Dragon Slayer, possesses an augmented body temperature which he can control on a whim. This also makes it so the air around him tends to be super-heated and can give him protection against cold climates. In addition to this, he can engrave flames upon any part of his body without being burned and wield them within a combative capacity, and within some non-combative situations.

    S-Rank sword Experience: While in a lot of ways, Hakora is learning magic all over again, he still has the mind and physical training of an experienced fighter. With a sword Hakora is comparable to a trained and experienced samurai.

    Signature ability: Dragon's Wings- Besides wind mages and winged creatures, flight is not easily done. Hakora has a dragon living within him and he gives Hakora the ability to fly as much as he wants.


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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:48

    D Ranked Spells

    Spells:

    Name: Dragon's Roar
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:

    The Dragon's Roar comes in many modes and looks, but it the signature power of a Dragon Slayer. The Dragon's Roar is named after and mimics the dragon's ability to shoot their element from their mouth with terrible force. Hakora is new to having these powers and can not use it to it's full power, but it is note worthy to remember that this is his strongest move. Unlike the majority of Dragon Slayers in the Anime, Hakora does not put his hands over mouth and funnel it through his fingers he just takes an inhaling and releases a large burst of fire. At this level, the amount of fire is thin at 3 feet in diameter and is mid range only able to travel for 15 feet.


    Strengths:
    -Strongest move
    -Causes burn and explosive damage
    -can be mixed with lightning if user can absorb lightning in some way.

    Weaknesses:
    - Rank C and higher water attacks are much more powerful against it.
    -Uses the most MP
    - Leaves Rank D user tired
    - Weak against earth attacks



    Name: Fire Dragon Iron Fist
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offense
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    The user wraps their fists with flanes which adds burn damage to melee attacks, The range, strength, speedm and pysical damage is the same as fighting against a UFC fighter, but fire damage adds 30 percent more damage.
    Strengths:
    - Increases melee attack damage.
    - could be used to bunch through things weak to fire.
    - can be used as a crude shield that punches through weaker elements. Not a complete shield, only a minor shield
    Weaknesses:
    -Weak Against fire
    -Weak against earth
    - Hand is still flesh and bone and can be hurt by things harder than bone.
    - Can only be used for one punch


    Name: Fire Dragon's Claw
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Similar to Iron Fist, but is a fire kick attack. Same range, speed, and power as Iron Fist, but has a Fire Slide effect. The Fire Slide gives the user a quick way to close distance to the target by heating up the air and using the heated air as a jet stream to send them at the target. the speed of an air slide is the same 40 MPHs.
    Strengths:
    - Fire Slide
    - Adds 20 percent fire damage to physical attack.
    - Powerful against steel due to Hakora wearing armor.
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against water
    - since the fire slide requires movement from one point to another it can be redirected and send the user into a wall or something hard and hurt themselves.
    - Requires precise aim to be effective.
    - without armor on the feet, the bones in the feet can break if striking something stronger than the bones


    Name: Fire Dragon's Shield
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire, Defensive
    Duration: semi Instant, there is a one second delay from when the wings form to wrapping around Hakora.
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Description: The user instantly sprouts flaming wings that then folds in to cover the body at all angle and provide a high intensity fire shield able to even block a water at rank D. This covers from all angles and moves quickly to wrap the user and burns at an intensity that turns rank equal water attacks into steam and weaken steel.
    Strengths:
    -High heat able to protect against even fire's weakness of water.
    - Moves fast enough in movement that the fire mimics a semi solid shield.
    - Semi Instant movements
    Weaknesses:
    -Though weakened, steel magic can still get through.
    - Though it moves fast and it isn't perfectly instant and could be bypassed if the target's movements or attacks are faster.
    - Can't block rank c or higher
    - Is only semi solid






    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)


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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:48

    C Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:48

    B Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:49

    A Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:49

    A Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:50

    S Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:50

    SS Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Mon 23 Feb 2015 - 2:50

    H Ranked Spells

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: ( Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Duration:(How long does the spell last?)
    Cooldown:( How long does it take for the spell to be usable again? Usually one post extra than your duration.)
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed,  Range,  Area of Effect,  and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier).  All of these are as appropriate.  Some spells wont have a speed,  some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply. Please make sure that all of these measurements are easily identifiable)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell.  You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them. These strengths much represent your spell, and not the over-all strength of the magic.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell and all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them. These weaknesses must represent your spell, and not the over-all weakness of the magic)

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Sun 1 Mar 2015 - 22:48

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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Wed 4 Mar 2015 - 19:13

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    Post by Thorn Sat 7 Mar 2015 - 10:58

    Hakora Pendragoon wrote:
    D Ranked Spells

    Spells:

    Name: Dragon's Roar
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:

    The Dragon's Roar comes in many modes and looks, but it the signature power of a Dragon Slayer. The Dragon's Roar is named after and mimics the dragon's ability to shoot their element from their mouth with terrible force. Hakora is new to having these powers and can not use it to it's full power, but it is note worthy to remember that this is his strongest move. Unlike the majority of Dragon Slayers in the Anime, Hakora does not put his hands over mouth and funnel it through his fingers he just takes an inhaling and releases a large burst of fire. At this level, the amount of fire is thin at 3 feet in diameter and is mid range only able to travel for 15 feet.


    Strengths:
    -Strongest move
    -Causes burn and explosive damage
    -can be mixed with lightning if user can absorb lightning in some way.

    Weaknesses:
    - Rank C and higher water attacks are much more powerful against it.
    -Uses the most MP
    - Leaves Rank D user tired
    - Weak against earth attacks



    Name: Fire Dragon Iron Fist
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offense
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    The user wraps their fists with flanes which adds burn damage to melee attacks, The range, strength, speedm and pysical damage is the same as fighting against a UFC fighter, but fire damage adds 30 percent more damage.
    Strengths:
    - Increases melee attack damage.
    - could be used to bunch through things weak to fire.
    - can be used as a crude shield that punches through weaker elements. Not a complete shield, only a minor shield
    Weaknesses:
    -Weak Against fire
    -Weak against earth
    - Hand is still flesh and bone and can be hurt by things harder than bone.
    - Can only be used for one punch


    Name: Fire Dragon's Claw
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Similar to Iron Fist, but is a fire kick attack. Same range, speed, and power as Iron Fist, but has a Fire Slide effect. The Fire Slide gives the user a quick way to close distance to the target by heating up the air and using the heated air as a jet stream to send them at the target. the speed of an air slide is the same 40 MPHs.
    Strengths:
    - Fire Slide
    - Adds 20 percent fire damage to physical attack.
    - Powerful against steel due to Hakora wearing armor.
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against water
    - since the fire slide requires movement from one point to another it can be redirected and send the user into a wall or something hard and hurt themselves.
    - Requires precise aim to be effective.
    - without armor on the feet, the bones in the feet can break if striking something stronger than the bones


    Name: Fire Dragon's Shield
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire, Defensive
    Duration: semi Instant clarify please
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Description: The user instantly sprouts flaming wings that then folds in to cover the body at all angle and provide a high intensity fire shield able to even block a water at rank D. This covers from all angles and moves quickly to wrap the user and burns at an intensity that turns rank equal water attacks into steam and weaken steel.
    Strengths:
    -High heat able to protect against even fire's weakness of water.
    - Moves fast enough in movement that the fire mimics a semi solid shield.
    - Semi Instant movements
    Weaknesses:
    -Though weakened, steel magic can still get through.
    - Though it moves fast and it isn't perfectly instant and could be bypassed if the target's movements or attacks are faster.
    - Can't block rank c or higher
    - Is only semi solid






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    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)


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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Sat 7 Mar 2015 - 22:37

    Clarify, done.
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    Post by Thorn Sun 8 Mar 2015 - 6:10

    ok Approved


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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Yvonne Wed 11 Mar 2015 - 14:00

    Hakora Pendragoon wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Blue Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Fire Dragon Slayer Magic is a type of Dragon Slayer Magic that grants the user various characteristics typical of a Fire Dragon: lungs capable of spewing flames, scales that grant protection against fire, and nails covered in flames. Consequently, Fire Dragon Slayer Magic allows the user to produce and control fire from any part of their body, which can be used both in melee and as a ranged form of offense. The generated flames can be manipulated in a wide variety of ways, their “type” can be changed at will, and they can even be given a material consistency. Such fire seems to have a “blunt” effect to it, seemingly causing bludgeoning damage alongside burning. The fire produced by this type of Magic produces much more heat than a standard one, with even the user’s body temperature being capable of melting iron and burning off poison and stigmata's; not only that, but the user’s fire is strictly connected to their feelings, meaning the more emotional they get, the more their flames will increase exponentially in temperature, something that is referred to as “Flames of Emotion”.

    In addition, the user can consume external sources of fire to restore their body to a healthy state and regain their reserves of strength, something that also makes them immune to most types of fire, due to their capability of nullifying fire-based attacks by sucking them in and eating them; the consumed fire also seems to possess a different “taste” according to its “quality”. However, the user can’t eat their own flames, or things set on fire by them, to reinvigorate themselves. While classes of flames that are “higher” in rank to those produced by this type of Magic (like those employed by a Flame God Slayer) can’t be eaten directly and will therefore damage the user, momentarily self-nullifying all of the user’s Magic Power will grant them enough room to consume and even use such flames.
    If a Fire Dragon Slayer is somehow capable of successfully eating lightning, they will enter Lightning Flame Dragon Mode. In this form, the lightning and flames will fuse and the user's attacks will possess the properties and destructive ability of both elements.

    Hakora uses his magic with melee and ranged attacks, but will also pair it with his sword. Hakora has a dragon sleeping inside him. Hakora is providing her with longer life and the dragon is providing Hakora with wisdom, his linage of Dragon's spirit and the magic itself. With Igneel dying many years ago, she is not the dragon that lives inside Hakora. The dragon's name is Sapphire and she is the Dragon of the blue flame making Hakora's flames blue as well. Alright this is a biiig description....let me tell you though...in her, DSs can't consume GS' or DeS' element. We are trying to make a system for this but it's not done yet. And in here, you also can't just eat lightning and enter lightning flame dragon mode. Just keep that info.


    Strengths:
    - The caster is able to consume fire to regenerate his reserve of magical energy and enter Dragon Force, which covers parts of his body with powerful fire dragon scales, while it also augments his spell power by 50% and boosts all of his stats to being equal to those he will hold at the next stage of his development.

    - Enhanced senses, the caster possesses extremely augmented senses, namely their sense of smell and their hearing. This can make the user rather skilled at tracking and gathering information that could prove to be useful on jobs.

    - Burning, fire dragon slayer magic, true to its name, focuses around causing burning damage. At the base rank of D-rank they can only cause 2% burning damage. At the second rank of C-rank they can cause 4% burning damage. When they hit B-rank they can cause 6% burning damage. At A-rank they can cause 8% burning damage. When the user hits S-Class rank wise they can cause 10% burning damage.

    - This brand of Dragon Slayer Magic revolving around fire is obvious effective against Ice-based Magic's as fire melts ice. This brand of Dragon Slayer Magic is strong against Plants/Wood as fire burns through them reducing them to ashes. This magic is also strong against Iron as fire can expand, weaken, and melt iron. This magic can even potentially be strong against wind magic as said wind can be used to possibly enhance the power of a spell. Also if the fire can be heated enough it can steam through water magic.

    Weaknesses:

    - The caster cannot eat the fire he produces.

    - Certain Frequencies: The caster, due to their heightened hearing is also susceptible to incredibly loud noises, or those that are of a pitch normal human's cannot hear it.

    - Water-based Magic's, this magic revolving around the element of fire holds a significant weakness towards damage. However, if the user become enraged enough they may be able to counteract this disadvantage to a slight degree. They are especially weak against the Storm Dragon Slayer, Torrent God Slayer, and Ocean Demon Slayer. This extreme weakness being due to the fact that water puts out fire.

    -Flame God/Devil Slayers are able to consume the fire produced by the caster spells, while the caster is unable to do the same to their God/Devil Slaying counterparts without causing themselves a considerable amount of harm in the process, even attempting such a thing being tat amount to pseudo-suicide.

    - Incantations, some of the spells, namely Signature Spells seem to have a sort of incantation tied in to them, which in the long run means they are burning at least some time with reciting said incantation. So some spells will have a channeling time requirement.

    - Motion Sickness, Hakora, like all Dragon Slayer's, suffers from motion sickness. Though, his is a wee bit excessive. He doesn't even have to be on a boat, train, or other form of transportation, just talk about it in his presence of get him to think about transportation and you'll have turned him into a sitting duck.

    Lineage:
    Dragon Spirit:
    Description: In the medieval ages, a golden dragon was said to have lived. It was said that this dragon was the wisest dragon of all. He, before his death, gave part of his soul to a farmer, and the man used his new found power to help protect those he loved. Little more is known about the mysterious abilities he has gained due to the lack of descendants that were carried on, but legends claim that through the dragon's spirit, the man gained immense insight and foresight, much like the dragon himself had.
    Ability: Dragon Spirit allows the user to sense or predict all events ahead allowing him to avoid sticky situations. Can avoid all traps during the duration.
    Usage: The Active Ability can be used to actually predict events ahead for 3 posts and can only be used once per thread. The Passive Ability works as an additional sense that tells the user something is wrong, but without revealing any details.

    Unique Abilities:

    - Dragon Heat: Hakora, as the Fire Dragon Slayer, possesses an augmented body temperature which he can control on a whim. This also makes it so the air around him tends to be super-heated and can give him protection against cold climates. In addition to this, he can engrave flames upon any part of his body without being burned and wield them within a combative capacity, and within some non-combative situations. Nope. No combative use, please. Not unless you are ready to describe this a lot more.

    S-Rank sword Experience: While in a lot of ways, Hakora is learning magic all over again, he still has the mind and physical training of an experienced fighter. With a sword Hakora is comparable to a trained and experienced samurai. Uhm this isn't really an unique ability of your magic....

    Signature ability: Dragon's Wings- Besides wind mages and winged creatures, flight is not easily done. Hakora has a dragon living within him and he gives Hakora the ability to fly as much as he wants. Uhm kinda defeats the flavor of being a DS. No DSs in the anime could actually fly other than the sky DS and they all had dragons living within them. You can make high jumps, make short sprints and so on like how Natsu did it. Btw...if this is supposed to be your signature spell, you must use the spell template for this.


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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Yvonne Wed 11 Mar 2015 - 14:16

    Hakora Pendragoon wrote:
    D Ranked Spells

    Spells:

    Name: Dragon's Roar
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:

    The Dragon's Roar comes in many modes and looks, but it the signature power of a Dragon Slayer. The Dragon's Roar is named after and mimics the dragon's ability to shoot their element from their mouth with terrible force. Hakora is new to having these powers and can not use it to it's full power, but it is note worthy to remember that this is his strongest move. Unlike the majority of Dragon Slayers in the Anime, Hakora does not put his hands over mouth and funnel it through his fingers he just takes an inhaling and releases a large burst of fire. At this level, the amount of fire is thin at 3 feet in diameter and is mid range only able to travel for 15 feet. Give me a speed for this.


    Strengths:
    -Strongest move Not really a strength
    -Causes burn and explosive damage
    -can be mixed with lightning if user can absorb lightning in some way. No. You can't consume lightning being a fire here...not unless you get a lightning DS lacrima for your secondary and make spells that can mix with your primary magic..

    Weaknesses:
    - Rank C and higher water attacks are much more powerful against it.
    -Uses the most MP Not really...at D rank this will take 10 MP like all other D rank spells for you atm. So not exactly a weakness.
    - Leaves Rank D user tired
    - Weak against earth attacks



    Name: Fire Dragon Iron Fist
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offense
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    The user wraps their fists with flanes which adds burn damage to melee attacks, The range, strength, speedm and pysical damage is the same as fighting against a UFC fighter, but fire damage adds 30 percent more damage. change to 10% and what do you mean like an UFC fighter? Explain this spell in detail. D rank spells can have only one effect. Keep that in mind.
    Strengths:
    - Increases melee attack damage.
    - could be used to bunch through things weak to fire.
    - can be used as a crude shield that punches through weaker elements. Not a complete shield, only a minor shield
    Weaknesses:
    -Weak Against fire
    -Weak against earth
    - Hand is still flesh and bone and can be hurt by things harder than bone.
    - Can only be used for one punch


    Name: Fire Dragon's Claw
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Similar to Iron Fist, but is a fire kick attack. Same range, speed, and power as Iron Fist, but has a Fire Slide effect. The Fire Slide gives the user a quick way to close distance to the target by heating up the air and using the heated air as a jet stream to send them at the target. the speed of an air slide is the same 40 MPHs. Give this a range.
    Strengths:
    - Fire Slide
    - Adds 20 percent fire damage to physical attack. Change to 10
    - Powerful against steel due to Hakora wearing armor.
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against water
    - since the fire slide requires movement from one point to another it can be redirected and send the user into a wall or something hard and hurt themselves.
    - Requires precise aim to be effective.
    - without armor on the feet, the bones in the feet can break if striking something stronger than the bones


    Name: Fire Dragon's Shield
    Rank: Rank D
    Type: Fire, Defensive
    Duration: semi Instant, there is a one second delay from when the wings form to wrapping around Hakora.
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Description: The user instantly sprouts flaming wings that then folds in to cover the body at all angle and provide a high intensity fire shield able to even block a water at rank D. This covers from all angles and moves quickly to wrap the user and burns at an intensity that turns rank equal water attacks into steam and weaken steel. Uhm nope...water based D rank spells should be able to break the shield.
    Strengths:
    -High heat able to protect against even fire's weakness of water.
    - Moves fast enough in movement that the fire mimics a semi solid shield.
    - Semi Instant movements
    Weaknesses:
    -Though weakened, steel magic can still get through.
    - Though it moves fast and it isn't perfectly instant and could be bypassed if the target's movements or attacks are faster.
    - Can't block rank c or higher
    - Is only semi solid






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    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)


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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Tue 17 Mar 2015 - 0:50

    I have become aware that my once approved magic is no longer approved and I do not find some issues that have been pointed out to be issues at all, but let me go in deeper into why I do not see them as issues.

    Bio: Since when has the description being too long an issue? I have effectively described the magic in multiple uses and even used the wiki for support which supports the lightning dragon slayer mode the same way because I used a paraphraise of it because I figured it needed to be added since lightning is a form of fire sped up and is canon.

    Dragon heat: Was to only direct thing I used from Krow's approved dragon slayer seen here
    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t10037-fire-dragon-slayer
    this profile was approved by multiple people so I see why it being an ability is a problem. He has a literal flame dragon within him, of course heating the air is a easy thing to do and could both be combatitive and non combatitive. Non in that it can help him and others survive cold conditions, combatitive as heating up the air would be like fighting in the desert at noon which would aid his fight.

    S rank ability: It does not state that it must be a unique ability of his magic, only that it must be his. For example, I could link you a large amount of profiles that have unique abilities not characteristics of their magic, but of their character. If you wanted this solely magic related then it should be stated and another place should be given to put unique abilities of the characters as not one magic is solely their magic. They train in other ways as well.

    Flight: Let's step back to bio where you had the problem with lightning flame dragon mode. If you are going to refute canon in one area, you can't bring it back to refute non canon. It seems to me that you, in all due respects, have an ideal picture of what the fire dragon slayer should be and quite frankly, mine will not meet it and nor should it. It is the very core of this site that magic has no restrictions on it must be such and such or not at all. Yes it must be ranked based and must not become OP or unstoppable, but it is creative. Just because I applied to be the dragon slayer does not rob me of creativity and in no way is the act of flight anti canon or need to be a spell as it is merely flying. Sure you can say flight makes you untouchable, but I would disagree as you can say the same about speed or strength. Flight makes you more prond to air and wind attacks and also makes you unable to hold off attacks as weel as you can't use the ground for traction. All mages in the anime have a thing like taking off their shirt, drinking a lot, reading a lot and what not. Hakora pendragon's thing is flying and he will be seen often in the guild sitting on air for no reason.


    strongest move: of course that is a strength, it also alerts that it will be more force than the other attacks and is something to take note of. Quite frankly, I find it ridiculous that you must have a min of 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses because sometimes you want to have simple and straight to the point moves and must resort to "strongest move" just to meet the requirement.

    Again, absorbing lightning: it is canon and NO WHERE on the site is there a rule against it.

    uses most of MP: Well that is silly, shooting a large amount of fire out of your mouth would be the same as lighting your fists on fire? Nope, that would make no sense. Using more MP and damage ratio are two different things. If his roar was the same as his other attacks then it would be anti canon as Natsu got tired after using his in the beginning showing that it took a lot out of him.


    water breaking the shield. Sure, water is a weakness, but a super heated shield? That is like saying the firemen should be able to put out a fire instantly because it is water against fire, takes time and this shield is only good for instant defenses so it would not stand against long attacks in the first place at Rank D at least.



    Conclusion: I see and agree to some changes, but quite frankly and in accordance to canon, rules, and already approved abilities I do not agree to the other changes. IF you do not see my point I request a third mod to evaluate your claims and more merit to why these abilities and issues need changing when as I said they are in accordance with the rules and canon and my profile was already approved. I checked the rules for an hour before writing this and find no rules against the issues I am retorting to.

    I also would like to make it clear that I do not retort out of disrespect or to say you are not fit to bring up these issues, but as I said I do not see these as issues, more like against your preference on what my magic should look like, but the site is about creativity, not fitting a mold.
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    Fire Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Fire Dragon Slayer

    Post by Yvonne Tue 17 Mar 2015 - 11:21

    Alright. That's a very nice speech you have given for me there. It is, apologetically, not enough to keep you from editing that app the way I pointed it out. Let me tell you, your app was graded by a trial mod in the beginning. Thorn is definitely an amazing mod but she is still learning from us. Thus, I have enough power to take out an app she approved and grade it. Just putting this in here.


    Description of the magic: Okay. Firstly, length of a description really isn't that much of an issue. But, when you have things that we don't allow in here in that description, there is a very HUGE issue. Also, wiki is not always right. Let me point out that wiki is written by fans of the series much like us and they could always get the wrong information too. They are human. Not supercomputers. I wouldn't depend entirely on wiki OR use that as an excuse if I were you. You cannot use lightning dragon mode with your primary because your PRIMARY is FIRE DRAGON SLAYER magic alone. It means you can have fun with fire, not other elements. If you do want a lightning mode or whatever, you will have to get a lacrima and make that your secondary. And don't give me the canon stuff. As much as we follow canon stuff, we are a non canon Roleplay site. We have our own rules and it will be best you follow them if you want to keep this magic.


    Dragon Heart: Honestly, that ability should not have been approved, even for Krow. Also, uhm, I have to point out here, that you actually copied Krow's ability completely and transferred it to your app. Now I'm not gonna raise any eyebrows here, although, honestly, you should have gotten his permission first. But the ability itself is not so fine and I happened to ask the admins and other staff about this. I gave you a reply that they gave me. It cannot be used for combative use. Oh and because a friend, also a mod, pointed it out for me, the part where Hakora can control body temperature and what not....it's fine....but do not argue with this in PvP or combat in general. It can be an ability for your char, fine, but can it be used as any sort of defense against ice and water spells? No.  


    S Rank Swordplay: Hakora, not to sound mean, but this is a MAGIC app. You are describing your MAGIC in here, not your character's ability. I don't understand what S rank sword mastery has anything to do with a Fire DS app. This section is for the unique abilities of your magic and you will not get away with it no matter how many apps you link here. I'm gonna put my foot down with the power of a moderator here and tell you that you HAVE to change this. Also, before bashing our system, your character app could have included this. Well, not as S rank mastery cause o - O wth? You could have included in your app that your character is very familiar to swordplay, however, this does not mean that you are better than everyone in here and that in a battle of swords, you will win. It just means your character is good with swords. Nothing more, nothing less.


    Flight: You can argue however you want, but this is an absolute no. This is a sky dragon slayer thing, not a fire dragons layer thing. Fire Dragon Slayer thing is making short yet quick movement in a direction using fire to propel you forward. I'm not saying you can't be creative. Being creative is the best thing ever. However, this cannot be approved. You are making it seem that you can fly without any restrictions and why exactly is that? hmm? Your character is human and humans don't have wings, the last time I checked. And even if he isn't human, by any chance, it doesn't look like your charater's body have any wings attached to them. And, don't give me the dragon inside me thing. Natsu had a dragon in him too. Did you see him flying? Anyway, I cannot allow free flight for your character. It has to become a spell with a set duration and cooldown AND MP use.  


    Strongest move: -sigh- I really don't see how that is an authentic strength but fine. Fine. Keep it. It's not something worth arguing over in the first place. However, there is a reason why we ask you to list out your spell's strength and weakness here. It's for others to get a grasp of your magic and make sure that it is balanced. And don't complain about 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses thing. Everyone is doing it. Why must you be any different?


    Absorbing Lightning: No, no and no~ Sorry had to use Zack's no song in here xD But yah with just Fire DS as primary magic, you cannot absorb lightning. Fire DS magic does NOT give you that ability. In here, if you want to do it, get a lacrima and make it your secondary.
    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t8369-magic-rules refer to dragon slayers > Mixed Slayers and look at the secondary magic rules too.  


    Uses most MP: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t8370-character-perks refer to Magic Power in here.  


    Water and your shield: This is not real life we are talking about in here. Don't even think of making excuses like these. Please, you don't know how irritating it is when someone makes this sort of comment. What you have to keep in mind, Hakora, is the rank of your character and your spell. Your spell is D rank and it is fire. A D rank water spell would have the SAME power as your D rank spells. But, since water is fire's obvious weakness, water based spells will deal double damage to your spells. And thus, D rank water spells CAN destroy your shield because basically, it will do C rank damage to your D rank shield.  


    My conclusion: I don't really need an admin to back me up on this, but if you really want it, I can get someone to agree to my grading. Oh and I have nothing against you, Hakora. Nothing against you or your magic. However, as a mod, I have to take apart each and every part of your magic and make sure it is done right. This is why, I politely ask you to make the changes I have pointed out to you and bump this app.


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    Hakora Pendragoon
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    Post by Hakora Pendragoon Sat 21 Mar 2015 - 2:02

    I have given it a lot of thought and time to become less of a rash decision and more of a responsible one. I still disagree with you on some timgs and see you point in others, but at the sametime this has made me realize that RP is just no longer fun to me and just seems like work.

    I remember when I began RPing almost a decade ago when it was more about having fun and being creative. The godmodding began common and it took the fun out and rules were put in place to stop it. The rules and guidelines I understand, but in all the RPs I have done lately the rules and guidelines just make it less creative and less fun for me.

    So after much consideration, I am giving up this magic and taking my leave from RP to persue writing my book.
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    Yvonne
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    Post by Yvonne Sat 21 Mar 2015 - 4:11

    Well, it's your call. I didn't want to be harsh with you but you did leave me with very little choice. There is no problem with being creative. It just has to fit within the rules of a site because when everyone is following it, there is no option to let someone go another way just cause he wants to be creative. Sorry and Good Bye. Hopefully, you would come back one day. Also, Good luck!


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