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    Mickey's Magic: Double Soul Magic

    MrMickey
    MrMickey

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Curse of the White Witch
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Guild : Lamia Scale (Dragon Fang Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Double Soul Magic
    Second Skill:
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    Post by MrMickey 17th June 2014, 12:07 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Double Soul magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This magic has two forms:
    -Red Form: Mickey changes personality becoming "Red Mickey". This magic allows Mickey to generate red hot energy, which he bends to attack and burn the enemy. When he is "Red Mickey", he is very offensive. He refuses any kind of Unison Raids or team work, and all he wants to do is attack the enemy trying to hurt him, but he know when he has to defend himself. When he needs to be defended he uses Switch to become "Blue Mickey"
    -Blue Form: Mickey changes personality becoming "Blue Mickey". This magic allows Mickey to generate blue cold energy, which he bends to defend himself from the attacks. When he is "Blue Mickey", he is very defensive. He wants team work and he prefers to defend others instead of himself. He would rather not to become "Red Mickey", but when he has to attack he uses Switch to become more offensive.The switch of personality can become through the spell Switch or through a more natural way, for example, when he is in danger (from Blue to Red), when he is complimented (from Red to Blue) or when he is offended (from Blue to Red).
    Thanks to this magic, Mickey can attack and defend, but not simultaneously. he can't be "Red Mickey" and "Blue Mickey" at once!

    Strengths:

    • Burning: when Mickey is “Red Mickey” he is able to burn the enemy with his red hot energy spells
    • Red Mickey is powerful against ice dragon/god slayer
    • Single targetting: Mickey can focus on only one enemy at once when he is Red Mickey
    • High crowd control: he can imprison, burn or freeze the enemy
    • Versatile: he can be both offensive or defensive


    Weaknesses:

    • The user can't be “Blue” and “Red” simultaneously, so he's not able to use offesive and defensive magic at once.
    • The user takes damage if the red hot energy of the “Red Mickey”'s spells is hurt by the enemy
    • The user can't control himself well when he is “Red Mickey”, he risks to hurt his own teammates
    • Single targetting: he can't harm more than one enemy at once
    • The “Red Mickey”'s spells can be eaten by a fire dragon/god slayer
    • The “Blue Mickey”'s spells can be eaten by an ice dragon/god slayer

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Switch: Mickey's abilty to change knowlingly from Blue to Red and vice versa, but only once per post.
    • Energy Manipulation: Mickey can move all his attack based on energy in any directions he wants, but only if he can see them.



    D Rank Spells:


    Last edited by MrMickey on 20th June 2014, 2:16 am; edited 8 times in total
    MrMickey
    MrMickey

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Curse of the White Witch
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Guild : Lamia Scale (Dragon Fang Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Double Soul Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by MrMickey 18th June 2014, 3:06 am

    Bumpy Bump


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    Post by Guest 18th June 2014, 5:24 am

    Heya Mickey, I'll be reviewing your app and just directing you on any changes that need to be made, as well as giving advice to help make your magic the best it can be while keeping it balanced and fair =]

    Any suggestions or edits will be written in blue. For the most part it's your strengths and weaknesses that need working on, along with the removal of MP usage and addition of spell durations. I'd also make your 'Switch' spell an ability with a cooldown of around 2-3 posts so that you can still switch fairly freely, but not spam it every post.

    There may be more edits in the future, but for now I feel I've given you enough to work on. Please bump when you've made the edits I'm requested and I'll happily re-review your magic again as I'm loving the concept to this =]

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    MrMickey
    MrMickey

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Curse of the White Witch
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Guild : Lamia Scale (Dragon Fang Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Double Soul Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by MrMickey 19th June 2014, 5:15 am

    Bumpy Bump


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    Post by Guest 19th June 2014, 9:23 am

    Same as before, all edits will be in blue =]

    When you do your strengths and weaknesses could you please state what colour soul each strength and weakness refer to like you have in your Scales spell?

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    MrMickey
    MrMickey

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Curse of the White Witch
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Guild : Lamia Scale (Dragon Fang Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Double Soul Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by MrMickey 19th June 2014, 10:56 am

    Bumby Bump


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    Post by Guest 20th June 2014, 2:26 am

    Approved =] Have fun on jobs!

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