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    Artifact: The Soul Caliber

    Soul Rider
    Soul Rider

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    Artifact: The Soul Caliber  Empty Artifact: The Soul Caliber

    Post by Soul Rider 18th April 2013, 12:43 pm

    Name: Soul Caliber
    Type: Artifact Shape Shifter
    Description: An Orb that contains spirit energy. The orb then Solidifies the moister in the air around it, letting the little, 5 centimeter in diameter orb, turn into one of 3 weapons. A greate sword, a bow and arrow, or a scythe.
    Strengths:
    - Sense the Magic is a combination of both Spirit energy and Ice, fire magic, unless that of a B-rank flame or stronger, can not destroy nor damage the blade.
    - Any water that comes in contact with the orb will turn to ice.
    - The weapon Can resist A Rank Spells
    - APPLIES TO ALL SPELLS AS WELL: The weapon can freeze spells equal to or less then the users rank. Any spells higher then the users rank will not be frozen.
    - Bodies of water will only have a top layer frozen, and this can only extend to a 20 meter radius of the weapon.
    Weaknesses:
    - Fire of B-rank or higher can MELT the weapon, but will not damage the orb.
    - Hard substances might chip the weapon its self (not the orb)
    - Can be destroyed by an S-rank spell, however can be repaired after the thread.
    Abilities:
    - Transformation: The orb its self does not harm the enemy. In fact, it is of no concern to the enemy. Its only purpose is to condense the frost energy in the surrounding area, combining it with Soul energy, and forming a weapon. The Orb stays in weapon form until the weapon is either broken, or the user calls off and sends it back into the orb like state.
    Great sword: A 4 foot long sword that is 1.5 feet in width. It is made mostly of Ice, but has some soul energy mixed in keeping it in its form. The sword is heavy, and does not allow the user much room in speed or accuracy, however, it has the strength to crush bones.
    Spoiler:
    Scythe: The orb turns into a scythe like state. The scythe is very light, and is 5 feet long, with the blade on the side being 4 3 feet long. It is crystallized, and has 6 ice orbs swirling around it.
    Spoiler:
    Bow: The orb, acting like a handle, turns into a bow. The bow is 3.5 feet long, and his very sharp at both ends, so sharp that it can cut through flesh. The Bow has a thin, almost invisible string made of soul energy attached to it. When the user pulls back, up to 3 arrows can form on the string, being made of mostly soul energy, but having a few shards of frost energy in there to pack a punch. The arrows them selves can get lodged into skin and flesh, but can not touch bones.

    Spells:


    Last edited by Soul Rider on 21st April 2013, 2:25 pm; edited 5 times in total


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    TacticalFallacy
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    Post by TacticalFallacy 19th April 2013, 9:15 am

    Alright a few issues.
    One: Artifacts can be destroyed when faced up against an S-rank or higher spell. So change that. In fact, there is conflict between your strengths, as you say that above B-rank fire can destroy it even when you say Artifacts cannot be destroyed. Avoid contradictions like these.
    Two: There have been debates among the staff over the percentage Magical boost of the Artifact, as it essentially buffs you up one rank, which is far too OP. So remove that for now, till we can finally sort this out.

    Spells:
    Glacier Shot:
    -15 arrows is a head-ache, even for an artifact, especially since this is a D-rank spell. 10 arrows are allowed, but have their overall total damage be more limited to 5 D-rank hits. Besides, the more arrows you have, the more dispersed the power of each arrow.
    -Fire Magic of B-rank and higher can outright obliterate all the arrows. C-rank and lower can reduce by half, as you have already stated.

    Hail Storm:
    -Far too many area-of-effect explosions. Reduce radius to 6 feet and reduce orb number to 4.
    -I just sighed at melting the explosions. It does not even make any sense. Remove it. Instead, the exploding orbs can only be destroyed by C-rank and above fire magic, or B-rank and above normal magic. You are still D-rank, so these limitations are necessary.


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    First Skill: Glacier God Slayer
    Second Skill: ???
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Soul Rider 19th April 2013, 9:35 am

    Edited.


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 19th April 2013, 9:41 am

    Now we got water-freezing and the implications it will have on water mages, as well as water bodies like the sea. I don't expect this to be so strong that you can freeze oceans or seas, so I guess we have to place a limit to both ranked magical water and large water bodies. For the former, I expect your current control to fail when facing against B-rank or higher water magic and for the latter, you can only freeze water bodies that are as ten-meters wide, or if you want, you can just place an ice-layer over such water-bodies with an increased area of twenty-meters wide.

    This will be extended to the spells as well, so include in all of them when relevant.


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 19th April 2013, 9:49 am

    Alright, looks good. Approved, but don't overdo it with this weapon, alright?


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 21st April 2013, 2:12 pm

    I notice a contradiction in your glacier shot. You state at one point they are equal to 1.5 c rank and then at another that they are equal to a c rank. The latter should be the correct one. Please change that.

    You said five orbs, but only four explosions. I am most confused. As you can only target a single enemy per orb I will allow them to have C rank damage for the explosion, as you have put.


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    Soul Rider
    Soul Rider

    VIP- God Slayer- Player 
    Lineage : Malefic Illusions
    Position : None
    Posts : 240
    Guild : Eternum
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Snow goddess, Khione
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Glacier God Slayer
    Second Skill: ???
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Soul Rider 21st April 2013, 2:26 pm

    edited.


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    Rosetta Crawford
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 22nd April 2013, 8:02 am

    Eh it'll do. Approved


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