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    The Small Shooters

    Axilmeus Steel
    Axilmeus Steel

    Godaime: Bai Hu


    Godaime: Bai Hu

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    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
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    Post by Axilmeus Steel 24th May 2014, 4:53 am

    Name: The Small Shooters
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Crossbows
    Description:
    The Small Shooters:
    The quiver:
    Cyrus owns two of these wooden crossbows, wearing one on each hip. Two leather quivers are worn beneath them on both hips as well.

    Strengths:
    -range: the bolts fly a distance of 15 feet before dropping in altitude, but the crossbows themselves can be used as handy, albeit ineffective, melee weapons

    -multi-shot: these specially designed crossbows, made by the same people who make the big cutter, can fire four bolts at a time

    -dual wield: Cyrus can use two of these weapons at any given moment.

    Weaknesses:
    -ammo: Each quiver carries only 12 bolts, meaning, if fully loaded, the crossbows can only fire 3 times each.

    -reloading: Cyrus can reload these weapons fairly quickly, but it takes about 3 seconds to reload, regardless of how many bolts he loads in. He can't reload while dual wielding, so he must put one away, reload the other, then put that one away, and reload the second, then draw the first one. This process can take up to 10 seconds to complete

    -aim: when only wielding one he can aim and has normal accuracy, but when wielding both crossbows he can't aim, and would not be able to hit fast moving targets

    -power: the bolts are small and deal less damage then would be expected. Two bolts is equivalent to damage equal to the user's rank. One bolt is a single rank lower than the user. Thus, four bolts equals twice the normal damage, but four bolts can only be fired 3 times.

    -hard to replace: although they are technically replaceable, they are quite expensive. If both are destroyed, then for the next job Cyrus would only be able to use one due to not being able to buy two for financial reasons. The next job, however, he would have both once again.

    -of the mark: the bolts are small and can be easily blocked, dodged, or diverted through the opponents use of spells or equipment.


    Last edited by Axilmeus Steel on 25th May 2014, 11:38 am; edited 3 times in total


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    Post by Guest 24th May 2014, 7:57 pm

    Please don't take any offence to this, but this seems too strong for a Weak weapon. Could you possibly remake the ability?
    Axilmeus Steel
    Axilmeus Steel

    Godaime: Bai Hu


    Godaime: Bai Hu

    Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Christian Minecraft Server- Achiever- Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Motor City Rush- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
    Position : None
    Posts : 488
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : -
    Experience : 2237.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Fantasy Summon: Super Hero
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Axilmeus Steel 24th May 2014, 9:39 pm

    Alright. Edited so that spells of equal rank effect it and that the bolts are blocked by fire and earth as well


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    Post by Guest 25th May 2014, 11:32 am

    The entire ability is the problem. This is a weak weapon, yet you're including an ability that allows it to rip through spells as long as they're not elemental. You need to add some significant weaknesses, because right now, this weapon could easily be considered strong. Again, not meaning to be harsh.
    Axilmeus Steel
    Axilmeus Steel

    Godaime: Bai Hu


    Godaime: Bai Hu

    Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Christian Minecraft Server- Achiever- Haiku Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Motor City Rush- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
    Position : None
    Posts : 488
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : -
    Experience : 2237.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Fantasy Summon: Super Hero
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Axilmeus Steel 25th May 2014, 11:39 am

    I just got rid of the ability and elemental weakness altogether. Bump.


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    Post by Guest 25th May 2014, 12:15 pm

    Approved

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