Fallen God

Silver Stormrunner wrote:

Lineage Name: Fallen God
Wielder: Silver Stormrunner
Purchase Proof: Here~

Description

For one glorious minute, Silver Stormrunner became one of the few humans who ascended to Godhood. But before he could give himself a Godly name, or even realize what his Godly nature is, his newly acquired divinity was ripped from his form. Betrayed by his mentor and lover, she used forbidden lost magic to capture Silver's divinity, and when it tried to resist her grasp she took the man's right eye, arm and leg to house his divine might so the Goddess might use it for herself.

Silver got away with his mortal life and believed that other than his lost limbs and a wrecked psyche, his minute of divinity did not affect him. He is wrong. While most of his divine power was taken by the Goddess, some of it remains within him, almost enough to identify him as a demi-god. And while he is nowhere near the power of his former godly might, what little is left manages to empower his mortal form. But Silver remains mostly unaware of this, and may never know his former role as a God of Love, Devotion, Protection and Battle.

Plot Abilities:

• God of Love: While Silver never got to find out, he was in fact a God of Love. The after-effects of being such means that with a look he can instantly tell a person's romantic and sexual orientation and if they are in a relationship. With a bit more reflective digging he can also tell the state of the person's love life... With of course the double added bonus of seeming extra attractive to others, making them more likely to agree with Silver. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

• God of Battle: Silver's innate instinct as a former God of battle remains, if in a lesser form, giving him heightened instincts outside of battle at least. He can quickly tell the intent someone has toward him, good or bad, and a vague idea of what they want from him as well (example: wants to sleep with me, wants to pickpocket me, curious about my magic) as long as it's relatively simple. The intent to kill him is stupidly easy for him to spot, even if the person is hiding. He can also tell when someone is directly lying to him and can get a feel if someone is hiding something from him as well. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others special NPCs.

Abilities:

• Blessing of Divinity: What little is left of his divine nature has given Silver an unexpected blessing. He gets a passive 20% bonus (A bonus of what? I am assuming this is damage, but it's not stated) against devils, demons, undead, and other unholy beings. Requires OOC permission to use on other players special NPCs. (1 minor effect)

• Offering to a God: While he is no longer a god, what little divinity remains subconsciously seems to affect the mortals around him, causing them to give him extra jewels and items as an 'offering'. Upon completing a mission, Silver receives 100% more jewels from rewards, and 50% off of site-owned shops (not including the VIP shop). (2 effects) (Unfortunately, I cannot allow shop discounts in custom lineages as they would be directly influencing the site's economy to a frankly unbalanced degree. As such, I am forced to ask you to remove or replace that effect in this lineage ability)

• God of Protection: This innate symbol of Silver's divinity gives him a passive 50% boost to toughness, 60% when he's protecting someone else (Toughness is not a stat that can be buffed or debuffed. I need you to rework this ability into a buff that affects one of the statistics that can be increased/decreased here on FTRP. Further, it is unclear whether this ability is an active or passive buff, as the wording is conditionally applicable to either. Assuming this is a passive buff, I must ask you to cap that buff at 40% since you are, at current, D Rank (or expend more lineage effects for additional buff value). To better protect others he also gets a 5% boost to both HP and MP restoration every other post. (2 effects) (This ability, as it is currently, is actually 4 effects, 2 for the 2 user rank buffs I must categorize as such, and 1 for each regeneration effect)

• God of Devotion: While this trait has fallen alongside his divinity, it is still part of his divine lineage. His devotion to others aids him in battle by increasing his attack by 60% and his magical attack by 60%. (2 effects) (As before, either lower each buff to 40% or adjust the effect count of this ability to 3 effects total)

• Divine Blood: Silver's holy blood grants him even more effects. This ability allows Silver to have an extra Signature Spell Slot that ranks up to A for each of the 3 Magics he has. (1 effect)

• Curse of Divinity: Being a former God and becoming mortal again has its consequences. For one all of Silver's former divinity is in his corrupted missing right eye, arm and leg. If he was ever confronted with even one of his missing limbs his mortal magic will be crippled and will gain the negative effects as if he ran out of MP. Also, if he is ever attacked by a God Slayer their magic will do an extra 10% damage to him, 20% if the God Slayers' abilities are within the realm of love, devotion, protection, or battle. (2 drawbacks) (There aren't really drawbacks that I would allow in the context of a lineage. They add plot value to it, certainly, but I will say that they cannot be used to regain lineage effects, as they are simply to obscure, in case of the former, and too weak, in case of the latter, to actually be impactful and make much of a difference in any case)

Silver Stormrunner wrote:

Lineage Name: Fallen God
Wielder: Silver Stormrunner
Purchase Proof: Here~

Description

For one glorious minute, Silver Stormrunner became one of the few humans who ascended to Godhood. But before he could give himself a Godly name, or even realize what his Godly nature is, his newly acquired divinity was ripped from his form. Betrayed by his mentor and lover, she used forbidden lost magic to capture Silver's divinity, and when it tried to resist her grasp she took the man's right eye, arm and leg to house his divine might so the Goddess might use it for herself.

Silver got away with his mortal life and believed that other than his lost limbs and a wrecked psyche, his minute of divinity did not affect him. He is wrong. While most of his divine power was taken by the Goddess, some of it remains within him, almost enough to identify him as a demi-god. And while he is nowhere near the power of his former godly might, what little is left manages to empower his mortal form. But Silver remains mostly unaware of this, and may never know his former role as a God of Love, Devotion, Protection and Battle.

Plot Abilities:

• God of Love: While Silver never got to find out, he was in fact a God of Love. The after-effects of being such means that with a look he can instantly tell a person's romantic and sexual orientation and if they are in a relationship. With a bit more reflective digging he can also tell the state of the person's love life... With of course the double added bonus of seeming extra attractive to others, making them more likely to agree with Silver. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

• God of Battle: Silver's innate instinct as a former God of battle remains, if in a lesser form, giving him heightened instincts outside of battle at least. He can quickly tell the intent someone has toward him, good or bad, and a vague idea of what they want from him as well (example: wants to sleep with me, wants to pickpocket me, curious about my magic) as long as it's relatively simple. The intent to kill him is stupidly easy for him to spot, even if the person is hiding. He can also tell when someone is directly lying to him and can get a feel if someone is hiding something from him as well. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others special NPCs.

Abilities:

• Blessing of Divinity: What little is left of his divine nature has given Silver an unexpected blessing. He gets a passive magical damage bonus based on the passive buff amount of his current rank against devils, demons, undead, and other unholy beings. Requires OOC permission to use on other players special NPCs. (1 effect)

• Offering to a God: While he is no longer a god, what little divinity remains subconsciously seems to affect the mortals around him, causing them to give him extra jewels and items as an 'offering'. Upon completing a mission, Silver receives 100% more jewels from rewards, and an item (must proclaim what item when turning job in) of that job's rank. (2 effects) (Please additionally clarify that items gained this way cannot be sold to any shop or traded to other players, but may freely be traded among the player's own characters)

• God of Protection: This innate symbol of Silver's divinity gives him a passive boost to magical and physical defense, based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• God of Devotion: While this trait has fallen alongside his divinity, it is still part of his divine lineage. His devotion to others aids him in battle by increasing his physical and magical attack based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• Divine Blood: Silver's holy blood grants him even more effects. This ability allows Silver to have an extra Signature Spell Slot that ranks up to A for each of the 3 Magics he has. (1 effect)

• Curse of Divinity: Being a former God and becoming mortal again has its consequences. For one all of Silver's former divinity is in his corrupted missing right eye, arm and leg. If he was ever confronted with even one of his missing limbs his mortal magic will be crippled and will gain the negative effects as if he ran out of MP. Also, if he is ever attacked by a God Slayer their magic will do extra damage to him based on the passive buff amount of the god Slayer's current rank. Double the buff if the God Slayers' abilities are within the realm of love, devotion, protection, or battle. (1 drawback)

Silver Stormrunner wrote:

Lineage Name: Fallen God
Wielder: Silver Stormrunner
Purchase Proof: Here~

Description

For one glorious minute, Silver Stormrunner became one of the few humans who ascended to Godhood. But before he could give himself a Godly name, or even realize what his Godly nature is, his newly acquired divinity was ripped from his form. Betrayed by his mentor and lover, she used forbidden lost magic to capture Silver's divinity, and when it tried to resist her grasp she took the man's right eye, arm and leg to house his divine might so the Goddess might use it for herself.

Silver got away with his mortal life and believed that other than his lost limbs and a wrecked psyche, his minute of divinity did not affect him. He is wrong. While most of his divine power was taken by the Goddess, some of it remains within him, almost enough to identify him as a demi-god. And while he is nowhere near the power of his former godly might, what little is left manages to empower his mortal form. But Silver remains mostly unaware of this, and may never know his former role as a God of Love, Devotion, Protection and Battle.

Plot Abilities:

• God of Love: While Silver never got to find out, he was in fact a God of Love. The after-effects of being such means that with a look he can instantly tell a person's romantic and sexual orientation and if they are in a relationship. With a bit more reflective digging he can also tell the state of the person's love life... With of course the double added bonus of seeming extra attractive to others, making them more likely to agree with Silver. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

• God of Battle: Silver's innate instinct as a former God of battle remains, if in a lesser form, giving him heightened instincts outside of battle at least. He can quickly tell the intent someone has toward him, good or bad, and a vague idea of what they want from him as well (example: wants to sleep with me, wants to pickpocket me, curious about my magic) as long as it's relatively simple. The intent to kill him is stupidly easy for him to spot, even if the person is hiding. He can also tell when someone is directly lying to him and can get a feel if someone is hiding something from him as well. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

Abilities:

• Blessing of Divinity: What little is left of his divine nature has given Silver an unexpected blessing. He gets a passive magical damage bonus based on the passive buff amount of his current rank against devils, demons, undead, and other unholy beings. Requires OOC permission to use on other players and special NPCs. He also gains one free pet to help aid and protect this former divine being that ranks with him capping at S Rank/Ethereal, which also uses a pet slot. This pet follow all the rules for a combat pet. For advanced benefits, the price difference between the pet's current rank advanced benefit amount must be paid. (Please detail how the scaling for this pet works exactly, i.e. what grade is achieved at which rank of the user) (2 effects)

• Offering to a God: While he is no longer a god, what little divinity remains subconsciously seems to affect the mortals around him, causing them to give him extra jewels and items as an 'offering'. Upon completing a mission, Silver receives 100% more jewels from rewards, and an item (must proclaim what item when turning job in) of that job's rank. Items gained this way cannot be sold to any shop or traded to other players, but may freely be traded among the player's own characters. (2 effects)

• God of Protection: This innate symbol of Silver's divinity gives him a passive boost to magical and physical defence and, based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• God of Devotion: While this trait has fallen alongside his divinity, it is still part of his divine lineage. His devotion to others aids him in battle by increasing his physical and magical attack based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• Divine Blood: Silver's holy blood grants him even more effects. This ability allows Silver to have an extra Signature Spell Slot that ranks up to A for each of the 3 Magics he has. He also gets to upgrade the effects of any Auxiliary or Primary Level benefits in his main magic to Solitary Benefits. (This effect, in this current form, I cannot allow, as it essentially would allow you to cramp 3 full magics into this magic and get the full benefits for each and every one of them. As you may be able to imagine, depending on the magic type, this can provide extremely strong benefits unobtainable in any other way, which is simply too overpowered an effect to use without heavy and impactful downsides and the expenditure of more lineage effects) (2 effects)

• Curse of Divinity: Being a former God and becoming mortal again has its consequences. For one all of Silver's former divinity is in his corrupted missing right eye, arm and leg. If he was ever confronted with even one of his missing limbs his mortal magic will be crippled and will gain the negative effects as if he ran out of MP. Also, if he is ever attacked by a God Slayer their magic will do extra damage to him based on the passive buff amount of the god Slayer's current rank. Double the buff if the God Slayers' abilities are within the realm of love, devotion, protection, or battle. (1 drawback)

Silver Stormrunner wrote:

Lineage Name: Fallen God
Wielder: Silver Stormrunner
Purchase Proof: Here~

Description

For one glorious minute, Silver Stormrunner became one of the few humans who ascended to Godhood. But before he could give himself a Godly name, or even realize what his Godly nature is, his newly acquired divinity was ripped from his form. Betrayed by his mentor and lover, she used forbidden lost magic to capture Silver's divinity, and when it tried to resist her grasp she took the man's right eye, arm and leg to house his divine might so the Goddess might use it for herself.

Silver got away with his mortal life and believed that other than his lost limbs and a wrecked psyche, his minute of divinity did not affect him. He is wrong. While most of his divine power was taken by the Goddess, some of it remains within him, almost enough to identify him as a demi-god. And while he is nowhere near the power of his former godly might, what little is left manages to empower his mortal form. But Silver remains mostly unaware of this, and may never know his former role as a God of Love, Devotion, Protection and Battle.

Plot Abilities:

• God of Love: While Silver never got to find out, he was in fact a God of Love. The after-effects of being such means that with a look he can instantly tell a person's romantic and sexual orientation and if they are in a relationship. With a bit more reflective digging he can also tell the state of the person's love life... With of course the double added bonus of seeming extra attractive to others, making them more likely to agree with Silver. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

• God of Battle: Silver's innate instinct as a former God of battle remains, if in a lesser form, giving him heightened instincts outside of battle at least. He can quickly tell the intent someone has toward him, good or bad, and a vague idea of what they want from him as well (example: wants to sleep with me, wants to pickpocket me, curious about my magic) as long as it's relatively simple. The intent to kill him is stupidly easy for him to spot, even if the person is hiding. He can also tell when someone is directly lying to him and can get a feel if someone is hiding something from him as well. Enough magic in the other person, if they are unholy in some form, or even just having strong mental defences can easily make this ability moot though. Requires OOC permission to use on others and special NPCs.

Abilities:

• Blessing of Divinity: What little is left of his divine nature has given Silver an unexpected blessing. He gets a passive magical damage bonus based on the passive buff amount of his current rank against devils, demons, undead, and other unholy beings. Requires OOC permission to use on other players and special NPCs. (1 effect)

• Offering to a God: While he is no longer a god, what little divinity remains subconsciously seems to affect the mortals around him, causing them to give him extra jewels and items as an 'offering'. Upon completing a mission, Silver receives 100% more jewels from rewards, and an item (must proclaim what item when turning job in) of that job's rank. Items gained this way cannot be sold to any shop or traded to other players, but may freely be traded among the player's own characters. (2 effects)

• God of Protection: This innate symbol of Silver's divinity gives him a passive boost to magical and physical defence and, based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• God of Devotion: While this trait has fallen alongside his divinity, it is still part of his divine lineage. His devotion to others aids him in battle by increasing his physical and magical attack based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (2 effects)

• Divine Blood: Silver's holy blood grants him even more effects. This ability allows Silver to have an extra Signature Spell Slot that ranks up to A for each of the 3 Magics he has. He also gains a buff to HP and MP based on the passive buff amount of his current rank. (3 effects)

• Curse of Divinity: Being a former God and becoming mortal again has its consequences. For one all of Silver's former divinity is in his corrupted missing right eye, arm and leg. If he was ever confronted with even one of his missing limbs his mortal magic will be crippled and will gain the negative effects as if he ran out of MP. Also, if he is ever attacked by a God Slayer their magic will do extra damage to him based on the passive buff amount of the god Slayer's current rank. Double the buff if the God Slayers' abilities are within the realm of love, devotion, protection, or battle. (1 drawback)