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    Satorius' Mind Release

    Satorius
    Satorius

    Player 
    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mind Release
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Satorius 8th June 2020, 2:43 pm

    Magic

       Magic Name: Mind Release
       Magic Type: Caster Magic (Solitary Benefit: +25% to MP Cost Reduction)
       Description: Mind Release is a type of magic created by its only user Satorius Ri. The idea behind the magic is derived from an ancient type of telekinesis of which is said that its caster could kill just by having the intend to do so, crushing their opponents without having to lift a finger. With what little knowledge was left, Satorius had to reinvent himself and came up with 'Mind Release' which he also calls just 'Intent'. The basis is the release and manipulation of one's own magical power through barely their own will. The difference in 'Mind Release' and regular telekinesis is that it is not only used to move or damage objects but also has the capability of healing organic matter and interjecting in all types of spells by applying magic power to disturb a spells structure and completely countering it or temporally disabling inherent magic in items. Completely removing magic from an object can be done aswell through a longer form of influence, think of a ritual or operation. While the goal is to manifest an intent or an idea, this magic alone is unable to give form to any new elements like the creation of fire or ice. This magic instead is able to boost the power of magic spells or their casters by again injecting magical power into them.

       Unique Abilities:
       

         
    • Ability 1: Seventh Eye:

      Seventh Eye is the application of Magic Power straight into Satorius' eyes, allowing him to to perfectly see the flow and power of each and any magic he is looking at. This means based on his knowledge he can apply counter measures quicker, but what this ability ultimately allows him to do is to distinguish between types of magic inherent to spells, people and items and see the magical flow even through walls or even of invisible targets aslong as they have an inherent magic to them. OOC permission is needed to be able to gain insight into the type of magic a user possesses or the effects of the spells.
         
    • Ability 2: Not applicable yet
         
    • Ability 3: Not applicable yet
         


       Spells


    Spells 3/3 in use:

    Avanced Spells: None in use (1 availabe)


    Last edited by Satorius on 9th June 2020, 7:25 am; edited 2 times in total
    Shen Kadokawa
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    Cosmic Coins : 505
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    Character Sheet
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    Second Skill: Vox Universum
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    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th June 2020, 5:41 am

    Heya Satorius, Joh here to grade your magic. Generally looking pretty good, though there are a few things I need to comment on. If you have any questions or require clarification, post in this thread and I will get back to you as soon as possible. When the requested edits have been made, simply give this topic a bump and I will review your magic once more. That said, though, let's get to the grading part. You will be able to find all of my comments in this color

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    Satorius
    Satorius

    Player 
    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mind Release
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Satorius 9th June 2020, 6:50 am

    I am done with the small rework and ready for another grading.


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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11950
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th June 2020, 7:20 am

    Just one small edit, same color as before

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    Satorius
    Satorius

    Player 
    Lineage : Glory of the Slayer
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mind Release
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Satorius 9th June 2020, 7:26 am

    I changed 'duration' to 'effect'... had it right originally and misundestood.
    Ready.


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    Shen Kadokawa
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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11950
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th June 2020, 7:27 am

    Satorius' Mind Release FbVA7uB

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    Completed Re: Satorius' Mind Release

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 25th August 2020, 6:03 am

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