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    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 5th June 2020, 8:25 pm

    Magic

       Magic Name: Dragon Takeover
       Magic Type: Takeover,Primary (+25 to HP and MP) Caster, Auxiliary (+10% to MP cost reuction)
       Description: Dragon Takeover is a rare and powerful form of Takeover magic which allowed Drako to takeover a dragon. Although originally forced on him through circumstances beyond his control, Drako has come to master the ability and use the dragon's power as his own. The soul of a dragon fused with the soul of a mortal has caused a few physical changes which are always active (his kinda scaley skin and eye, for example), and mastering each ability has taken time and effort. Taking over the soul of a dragon is a task for those only with the most iron of wills, and the same can be said for controlling said takeover. Fortunately, nothing is impossible.
       Unique Abilities:
       

         
    • Ability 1: Having taken over a poison dragon and having their skin be more scaley than the average person, the user has a 20% resistance to all poisonous attacks and a 20% resistance to all physical attacks.
         
    • Ability 2:N/A (for now)
         
    • Ability 3: N/A (for now)
         


       Spells
    Name: Dragon Takeover: Scaled Arms
    Rank: D
    Take-Over Type: Partial Take Over
    Grade: Normal
    Take-Over Buff: Strength, 25%
    Melee Damage: 5 HP
    Range: 15 meters
    Speed: 聽 15 meters per second
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: User transforms both arms into larger, buffer, red, scaled dragon arms. These arms are tougher than what the user normally uses, allowing them to deal more damage with each strike. The user doesn’t feel as much pain from attacks as he normally would with his “default” arms when his arms are like this, that is NOT to say he’s taking less damage, just that he doesn’t feel the pain from said damage.
    He uses mostly in close combat, to land stronger punches, or, if necessary, poison, and by doing so, weaken his opponent.

    Ability 1:

    Name: Dragon Takeover: Dragon Wings
    Rank: D
    Take-Over Type: Partial Takeover
    Grade: Normal
    Take-Over Buff: Speed 25%
    Melee Damage: 5 (If someone is smacked with them)
    Range: 15 meters
    Speed: 聽 15 Meters Per Second
    Duration: 3 post
    Downside: The wings are large and strong, so he may end up accidentally an ally with them if he’s not careful.. (disclaimer: I’m not attempting to do a trade off, this is  more so plot/flavor than anything else)
    Description: The user focuses for a second and brings forth two giant, red, scaley wings out of their back. They are powerful wings, and while they can be used in doors, due to their size, they’re better used in open areas. They’re fairly annoying indoors, as most people tend to get hit by them if they’re not furled closer to the body, and they can easily knock anyonewho’s not epecting it down.  PLEASE NOTE: KNOCKBACKS REQUIRE OOC PERMISSION

    Ability 1:


    Name: Dragon Takeover: Lethal Legs!
    Rank: D
    Take-Over Type: Partial
    Grade: Normal
    Take-Over Buff: Speed, 25%
    Melee Damage: 5 HP
    Range: 15 meters
    Speed: 聽15 meters per second
    Duration: 3 post
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user focuses for a second and calls forth his mighty dragon legs. They are literally just “big fast and big strong”, the very epitome of “never skip leg day, ya bunch of newbies”. They are, like his other crimson red, large, and very scaley. They also add an extra 5 inches to the user’s physique (in my OC’s case, that makes him 6’7.).

    Ability 1:


    Name: Poisonus Dragon’s Takeover
    Rank: D+
    Take-Over Type: Full. Scaled Arms, Dragon Wings and Lethal Legs are all used on this full takeover (AKA, All of them)
    Grade: Normal
    Take-Over Buff: HP Buff, 75%
    Melee Damage: 10.5 HP
    Range: 25 Meters
    Speed: 聽 25 Meters Per Second
    Duration: 5 post
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user focuses on the form of the mighty poison dragon for a second, and dawns all of their “partial” takeovers at once, along with the addition of scales and a tail. The user is fairly larger, both in stature and muscle, and while the rest of their skin is scarlet red, their stomach and torso, while still significnatlly more scaley, are white. Both eyes change to become purple with a reddish tint.
    Ability 1:

    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take-Over Spells):




    Name: Wrath of the Wraith: Head Takeover [RECEIVED FROM LINEAGE]
    Rank: D+
    Take-Over Type: Partial
    Grade: Normal
    Take-Over Buff: Physical/Magical resistance: 25%/25%
    Melee Damage: N/A (it does no physical damage)
    Range: 25 meters
    Speed: 聽25 meters per second
    Duration: 5 post
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user focuses for a second and ljsut straight up turns their head into that of a ghastly wraith, one with a flaming skull, with flaming blue eye sockets. The flames themselves are harmless, but they do look quite intimidating

    Ability 1:


    Last edited by SKD1218 on 10th June 2020, 6:26 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : The first edit was to fix my mistakes, the second edit was to change my UA, this third edit is to remove the "tail" part of his Takeover, as i realized that I can use it later.)
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 6th June 2020, 4:43 am

    Hey there SKD1218, Nessa here. I have come to grade this magic for you, throughout the grading any edits I make will be in this colour! Bump when ready for review~

    Overall Edit:: It seems you are missing a bulk of the magic template, please copy and paste this code below and place it before you spells. Fully completed with your magics information;

    Code:

        [size=16][u][b]Magic[/b][/u][/size]

        [b]Magic Name:[/b]
        [b]Magic Type:[/b]
        [b]Description:[/b]
        [b]Unique Abilities:[/b]
        [list]
        [*][b]Ability 1:[/b]
        [*][b]Ability 2:[/b]
        [*][b]Ability 3:[/b]
        [/list]

        [size=16][u][b]Spells[/b][/u][/size]

    Additionally, two of these spells need to be changed to D+ as per the magic rules. Please state next to one of these advance spells that this is received from your lineage.

    Spoiler:


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    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) 60582_s

    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 6th June 2020, 5:56 am

    Nessa Cordelia Lux wrote:Hey there SKD1218, Nessa here. I have come to grade this magic for you, throughout the grading any edits I make will be in this colour! Bump when ready for review~

    Overall Edit:: It seems you are missing a bulk of the magic template, please copy and paste this code below and place it before you spells. Fully completed with your magics information;

    Code:

        [size=16][u][b]Magic[/b][/u][/size]

        [b]Magic Name:[/b]
        [b]Magic Type:[/b]
        [b]Description:[/b]
        [b]Unique Abilities:[/b]
        [list]
        [*][b]Ability 1:[/b]
        [*][b]Ability 2:[/b]
        [*][b]Ability 3:[/b]
        [/list]

        [size=16][u][b]Spells[/b][/u][/size]

    Additionally, two of these spells need to be changed to D+ as per the magic rules. Please state next to one of these advance spells that this is received from your lineage.

    Spoiler:
    Hello! I believe I have made the appropiate edits, thanks!
    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 6th June 2020, 1:21 pm

    bump


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    SKD1218
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 10th June 2020, 5:01 pm

    Another round of edits in pink, bump when updated~

    Spoiler:


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    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) 60582_s

    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 10th June 2020, 5:10 pm

    Oh shoot, I thought this was approve already. Thanks for the edits,I believe it is ready for a "bump" now.


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    SKD1218
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 10th June 2020, 5:52 pm

    Couple more things I noticed, bump when done~

    Spoiler:


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    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) 60582_s

    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 10th June 2020, 5:59 pm

    Bump! I've added all the edits. Thank you very much


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    SKD1218
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 10th June 2020, 6:16 pm

    The edits weren't actually done, please bump once the amendments from the previous grading have been made.

    Spoiler:


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    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) 60582_s

    SKD1218
    SKD1218

    Player 
    Lineage : Wrath of Wraith
    Position : None
    Posts : 64
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 1,568

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dragon Takeover
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by SKD1218 10th June 2020, 6:28 pm

    Aye, sorry about that. I tabbed out as soon as I hit send but the page didn't load for me so I guess it didn't go through. Fixed it this time,ready for bumping!


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    SKD1218
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Empty Re: Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though)

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 10th June 2020, 6:32 pm

    Spoiler:

    Dragon Takeover Magic (and Wrath of the Wraith, this one is minor though) Pg4yhn10


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