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    Time magic

    Melody S. Winter
    Melody S. Winter

    Player 
    Lineage : Artifact Collector
    Position : None
    Posts : 49
    Guild : Rune Knight
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,200

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Time magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Melody S. Winter 25th September 2019, 3:13 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Time magic
    Magic Type: Lost magic
    Solitary bonus: +3 posts to max spell duration, +25% to MP costs (increase to Durations/MP costs only applies to the lost magic itself, not the character).
    Description: Time magicis the magic art of bending, stopping, reversing, or otherwise manipulation of time as an entity. The magic is extremely delicate and often times unpredictable and has caused a great deal of practices of this magic to go missing or simply vanish from existence as a result of their or other's actions. Melody, having learned it from her parents and having seen what it can do in the wrong hands and to those she cares about only uses this magic under extremely controlled situations or times of need. Even if the temptation to right some wrongs haunts her to fix them with the power she has.
    Unique Abilities: Listed below

    • Ability: 50% Speed increase. (Passive)
    • Ability: 50% Spell healing increase (Passive)


    Spells: Listed below

    Signature spell:

    B+ Rank spells:
    B rank spells:


    Last edited by Melody S. Winter on 5th October 2019, 4:33 am; edited 3 times in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Time magic Empty Re: Time magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 30th September 2019, 3:37 am

    Hey there, so I'll be grading this magic, all my edits are in this colour!  Bump when ready an I'll take a look.

    Overall Edit:: So a lot of the spells in this magic are written like an autohit. Saying you 'lock on to the target' and then automatically dealing a debuff, effect or damage doesn't give the enemy any opponent to dodge or shield themselves. Please amend these spells to explain how the magic would reach the target, i.e how it looks, how it is fired etc. I have marked every spell that requires this edit with {* See Primary Edit}.


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    Melody S. Winter
    Melody S. Winter

    Player 
    Lineage : Artifact Collector
    Position : None
    Posts : 49
    Guild : Rune Knight
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,200

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Time magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Time magic Empty Re: Time magic

    Post by Melody S. Winter 1st October 2019, 6:30 pm

    Got B rank a while ago so just did changes and updated spells to fit such, can't think of any other time spells at the moment so... ye...


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    "Maybe this time... I'll get things right..."
    Current missions: 1,2,3,4
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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Time magic Empty Re: Time magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 5th October 2019, 4:20 am

    Couple more edits, bump when ready~


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    Melody S. Winter
    Melody S. Winter

    Player 
    Lineage : Artifact Collector
    Position : None
    Posts : 49
    Guild : Rune Knight
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,200

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Time magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Time magic Empty Re: Time magic

    Post by Melody S. Winter 5th October 2019, 4:34 am

    Ding fries are done.~


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    "Maybe this time... I'll get things right..."
    Current missions: 1,2,3,4
    un-submitted | In-progress | Free slot
    3/4.5 Exp doubles | Golden Lac. 9/27/2020
    Profile | Magic 1 | Magic 2 | Magic 3 | Armory | Threads | Linage
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Time magic Empty Re: Time magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 5th October 2019, 4:40 am

    Time magic Pg4yhn10

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