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    Curse Of Oni

    Shakil
    Shakil

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Power of Apocalypse
    Position : None
    Posts : 346
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 325

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Curse Of Oni
    Second Skill: - - -
    Third Skill:

    Completed Curse Of Oni

    Post by Shakil 31st December 2017, 2:13 pm

    Magic

    Curse Of Oni  Title741239918
    Primary Magic: Curse Of Oni
    Secondary Magic: - - -
    Caster or Holder: Caster - Lost
    Description: What are Oni? Oni (鬼, Oni) are a kind of yōkai from Midian folklore, variously portrayed as demons, devils, ogres or trolls. They are popular characters in Midian art, literature and theatre. Most oni possess extreme strength and constitution, and many of them are also accomplished sorcerers. They are ferocious demons, bringers of disaster, spreaders of disease, and punishers of the damned in Hell. Shakil was born when a truly wicked human died and ended up in one of the many Buddhist Hells, transforming into Oni. They become the ogreish and brutal servants of Great Lord Enma, ruler of Hell, wielding iron clubs with which they crush and destroy humans solely for enjoyment in most cases.
    In this case, Shakil wields dark and lost sorcery in addition with great strength, speed, and agility to become a fiercely offensive opponent for any enemy. Along with these traits, Shakil is utilizes his telekinetic, biokinetic, and pyrokinetic abilities to further hone his abilities. While actively utilizing this magic, Shakil's red markings become visible, while other otherworldly physical attributes can also appear (such as his tail, horns, etc), or completely transitions into his semi-oni form (as shown above). When casting this magic, the staff Oyama is seen carrying around transforms into a crimson spear.

    Strengths:
    Weaknesses:
    Lineage:

    UAs:

    D-Ranks:

    C-ranks:



    Last edited by Shakil on 17th January 2018, 11:27 am; edited 3 times in total
    Aura
    Aura

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    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Aura 3rd January 2018, 7:17 am

    Hey there Oyamatsumi, just one tiny addition and you're good to go~


    Oyamatsumi wrote:
    Magic

    Curse Of Oni  Title741239918
    Primary Magic: Curse Of Oni
    Secondary Magic: - - -
    Caster or Holder: Caster - Lost
    Description: What are Oni? Oni (鬼, Oni) are a kind of yōkai from Midian folklore, variously portrayed as demons, devils, ogres or trolls. They are popular characters in Midian art, literature and theatre. Most oni possess extreme strength and constitution, and many of them are also accomplished sorcerers. They are ferocious demons, bringers of disaster, spreaders of disease, and punishers of the damned in Hell. Oyamatsumi was born when a truly wicked human died and ended up in one of the many Buddhist Hells, transforming into Oni. They become the ogreish and brutal servants of Great Lord Enma, ruler of Hell, wielding iron clubs with which they crush and destroy humans solely for enjoyment in most cases.

    In this case, Oyamatsumi wields dark and lost sorcery in addition with great strength, speed, and agility to become a fiercely offensive opponent for any enemy. Along with these traits, Oyamatsumi is utilizes his telekinetic, biokinetic, and pyrokinetic abilities to further hone his abilities. While actively utilizing this magic, Oyamatsumi's red markings become visible, while other otherworldly physical attributes can also appear (such as his tail, horns, etc), or completely transitions into his semi-oni form (as shown above).


    Strengths:

    Weaknesses:

    Lineage:

    UAs:

    Pyrokinetic Fireball:

    Telekinetic Pressure:

    Biokinetic Pressure:
    Flesh of Devils:


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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Curse Of Oni  GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

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    Shakil
    Shakil

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Power of Apocalypse
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    Posts : 346
    Guild : Guildless
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
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    Experience : 325

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Curse Of Oni
    Second Skill: - - -
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Shakil 3rd January 2018, 10:18 am

    Bumped. Speed has been added and follows the same percentages. :)
    Aura
    Aura

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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Fires of Creation
    Second Skill: The Riyenas
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Aura 3rd January 2018, 10:45 am

    Approved:

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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Curse Of Oni  GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

    Slots: 4/6



    Lester Drynedi
    Lester Drynedi

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    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Lester Drynedi 15th January 2018, 1:24 pm

    ❀Unlocked and moved at users request

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    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Guest 16th January 2018, 10:17 pm

    Made a list instead of doing the whole color thing, since there would just be a lot of repeating.

    1. Superhuman Capability: Remember if you're splitting multiple buffs in one ua they need to be split evenly. With the way you have it some of the future numbers laid out are not split evenly to fit in with the buff rules.

    2. You can have another ability, since you are C-Rank.

    3.Pyrokinetic Explosion: Your rank says D, even though it is C.

    4. A lot of your spells seem to include features that rank up, such as ranges and speeds. These spells don't rank up with you, and stay at their rank's stats unless they're something like a signature. So please change them all to one stable number.

    5. Biokinetic Fumes: Since it's an AoE everyone else gets damaged by 50%. You nerfed yourself.

    6. Instant spells fall under burst ranges and speeds, so fix those accordingly.
    Shakil
    Shakil

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Power of Apocalypse
    Position : None
    Posts : 346
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 325

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Curse Of Oni
    Second Skill: - - -
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Shakil 17th January 2018, 11:28 am

    Bump. Think I covered everything. ^^
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    Completed Re: Curse Of Oni

    Post by Guest 17th January 2018, 12:11 pm

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