Bone God Slayer (second gen)

Username: Crimzon
Secondary Magic Name: Bone God Slayer (lacrima was purchased as Octobers item of the month https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t17470-items-of-the-month-shop#206116 )
Evidence of Accomplishment: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t17531-crimzon-s-secondary-magic-training-private
Description: There once was a creature. A strange being consisting purely of bone. Some considered him a god, others a demon, but in truth he was a hybrid of both. Half white bone and half black bone. A powerful being whose mastery of bone was enough to destroy armies with a flick of his hand. One day though it was deemed he had gone too far and the other gods and demons rallied together and sealed away his power within a lacrima. A lacrima that was given to a group of guardians known as the Calguard. They were told only to give it over to those who were worthy and to retrieve it whenever its wielder died.

A single legendary lacrima coloured half white and half black like the Ying Yang symbol. It is gifted to those its guardians deem worthy. Once the choice is made the lacrima will either turn pure white to symbolise the holiness of the demon slayer or pure black to symbolise the corrupted nature of the god slayer. When it is retrieved it will return to its original form allowing its next wielder to pick.

The bone demon god's spirit is said to still reside within the lacrima and will whisper thoughts and ideas to the wielder and even hold quite coherent and decent conversation.

Bone God Slayers wield the ability to control, manipulate and create bone of varying density and size, even to the point of manipulating their own bones for attacks and defence. This of course allows the Bone God Slayers varying degrees of flexibility and creativity similar to a Metal God Slayer, creating things from simple weapons to complex contraptions, willing the bones to react to certain situations such as sudden force or vibrations.
Strengths:

• Creative freedom
  
• Bones created are of greater strength than regular bones
  

Weaknesses:

• Boneless creatures tend to have an easier time against spells that manipulate bones within a target body
  
• Causing bones to extrude from their own body will still be painful when struck
  
• Causes a slight amount of pain when manipulating the wielders own bones to expand or shape themselves
  

Abilities:

Nathir’s Will:

Strong Bones:

Spells:

D-Rank:

C-Rank:

B-Rank:

A-Rank:

S-Rank:

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First of all... read this. Preferably the Application part. Then bump.

Bump o3o

*Could you add at least one more strength and weakness to your B-Rank spell
*For your B-Rank spell Passive, half damage is too much, in can increase to half as the ranks drop lower
*Please make your CD higher on your A-Rank spell ans same with you S-Rank
*For your S-Rank spell could you choose only three physical aspects and also tripled is too much, I can accept doubled. ^^



Also, with your first ability there is just something about it that seems OP so if you could find some way to tone it down.
Thank you~

Changed B-Rank summons passive to be similar to my Strong Bones passive ability
A-Rank and S-Rank spell cooldowns have been increased
Extra strength and extra weakness added to B-Rank summon
Lowered S-Rank spell to only buff 2 physical aspects in hopes of allowing them to have the cap remain tripled whilst the spell is active instead of doubled. Also stated required charge time for buff to reach the 300% limit

Passive ability to manipulate bone (that isn't inside a living thing) shortened to 20 meters

Approved