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Name: Demon
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Birthday: July 11
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: a tattoo of the grim reaper on his shoulder it glows when danger is near

Personality: He has been traveling from a very young age and prefers his own company to that of others.In everyday life he dreams of grand adventures and Fabled treasures and enjoys the finding of said treasures over the actual possession.Outside of battle he seems a calm and collected person ready and waiting for the next great adventure to take him through life.He is very inwardly focused and is constantly trying to keep a tight reign on his temper causing most people to think him quiet or shy up until he gets stressed and suddenly and violently snaps.His greatest troubles in life all seem to flow from a combination of Sarcasm,Alcohol, and the choosing of bad women which despite his many previous experiences never seem to prevent more of the same.
He frequents taverns and other shadier establishments during any time when hes not out adventuring.He's considered a gentleman by some and a rogue by others but regardless of private opinion, someone to be watched in the future.
He is regarded as gentlemen from women around the world.For if ever i women is in trouble he cant help it to run in and save them.His personality just makes his charm more appealing.Then he also can never turn down helping an old lady when she in trouble as well as child that need help.So he pretty much a calm person when it come to it.
When people regard him as a rogue is because his very stealthy as well as fast.He tends to move with his reflects when hes in a good mood.Then when he just doing normal everyday stuff he like to slip threw the crowd.Most people think he could be a rogue so the some time call him the rogue Demon.He personally just like to be left alone and doesn't care what people call him in any way.
when he was young he worked for pirates traveling the seas for the treasure he always wanted.One day the whole crew got sick and died. He was the only one left at sea.Then a few days later people found him and help him to get better.Were he then after wards took over the ship and cleaned it up using it as his home and traveling vessel threw out his many journeys.
He tends to chose bad women that everyone want but nobody really wants. But in all reality hes looking for the right women to love and tends never to find the right one.Most of the time the women he chose are so evil they have committed a few murders them self.Yet he never lets that get him down he keeps trying no matter what cause he knows he will find the right girl some day.Then again hes fine with all hes put up with if you know what i mean.

In Battle: Demon prefers to face his opponent's close up utilizing a mix of martial arts and raw anger.
The shift from calm and collected to raging berserker is too quick for most to follow and by the time most realize what happened
he's already wading into combat.
Demon is at his core a psychopath with few morals when it comes to those who have angered or hurt him.
Without his temper he's a decent fighter and an able thinker, a challenge to most able bodied adventurers.

Likes:
1.He loves anime, cartoons, and comics and always has at least one of them on his person.
2.Demon is an alcoholic, though he wont admit it.
3.He is also a womanizer which combined with his drinking habits and anger problems get him in alot of trouble.

Dislikes:
1.Drama caused by other people annoys the hell out of him.
2.People who are stuck on themselves .
3.People who badmouth any of his favorite comics,anime, etc are subject to his wrath.

Motivations:
1.His greatest motivation is having an adventure so awesome that its spoken of for centuries to come.
2.His second greatest motivation is to find and gather the worlds rarest items under one roof for all the world to behold.
3.Last but not least he wishes to find his perfect woman.

Fears:
1.Deathly afraid of small closed in spaces, a lingering fear from an accident where he was trapped as a child.
2.Also afraid of spiders because of same accident.
3.Women with psycho problems have caused many problems in his life.


General Appearance


Height: 6'1"
Weight: 185
Hair: Irish Green styled like natsu
Eyes: Green and Blue
Skin Tone: Slightly tan
Appearance: Blue jeans a green shirt has green sunglasses wears a green fedora also has brown boots with biker gloves all of his clothes are quite worn but very durable to elements and has tattoo on his right shoulder

Guild/Council

Guild: Lamia Scale
Tattoo:  Left shoulder in Green ink
Rank: D-Rank

Your personality should be 2 paragraphs of at least 300-500 words each. Explain your character in detail for two situations, outside of battle for the first paragraph and in battle for the second. The second one should include these facts; how he is as a leader, under a leader. The first paragraph should explain absolutely everything about your character while he wanders around the world.

Your likes/dislikes/motivations/fears should be in list form, and have at least 3 of each.

If you can, try to go into more detail on your appearance, this one is optional.

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ok,STOP DOING THAT!

When I tell you to bump, YOU ONLY SAY BUMP do not go triple bumping like that, and reposting your app at the bottom. USE THE EDIT BUTTON!

OK, let me explain it again. This time, in a form you should understand: I like how you separated each one, for when he is in normal battle to leadership, but your first paragraph IS TOO SHORT! You explain LITTLE TO NOTHING ABOUT YOUR CHARACTER AT ALL! ABSOLUTELY NO KNOWLEDGE IS GAINED IN THAT FIRST PARAGRAPH OF YOUR PERSONALITY, OTHER THAN HE LIKES WOMAN, AND HE TRAVELS! THAT IS LITERALLY IT! YOU NEED MORE INFORMATION ABOUT YOUR CHARACTER AS A WHOLE, AND MAKE IT COHERENT TO THE SUBJECT OF THE PARAGRAPH!
If you want to go into full detail, having more than just 2 paragraphs, you need to be dedicated; apps like those are easily worth auto A rank if done right the first time. But your app is still not even deserving of D rank yet.

space your likes/dislikes/motivations/fears away from your personality, they are squished against it and each other.

What did I say about needing 3 of all the above? (^) you need a minimum of three each, no more no less if you do not want any more. But definitely no less.

Now this time, DO NOT BUMP if you have not made all the changes. BUMP WHEN YOU HAVE, DO NOT BUMP EVEN TO APOLOGIZE!

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Ok next thing, i could have sworn it was bolded before, but bold your template.

MAKE YOUR PERSONALITY IN PARAGRAPH FORM not list.

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Your paragraph, once again, is in list form. CHANGE IT TO AN ACTUAL PARAGRAPH FORM.

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I'm diggin' it.

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