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    Post by Bliss 27th May 2014, 8:55 pm

    Name:Sorcerers Edge

    Rank:weak

    Type: Scissors

    Description: A pair of magical scissors, it looks like a normal pair of scissors.
    Sorcerers Edge Crimeedge_01-01

    Strengths:

    -Very sharp

    -very durable

    Weaknesses:

    -It is small and is hard to use as a weapon, it is not ideal for combat.

    -Though it can cut through anything it only inflicts shallow cuts.

    -If the user wants to use Sorcerers Edge as weapon and deal deep wounds, the user must get close enough to inflict the damage, since the scissors are small the user can easily be outmaneuvered and subdued by a sword, knife, and various other weapons.

    -Since it is small, the user will have a hard time blocking an attack with it.

    Abilities: No one can use Sorcerers Edge, only the master of the scissors can use it. If anyone tries to use it other than the master, it will remain shut.


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    Post by Bliss 27th May 2014, 9:48 pm

    updated, application has been bumped.
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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 28th May 2014, 6:39 am

    Hey there mate, I'll be reviewing this application.

    Before anything else, however, I must say that weak weapons cannot have abilities. It says so in the rules, so I'm gonna have to say no to the ability to cut anything solid. Likewise, it won't be able to repair itself after 3 posts as well, since, well, weak weapons are basically the base of anything, as in the structure of the item, and nothing more. It's basically the "normal" version.

    I'm also gonna have to have you remove the weakness that it can only withstand 2 D-Rank hits, because, again, this is a weak weapon, and those cannot resist any form of spells or weapon hits.

    That's about it, though, everything else looks okay.

    Please bump once the modifications are made~


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    Post by Bliss 28th May 2014, 7:22 am

    Bump, and revised.
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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 28th May 2014, 12:22 pm

    Please remove this weakness:

    -It cannot cut, or nullify a spell.

    Since this item has no abilities anyways, there is no need for the weakness, at least for now. Also, please remove the first sentence in your abilities section, since it says that you can still use the ability this weapon was originally meant to possess, and probably will once it's upgraded.

    It's not much... But, yeah... Hope you can understand.

    Please bump once the changes are made~


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    Post by Bliss 28th May 2014, 4:18 pm

    Bump, thank you sir for reviewing my application.
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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 28th May 2014, 4:26 pm

    Haha... No need to be so formal, mate, it's my job, anyways =]

    'Tis approved!


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