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    Ikuto's Black Cat Magic

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    Post by Ikuto-san 8th August 2013, 2:59 pm

    Primary Magic: Black Cat Magic (Shadow Cat Magic)
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A Magic which allows the user to transform the physiology of their body into that of the cat, making the caster a ShadowCat. This magic utilizes the element of darkness. With this magic, the caster is also able to fade himself into shadows to move swiftly, dodging efficiently and making surprise attacks. However, if the caster is caught while in a tangible form, they are then vulnerable to attack. This magic is more of an evasive magic, used for easily dodging attacks and doing low damage per hit. Although, in the end, the damage will add on to each other and turn into a lot. Dark energy has a special effect. It causes immense pain, used for distracting the enemy.
    Strengths:
    - Quick and nimble
    - Can dodge due to awareness
    - Hides into the shadows
    - Focuses on quick little attacks, piling to do a lot of damage
    - Gets a little advantage at night, allowing caster to hide within the darkness
    - The pain is used as distracting the enemy
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against Light-based magic
    - Has a little disadvantage in the morning/sunlight
    - Has bad defense (being a kitty and all)

    Abilities/Powers:
    - Cat Vision: Enhanced vision at night, like a cat.
    - Cat Ears: Enhanced ears and hearing sensibility, like a cat.
    - Cat Flexibility: Enhance flexibility, like a cat.
    - Claw Retraction: Able to retract claws, like a cat.
    - Cat Speed: Enhanced speed, like a cat.
    - Neko Mode: Transforms into a cat (not for jobs and such; just for personal games and fun in CB, etc)

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    B-Rank Spells:

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    Post by Zeno 8th August 2013, 10:51 pm

    Okidoki, let's get started.

    In your description you state that Chaos is a natural element. I don't quite understand how that works. Is it a mix of darkness and light? If so, then you're trying to pull off a Slayer type of magic and I can tell you now that creating that will be an issue.

    I'm seeing elements of Slayer Magic, Physical Magic, Shadow Magic, Requip?, Speed Magic and even Illusions. All of it put into one without a decent thread to hold it together in a logical manner.
    So you'll have to work on that.

    The whole idea about Ikuto gaining speed and strength increases randomly without even using spells should be abandoned, and lines like "improves a team's offensive power by tenfolds ( not really tenfolds )" shouldn't really be in there..

    You have to describe the nature of your spells and how they work logically and in a general sense. Right now you've described the effects of the magic on Ikuto's body like it's a passive ability. You're allowed to have more speed than average and such but it really has to fit with the magic. As it is at the moment, the concept of your magic is a puzzle with the pieces in the wrong place.

    The things you put in Strengths are Abilities and the things you put in Abilities are Spells. I wonder how the Darkness Boost works when concealing attacks though. Do they become invisible?

    What you should put in Strengths are advantages to your magic as a whole, not specific abilities. The things you put in Abilities are things that need to have a cooldown and duration and that is a characteristic of a spell.

    If you need extra help molding your magic concept into shape, you can ask me for help in the cbox whenever I'm in there.


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    Post by Ikuto-san 9th August 2013, 12:22 am

    Bump. New simpler magic.
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    Post by Alye 9th August 2013, 11:01 am

    Ikuto-san wrote:Primary Magic: Black Cat Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A Magic which allows the user to transform the physiology of their body into that of the cat. This magic utilizes the element of darkness. With this magic, the caster is also able to fade himself into shadows to move swiftly, dodging efficiently and making surprise attacks. However, if the caster is caught while in a tangible form, they are then vulnerable to attack. This magic is more of an evasive magic, used for easily dodging attacks and doing low damage per hit. Although, in the end, the damage will add on to each other and turn into a lot. Dark energy has a special effect. It causes immense pain, although it does low damage.

    So, you can basically turn parts of your body into a cat, and those changed portions of your body gain the element of darkness? If so, then you need to detail that this makes you a Shadowcat. This will also mean that you cannot use/manipulate any form of darkness unless a portion of your body is cat-like, and you can only manipulate shadows with that changed body part. The part about the Dark energy doesn't really make a lot of sense, but I understand where you're coming from. For logic's sake, you could instead say that the shadows you use are special in the fact that they amplify one's sense of pain. This would make them unique and unable to be eaten by Slayers.

    Also, I would take out the part where it says you do low damage, as that would make a magic like this next to useless. Besides, cat scratches hurt like a motherfucker @_@


    Strengths:
    - Quick and nimble
    - Can dodge due to awareness
    - Hides into the shadows
    - Focuses on quick little attacks, piling to do a lot of damage
    - Gets a little advantage at night, allowing caster to hide within the darkness
    - The pain is used as distracting the enemy
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against Light-based magic
    - Has a little disadvantage in the morning/sunlight
    - Has bad defense (being a kitty and all)
    - If caught by an enemy, this would be bad for the caster <--- This doesn't really need to be here, since that is not a weakness of a magic.

    Abilities/Powers:
    - Sixth Sense: A sixth sense that allows the caster to feel if something is approaching or not, like a cat. The only way something like this could be approved is if you apply it to something practical. I suggest having this ability allow you to roll two block/dodge dice whenever you are attacked, and if at least one comes up as a success, then you successfully dodged the attack.
    - Cat Vision: Enhanced vision at night, like a cat.
    - Cat Ears: Enhanced ears and hearing sensibility, like a cat.
    - Cat Flexibility: Enhance flexibility, like a cat.
    - Claw Retraction: Able to retract claws, like a cat.
    - Cat Speed: Enhanced speed, like a cat.

    (Please remember that these enhancements are not on par with Slayer augmentations, but you are still enhanced more than a regular person.)
    - Neko Mode: Transforms into a cat (not for jobs and such; just for personal games and fun in CB, etc)

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    Post by Ikuto-san 9th August 2013, 11:07 am

    Bump. Edited all of the above.
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    Post by Alye 9th August 2013, 11:10 am

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    Post by Ikuto-san 13th August 2013, 11:06 am

    EDITS:
    - Added C to S Spells
    - Changed the name of the D-Rank Spell "Cat's Midnight Carnival" The new name should be Chaotic End: Midnight Carnival.
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    Post by Seijin 17th August 2013, 6:43 pm

    Ikuto-san wrote:EDITS:
    - Added C to S Spells
    - Changed the name of the D-Rank Spell "Cat's Midnight Carnival" The new name should be Chaotic End: Midnight Carnival.
    Approved.

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